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Post by Eonar on Fri Jan 01, 2010 9:07 pm

Basic Information

Name: Eonar

Age: 291, appears 24

Gender: Female

Division: 1st Division

Seat: 3rd Seat

Looks:

Her thin golden hair was wrought with beauty. The locks were twirled into a perfectly conformed, tamed style, her hair compressed together, which appears like a rose style. Eonar constantly commands it and keeps it in check. Her pure white eyes make her appear to be blind, yet this is a false truth. She is not blind, but only holds the appearence of such. Her red, lucious lips complement her fair face. Upon her ears are earings, and rumors have it that it was made from the light from the stars themselves. Her skin itself is both unblemished and and even, the envy of most women in the Soul Society. Eonar has forgone the standard garb of a Shinigami for her more natural dress. On her wrists and hands, there was gauntles of golden cloth, which glows with faint ereathral energy. She donns a necklace of leaves, which complements her light green shirt. From her right gauntlet, an almost invisible cloth goes from it, up around her left shoulder and connecting to her left gauntlet. This doesn't hinder her movement, as it is made from her own vast reitsu. Finally, she wears a long green skirt with plain green shoes, with a belt of leaves around her waist.

Personality: The outer coating of the lollipop that is Eonar is very charming and eloquent. Utilization of one’s knowledge and gifts is essential to the way Eonar lives, and it is one of her most sanctioned precepts; she always uses the knowledge at her disposal to the best of her ability, and always consciously plans multiple steps ahead. Personifying her high intelligence, Kensei is a strategist, and always prefers to be informed with the workings of the world. And what better way than to be right in the middle of it? Being a quick learner is another reason why the woman is always at least one step ahead of everyone else. Another of her precepts is to deal with situations before they become problems; therefore, he has a variety of avenues to deal with said situations. One of these avenues is her amorphous personality. Often thinking of herself worthy of acting, she can create a multitude of personalities, and depict them flawlessly. Unfortunately, there are always faults in one’s own self, and one of those to Eonar is the fact that she’s very cocky. She's overly confident in most cases, and believes herself to be all powerful; however, one advantage to this is that she has studied herself well and has dedicated time to know his own weakness and then learn how to deal with or compensate for them. Another attribute of Eonar's is the fact that he has a strong mental buffer, which means that not much affects him. Because of this, it causes a cool, nearly emotionless mask to appear over her true, hidden, emotions. Although, she’s extremely in tune with her feelings and knows himself completely. She knows that if her mood got the better of him, that everything she’s ever worked for could end in a heartbeat. Even an expert, who had time to study Eonar's feelings closely, could never hope to know Eonar as she herself does. The only inclinations of mood that she ever subconsiouly shows are twinkles in her eyes, curves of her lips; infinitesimal movements of her fingers. How she feels is no ones concern other then his own, unless its displeasure with a subordinate. She's ruthless, and will infilce any type of pain; she will do it until she knows you’re broken.

Stats

Strength: 5

Speed: 30

Accuracy: 15

Stamina: 20

Zanpakuto Information

Zanpakuto Name: Genkakku Nai

Zanpakuto Looks: In its sealed form, it resembles a normal katana. The only decoration is the crossguard, which is a hexagon instead of a rectangle. The two sides parallel to the blade are long, whereas the four sides above and below the blade are shortened, making it into almost a diamond or prism-like shape. It has a green handle.

Zanpakuto Description: None.

Released Zanpakuto Description: Genkaku Nai literally means “Illusion of Death”. Her ability lies not in aggression, but in passive ability. Through using vibrations, reiatsu, and a myriad of other things, Genkaku Nai essentially is in control of the area around her. Through vibrations, she can extend subliminal messaging not picked up by the mind, and will subconsciously start to shut down the opponent(s)’ systems: touch, hearing, smell, taste, and sight. It takes three posts per shut down to happen. She has the ability to negate all five, but can only negate two per person. She can also influence the mind greatly. Through use of Eonar's reiatsu, Genkaku creates a mirror like dome perimeter extending to great distances, as far as 40 meters in radius. This can last for 6 posts at the most, and takes a 2 point drain on her stamina per post. This can make a complete carbon copy of Eonar, and then using that reaitsu, she will hide the true Eonar; it can also essentially make anything Eonar desires, though it isn’t tangible; it can also hide myriads of objects at a time. Although these are her active abilities, Genkaku Nai also has passive ones. Those are the illusion that she is truly a Flame Type Zanpaktou, where the blade is reduced to ash and fire envelops the field. This is when the vibrations and mirrors start their effect. The mirrors can only be used once per topic.

Zanpakuto Release Phrase: Allign my enemies, Genkkaku Nai.

Released Zanpakuto Looks: Look in Released Zanpakuto's Abilities.

Zanpakuto Spirit:

Zanpakuto Realm: A plain field of snow.

History and RP Sample

History: Life Arc:

Eonar was born to a family in poverty. Her mother, father, and elder sister worked everyday from sun up to sun down to be able to afford a crust of bread for them to share. She lived in a society where money wasn't power, but words were. However, most of the people were illiterate. A traveling swordsman was traveling through her village when Eonar saw an opportunity to learn how to read and write. The swordsman was looking for shelter and no one would offer him sanctuary. Everyone except Eonar. He brought him to his family's shed, long empty, all the tools sold for petty cash. In return for keeping him a secret, the swordsman taught Eonar how to read and write. After a year, Eonar was as skilled in literacy as any of the powerful adults. After the swordsman left for parts unknown, she started writing speeches and letters and gave them to her parents, putting their names on it. She would not tell his parents where she learned to read and write. Soon, they were the center of political power and started gaining attention. Eonar had become well versed in how adults would speak and she had very good ideas of her own. However, the people that were in power committed arsony, setting her house on fire. Eonar and her family were all killed. When Eonar woke up as a soul, her family was gone. A Shinigami came and preformed the Konso on her. Eonar didn't have enough time to ask any questions. She was 14 at the time.

Rukongai Arc:

Eonar was transported to Rukongai 21. She was found by a young couple with no children. When they came across her, all she could do was whisper, "Help... please..." They immediately took her in. They took care of her and doted on her, healing her back to health. When she was healthy, she was planning to leave, but the couple implored her to stay. Her only condition was that he had to do a fair share of the work. She chose to do a lot of the house work, like laundry and things like that. For 40 years, they lived together peacefully, Eonar content with her lifestyle, and she hadn't aged a day. Then, her world was shattered. The same swordsman from the Realm of the Living was going through each District, looking for the strongest fighter. She saw her idol, the one who freed Eonar from tyranny, beat and kill a young man. She lashed out in anger but was easily beaten. The swordsman remembered herand spared his life saying, "Recklessness meets death." It was that day, Eonar decided to become a Shinigami, to serve her own purposes and destroy those who made her life horrible.

Shinigami Academy Arc:

After Eonar enrolled in the Academy, she became the best student. However, it was at the price of her social career. Throughout her whole Academy years, she only had one friend. She was at the top of her class, for every class. No one knew the prowess that was Eonar, even the teachers admired her knowledge. However, her life slowly became more lonely as her only friend abandoned her. She became a woman who lost her faith in her fellow Shinigami. She drowned out her loneliness with hard work and training. By the end of her Academy days, he was placed in the 1st Squad as the 12th seat.

Seated Arc:

During her time in Squad 1, Eonar was a prodigy, and a lonely prodigy at that. She quickly proved herself to her Captain, but every step forward for her Shinigami career was two steps backward for her social life. Her squad mates envied and hated her for her brilliance, for her kindness. Whenever she offered to help them, they just spat at her feet. Soon, she was so entangled in her sorrow that during Hollow hunting, she made a grave mistake that cost one of her squad mate’s life. Her Zanpakuto Realm became so bleak and dreary, her Zanpakuto spirit roared out, calling her back to the like. She was pulled into her realm and she finally found solstice inside herself. It was then her Shikai unlocked. From then on, she seldom made mistakes. Soon, she traveled from 9th Seat to 3rd Seat.

RP Sample: It was all over in an instant. "Yuurei, call the Captains together for a meeting; I have buisness to attend to."

Of... of course, Taishita-sama, the female Shinigami said, scurrying off to do her task.

Kensei, on the other hand, was actually running through the Seireitei, well... using a most useful technique called Shunpo. Flash Step Technique, some called it; its effects were the same: speed up to the point where some can be but a blur. And to the Shinigami of the Court of Souls, it was a rare sight to see their Captain Commander surging through their home.

Yeah, that's right. The rugged man, with revealing clothing and the black bottoms of a Hakama was the leader of the Soul Society. He was the head honcho, the best of the best, and it was completely true that he was most likely the one of the strongest, if not strongest, beings in existance. His past had been tied to some inscrutible objects and people. The royal family, for instance, where he had actually laid eyes upon the King, and the various members of Central 46. Taishita Kensei was someone not to be trifled with.

It was the West Gate. How symbolic. An infringment into Soul Society made one a ryoka, an uninvited soul that dared step bounds within the sanctimonious living place of the Shinigami. Now, the west was also the left, and in accordance with Human Tradition, the left side was the side which favored the devil and anarchy and such; the right side represented God and holiness. Kensei could be considered a man with his right shoulder higher than his left, which left his enemies those who weren't reknowned for their good deeds.

He had gotten wind of it the moment it happened, and it took him another moment to get to the West Gate. The guard, Masamoto Sasuke, laid upon the ground. His bulky figure was limp and prone, his eyes a pallid shade of white. Blood poured from his throat and it continued to do so, for a good time too. "I always figured you two would come again. I wish I could say that it's nice to see you, Jikoku, Dios." The two figures were a good distance apart. The one who's name was Dios Lio stood before Kensei was merely an underling, someone not even noticable. Long since has Kensei engraved both their images into his mind. Dios had short black hair, a lean body, and a good mark upon his left cheek. Jikoku was more nondescript. Kensei walked over to the large body and hefted him up, placed him not two steps away on the other side of the gate, and then watched as it closed, leaving the Captain Commander to face the two devils. Alone...


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Re: Eonar 3rd Seat 1st Division -Done-

Post by Eonar on Fri Jan 01, 2010 9:08 pm

Done

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Post by Eonar on Fri Jan 01, 2010 9:14 pm

If it's ok, I'd like to apply for 3rd seat, because Ikemi last logged on on December 6th, and he said he'd be gone for a week, but it's been almost a month.

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Post by Eonar on Fri Jan 01, 2010 9:16 pm

Or at least 4th Seat, lol, since the person's character hasn't been re-approved.

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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Fri Jan 01, 2010 10:24 pm

Bumped to 3rd seat. Edit accordingly.

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Post by Eonar on Fri Jan 01, 2010 10:26 pm

Done. And is there a description on what the Spiritual Pressure/Exp Points are somewhere? And where do I put my Kido?

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Post by Kenji Akira on Fri Jan 01, 2010 11:43 pm

Kido is placed in the Request Center (that section all the way at the bottom of the index)

And no, not really

Oh and about your application: You're appearance & Gender says she yet your personality says he?

Assuming you're a female, might wanna change that.
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Post by Eonar on Fri Jan 01, 2010 11:52 pm

Sorry about that. I had to take the personaity of another one of my characters from a KH site and forgot to edit out the parts. Otherwise, done.

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Post by Kenji Akira on Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:24 am

Through vibrations, she can extend subliminal messaging not picked up by the mind, and will subconsciously start to shut down the opponent(s)’ systems, starting with touch, then hearing, then smell, then taste, then sight. It happens in that order, and takes three posts per shut down to happen to a single person.

Even with the limits on it, it seems a bit much for a Shikai ability to be able take out every sense of the body, especially considering the fact that you made it seem inescapable, just a matter of time.

She can also influence the mind greatly.


Not exactly sure what you mean by that.

Through use of Eonar's reiatsu, Genkaku creates a mirror like dome perimeter extending to great distances.


How long does this go?

This can make a complete carbon copy of Eonar, and then using that reaitsu, she will hide the true Eonar; it can also essentially make anything Eonar desires, though it isn’t tangible; it can also hide myriads of objects at a time, as well as Kido.


Exactly how it is hiding you and "myriads of objects"?
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Post by Eonar on Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:28 am

1. Is there something you want me to do with it? All you just said was what it does.

2. It's just a descriptive sentence. You know, the vibrations and the illusions.

3. Unless otherwise stated, it's as long as Eonar wants.

4. Read the description, lol. This is all done with the mirror of Reiatsu. By utilizing the reiatsu, Genkakku Nai will use it as a catalyst to make the visual illusions. And yes, they're only visual, which means sound, hearing, touch, and taste are not affected.

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Post by Kenji Akira on Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:49 am

1. That sort of meant for you to tone it down a bit (Or remove it) Like maybe to only one sense, add a weakness, etc.

2. k

3. You need to put a limit on how long you can use it (In posts) and how big it can be.

4. Alright, I'm good with that.

Other than 1 and 3, you seem set to me. Oh, and hiding Kido is a no-no
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Post by Eonar on Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:55 am

I'd like your reasoning as to why hiding Kido is not viable.

As for the first thing, I'll edit it saying that the Zanpakuto has the ability to negate all five, but can only negate two of one character.

Put a duration and how long on my Zanpakuto's ability.

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Post by Kaji-Kanto on Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:44 pm

Well alright first of all... Invisible kido is essentially invisible Godmod kill technigue of death. ^.^ Not to mention you would have to exert more spiritual particles to hide a kido from sight. So just please remove it.

Two senses a character is fine.

Yes put a duration. Such as... The dome can extend for 40 meters outwards and will last only 6 posts. Then comes a stamina drain for having it up since even if its a zanpaktou ability you would need to release reishi to keep the domes abilites activated. So also place a Stamina drain per post.
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Post by Eonar on Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:47 pm

Edited.

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Post by Kaji-Kanto on Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:54 pm

Oh one last thing before i can approve this. Set post times for the sense disruption. Like the first sense will be knocked out during the second post and the second will be during the 4th post something like that.
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Post by Eonar on Sat Jan 02, 2010 2:05 pm

I did. It takes three posts per sense to be taken into effect.

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Post by Kaji-Kanto on Sat Jan 02, 2010 2:16 pm

Alright Approved, with a possibility of a looking back over if any issues over the shikai arise.
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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Sun Jan 03, 2010 1:19 am

Through use of Eonar's reiatsu, Genkaku creates a mirror like dome perimeter extending to great distances, as far as two miles in diameter, which is 4 Pi Miles squared in area. This can last for 10 posts at the most, and takes a 2 point drain on her stamina per post. This can make a complete carbon copy of Eonar, and then using that reaitsu, she will hide the true Eonar; it can also essentially make anything Eonar desires, though it isn’t tangible; it can also hide myriads of objects at a time

Having seen this in your rank challenge, im gonna say something now.

2 miles. 10 posts. 2 stamina a post? I think not.The amount of reiatsu needed to cover 2 MILE distance is much more thena 2 stamina drain a post. COupled with being able to keep it active 10 posts? Not happening.

The dome can extend for 40 meters outwards and will last only 6 posts. Then comes a stamina drain for having it up since even if its a zanpaktou ability you would need to release reishi to keep the domes abilites activated. So also place a Stamina drain per post.

That was the suggest distanc e by Kaji.

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Post by Eonar on Sun Jan 03, 2010 1:33 am

Edited. 40 meter radius, 6 post maxium, 2 Stamina per Post drain also added that the mirrors can only be used once per topic. The vibrations are a seperate ability.

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Post by Kaji-Kanto on Sun Jan 03, 2010 1:38 am

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