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Yousei's Bankai - Kyoutendouchi Yozora

Post by Yousei on Fri Nov 20, 2009 12:55 pm

Bankai Information

Bankai Name: Kyoutendouchi Yozora (Astounding/World-shaking Nightsky)

Bankai Description: As the moonstone on Yozora's guard shines according to reiatsu level, Yousei increases his reiatsu level very high, until light from the stone reaches it's limit. Then moonstone shatters into thousands of pieces and scatters all over the area. As this happens, sky turns dark with many stars shinning and ground becomes like mirror, reflecting the sky.

Bankai makes Yousei able to summon certain stars, which allows him to use his Bankai techniques:
1. Star of Mind - Yozora's blade begins to shine (if you can say shine) dark/black color.
Bankai technique - Maboroshi (Dream/Illusion). Maboroshi is an illusion technique, it can effect up to 3 persons when my character is Lieutenant and up to 5 when he's Captain. When this technique is activated, Yozora begins to burn in dark flames that cover a certain area in which all targets are; these flames are my spiritual energy and are used to effect targets' mind. Illusion allows Yousei to fool his opponents by changing surroundings, mostly everything, even opponent's body or zanpakuto. Still, this illusion is escapable, here's a table to show what rank I must be and how long I can hold someone in illusions:

My Rank > 3rd Seat Lieutenant Captain
Captain - 1 post 2 posts
Lieutenant 1 post 2 posts 3 posts
3rd Seat 2 posts 3 posts 4 posts
Lower than 3rd 3 posts 4 posts 5 posts
This technique has 10 post cool down..

2. Star of Soul - Yozora's blade begins to shine white.
Bankai technique - Kokoro Karidasu (Heart Borrow). This technique is clearly meant against Shinigami, though it can work against Vaizards and Arrancar too. When Yousei uses Heart Borrow, Yozora enters opponent realm of soul and forces Zanpakuto living there to obey Yousei's will. If this technique is successful, Yozora's blade at Yousei's hands becomes targeted Zanpakuto and can be released. Next table shows success rate of this, which is based on mental ability of both Yousei and his opponent.

My Rank > 3rd Seat Lieutenant Captain
Captain - - Last 2 posts of effect
Lieutenant Last post of effect 2 posts 3 posts
3rd Seat Able for 2 posts 3 posts 4 posts
Lower than 3rd Able for 3 posts 4 posts 5 posts
Empty spot means both Zanpakuto are sealed and cannot be released for 5 posts (if they were released before, they go to their normal state). Numbers in table shows for how long and during which posts can Yousei release targeted Zanapkuto. Effect is same with Arrancar, but releasing zanpakuto would mean to go into opponent's resurrecion form. Effect is temporary and after 5 posts, Yozora and targeted Zanpakuto comes back to normal. Has 10 posts cool down.

3. Star of Dimension - Yozora's blade begins to shine blue.
Bankai technique - Komen Kagami (Lake Surface Mirror). Komen Kagami is a dimensional barrier technique, it creates a barrier wall that absorbs any incoming attack and then creates another barrier that fires the absorbed attack back. Absorbing an attack uses 2/3 attack's energy and shoot back uses 1/2 of absorbed attack's energy, so using both parts of this technique would use more energy than attack itself used. Has 5 posts cool down.

During Bankai, Yousei can still use his Shikai techniques.

Bankai Looks: Doesn't change the sword apart from shattering the moonstone.
Spoiler:

Alterations: Yousei's Shihakusho (shinigami robe) becomes bright silver and a bit shinning.

Stats change:
Speed: + 10
Accuracy: + 5
Stamina: + 5


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Re: Yousei's Bankai - Kyoutendouchi Yozora

Post by Kaji-Kanto on Fri Nov 20, 2009 7:37 pm

Alright well
it can effect up to 3 persons at Lieutenant and up to 5 at Captain.
Well please clear that up wether its when your a lieutenant or captain or if its the opponents rank cause if its the opponents rank i belive you need to switch those numbers since Lieutenant is weaker than captain.

Then comes Hear borrow. Well first of all for effects of that magnitutde it needs a drawback to the user as well. Then you need to realize that even if you bind it to let you wield it dosent mean you can release it without there release phrase. Then you realize that you wouldn’t be able to re-release your zanpaktou since it would go back to is sealed phase after using this technigue.

Then also you have a contradiction in it since.
This makes opponent unable to release his Zanpakuto for 5 posts
Yozora's blade at Yousei's hands becomes targeted Zanpakuto and can be released for 3 Yousei's posts.
If your zanpaktou becomes the opponents it would mean that it would be sealed as well meaning how would you release it?

Now for Lake surface mirror. Is this for ranged attacks only or can it reflect melee attacks as well? Then also you would have to place the same Reiatsu that the opponent used in the attack to even reflect the attack.

Just from the glance of what i read.
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Re: Yousei's Bankai - Kyoutendouchi Yozora

Post by Yousei on Sat Nov 21, 2009 9:13 am

Well please clear that up wether its when your a lieutenant or captain or if its the opponents rank cause if its the opponents rank i belive you need to switch those numbers since Lieutenant is weaker than captain.

This is my rank. This technique can effect 3 persons when I'm Lieutenant and 5 when I'm a Captain. As for opponent's ranks, I think I wrote that Captains can escape faster than others.

Then comes Hear borrow. Well first of all for effects of that magnitutde it needs a drawback to the user as well. Then you need to realize that even if you bind it to let you wield it dosent mean you can release it without there release phrase. Then you realize that you wouldn’t be able to re-release your zanpaktou since it would go back to is sealed phase after using this technigue.

Then also you have a contradiction in it since.

This makes opponent unable to release his Zanpakuto for 5 posts

Yozora's blade at Yousei's hands becomes targeted Zanpakuto and can be released for 3 Yousei's posts.

If your zanpaktou becomes the opponents it would mean that it would be sealed as well meaning how would you release it?

Next. I guess, draw back would be, that while wielding opponent's Zanpakuto I can't use my own Zanpakuto abilities (apart already in use Heart Borrow technique) and second draw back would be, as you said, that after this technique, Yozora and targeted Zanpakuto returns to normal, meaning it ends my bankai state. As for release phrase, since Yozora binds targeted Zanpakuto to obey me, it tell me it's release phrase too.
I dont see any contradiction here. Yes, Yozora becomes targeted sword, but it doesn't say that targeted sword cannot be released, it says that opponent is unable to release his sword, and that's simply because his Zanpakuto spirit is in my blade at that time. Yes, as I say before, while using this technique, my blade cannot use it's other techniques, but still, while this technique is active, I am in my Bankai.

Now for Lake surface mirror. Is this for ranged attacks only or can it reflect melee attacks as well? Then also you would have to place the same Reiatsu that the opponent used in the attack to even reflect the attack.

Well, Lake surface mirror doesn't just reflect. I'd say it doesn't reflect at all; all it does in absorb any incoming attack into another dimension and channel it elsewhere. This is much like Nova's ability. And how it would work against mellee is like when Renji sent his Zabimaru at the dimensional hole, that Nova created, and then another hole opened, through which Zabimaru came out right back at Renji. This doesn't require same amount of energy opponent uses.
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Re: Yousei's Bankai - Kyoutendouchi Yozora

Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Sat Nov 21, 2009 10:54 am

3. Star of Dimension - Yozora's blade begins to shine blue.
Bankai technique - Komen Kagami (Lake Surface Mirror). Komen Kagami is a dimensional barrier technique, it creates a barrier wall that absorbs any incoming attack and then creates another barrier that fires/reflects the absorbed attack. Has 5 posts cool down.

Absorbing any technique is a bit too much. For example, if i used a level 99 Hadou against you, it would be childs play for you to fire that back at me with minimal energy.

Secondly, binding the spirit to your will does not mean it will tell you the release phrase. The way the release phrase works is different for every shinigami as their zanpaktou is part of their soul. You would need to be judged by the spirit and everything before it even determines if you can release is. This alone would take one-two posts, as the Zanpakotu spirits just dont automatically tell their wielder their true name. Thats something that is received when they have been judged. Otherwise all shinigami in the academy that initially get their zanpaktou would be able to release immediately. That process takes time.

Also, even if you do manage to release, it does not mean that the spirit needs to obey you entirely, which could lead to disasterous effects when trying to attack the shinigami you bound. In essence what you are doing is trying to bind their soul to your will. You may be able to USE the Zanpaktou, but to use the techniques/abilities without them backfiring on you would require a much higher reiatsu level and mindset than your opponent.
Still, this illusion is escapable, it requires 3 posts for Captain to escape, 4 posts for Vice-Captain, 5 posts for 3rd seats. Can be used only once a topic.

This assuming you get the captain/vice captain first. And as they will most likely have a higher reiatsu level, and much more experience than you, 3 posts is too much to hold a Captain level shinigami.

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Re: Yousei's Bankai - Kyoutendouchi Yozora

Post by Yousei on Sat Nov 21, 2009 1:16 pm

Absorbing any technique is a bit too much. For example, if i used a level 99 Hadou against you, it would be childs play for you to fire that back at me with minimal energy.

Ok. Then if I link energy used to absorb with energy used for attack?
Let's say Absorb = 2/3 attack's energy; and shoot back = 1/2 energy. This would make it useless against melee attacks, also it would take more energy to capture and fire back that 99th hadou, than the attack itself took energy.

Still, this illusion is escapable, it requires 3 posts for Captain to escape, 4 posts for Vice-Captain, 5 posts for 3rd seats. Can be used only once a topic.


This assuming you get the captain/vice captain first. And as they will most likely have a higher reiatsu level, and much more experience than you, 3 posts is too much to hold a Captain level shinigami.

For getting. The capturing phase of this works a bit like Tousen's Bankai (That dome that blocks nearly all senses), Yozora's blade starts to shine dark and black flames covers whole world. That is how it looks, those black flames are my reiatsu, it covers area in which all of my targets are, limit of people it can effect is not because this effected area is limited, but because of my lack of mental ability to control people's imagination. Yes, now that you said, I realize that 3 posts is enough to kill even a captain, so would it be better if I make it like this:?

My Rank > 3rd Seat Lieutenant Captain
Captain 1 post 1 post 2 posts
Lieutenant 1 post 2 posts 3 posts
3rd Seat 2 posts 3 posts 4 posts
Lower than 3rd 3 posts 4 posts 5 posts

Secondly, binding the spirit to your will does not mean it will tell you the release phrase. The way the release phrase works is different for every shinigami as their zanpaktou is part of their soul. You would need to be judged by the spirit and everything before it even determines if you can release is. This alone would take one-two posts, as the Zanpakotu spirits just dont automatically tell their wielder their true name. Thats something that is received when they have been judged. Otherwise all shinigami in the academy that initially get their zanpaktou would be able to release immediately. That process takes time.

Also, even if you do manage to release, it does not mean that the spirit needs to obey you entirely, which could lead to disasterous effects when trying to attack the shinigami you bound. In essence what you are doing is trying to bind their soul to your will. You may be able to USE the Zanpaktou, but to use the techniques/abilities without them backfiring on you would require a much higher reiatsu level and mindset than your opponent.

Ok, this one is difficult, but as I can understand it should be based on gap of my and opponent's mental ability. Next table shows how many posts (and during which posts) can targeted Zanpakuto be released by me. - means that both Zanpakuto go to their normal state and cannot be released for 5 posts.
My Rank > 3rd Seat Lieutenant Captain
Captain - - Last 2 posts of effect
Lieutenant Last post of effect 2 posts 3 posts
3rd Seat Able for 2 posts 3 posts 4 posts
Lower than 3rd Able for 3 posts 4 posts 5 posts

I don't like to edit each time, it also might confuse. I will edit it, when we agree.
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Re: Yousei's Bankai - Kyoutendouchi Yozora

Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Sat Nov 21, 2009 1:58 pm

For third seat, a captain really wouldnt be affected by the illusions.

Other then that, I think I got my major points out of the way. Im going to wait for kaji, as he got to this first, and see if he has any other disagreements.

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Re: Yousei's Bankai - Kyoutendouchi Yozora

Post by Yousei on Sat Nov 21, 2009 3:49 pm

Alright, waiting for Kaji. Btw, illusions would be like this, then:

My Rank > 3rd Seat Lieutenant Captain
Captain - 1 post 2 posts
Lieutenant 1 post 2 posts 3 posts
3rd Seat 2 posts 3 posts 4 posts
Lower than 3rd 3 posts 4 posts 5 posts

And, during the illusions, am I allowed to do non-fatal auto hit? As opponent wouldn't be able to avoid it. Or he would have to write he was hit himself?
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Re: Yousei's Bankai - Kyoutendouchi Yozora

Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Sat Nov 21, 2009 3:58 pm

That would need to be cleared with the opponent.

For example, if you got me with the illusion, I just wouldnt stand around. Id continue moving and moving, making it hard to hit me as well as using techniques that would affect a general area.

So you would attempt to make a hit. Most likely, provided they are not godmodding or meta gaming, it should hit, unless they make it very hard for it too.

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Re: Yousei's Bankai - Kyoutendouchi Yozora

Post by Kaji-Kanto on Sun Nov 22, 2009 9:05 pm

Its fine now Thank you Kou for doing my job for me ^.^ *stamps on an approval unless stated otherwise*
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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Sun Nov 22, 2009 9:06 pm

Seconded. Go train it now.

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Re: Yousei's Bankai - Kyoutendouchi Yozora

Post by Yousei on Thu Dec 03, 2009 9:40 am

Edited. You may wish to check it if I wrote everything right.
Also, I think I'll post my training when I get to the Lieutenant rank. That's mostly because I guess I can edit my character app then. I used another release phrase than I wrote in my app, the one Sou sugested, it sounds better. Razz
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Re: Yousei's Bankai - Kyoutendouchi Yozora

Post by DewBunny on Thu Dec 03, 2009 12:37 pm

o.....m......g.......

Yousei i think you just became my favorite member

did you seriously set up tables for how your techs affect different ranks? *passes out
you rule....

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