Renjiro Haptism - 5th squad captain

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Renjiro Haptism - 5th squad captain

Post by Renjiro Haptism on Fri Aug 27, 2010 2:03 pm

Basic Information

Name: Renjiro Haptism

Age: He is 885 but appears to be 35

Gender: Male

Division: 5th

Seat: Captain

Looks:

Spoiler:
See avatar or above. Renjiro looks exactly like this

Personality:

Renjiro is a self obsessed egomaniac that cares only for himself, most of the time. He only cares about others when it’s a life or death situation. He concentrates more on his looks than anything else. Call him ugly and feel the wrath of Renjiro. Although Renjiro is very self conscious and mostly cares for himself, he is rather charismatic and charming. He's a ladies’ man with his own fan club, which he loves.

The only time he will stop caring just for himself is if his team or direct family is in grave danger. Renjiro as the Captain of the 5th squad is a very powerful person and it shows with his cockiness. This was mainly engraved into his personality when he was diagnosed with his brain tumor and during his treatment he was shunned as a useless disgrace and therefore built a self-protection mechinism into his own being.

Zanpakuto Information

Zanpakuto Name: Kaiton Ryū

Zanpakuto Release Phrase: Burn to the heavens, Kaiton Ryū!

Zanpakuto Looks:
Spoiler:

Unreleased Zanpakuto Description: Looks and acts like a normal sword. It has a silver tint to the blade and its hilt is made of pure Silver. See picture above.

Released Zanpakuto Looks:
Spoiler:

Released Zanpaktou Powers:

The sword changes shape completely into the image above. When creating flames the temperature of the flames produced stops at the hilt because it has tungsten in the hilt which can absorb and stay cold due to its melting point being 3422 °C and a heat absorption rate of 52.31 kJ•mol−1. This means his hilt has fire and heat absorption properties built into the raw materials used when forging the sword. It reaches a maximum temperature of 1,000 °C.

Spoiler:
(example of Renjiro creating the whips of fire ^^)

The abilities of Kaiton Ryū are can’t be measured by mere scale of power or skill as it’s a combination of both. Kaiton Ryū being a dragon can naturally control and produce fire. Therefore the power of the Zanpakuto Kaiton Ryū is the creation and control of fire. With slight movements of Kaiton Ryū Renjiro creates whips of fire that shoot forward. A single whip of fire is as strong as a level 30 kido but he can only create and maintain 3 whips at a time.

Zanpakuto Spirit:
Spoiler:
Kaiton Ryū, the fire dragon of the east, is a lazy dragon standing on its hind legs at 9ft. He wears sunglasses and smokes a pipe of tobacco.

Zanpakuto Realm:
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Bankai Information
(This applies to captains, and advanced lieutenants only)

Bankai Name Turn all into ashes, Kaiton Ryu

Bankai 1 Description:

When this form of bankai has been activated his shikai abilities to manipulate fire become easier and therefore allow Renjiro to manipulate any fire busied attack or kido he uses. The only exception to this is when he tries to manipulate his opponent’s kidos then he can only manipulate level 1 - 50 fire busied kido. With kido level 51 - 70 Renjiro would only be able to bend it off target by 3 inches but not control it. Anything above 70 (aka 71+), cannot be controlled or bent.

This bankai form also increases the power of the fire that he produces. It changes to baby blue signifying its change in combustion state from incomplete combustion to complete combustion, raising the speed and strength of the fire.

However because of the strength and power of his bankai Renjiro needs a lot of concentration and pure will power to manipulate this type of fire and therefore lasts for 10 posts and has a cool down of 5. In addition the whips he was able to produce in his shikai form are boosted to the strength and speed of a level 50 kido.

Bankai 2 Description:

By offering his sword into the ground with the phrase "BANKAI! Kaiton Ryū!". With this his sword will sink into the ground and as it disappears 8 huge 10ft tall blades (one meter apart length wise from each other) appears 2 meters either side of him.

Spoiler:

The blades then burst into flames and turn into red hot ash which then encircles Renjiro. This ash will stay burning forever until he runs out of reishi to sustain the bankai and will produce the amount of burning hot ash shown below: -

Amount of Ash Produced
Captain level 150 m3
Vice Captain Level 70 m3
3rd Seat Level 45 m3

Spoiler:
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The way in which Renjiro manipulates this burning ash is with his hands. He can compact and spread the ash to defend or attack. The ash itself produces the same heat of 1,000 °C just like his bankai version 1.

Bankai 2 Attacks[b]

Ash Burning Shield - When his Bankai 2 is activated he will manipulate the ash around him to form a thick 30 centimetre barrier anyway around him. It will be able to block any form of oncoming attack (under a 75 level) whether it’s destructive or binding kido.

Ash burning attack - When his Bankai 2 is activated he will manipulate the ash around him to form a constant barrage of burning ash. This constant barrage is equivalent to a constant barrage of a level 50 kido and can be manipulated and moved at any point to any location.

An additional note Renjiro can use both of these techniques if he has enough burning ash to defence and attack.

[b]Addition boosts to stats and kido


Raises fire based kido strength and speed, therefore raising their kido number. See below for table.

0 -30 31 - 60 61 - 89 90+
Captain level +35 +15 +10 +5 (max 99)
Vice Captain Level +20+10 +5 +3
3rd Seat Level +15 +5 +0 +0

Bankai Looks:
Spoiler:
(One of the 16 blades that appears ^^)

Spoiler:
(The 16 blades which appears when Renjiro surrenders his sword ^^)

Kido Information

Name: Thrust (衝, shō?)
Type: Hado - Way of destruction
Number: 1
Description: Pushes the target away from the caster.

Name: White Lightning (白雷, byakurai?)
Type: Hado - Way of destruction
Number: 4
Description: Fires a concentrated bolt of white lightning from the caster's forefinger.

Name: Shield of Fire
Type: Bakudo-Binding
Number: 89
Element: Fire
Incantation: Fire Release!
Description: Renjiro releases fire in the form of a sphere around him. The Fire does not produce heat inside of the sphere but compensates by releasing twice the amount of heat outside of the sphere. lasts 9 posts

Name: Flame Barrier
Kido Equivalence: 70
Range: N/A
Description: The barrier stands 3 meters high, 2 meters wide and 2 centimetres thick. It can block up to a level 80 kido fire attack, level 70 wind attack and level 60 earth attack.
Weakness: It only reduces water kido by 10 ranks and cannot stop a lightning kido at all.

Name: Danku (斷空, Splitting Void)
Type: Bakudo-Binding
Number: 81
Element: N/A
Description: Creates an energy barrier in the form of a rectangular wall. According to Byakuya, it is capable of stopping destructive spells up to #89. This is seen also when Aizen uses it to block Tessai's Hadō #88.
Incantation: unknown; although Tessai hinted that it has an incantation when he fights Aizen.

Name: Shakkahō (赤火砲, Shot of Red Fire)
Type: Hado - Way of destruction
Number: 31
Element: N/A
Incantation: "Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!"
Description: Fires a ball of red energy at a target.

Name: Wall of Fire
Type: Bakudo-Binding
Number: 53
Element: Fire
Incantation: Wall Go!
Description: It is exactly the same as shield of fire but instead of forming as a complete sphere is forms the shape of a protective wall. lasts 8 posts

Name: Arc Shield (円閘扇, enkosen?) — Summons a shield of energy to block opponents' attacks.
Type: Bakudo-Binding
Number: 39
Element: None
Incantation: I call forth the power of my soul to shield me from any harm that comes towards me!
Description: Summons a shield of energy to block opponents' attacks.

Name: Fire Burning Chains
Type: Bakudo-Binding
Number: 90
Element: Fire
Incantation: Chains Burn!
Description: Renjiro will throw hundreds of titanium pearls into the sky and sets them alight by saying the incantation. When he finishes the pearls join together; Renjiro then points at the target and flaming pearls transform into flaming chain that goes at high speed at the target aiming to wrap them up. When wrapping the opponent(s) the fire causes 3rd degree burns on contact with the skin. Due to re-enforcing the chains with his own reishi and into the pearls that was made from metal shards from Renjiros Zanpakuto. Because of this Renjiro can plainly manipulate the chains gaining the ability to move them how he pleases and allowing him to use the chains as a physical barrier between himself and a attack (either kido or physical).

Name: Flying Dragon Striking, Heaven-Shaking, Lightning Cannon
Type: Hado - Way of destruction
Number: 88
Element: N/A
Incantation: Dragon STRIKE!
Description: Fires a massive blast of spiritual energy in a fashion similar to a laser.

Name: Thunder Roar Cannon (雷吼炮, raikōhō?)
Type: Hado - Way of destruction
Number: 63.
Element: Lightning
Incantation: "Sprinkled on the bones of the beast! Sharp tower, red crystal, steel ring. Move and become the wind, stop and become the calm. The sound of warring spears fills the empty castle!"
Description: Fires a massive wave of yellow lightning at a target.

Name: Twin Lotus Blue Fire, Crash Down (双蓮蒼火墜, sōren sōkatsui?)
Type: Hado - Way of destruction
Number: 73.
Element: Fire
Incantation: "Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! On the wall of blue flame, inscribe a twin lotus. In the abyss of conflagration, wait at the far heavens."
Description: Essentially a doubled version of #33, this spell fires two shots of blue fire with greater potency than the single-shot variety.

Name: Shiju no Saimon
Type: Bakudo-Binding
Number: Unknown probably close to 90
Element: Barrier
Incantation: Brothers in arms, Never contemplating retreat. Blue bolt, White bolt, Black bolt, Red bolt. Sinking into the sea together to redeem themselves. (Effect 1)"Ryubi no Jomon" (armband shield) "Koko no Jomon" (wooden gear) "Kigai no Jomon" (honeycomb) "Hoyoku no Jomon" (Cross with wings) "Shiju no Saimon" (Wings close to form overhead halo)
Description: user forms a wall of large wooden planks which form a wall in front of the user. once the wall is in place the user speaks the incantation. upon reaching the words Ryubi no jomon the wall is reinforced drastically with more Kido Planks forming a large shield the shape of the gotei thirteen armbands. the user continues speaking the incantation from here. For every 'Jomon' spoken another large object appears the shield being followed by the large wooden gear being followed by a huge honeycomb structure followed by a large cross shape with wings. After the user says the words 'Shiju no Saimon' the wings on the fourth object close in forming a large halo over the ensnared person. With the four objects in place a large cubic barrier forms around the ensnared person or hollow. which is inescapable save for an opening through the wooden gear only the user can open.
Drawbacks: Long incantation and assembly ensure this is a hard spell to use on the quick.

Abilities

Hohō

Agility (歩法, hohō; lit. step method) is an important skill for most shinigami. Though never stated clearly it most likely relates to the Shinigami ability to walk on air using spiritual power. By collecting and solidifying Reishi beneath their feet, Shinigami can gain traction on thin air to either freely move about or to stop themselves from falling.

Shunpo (瞬歩, Flash steps), a movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow.[2]. The focal point that determines the bases of this technique is speed. As speed is the main point of the technique the method is best characterized by how fast one can get from point A to point B in the least amount of steps. Training and skill are what determines how fast a user of shunpo can move; those of little skill in the technique or those who haven't used it an extended amount of time would obviously be out of practice, causing those individuals to be considerably slower, which requires the use of more steps to achieve higher speed and become winded far easier in a shorter amount of time.

The agility and speed of Hohō can be enhanced and improved through mastery of it, concentration, and training. The foremost practitioners of this technique are those assigned to the Onmitsukidō.

Masters of the technique are obviously by far the fastest beings within Soul Society. Maintaining high speed movements for extended periods of time while only using the least amount of steps to achieve those movements. Masters are capable of using Advanced steps which are considerably harder to initiate. A master can possibly create new techniques but it’s most likely a rare occurrence. [Renjiro is a master of this technique]

History and RP Sample

History:

Birth to Teenage years

Renjiro was born like any normal child of a shinigami. It was simple, relaxing and brought honour to his father as he had a first born son. As he was growing up his father taught him the ways of the Shinigami, how to become one and a master of their arts. Unknown to Renjiro he had a single benign tumor cell in the back of his head which would go un-noticed until his late 200s.

Teenage to Adult ( 28 )

During this time from 13 to 28 Renjiros training changed from learning from books and from his dad to real life training and development of his skills. He developed his skills in all area to that of a 3rd seat shinigami by the age of 25 but he never put in to being a shinigami because he wanted to be care free while training and becoming powerful enough to take the captains seat of the 1st squad. On Renjiros 28th birthday his dad handed him a sword, an ancient sword that nobody in his family for 500 years had managed to control or communicate with its soul. Renjiro touched it and heard a 'hello' at which point it glowed a extremely dim red colour. His father stood shocked explaining why he was shocked and instantly put a request for Renjiro to join the soul society.

Becoming a Shinigami

The request was granted on the basis Renjiro could prove his power and worth as a shinigami. His examiner walked up and instantly attacked Renjiro with his sword. As a counter-measure Renjiro just took out his sword and blocked it using a simple blocking stance and position. Renjiro then ran backwards going upwards as well as backward into the air (about 4 meters). When this happened his sword glowed the very dim red again with a voice saying 'Damn you kid listen to me'. Renjiros reply was "What the hell this swords speaking to me". He ran at the examiner slashing at him until he ran out of breath and ended it with a final slash cutting the examiners shoulder. 'STOP!' shouted a man in the distant; it was the leader of soul society. He snapped his fingers and a team of 10 people rushed in behind him 'you boy are now a shinigami' and throw Renjiro a standard shinigami uniform 'take this, you've impressed me very much young one and please be pleased with your 3rd seat of squad 6. Be careful and don’t die like the last one'. Renjiro gulped and replied "Err thank you I guess".

Life as a Shinigami

Renjiros life as a shinigami was harsh, full of anger and death. He was surrounded by death and more comrades disappearing faster than ever. The soul society needed a leader on the front lines and Renjiro took that step and stood up to the mark leading from the front. Renjiro spent many, many years killing hollows and other enemies of the soul society. When he turned 215 that year was a turning point in Renjiro life as he was made Vice Captain of the 5th Squad. During his time as a the Vice Captain his time was more spent in the office than on the battle field however he spent this time enhancing his shikai form and awakening his bankai. For a Vice Captain he awakened his bankai rather late but he made up with this spare time that he had as a Vice Captain. During the time of war Renjiro had plenty to do with constant missions and assassination attempts. His potential grew with every battle he won, however the price for this growth was far too high in Renjiros opinion. Many years had passed from the day that he was made Vice Captain of the 5th squad.

When he reached 303 he decided it was time to get a total body examination. The scan came back all ok until the 12th day of tests when the top medical shinigami from the 3rd division came into Renjiros bay. They broke the news of his tumor which despite being 303 years old was the size of the 5 pence coin (for you americans google it lols). They put this down to his use of reishi that stopped its growth for all these years. They explained if he had been born with it in any other race he would have died in his early 30s. His eyes was wide and his pupils diluted but small, and with that the operation began to get most of it removed and to start treatment. The operation was a success and the doctors removed 96% of the tumor but with the 4% left would mean it would grow back even more agressive and further into the frontal regions of his brain which control balance and aggression. It was now 122 days after his diagnosis and he had just finished the planned 8 doses of light chemotherpy, 3 doses of radiotherpy and the final 2 doses of high intensity chemotherpy. During this time his heart had stopped twice, due to the chemotherpies effects, and had 2 strokes. 135 days after his diagnosis he was given the all clear and was put into remission and as of yet he has remained in remission ever since. He never fully recovered his fitness, weight, balance and mental strength until he turned 323.

He currently turned 885 and his current kill rate is 1,289 hollows, 2 Bounto, 4 Espada and a single Vaizard. Renjiro could feel he was starting to get older and it was time to advance. The kill count shows what he was doing in the past 562 years. After his battle with a powerful Vaizard and coming back battered, bruised and cut from head to toe he was appointed the Captain of the 5th squad as reward for this and for his commitment to the soul society. This is where we continue his journey and what the future itself has installed for him is unknown to all.

RP Sample:

The day was fine and extremely hot with a lovely free flowing wind. The wind was lovely as it swept across Renjiros face and swept through his long black hair. The breeze was relaxing and calming but the heat was intense. The heat meant that no training could be done due to the increased risk of heat stroke which annoyed Renjiro but it was nice to take a day off training. He decided to make the most of his day off by going past many his ex-boyfriend and ex-girlfriends houses to see what they was up to. On his way his mind drifted and went to a time when the he was happy with each of them but his homosexual relationships was shunned by the other shinigami because of their sexuality. It was a shame but a gay couple was a rare sight to see in this world, so it was thrown upon by almost every person in the soul society. However Renjiro was used to this, his whole family annexed him and took away his status within the family until he was rewarded his seating in the 5th squad. However the clan was forced to except him although they believed quite the opposite. Renjiro could never choose what he was and if he could choose to be straight he wouldn't as that would narrow his 'market'.

He reached the door of his latest ex-boyfriend and knocked however there was no answer after two minutes of knocking and waiting so he moved on towards his room. However on the way he found his long time friend Ki Lai, a kendo master, and Renjiro smiled at him. The smile was reciprocated and the pair walked together towards Renjiro room. The conversation on the way was light and funny; it was obvious the pair was quite well suited to be together however they were best of friends and nothing more. The night drew in and the pair had been talking for a period of 5 hours catching up on the stuff, which included drinking 5 bottles of sake and other alcoholic beverages, they had been doing since they last saw each other and filling the other in on training secrets with each other. Ki Lai yawned and Renjiro waved him goodbye with a long and heartfelt wave.

The sun went down and Renjiro went to his secluded and secret 5th squad training area where nobody was about and whipped out his Zanpakuto saying "Burn to the heavens, Kaiton Ryū!" and with that it transformed and released an inferno of fire shooting forwards towards the steel barricade that he trained against. The barricade held solid but was now glowing a white colour. Renjiro sighed looking at it and sheathed his sword as it returned to normal. "Someday I will rule the place I swear!"


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Post by :.Daydreamer.: on Sun Aug 29, 2010 5:18 pm

Okay, Mr. Natsu, only a couple of things.


  • It'd be pretty sweet if you could, at least, add maybe a paragraph of looks.
  • I'd say you definitely need to add more to the Personality. Captains are the best of the best, and it's imperative that you, as a prospective leader on the site, go the extra mile.
  • Don't feel bad about this, but your Rp Sample could do with some work. The sentences are choppy and uniform (every sentence shouldn't start with the word 'the'). Members are probably going to try to emulate you, so why not set a good example? Very Happy
  • Also, it'd be good if you watched your grammar, and punctuation.
  • How 'bout some clarification? You implied that Renjiro was the only one able to communicate with the Spirit. Why? What makes him special?
  • Er, the Espada are unknown to the Shinigami, as of now, I think. I'll find out and check back later.
  • Why does Renjiro want to "Rule this place"?
  • And, finally (for now), is Renjiro Bisexual or Hetero? Either way, mind putting that in his Personality?


As for your Zanpaktou powers, I'm going to get a second opinion, then let you know. 'Kay? :3

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Post by Renjiro Haptism on Sun Aug 29, 2010 5:28 pm

Would it be ok if i wait on your responce ... dont wanna go to all that work for nothing
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Re: Renjiro Haptism - 5th squad captain

Post by Magellan on Fri Sep 03, 2010 10:21 pm

All pictures need to be in spoilers. You'll need text description for everything, even with a picture. Your history, personality and appearance need to have a significant amount of wording with it. Captains have a high standard. Please use the correct templates (It's been updated) and remove all stat references.
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Post by Renjiro Haptism on Sat Sep 04, 2010 6:07 pm

Redone Shikai, sorted out app to template. Will add to history RP sample personality and appearance when i sort the rest of the app If thats ok with you.
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Post by Traca Carmesim on Tue Sep 07, 2010 5:06 pm

First things first, you only get one Bankai, if you want multiple abilities then properly tie them into one another but you can't have two seperate Bankai releases, thats just not allowed for within the understood Bleach universe.

In addition, you need to provide more details and descriptions overall concerning most parts of this application, your Zanpakuto spirit isn't even a paragraph written out for example.

The stat no longer uses stats, edit them out.

Once you've made modifications to your Shikai and Bankai regarding detail, length, and proper merging I'll go back over them.
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Post by FallenAngel on Thu Oct 28, 2010 5:18 pm

Archived for the time being.
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