Traca Carmesim [Espada Primero]

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Traca Carmesim [Espada Primero]

Post by Traca Carmesim on Tue Aug 31, 2010 5:51 pm

Basic Information

Name: Traca Carmesim
Nickname; Personal: Traca; Carma
Nickname; Professional: The White Beast; Silver Sorrow; White Insect Prince
Age: 2,700
Gender: Male
Rank: Espada
Number: 1 [Primero]
Alignment: Lawful Neutral

Appearance

Eye Color: Brown
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Physical Age: 14

Physical Appearance:


Traca is deceptively young looking, appearing as a mere child in human terms even though he is actually thousands of years old, his physical frame also seeming very light though he has a terrifying strength compared to many other Arrancar. He tends to shun most forms of clothing, wearing only the minimum required by social standards, that being very loose fitting pants. The Espada however has no issue with jewelry or other fancy adornments, he simply dislikes wearing basic clothing.

Traca's eyes typically have a very glazed over look but one that appears to be constantly gauging the situations and information available, rarely missing a beat and rarely changing their locked focus. His face has a similar aspect, but theres a certain warmth that radiates from him that can easily be replaced with icy fear with a turn of his lifes, having one of those 'clay faces' which are easy to manipulate and show emotion. In the company of allies he tends to keep a smile but disobedience will result in a very sharp frown, and around enemies he keeps a calm face most of the time or a smile if things are going well.

The Espada also tends to cloak himself in white whenever he leaves his base of operations or the company of Hollows, granting him his various titles that emphasis his white color. His releases also are all white so this has aided in those nicknames of his. Beyond that, his long hair and child-like face can sometimes lead to gender confusion were it not for the fact that he goes topless most of the time, though some people assume hes just a very flat woman but rarely say so within Traca's earshot.

Around his belt he typically has his chakrams clipped on, able to be pulled off with ease due to the design of the belt clips. Traca has little care for his personal appearance beyond his hair which he takes very good care of, every morning and night, which leads to further claims that he may indeed be female.

Hollow Hole: Top of Spine; Traca's Hollow Hole is where the skull connects to the spine, the hole continuing on to the other side of his neck but not being visible unless Traca lifts his head up and allows it to be seen or it is seen from below him. The hole is covered by his hair on the opposite side, allowing him to pass as typical in most cases.

Mask Fragment: Earrings; Traca's remnant mask takes the form of a pair of silver earrings, being incredibly shiny for a mask fragment and appearing like typical jewelry, furthering enabling him to pass himself off as a typical human or Shinigami if need be though he rarely does so, finding no need for such deception.

Number Tattoo: '1'; Traca's tattoo is actually a callus-like Heirro growth that appears on his back, being large for an Espada tattoo but also 'popping out' of his back rather than simply being a black marking, adding his own originality to the stereo-typical markings.

Personality

A generally calm individual who seeks to observe all walks of life, including other spiritual beings, without having to resort to simple violence. Traca believes in a sense of balance, seeking to preserve the natural way of the world without too heavily upsetting the good or bad sides, though this does not make him a push-over as one would assume, if agitated or forced into defending himself he has no issue with brutal slaughter though he prefers to avoid it. Due to this he is rarely the one to make the first move in any combat situation, though socially he tends to command others as he sees himself as the only one fit to preserve natural order and balance along with his daughter if he fails to be present.

Traca has a very well-known affinity for stars, and is also known to be very protective of his adopted daughter, Howaido, treating her as one of his other daughters though they lack the same level of connection and the spirirts of his earthly daughters tend to be jealous of her. The Espada does not accept mere hear-say as accurate information when it could contain a potential bias, thus he often seeks out information himself and has been known to disappear for weeks, parading about as a Shinigami or the like in order to gain more knowledge of their lifestyle and culture. Some Hollow consider this to be treacherous behavior but tend to keep their opinions under their breath.

The Primero Espada frowns very heavily on unprovoked violence or excessive violence, though he is not above inflicting pain, his various forms of 'time-out', or other forms of punishment or torture to amend this behavior. He believes that Hollow are much more than they are given credit for and hates to see them support their brutish stereotype. For this end he seeks to make other Arrancar more powerful, to educate them on control of their power and try to curb their violent habits while doing so, though his teaching is frequently abused regardless.

For the above reason he hates releasing himself into his Resurrecion form, only doing so if the situation is dire and requires it, or if the opponent releases before him in order to be on equal footing though he'll try to fight them without release for a bit, changing only if its impossible to fight without doing so. Traca will observe an opponents actions very intently and analyze them, asking questions aloud about the kind of person they are even with their blood on his fingertips, his face not even bothering to change expressions. This 'cold' manner of his has enforced his nickname as the White Beast.

Daughter; Howaido Oukan [White Crown]
Howaido Oukan:


Name: Howaido Oukan
Nickname; Personal: Princess; Snow
Nickname; Professional: White Princess; Silver Shade; White Insect Princess
Age: 500
Gender: Female
Rank: -
Number: N/A

Appearance:




Description: A young Arrancar who was pulled from the sands of Hueco Mundo, abandoned in a very weak state and as a child, a form typically bypassed by most Hollow that become Arrancar. The girls alteration was of the natural sort, without having her mask extracted, making her a very rare Arrancar indeed. She was brought to Traca's attention through Tatiana, a female Arrancar with which Traca had a brief interest in before she promptly disappeared from Hueco Mundo, leaving only Howaido.

Raised as a purely logical thinker, she is the refined version of her father's ideals, absolutely enforcing balance to the point at which it is regarded as callousness and hate. Howaido has minimal concept of feeling beyond her endearment and trust in her father, all others excluded from having any emotional attachment to the girl whom they refer to as 'cold as ice.' With her father, however, she is much more open and discusses philosophical points though Traca frequently points out the necessity in emotion to have proper balance which she continually ignores.

Howaido has no actual powers, they are either dormant or she simply has none to access. She accompanies her father when it concerns Espada's affairs and some of the members have been known to have a romantic interest in her, only to have Traca find out and then crush the life from their bodies out of misguided 'protection'. The Arrancar has been known to abuse this fact to lure Espada she personally dislikes to their dooms, though she always escapes without being marked as temptress so she can continue her habits without discovery.

In her private life Howaido tends to spend her time reflecting or reading in private, and like her father she shuns most forms of clothing and sometimes going completely nude in her own private quarters, a habit which Traca discourages but does nothing to actually stop.

Abilities: [LOCKED; N/A]


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Re: Traca Carmesim [Espada Primero]

Post by Traca Carmesim on Tue Aug 31, 2010 7:23 pm

Weapon Information


Weapon Name: Vice and Virtue [Kama]

Weapon Looks: A pair of oddly shaped weapons resembling chakram though they lack the physical aspects of one, namely the circular shape that enables them to function as projectile weapons, these chakram being almost strictly for physical attacks in their design. The entire outer edge is razor sharp, enabling them to cut and slice like few other weapons, but requiring a more unusual way of wielding them, a grip in the center of each ring being used to hold the pair of weapons.

The two chakram resemble the Ying and Yang portions of the Tao, though they both have the same coloration making them indistinguishable to anyone besides Traca due to his Zanpakuto's unique properties in relation to himself. Seperate they are Vice and Virtue, the set is called Kama. Both chakram can attach to small peircings on Traca's wrists, enabling them to be more fluidly utilized.

Weapon Description: Vice and Virtue were formed out of the consumed souls of Traca's daughters, causing them both to have very distinct personalities beyond himself, rather than the typical association of an Arrancar and their Zanpakuto. Both are capable of telepathically speaking to Traca, even when physical contact is not maintained, though nobody else is capable of hearing this without a special ability or release that enables a reading of mental signals or similar ability.

This enables Traca to coordinate attacks and determine the location of his weapons when disarmed, also, since they lack typically sensual perception they are not blind, deaf, etc. when Kido or releases would normally cause this to Traca, allowing him to continue fighting under their directions. Doing this slows down his reactions however since he has to hear and then process commands from his daughters.

In addition, Kama is able to clash with Shinigami Zanpakuto easily, having all the strength of a standard released blade outside of Shikai or Bankai state. The weapon can hold against Shikai level weapons as well, though Bankai is difficult or outright impossible dependent on the force involved since some Bankai lack force and instead have other effects associated with them. Naturally, Kama is lost when Resurreccion or Segunda is used.

Zanjutsu:


Name: Star Cutter
State: Normal
Description: Assuming Traca’s chakrams are not currently in Resurrecion mode, Traca is able to make a rapid attack against melee opponents, often surprising opponents who were expecting a successful hit. The chakram can bat away weapons, fists, etc. and thus protect the user.


Name: Orbital Stars
State: Normal
Description: Traca raises a chakram, causing a stream of reiatsu, similar to a chain, to appear attached to it, increasing the weapons range and enabling it to have a wider range of attack. the chain reaches out 5ft and can be swung with the same effort as the initial chakram, surprising opponents with its speed.


Name: Dense Star
State: Normal
Description: Traca raises a chakram to block an opponent, and hardens it with reiatsu, making the already tough weapon even stronger. Bare handed attacks can tear apart the attacker's attacking limb, and armed attacks send a reverbation to the arm that inflicts pain as well as causing associated reverberation-based stunning.


Name: Star Carving
State: Normal
Description: Traca utilize Sonido with an attack, blurring out and then reappearing with both chakram clashed with an opponents weapons in a instant, or if they are unarmed, dealing two heavy slashes into their chests. This technique can also achieve the typical 'x slash cut' effect where on cuts an entity with an 'x' shaped marking that only appears seconds after the cut was actually performed, mostly for show.


Name: Falling Star
State: Normal
Description: Traca brings one or both chakram down on an opponent from a height, causing any attempt to block the attack to require them to press upwards, leaving the rest of their body vulnerable to additional attacks. If an opponent unlocks blades once they've blocked this technique, the downward momentum will cleave their arms or breast, and if the black lock is maintained Traca just kicks the opponent in the chest to bring them to their knees.


Name: Sweeping Star
State: Normal
Description: Traca performs a horizontal slash that is designed to make a very clean cut at a high speed. Those cut by the technique do not feel pain from the cut, not realizing they've been damaged in most cases, nor do they bleed, until a post later when the pain and blood come, often in the middle of another action. If the target attempts to move using Shunpo, Sonido, etc. or otherwise excessively moves, the wound will open and the pain will immediately halt them for a second or two, enough to make their movement ineffective against dodging an incoming attack due to the time delay.


Name: Elder Star
State: Normal
Description: Traca throws out a chakram towards an opponent, sheathed in white reiatsu that causes the chakram to multiple into hundreds of shimmering discs of white reiatsu mid-flight and then strike an opponent with heavy force, slicing them apart if they are stuck within the 35ft cone the attack covers, though even being grazed can inflict a great deal of pain. The chakram continues down the straight path in the center of the cone.


Name: Defensive Star
State: Normal
Description: Traca rapidly raises one or both of his chakram to shield against an incoming attack, the ability to hold against certain strengths of attack is dependent on the current state of the chakram, though by default its the default defensive strength of the weapons.


Name: Nebula
State: Normal
Description: One of the more powerful Zanjutsu techniques in Traca's disposal, Nebula causes artificially created chakram to begin to appear all around an opponent out of the reishi in the air, appearing in flashes of white, before the artificial white chakram form a sphere around the opponent about 5ft in diameter. The first phase of this technique is induced by holding the hand open and typically declaring the attack name, though this isn't required, and the second phase is induced by closing the hand, causing the chakram to condense onto the opponent. The result is often very graphic, but the artificial chakram cannot cut through armor of various sorts or Heirro, though it does cut into it and harm the target. After the second phase, the technique disperses and reveals the results of its usage as well as returning the reishi to the surrounding area.


Name: Black Hole Burst
State: Normal
Description: Traca releases a large amount of reiatsu and begins pulling the reishi around him to form and mix with the released spiritual energy into hundreds of artificial shimmering chakram which condense into a sphere around him. The sphere condenses, though Traca's heirro prevents it from harming him or even cutting him, and then the sphere fires out a high velocity, creating a 360 degree burst of projectile weapons comparable to Cero.


Name: Supernova
State: Normal
Description: Traca exerts reiryoku to sheath over Kama in a white flame, gradually increasing their size until both chakram are the size of Traca's body, though their weight appears to be unaltered (rather Traca has enough strength to neglect the change in size.) The increased size makes it much more difficult to dodge additional Zanjutsu and also increases the size of Chakram Cero used while this is active. This technique lasts until dismissed or until Traca releases into Resurrecion.

Resurrecion

Release Phrase:
Long Version
With taint from Vice that darkens soul
With light from Virtue that brightens heart
See before this sorrowed father
The enemy to tear apart
Divide, Kama!


Standard Release
Divide, Kama!

Name: White Armor; The Prince's Armor

Represent: Heavenly Bodies [Stars]

Family: None [Spacial]

Release Appearance:



A large humanoid with what appears to be armored skin all over its body, the body itself being remarkable thin and lithe though it actually has great power. Various markings cover the body though they have no actual significance, merely being decorative markings built into the release form. A small tail is gained though it has no particular use as well as pair of horns. The hands become much larger with elongated fingers and the legs remain fairly slim, built for lower-body speed. The increased Heirro of this form also makes it a formidable release, weak attacks glancing off with no effect on Traca.

Release Abilities:


Enhanced Hierro
Within his Resurreccion, Traca has a more advanced form of Hierro, able to block even Shikai release Zanpakuto attacks with his barehands or skin, and is able to glance off Kido #50 or below with ease. The Heirro can be 'adjusted' to with consistent hits and more force, though this takes time. In addition, the Heirro is able to withstand the immense heat and pressure required to utilize many of Traca's techniques and cannot be harmed by his own techniques.


Enhanced Strength
Traca's strength is greatly increased while he is in his released state, able to throw even large humanoids about with ease and able to force even enormous creatures like Menos Grande to the ground with a grab. He rarely uses this ability offensively however, finding it pointless to emerge victorious in combat if he has to digress to such a pathetic state, rather, he uses it defensively to throw opponents or objects around or away from himself.


Garganta Sonido
When utilizing Sonido, miniature Garganta are utilized that causes the high-speed movement to actually become a form of barely visible teleportation. This resembles standard Sonido so only opponents as fast or faster than Traca can notice the difference. The teleportation allows the user to bypass physical barriers without harm using Sonido, which would normally be hindered by such things.


Flare Lens
The natural form of Traca's release reduces the size of his eyes, though it does not hinder his physical ability to see, but it does have a protective lens that protects the eyes from bright lights, such as those created by some of Traca's techniques. While released, Traca cannot be blinded by light-based effects and is able to filter out specific sources of light so that even in high or low light conditions, vision is not harmed (though total darkness still blinds Traca as there is no light to filter.)


Mind Meld
While Traca is in his released form, the minds of both of his daughters are combined into his own, causing him to think with three minds in unison, enabling a very unique form of thought that is much quicker than the standard single mind, but also prone to debate over some actions. If one mind is targeted by a technique, the other two may wretch control of the body, eliminating that mind for the remainder of combat but preventing any negative effects. Each mind has a distinct voice, the prominent mind being Traca's though his voice echoes with two female voices when he speaks in this form. If removed, one the daughters becomes the primary.

Minds may be switched at will, though this does not actually affect much behind the personality in charge of the body, and the voice that Traca's release force speaks in. This is more often done when arguments take place, each vying for control, though since the family relationship exists this is not common.


Advanced Garganta
Garganta created while in this form take less time, a few seconds, and can be made at varying sizes to allow for the movement of single entities, attacks, limbs, etc. through one Garganta and out the other. Garganta created in this fashion are white when they are designed to allow things in and black when they expel them. These Garganta have a two post cool down bettween uses, one use allowing an entrance and exit Garganta. Limbs or body parts that are attached to the user that enter and exit a Garganta are still attached to the technique user, the same applies to opponents. Damage dealt to a limb moved in such a fashion is felt in the rest of the body, but other effects such as poison are not transferred until the Garganta is closed and the limb returned.

Objects, attacks, techniques, etc. sent through one Garganta maintain all their physical properties including momentum, speed, attached effects, etc. when sent through an entrance to an exit. In addition, they continue to move in the same direction, thus through complex angles an attack could be aimed to hit a very precise location even through these Garganta.

Techniques

Canon Techniques:


Name: Garganta
State: All
Description: This is how Arrancar move to and from Hueco Mundo. Kaname Tosen and Kisuke Urahara have also demonstrated the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway.


Name: Hierro
State: All
Description: This refers to the hardened skin of the Arrancar, which is a result of their compressed spiritual power. While their skin is strong enough to block even released Zanpakuto bare-handed, it is by no means impenetrable. Stronger Arrancar have proportionally stronger skin. At Traca's current level, unreleased his Heirro can negate number 40 and below Kido, and halt, bare handed, Zanpakuto despite their form or release though the heirro can be 'adjusted' to after a few ineffective hits assuming they have the capacity to do so.


Name: Pesquisa
State: All
Description: This is the arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami ability to sense Spiritual Pressure. It functions similar to a sonar. Using pesquisa requires most Espada to enter a meditative state or use some others have a trigger unique to the user, however, Traca is able to actively sense using this technique without a meditative position or any other aids, only focus on the desired area or pressure being looked for.


Name: Sonido
State: All
Description: A very quick movement performed by Arranacar that allows them to move at high speeds for brief periods of time. When utilized by Traca it leaves a white blur, and prolonged view can cause an effect similar to sunspots though it has no real combat effect, merely a representation of the trail of light left behind by his speed and reiatsu.

Unique Techniques:


Name: Banishment
State: Normal
Description: A technique that causes a Garganta to open up near the target before swarming around the opponent like a serpent and consuming them, banishing them to an alternate dimension which contains only a white path in pure blackness. The technique can banish an opponent for any period of time, determined by Traca, outside of combat (in RP situations that are deemed social) when it used to punish insubordinates, or can last one post in combat. After the designated time, they are expelled in a Garganta in the same location they were 'consumed'.


Name: Limited Release
State: Normal
Description: A unique ability that enables Traca to release his form in segments, such as only releasing an arm or leg, able to use whatever appropriate abilities come with the newfound limbs. This technique is used to conserve energy or to limit his own ability when fighting opponents who he deems to weak to compete with his complete release. Any abilities of his release form are applied to the released segment, when logical, and this does not require a phrase, instead energy condensing around his body to cause this effect.


Name: Masked Art: Hunger
State: Normal
Description: Traca gestures with his hand at head-level and afflicts Hollows with a sudden strike of immense hunger, crippling them in pain as if they were suddenly starving to death. This ability is frequently used to put down violent Hollow and has a stranger effect on Arrancar, the technique also causing them to feel as if their masks were slowly reforming as the hunger increases, a symbolism of the primitive and barbaric origins they came from. The technique does no actual harm, and is released with a wave of the hand or if Traca is moved or moves himself.


Name: Masked Art: Sedation
State: Normal
Description: Traca gestures towards a Hollow or Arrancar, causing them feel as if they'd just consumed a very large amount of spiritual energy, giving them the detriment of feeling sedated from the meal, sluggish and unwilling to do much. If Traca is unable to enforce obedience and proper behavior through hunger alone, this technique is used first, and then he induces hunger, the very sharp contrast being all the more painful to the target.


Name: Masked Art: Pull
State: Normal
Description: A technique designed specifically for Shinigami and Vizards. Traca will contact an opponent's face, if they are a Shinigami, and release spiritual energy before slowly pulling his hand away, a Hollow mask slowly forming as he does this. This technique can force an Inner Hollow to develop within a Shinigami, but the technique requires a full post of contact to begin, afterwards a small Inner Hollow will develop that can enable the entrance into the rank of Vizard after near-death. If the technique is held for three posts, then a Hollow Mask is formed, creating an effective Vizard though they rarely lack the potential to control the new Hollow. Once this is done Traca can use his standard techniques to sedate or harm the Hollow, though he rarely kills it, and leave the Shinigami with a permanent reminder of him. Used against already created Vizards, the technique does not require contact, just a gesture, and the target's Inner Hollow will respond by trying to force the opponent to don their mask and attempt to seize control of the body. The effectiveness of this technique depends on the control the Vizard has over their Inner Hollow.


Name: Masked Art: Push
State: Normal
Description: Traca shoves his palm out towards a target Vizard or Hollow, pushing them backwards with a strong burst of Reishi as well as dealing heavy damage to their masks. The pain is immense to Hollows, and usually forces them away, but this technique causes deep fissures in the masks of Vizards, lessening the period of time they can maintain them before they shatter by a post. The technique, if done with physical contact, can also force the mask back inside the target, effectively shattering the mask with the force and cancelling its usage in the current topic.


Name: Masked Art: Release
State: Normal
Description: The technique utilized by Traca to remove Hollow masks from Hollow to create Arrancar, his hand coming out and inducing a heavy amount of pain and a great flash of white light that incinerates the Hollow mask. This technique can also be used on a willing Vizard to remove their Inner Hollow, though the pain is much greater than mere mask removal and weaker Vizards or those who are too firmly attached to their Inner Hollow risk death by this technique.


Name: Reiatsu Release
State: Normal
Description: Most high-level spirtual beings passively control their release reiryoku, preventing the negative effects of being around an immensely powerful spiritual being, but should the situation call for it, Traca can not only release this energy as a powerful aura within hundreds of feet of himself but also manifest this energy physically. The energy radiates from Traca as bands of white energy that quickly forms two large feathered wings. These wings do not enable him to fly, as would be worthless to a spiritual being anyhow, but they do provide a regal aspect to his releasing. The release does not paralyze or induce fear like typical auras, rather those within it feel an immense calm and lose their will to fight in his presence. Traca is unable to use other techniques while this technique is in use, but can move about freely. This technique can be ended at will, the wings being absorbed back into his body and his aura fading back into a minute spiritual aura. This technique is frequently used to deal with minor offense of insubordination, demonstrating his power and enabling conflicts to be quelled.


Name: Reiryoku Cloak
State: Normal
Description: One of Traca's signature abilities, setting him apart from all other Hollow, Traca is able to modify his own reiatsu so that it appears as another type of spiritual being's. This ability must be triggered but afterwards remains until dispelled. Shinigami Captains and higher can detect a difference, but this 'alteration' leads to the assumption that Traca is a Vizard rather than an Arrancar. This effect takes the form of a very tight 'cloak' over the user's body, those able to visually perceive reiatsu can detect this aura. The cloak is destroyed when Traca releases and can be stripped by certain Kido or techniques designed to do so. The ability also enables him to cover his signature to give off no signal, enabling him to 'disappear' from spiritual perception.

In addition, Traca can cloak another person, with or without their consent in the matter, and often with them being unaware of the alteration. This can cause Shinigami to give off Arrancar pressures, or any other mix and match or even combinations, making friendly fire very likely while the Espada is around. This pressure is only external however, and Captain level opponents are able to see through this illusionary pressure.

Cero:



Name: Cero
State: All
Description: Traca prepares his Cero from his eyes and it is typically of a bright white color. As the Primero Espada his Cero are nothing to simply shrug off, even in their most basic state, and they can deal heavy damage to seated officers and Espada, dealing near lethal damage to unseated and Arrancar. His cero tend to be larger as well, covering a 10ft radius, but losing nothing in speed.


Name: Gran Rey Cero [Star-Light Bolt]
State: All
Description: Traca uses his own blood within a Cero to alter its color, making it a lustrous silver, and then fires it at an opponent, the Cero manipulating its shape beyond a sphere to quickly become a more bolt-like projectile travelling at high-speed. The technique is frequently called Star-Light Bolt by Traca and by others who don't recognize it as a Gran Rey Cero. The bolt is highly destructive, and potentially lethal if hit head-on.


Name: Star Flash Cero
State: All
Description: A Cero comparable to Cero Obscuras in power which converts the light within the area into energy for this technique. The immediate area becomes pitch-black before a small bead of light emerges, the compact White Flash Cero, which then violently releases the light it contains in an enormous burst that blinds those who witness it for two posts as well as deals heavy damage.


Name: Chakram Cero
State: Normal
Description: Traca makes a slicing motion with his chakram and creates a wave shaped Cero that flies towards opponents. The Cero, lacking the ball form of a normal Cero, is designed to cut and can cleave opponents flesh who stand in its way via an arc shape. The Cero can cut deeply, even into Heirro, making it a threat to other Arrancar as well as other spiritual beings.

Released Techniques:


Name: Orbiting Star Field
State: Release
Description: Traca raises his hand into the air and creates a spinning disc of white reiatsu that spits out numerous tiny sphere of white flame, miniature artificial stars. The stars then orbit around around Traca outwards up to 15ft, each one detonating into a 5ft diameter explosion if contacted. The stars move at high-speed, moving fast enough to blur into a 'ring' of white energy. This gives the appearance that Traca is a planet being orbitted by rings, albeit highly destructive ones. If one ring is detonated, successive rings detonate, so on and so forth until the combined explosion becomes much more dangerous then a single one. Traca is protected from this via his Heirro, opponents are not always so gifted.


Name: Starved Stars
State: Release
Description: Traca releases a wave of spiritual energy from his body which forms into numerous white flaming spheres, miniature stars, that remain in stationary positions around his body. The stars can be directed to move but they're not accurate at long range, being effective only when a target is within 5ft of Traca, where they can then be fired towards an opponent at-will. When the stars contact an opponent, they catch them on fire, the white flame gradually travelling over their body over three posts. The flames are not particularly hot until the third post, at which point they heat up and incinerate the body of the opponent. The white coloration of the flames makes them highly visible however, enabling the opponent to remove them like they would typically remove flames. The flames consume the opponents reiatsu while they remain, draining them before incinerating them.


Name: Accompanying Star
State: Release
Description: Traca holds out both hands and creates a sphere of white energy that spirals into existence before expanding to a size about the size of a human skull and then orbiting around Traca. The star is designed differently than any other orbital stars in Traca's techniques, able to mildly disrupt Kido by bending the reishi around both itself and Traca, enabling it to be the target of any Kido 89 or below targeted at Traca. Once hit, however, the star fades away.


Name: Imprisoning Orbit
State: Release
Description: Traca gestures with his hand and causes a belt of stars to appear around an opponent, tightly binding them and pinning their arms to their waist. The technique very closely resembles Light Cane Prison, and the technique was in fact designed after it, being treated the same as a #61 Kido for other effects or techniques.


Name: Red Nova Crash Down
State: Release
Description: Traca raises a hand and creates two super-nova imitations above an opponent which then fall to the ground at high-speed, imitating Hadou #71, the technique can also be used as an imitation of #33 to create a single nova but is still treated, strength wise, as #71. The technique, in either form, is treated like a standard Kido of its number. The nova, if blocked, will 'spill' out flames around whatever barrier blocked it, typically reaching the opponent behind so it is unwise to block rather than dodge this technique, though opponents don't know this at first.


Name: Star Lightning
State: Release
Description: Traca clenches a fist together and then opens it to reveal a very dense white sphere, the sphere is then thrown towards an opponent where it explodes with a thunder clap becoming a bolt of artificial lightning, capable of charring the opponent. The strike is similar to that of Hadou #63 and is treated as a Kido of the appropriate number, being based off of the Kido originally.


Name: Star Cage
State: Release
Description: Traca causes numerous artificial stars to develop around an opponent, forming the points of a cube though this is a fine and rarely noticed detail. The stars exert a gravitational force that fills in the empty space between each star, boxing an opponent in. The strength of the stars gradually fades post by post, and things are similarly barred from entering as they are from exiting. Initially, the cage has the strength of a #90 Kido, lowering to #85 on the second post, and #75 on the third post, before fading away completely on the fourth.


Name: Blue Star Lance
State: Release
Description: Traca raised a hand and creates a burst of blue energy that forms into a flaming hand in his hands, the lance being thrown at high-speed after creation. The lance of reiatsu is not only a lethal threat if it hits opponents, but the heat around it distorts those viewing it, making dodging difficult, as well as burning an opponent if they fail to move far enough away from the lance. If hit it deals heavy burns and may tear through an opponent as well, cauterizing the wound for a clean death.


Name: Nova Boom
State: Release
Description: Traca creates an artificial star in one hand and then slams his palm ontop of it, smashing the star to dust and then creating a loud boom of sound and energy comparable to a sonic boom. The sound wave travels in an arc away from the origin, thus it does not afflict Traca, but can deafen opponents for a post who are able to hear the noise (within 50ft of the detonation) and those too close can risk more serious hearing damage (bleeding from the ears as well as two post deafness if within 10ft.)


Name: Entrance of the Gillian
State: Release
Description: Due to the Gillian (Menos Grande) preference for lurking amid the areas that Garganta leads to and from, Traca is able to open up a Garganta that appears normal at first, but is laced with a scent that attracts Gillian. After being opened, the Garganta remains open for five posts and every post, starting the post of use, a trio of Gillian emerge from the Garganta. Though they are not powerful, agile, or even intelligent, they can be lead by single gestures such as pointing. Most seated Shinigami can quickly dispatch of them, though they're still a nuisance.

This technique may be used once per topic.


Name: Nova Claw
State: Release
Description: Traca heats up his fingers to an immense heat that causes them to steam with the air around them being excited by the heated claws. This enables wounds inflicted by Traca's claws to immediately cauterize, making things much more clean, as well as being able to incinerate flammable materials on contact. The claws can also negate water based attacks by holding them back, though this cools the claws down to their normal temperature after this is done.


Name: Heaven's Flash
State: Release
Description: Traca's body begins to radiate with heat and light like a star, before releasing a burst of supernatural light, brightening even technique or release induced shadows and restoring vision to those who would've lost it due to such techniques. However, the intensity of the light blinds those who are within 75ft of Traca when the technique is used for one post, and those who are closer for two. If this technique is used when physical contact is held, they are blinded for two but also suffer the damage caused by the heat increase when this technique is used, burning their flesh.


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Post by Traca Carmesim on Tue Aug 31, 2010 7:23 pm

History and RP Sample

The Embers Pour Out Flames
To Soften Hearts of Dames
Set Aside By Earthly Blunder
A Greater Prize Then Silent Thunder
Yet A Mark Shall Still Remain
A Reminder of Eternal Pain

The Embers Pour Out Flames


Traca initially started his life as a standard human being, as every spiritual being does, who was an incredibly hurried and frustrated man who worked long shifts in his office in order to rise to the top of his company, which produced high quality steel for the local community and other large businesses. The business was his life, and his father and grandfather were workers in the same company so his immense obligation to the company became obsessive, though in his early twenties he'd taken a wife and had two children before his true work obsession began. This left little time for his two daughters and any other family concerns which eventually resulted in his wife filing for divorce since he placed a higher value on his work than her or the children, though the paper work had yet to be properly filed and completed before the following incident.

Though he was concerned about this change he displayed little of his true emotion but his broken heart and dismay with his wife, but this just encouraged him to work even harder out of spite for his wife. He recieved a promotion to a much higher position that he had been competing for during the entire work year, and he was elated to hear this news after only a week of his wife's presentation of the news. In his glee he rushed home to rub his promotion in the face of his 'heartless wife', only to find the door ajar and witness an empty home.

Finding the situation highly suspicious, he rushed in to find numerous bullet holes in the walls of the home and through his wife along with a single well placed bullet in either of his children's heads, their bodies arranged in a gruesome triangle on the living room floor with blood puddles appearing everywhere where one could imagine them, covering every surface with various sigils and words that made no sense to him at the time. This immense stress effectively snapped his mind like a twig, insanity rushing over him and overwhelming him.

In a fit of pure insanity he placed himself in the center of the triangle, placing a knife in each of his family member's icey hands and tying their arms up with wire to the ceiling, causing them be 'held' up. With a knife in his hand he prepared to slice the rope holding the other three wires, causing each arm to plunge the knife into his body, and with a brief statement, "You can at least let me spend time with you in the afterlife...", he cut the rope and was struck in the skull by three knife blades, killing him instantly.

To Soften Hearts of Dames


After his insanity induced suicide, there was still quite a bit of unfinished business, namely his untimely death and his great remorse for his disorderly priorities, causing the tormented soul to become a Plus, an earthbound spirit, rather than ascending into the white heavens above. On the plus side, he wasn't drug down into the flaming abyss of hell either, so overall it wasn't so bad, though he found the out of body experience and the existence of a chain and hole to be alarming. Even more so, his daughters were equally afflicted, though their mother was absent in their shared fate.

After a failed attempt to rise from his current location, he found himself bound to the ground by his chain, unable to severe the chain or move beyond its restrictions, his daughters being in a similar state and expressing equal dismay and frustration as their father. Unable to leave the area, and with a desire to make amends for his actions and patch the relationship he had with his daughters, they began speaking with one another, conversing and beginning to better understand each other over the months they were bound to their location, establishing the bond that should've already existed between father and daughter.

Attempts to alert others to their position, they quickly gave up paying attention to anyone beyond themselves and with each passing day, the holes in all of their breasts were slowly expanding, the chains slowly dissolving, and each growing more and more hungry for something none of them could name. Though none of them were aware of it, nor did they even know this process had a proper name, they were undergoing the slow process of becoming Hollows naturally, and the hunger of a Hollow quickly became ravenous.

Unfortunately for a group of thrill seekers who had heard of the incredibly odd murder and suicide within the now abandoned home, ignorant or not of their true nature, a Hollow instinctively knows what it wants to eat once it senses it. The group entered into the home, each more spiritual aware then they knew, smelling far too good for any of the three to ignore, their chains fully dissolving in response, their holes splitting open, and a bright flash of light enveloping the home, which the teenage thrill-seekers perceived, leading them to kicking in the door.

Their mistake would result in the first meal the family of Hollows would have, each pouncing on the human souls and tearing them apart, splitting their souls from their bodies and then devouring them, tossing the bodies aside the room before examining their new forms. They were definitely inhuman, but their hunger was not sated by this simple souls, and they weren't heavily concerned with that, deciding it was time to sate this hunger before it killed them, becoming a trio of fresh Hollow.

Their feasting became more and more prevalent, each developing their abilities as a Hollow with great speed, and Traca quickly finding that he could more easily fool humans with spiritual pressures if they were spiritually sensitive, which most good meals were, and began to pick onto his natural affinity rather easily. This ability would aid him in the additional steps of advancing in Hollow growth.

Set Aside By Earthly Blunder


Though they were adept at hunting human souls, their palettes began to thirst for something with more taste and flavor than even a spiritual aware human could provide, their hunger leading them to more powerful spiritual beings and their strength becoming enough that Shinigami were dispatched to deal with them. Only one soul actually located them however, and before his blade could even be drawn Traca showed an interest in this new type of spirit, which was humanoid but had a much stronger smell and taste. He gestured for the blade to be resheathed as he spoke to the spirit, inquiring as to what it was, unaware that even the least egotistical Shinigami likes to brag about what they are.

His response from the Soul Reaper was that he was a Shinigami, a spiritual being that was created from an ascending soul that sought to save other souls from being devoured by Hollows. When Traca expressed confusion at the term 'Hollow', the Shinigami was quick to point out that they were Hollows, tainted souls whose hunger for souls was the driving force behind their malicious actions. Traca immediately noticed a logical flaw and asked why they were hunting the souls that kept the other souls in check, a natural balance, especially when he'd just stated that their job was to protect souls. If they were protecting them, they should protect all of them, and if that was their job why hadn't they had protection before becoming a Hollow?

The Shinigami seemed to have lost interest in speaking, saying that it was far above a beast to understand, and this immediately angered Traca who pounced on the Shinigami as he drew his blade, knocking it out of his hands and knocking the Soul Reaper to the ground. With a few well chosen words he made his point and promptly consumed his, "You don't have the right to judge."

After a few more Shinigami attempted to kill the trio, Traca was able to extract more and more information from each of them before they resorted to violence and he learned that in order to advance to a form where he would cease to be bothered by these incessant Shinigami he would have to consume other Hollow, something his natural abilities made very easy. He guided his daughters along the same path, and they began to eat other Hollow as well as any Shinigami who decided to react violently to their presence, quickly earning their names in the registries of Soul Society.

This consistent feasting eventually lead to voices in their heads, the souls of the consumed Hollows competing with them, and their bodies changed into a gross mutation of their original forms as they vied for control, each of them overwhelming the other souls in their body to become the dominate as they advanced into Gillian. As Gillian they maintained their family bonds and preyed upon other Gillian, finding them easy to eat since they were mostly mindless like cows and barely able to fight back with their distorted souls fighting one another.

As he did this the additional souls began to silence themselves and meld into the more powerful dominant soul that was Traca's, a similar occurence resulting in his daughters and they gradually began to gain more form and substance, evolving into the next level as Adjuchas. Traca's personal Adjucha form was that of a demonic humanoid, his daughters becoming a butterfly-like Hollow and a moth-like Hollow. At this stage, they began to quell their hunger, losing interest in continually devouring other Hollow and would've ceased were it not necessary to maintain their forms.

A Greater Prize Then Silent Thunder


The Adjuchas serves as the most binding level, very few souls being able to advance into the final stage of Hollow evolution, and the luck of the trio ran out as over the years it became apparent that while Traca could achieve this level and was gradually growing, his daughters could not. In order to maintain their closeness, however, the trio opted to become one entity, the father consuming the souls of his two daughters at their request, though it was done with regret. Alone once more, Traca rapidly evolved into his final form, becoming a demonic Vasto Lorde, and issuing various commands to other Hollow, directing them on their path to becoming more powerful creatures, absent-mindedly causing a growth in the number of Gillian and Adjuchas through his advice.

Traca gradually became a more powerful force in the world of Hollows, Shinigami becoming more familiar with him despite the fact that he made no attempts on their lives, rather those beneath him spoke of him with their dying breaths and this caused a bit of confusion on their end. They were under the impression that he was directing their actions, when he was acting quite the opposite and trying to curb their instincts, but Shinigami were never very good about hearing him out she didn't bother making a personal appearance to correct them and his messenger was dispatched before he could even say what he was present in Soul Society for.

The consistent stress and burden on him, as he slowly became the strongest Hollow Hueco Mundo had known, he was consistently reminded that if only he wasn't a Hollow. If only this mask that divided him from every other soul, if only he could strip it from himself and remove that barrier to the social communications, to peace, to balance...and in a feat of power and insanity that only a man, not a beast, so committed to his goal could perform, he resolved to make this come true. In that instant, his resolve was stronger than any blade any spirit could draw, and he felt his talons reaching into his face, pulling away the portion of it that was no longer desirable, that mask that he'd worn so long and was now ready to remove, to reveal what had been growing beneath it.

There was pain, unimaginable pain, one that was worse than starvation for a thousand fortnights for a Hollow, but there was not turning back, and with the screams of a beast turning into the screams of a man, there was an alteration that would forever be marked in history. The other Hollow under his care were alerted by the sound and turned their heads, only to now hear silence, and the sounds of heavy footsteps. The Vasto Lorde, lord no more, emerged from his quarters and stood out onto a balcony built into the mountain he claimed as his home, the mask on his face stripped so that the denizens of Hueco Mundo could look in horror.

Traca raised a hand into the air and spoke out to the crowd of collective Hollow, stating that the final form they had all believed in was an illusion, that they all had a chance at redemption, to be human again, to remove their bondage and pain, by stripping the mask that hid them away.

Yet A Mark Shall Still Remain


There was quite a bit to be said regarding this advancement, it was flawed, for starters, as remnants remained of their true natures and upon the splitting on their masks they were reformed. They could never truly abandon their pasts, but now the things that they had so long feared, the thing that cut them away inside, could be used to induce fear in others, to cut others. Traca believed the Shinigami called the weapons forged from their souls Zanpakuto, and these were Zanpakuto by their definition, but they lacked the standard abilities as he was quick to find out through experimentation.

That didn't matter though, the form seemed to also increase the strength of the user so Traca was very careful about learning the true limits, the benefits, the detriments, on his own body before he began any experiments with anyone elses. Unfortunately, it was around this time that a secret mission from Soul Society sent a division of Soul Reapers to Hueco Mundo to attempt to eradicate him and he lost the time he would normally have had to selective pick the best Hollow he had to grant his gift. If they wanted to fight, blades would be drawn, and he promptly stripped the masks of every Hollow he had under his command.

Traca would normally have halted them and demanded a discussion of their terms, but not now, direct assault on his home was not going to be tolerated. He issued a very simple command to his personal army, the Arrancar as he was to call them. Kill them all, spare none. The ignorance of the Shinigami was not going to accepted any further, they were free to do as they pleased in their world, even in the human world he would deal with them, but not here. Traca needed to send a message so clear it had to be written in blood, that Soul Reapers have no business in the land of Hollows.

The message was very well written, the Shinigami were slaughtered, unprepared for the new threat none of their training had prepared them for, and not a soul was left to relate that information back to Soul Society, there was no need. They got the idea, if their comrades didn't return then they were dead, or better yet 'converted' into more Hollow, the specifics weren't much good to them, and Traca was rather interested in keeping those to himself. After the incident he began to habitually create Arrancar out of worthy Hollow, some for their strength, some for their ideals, some for their usefulness, but none were illfit. In fact, in time, he came to gather a select group of his favored Arrancar, and they became known as the Espada.

The ten Arrancar making up this group were each successive in number and power, Traca himself being '1', as he was not only the strongest but also the original. The Espada were a force on their own, each of them able to fight on par with most Shinigami, and the higher numbers being more than a match for even the Captains of the Soul Reapers, let alone the hundreds of Arrancar. Soul Society would never step foot in Hueco Mundo again, or they wouldn't leave the sands alive.

A Reminder of Eternal Pain


Well, it could be supposed to be comparable to near incest, Traca technically being the 'father' of all non-natural Arrancar, but he himself had not stripped the particular Arrancar, or he didn't remember it, not that remembered half of them after 200 years of doing so. Regardless of the technicalities surrounding it, Traca had a rather brief interest in a female Arrancar called Tatiana whom he meet by a lake side, walked home, and who then promptly presented him with a child-like Arrancar, a natural born, to himself. He was beginning to suspect that their was a problem if natural Arrancar were going to keep cropping up like this but in later years he failed to see any others so the issue was pushed out of his mind.

In a brief moment of talent so smooth it could make the water look like granite, he managed to steal a kiss from the Arrancar, only to have her exit the room and cease any further communications with him. In hindsight, it was probably more comparable to granite in smoothness than making anything else look like it, and he was left with the child. A reminder of his two daughters, whose souls were divided up into his Zanpakuto, he took the child in and raised her outside of peering eyes. It was odd for an Arrancar to age, but he supposed they were very close to human and if one became an Arrancar early enough, then they'd age as one, but maybe it was a side effect from the natural process rather than the artificial. Regardless, she grew like a child and Traca considered her his child, a third daughter to his family.

In her mature age her growth has ceased, like all adult Arrancar, and Traca has been left with free time to pursue other goals like thinking over how best to speak with Soul Society about their consistent infractions against the natural balance of the world. They wouldn't listen to him most likely, so he had the Arrancar and Espada train in the event that self-defense was a necessary action or declared war if they blatantly refused to quit the mindless killing of Hollows. As his daughter, Howaido has been an active member in the preparations and planning, much to the agitation of more chauvinistic Arrancar.

The time is now to resolve their disputes with Soul Society, either through diplomacy if they will allow it, or by force if they should fail to see the world in their eyes. Balance would be attained at a great cost, but Traca would pay it thrice over if he could achieve a world where all spirits could live without fear of being hunted for what they were. He detested violence, but if it was the only way, he would take that path and carry himself to hell for the benefit of the souls around him. He could hope and dream for its success.

After all, what more can you do when you're only part human?

RP Sample:
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From Arrancar Adoption

Two Weeks Before...


It wasn't the night air, no, there was none of that were he was. It wasn't her anymore, she was gone. It wasn't his daughters, they were silent. It wasn't himself, there was never a complaint with his own methods from himself, so what was it that causes such thoughts to arise now? On his departure from her presence, the female Arrancar whose name continued to escape his mind, Traca's mind was barraged with thoughts. The things that had left her lips, the sharpness of the words he'd yet to consider until he was walking, alone, in the dark folds of the Garganta that was given life from his own power.

Was there a flaw? Was his method at fault? Was there something he was missing? There was. There wasn't. He was unable to keep himself straight and her voice would tear at him, her thoughts making themselves known in his mind until he let out a roar of anger and released his restraints, the binds on his body that kept his energy from pouring out like raindrops from an ocean. The sound broke out into the shadows, if they had a mind they would tremble, the walls shook with this increase in frustration and energy and the white flame of Traca's reiatsu expanded out to transform the darkness into a false white light of millions of fluttering wings as he fell down to his knees, covering his face with a hand.

He was aware that if he doubted himself, he would have faith in his own strength, but the release of it was tiring enough to force him to his knees, and when he moved his hand away the fluttering wings carried his roar off into the distance. He staggered back to his feet, knees shaking as he rose up and the moths swirled back into his body and refreshed him. That was his power, that was his limit, and their was nobody who could be more convincing than that. If he wasn't correct, then nothing was, and with this satisfying thought her voice was silenced and he continued.

His feet meet the shadowy steps, one before the other, and he walked. There was no other choice, and in this moment of silence his daughters determined it the best chance to speak to him in private. The voice was timid, and the power displayed earlier was a show few would forget if they had ever witnessed it. "Father..."

Traca halted, his feet stopping in the same line and his swinging arm moving back like a pendulum to grab the chakram as it swung buy before being jerked up to his face and his lips where a sharp remark was made for the initial speaker to hear. "What?!" The voice, his daughter's, was strengthened by this remark, aware that if left to his thoughts now he would only get angrier at his own failures. "You should've listened, you should've stayed instead of doing this now. What do you gain from it but some satisfaction that will only come into question when you meet her again? It's unlike you to react so violently."

He jerked his head, a sharp and painful remark on his lips being halted by his teeth biting down onto them and forcing a scarlet bead to fall out and splash against the path, the tiny speck of color rippling into the darkness. She was correct, what was it about her that caused this reaction? Why did he care what she thought? Why did it matter so much to him, and nobody else who expressed a conflicting opinion matter so little? What made her different, what made her special, what made him care?

Traca felt the anger drain away like poison in a vial was being boiled away, the rage and hatred dripping away from his face to slowly reveal those smiling teeth underneath his crisp brown hair and deep eyes. He closed his eyes and let out a sigh before he spoke, "She upsets me...so close, and yet so far. She can understand peace, but she can't understand war. She can love the flame, but not the water. She's imbalanced, and she questions my balance...it agitates me..."

"Why does it matter? She's a girl, a common and disposable girl."
"Because shes not a killer like the rest."
"She's as imbalanced as the rest."
"But its a refreshing imbalance."
"Why does that matter to you?"
"It's different..."
"And that's why she bothers you. She's different, you're different, but this time you're the one not accepting the difference. The irony is painful here father..."

Traca, without saying a word, flipped his zanpakuto over onto his palm, closed his hand around it and with the sight of the opening nearby, threw it into the light that he was sure to be his own abode. He grabbed the other weapon and did the same, and then shortly afterwards exited himself.

The Garganta behind him remained open, the tear as visible as it always was until a gesture lead the tear to patch itself and Traca viewed the two chakram embedded into his wall and retrieved them. He reclipped his weapons to his waist and plopped down onto his bed, reclining as he stared up at his ceiling. "Any further discussion of the little Arrancar will not be meet with civility..."

Present Time...


The draft had been getting in, and this was a problem...of course, a draft was easy to fix compared to an ideal. Even though the time had passed, the thoughts had not, and the color that seemed so innocent before had attached itself to the emerald haired Arrancar and the emerald grass that was part of their initial meeting. Traca sighed heavily as he was reminded of the night, especially his time in the Garganta.

She was unusual, that was for sure, nobody else had been able to generate such a response from him, not even drawn swords and spilling blood could excite him so much. Traca had hinted at the actions he was going to take during their last meeting, and they were successfully, even if he had no memory of the events. His number was replaced with the new number, the top sphere of an '8' being removed in favor of the single sphere that was present in a '0'. Neither of them were really spheres, but Traca liked to consider them as such because it was a pretty thought.

Pretty thoughts...the word pairing lead to further memories of that color, and it disturbed him. It was unfitting for him, an Espada, let alone the new 0, to be reduced to whatever his present state of mind was, he wasn't yet sure, by an Arrancar who wouldn't even draw a blade. He would've continued his mental tirade, but the presence of a new spiritual pressure caused a spike in his heart beat which he quickly settled with a growl.

It was her, the same Arrancar from the weeks before, and he immediately attempted to busy himself with examining a window. In order to better convince her, he'd had to convince himself, and so he thought about the window. What kind of glass went into it? Why that shape? Where did they get the materials? Well, in a dessert full of sand he supposed it wouldn't be so hard to make glass. But were would you get the heat to transform the glass...

His train of thought was broken by the voice of his acquaintance, the emerald haired Arrancar. He didn't need to see her to know who she was, and he took a breath and turned around to face her, straight face, straight back, and complete confidence which all turned out to be completely useless. His composure immediately shattered at the sight of a small child-like Arrancar, his jaw might as well of fallen off its hinges. What was she doing with that thing? Why was she here with it? And what request could possibly involve that child?

Traca stared at the creature, it didn't seem very active, he wondered how it lived so long without getting eaten. Oh well, he pushed these thoughts as far back as he could so that he could focus on speaking coherently, "Well I was going to say hello and start strike up a conversation before getting around to asking, but that doesn't seem appropriate when you're holding an Arrancar and asking me for a request....I'm not quite sure what you had in mind now...congratulations, you've stumped the Espada..."
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Post by Traca Carmesim on Sat Sep 04, 2010 12:05 am

Tah-dah, everything is squared away.

Since I know it'll likely come up, the NPC character is strictly for character continuity and for roleplay material and character building, there are no combat abilities associated with her, shes just there.

The application was made with rank in mind, please let me know if its too much and what and i'll tone it down, aimed a little higher since its the strongest Arrancar but I don't want to over do it.

Other than that, just basic app checking.
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Post by Traca Carmesim on Sun Sep 05, 2010 5:35 pm

Actually, hold on this, I'm going to modify the techniques to fit the spacial theme that Traca has rather than the previous insect theme. The techniques won't be changing effects or anything, just visuals.
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Post by Traca Carmesim on Sun Sep 05, 2010 6:32 pm

Modifications complete.
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Post by FallenAngel on Sun Sep 05, 2010 9:57 pm

Give us a little time. We are still discussing some things. I will post again when we finish.

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Post by FallenAngel on Wed Sep 08, 2010 12:39 am


Name: Dense Star
State: Normal
Description: Traca raises a chakram to block an opponent, and hardens it with reiatsu, making the already tough weapon even stronger. Bare handed attacks can tear apart the attacker's attacking limb, and armed attacks send a reverbation to the arm that inflicts great pain and paralysis the opponent for a split second.

- All sword fighting is going to have reverb on the hand. This wouldn't paralyze anyone. Please remove.


Name: Rising Star
State: Normal
Description: Traca brings one or both chakram upwards onto an opponent from below, making it a very awkward and clumsy to respond since few beings train for attacks from underneath them. The rising blades, if they clash with an opponent's weapon, can in the next post force more pressure, knocking the weapons out of their hands if it is unreleased up to 35ft away.

- No auto knocking something out of their hands, regardless of level. Please Remove.


Name: Elder Star
State: Normal
Description: Traca throws out a chakram towards an opponent, sheathed in white reiatsu that causes the chakram to multiple into hundreds of copies mid-flight and then strike an opponent with heavy force, slicing them apart if they are stuck within the 35ft cone the attack covers, though even being grazed can inflict a great deal of pain.

Name: Orbital Stars
State: Normal
Description: Traca raises a chakram, causing numerous inter-locking chakrams, similar to a chain, to appear attached to it, increasing the weapons range and enabling it to have a wider range of attack. the chain reaches out 5ft and can be swung with the same effort as the initial chakram, surprising opponents with its speed.

Name: Demon Star
State: Normal
Description: Traca's chakram are replicated, creating three copies of both, which then slide bettween the user's fingers and rise out like curved claws. This enables Traca to perform melee attacks with the 'claws' and match a more close range fighter than the typical sword fighter, the claws also move with the hand, making them notable faster then simply swinging a weapon around.

Name: Nebula
State: Normal
Description: One of the more powerful Zanjutsu techniques in Traca's disposal, Nebula causes chakram to become to appear all around an opponent out of the reishi in the air, appearing in flashes of white, before the chakram form a sphere around the opponent about 5ft in diameter. The first phase of this technique is induced by holding the hand open and typically declaring the attack name, though this isn't required, and the second phase is induced by closing the hand, causing the chakram to condense onto the opponent. The result is often very graphic, but the chakram cannot cut through armor of various sorts or Heirro, though it does cut into it and harm the target.

Name: Black Hole Burst
State: Normal
Description: Traca releases a large amount of reiatsu and begins pulling the reishi around him to form into hundreds of chakram which condense into a sphere around him. The sphere condenses, though Traca's heirro prevents it from harming him or even cutting him, and then the sphere fires out a high velocity, creating a 360 degree burst of projectile weapons.

- Staff has decided that you can't replicate your weapons.


Name: Supernova
State: Normal
Description: Traca causes reishi in the air to gather around his chakram, gradually increasing their size until both chakram are the size of Traca's body, though their weight appears to be unaltered (rather Traca has enough strength to neglect the change in size.) The increased size makes it much more difficult to dodge additional Zanjutsu and also increases the size of Chakram Cero used while this is active. This technique lasts until dismissed or until Traca releases into Resurrecion.

- I and another staff are under the impression that Arrancar cant directly absorb Reishi. Please remove.


Name: Defensive Star
State: Normal
Description: Traca rapidly raises one or both of his chakram to shield against an incoming attack, the ability to hold against certain strengths of attack is dependent on the current state of the chakram, though by default its the default defensive strength of the weapons.

- Please specify what you mean by current strengths, etc.


Advanced Garganta
Garganta created while in this form take less time, a few seconds, and can be made at varying sizes to allow for the movement of single entities, attacks, limbs, etc. through one Garganta and out the other. Garganta created in this fashion are white when they are designed to allow things in and black when they expel them. These Garganta have a one post cool down bettween uses, one use allowing an entrance and exit Garganta. Limbs or body parts that are attached to the user that enter and exit a Garganta are still attached to the technique user, the same applies to opponents. Damage dealt to a limb moved in such a fashion is felt in the rest of the body, but other effects such as poison are not transferred until the Garganta is closed and the limb returned.

Objects, attacks, techniques, etc. sent through one Garganta maintain all their physical properties including momentum, speed, attached effects, etc. when sent through an entrance to an exit. In addition, they continue to move in the same direction, thus through complex angles an attack could be aimed to hit a very precise location even through these Garganta.

- Up the cooldown to two posts. And you cant make a garganta inside someone.. or on them can you?


Name: Banishment
State: Normal
Description: A technique that causes a Garganta to open up near the target before swarming around the opponent like a serpent and consuming them, banishing them to an alternate dimension which contains only a white path in pure blackness. The technique can banish an opponent for any period of time, determined by Traca, outside of combat (in RP situations that are deemed social) when it used to punish insubordinates, or can last one post in combat. After the designated time, they are expelled in a Garganta in the same location they were 'consumed'.

- This is strictly for Out of Combat situations, and anyone's character that you are doing this to has to give permission. Correct?


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Re: Traca Carmesim [Espada Primero]

Post by Traca Carmesim on Wed Sep 08, 2010 10:32 am

FallenAngel wrote:

Name: Dense Star
State: Normal
Description: Traca raises a chakram to block an opponent, and hardens it with reiatsu, making the already tough weapon even stronger. Bare handed attacks can tear apart the attacker's attacking limb, and armed attacks send a reverbation to the arm that inflicts great pain and paralysis the opponent for a split second.

- All sword fighting is going to have reverb on the hand. This wouldn't paralyze anyone. Please remove.

I'm referring to a reverbaratory form of paralysis, like limb shock when you hit something excessively hard. I've been involved a few sword fights, no gay jokes, and when you hit something a lot denser or thicker than you anticipated, the reverb is a momentary stunning. Considering in the Bleach universe hitting something with more spiritual density than yourself can potentially hurt you very heavily (via Kenpachi V Ichigo) I consider a natural reverberation from sheer density to be logical and acceptable.

The technique has been altered as follows:



Name: Dense Star
State: Normal
Description: Traca raises a chakram to block an opponent, and hardens it with reiatsu, making the already tough weapon even stronger. Bare handed attacks can tear apart the attacker's attacking limb, and armed attacks send a reverbation to the arm that inflicts pain as well as causing associated reverberation-based stunning.

FallenAngel wrote:

Name: Rising Star
State: Normal
Description: Traca brings one or both chakram upwards onto an opponent from below, making it a very awkward and clumsy to respond since few beings train for attacks from underneath them. The rising blades, if they clash with an opponent's weapon, can in the next post force more pressure, knocking the weapons out of their hands if it is unreleased up to 35ft away.

- No auto knocking something out of their hands, regardless of level. Please Remove.

Its not an auto, its a matter of strength, hence the 'can knock'. Automatically knocking things out of people hands is high overpowered since those weapons are vital to spiritual beings strength, I'm well aware of that, regardless its been removed since I'm not particularly interested in this technique.

FallenAngel wrote:

Name: Elder Star
State: Normal
Description: Traca throws out a chakram towards an opponent, sheathed in white reiatsu that causes the chakram to multiple into hundreds of copies mid-flight and then strike an opponent with heavy force, slicing them apart if they are stuck within the 35ft cone the attack covers, though even being grazed can inflict a great deal of pain.

Name: Orbital Stars
State: Normal
Description: Traca raises a chakram, causing numerous inter-locking chakrams, similar to a chain, to appear attached to it, increasing the weapons range and enabling it to have a wider range of attack. the chain reaches out 5ft and can be swung with the same effort as the initial chakram, surprising opponents with its speed.

Name: Demon Star
State: Normal
Description: Traca's chakram are replicated, creating three copies of both, which then slide bettween the user's fingers and rise out like curved claws. This enables Traca to perform melee attacks with the 'claws' and match a more close range fighter than the typical sword fighter, the claws also move with the hand, making them notable faster then simply swinging a weapon around.

Name: Nebula
State: Normal
Description: One of the more powerful Zanjutsu techniques in Traca's disposal, Nebula causes chakram to become to appear all around an opponent out of the reishi in the air, appearing in flashes of white, before the chakram form a sphere around the opponent about 5ft in diameter. The first phase of this technique is induced by holding the hand open and typically declaring the attack name, though this isn't required, and the second phase is induced by closing the hand, causing the chakram to condense onto the opponent. The result is often very graphic, but the chakram cannot cut through armor of various sorts or Heirro, though it does cut into it and harm the target.

Name: Black Hole Burst
State: Normal
Description: Traca releases a large amount of reiatsu and begins pulling the reishi around him to form into hundreds of chakram which condense into a sphere around him. The sphere condenses, though Traca's heirro prevents it from harming him or even cutting him, and then the sphere fires out a high velocity, creating a 360 degree burst of projectile weapons.

- Staff has decided that you can't replicate your weapons.

These techniques have been altered to remove weapon replications and have been changed into reaitsu or reiryoku based attacks as follows, easy fix beyond Demon Star which can't really function without the replications and solid reiatsu claws is kind of stupid since the character already has Heirro. As far as Nebula, the word 'replica', 'copy', or the like is not used in that technique but thats partially my fault for not clarifying I suppose that the reishi made chakram aren't like the physical Zanpakuto, same with Black Hole Burst.


Name: Orbital Stars
State: Normal
Description: Traca raises a chakram, causing a stream of reiatsu, similar to a chain, to appear attached to it, increasing the weapons range and enabling it to have a wider range of attack. the chain reaches out 5ft and can be swung with the same effort as the initial chakram, surprising opponents with its speed.


Name: Elder Star
State: Normal
Description: Traca throws out a chakram towards an opponent, sheathed in white reiatsu that causes the chakram to multiple into hundreds of shimmering discs of white reiatsu mid-flight and then strike an opponent with heavy force, slicing them apart if they are stuck within the 35ft cone the attack covers, though even being grazed can inflict a great deal of pain. The chakram continues down the straight path in the center of the cone.


Name: Nebula
State: Normal
Description: One of the more powerful Zanjutsu techniques in Traca's disposal, Nebula causes artificially created chakram to begin to appear all around an opponent out of the reishi in the air, appearing in flashes of white, before the artificial white chakram form a sphere around the opponent about 5ft in diameter. The first phase of this technique is induced by holding the hand open and typically declaring the attack name, though this isn't required, and the second phase is induced by closing the hand, causing the chakram to condense onto the opponent. The result is often very graphic, but the artificial chakram cannot cut through armor of various sorts or Heirro, though it does cut into it and harm the target. After the second phase, the technique disperses and reveals the results of its usage as well as returning the reishi to the surrounding area.


Name: Black Hole Burst
State: Normal
Description: Traca releases a large amount of reiatsu and begins pulling the reishi around him to form and mix with the released spiritual energy into hundreds of artificial shimmering chakram which condense into a sphere around him. The sphere condenses, though Traca's heirro prevents it from harming him or even cutting him, and then the sphere fires out a high velocity, creating a 360 degree burst of projectile weapons comparable to Cero.


FallenAngel wrote:

Name: Supernova
State: Normal
Description: Traca causes reishi in the air to gather around his chakram, gradually increasing their size until both chakram are the size of Traca's body, though their weight appears to be unaltered (rather Traca has enough strength to neglect the change in size.) The increased size makes it much more difficult to dodge additional Zanjutsu and also increases the size of Chakram Cero used while this is active. This technique lasts until dismissed or until Traca releases into Resurrecion.

- I and another staff are under the impression that Arrancar cant directly absorb Reishi. Please remove.

Thats a relatively simple fix if its just reishi absorption thats the issue, usage of 'remove' is rather inappropriate, if things are in need of alteration then they have to be altered, you don't dump the baby out with the bath water. If its a concept issue than say its a concept issue but as it is stated the reishi is the issue. Altered to the below:


Name: Supernova
State: Normal
Description: Traca exerts reiryoku to sheath over Kama in a white flame, gradually increasing their size until both chakram are the size of Traca's body, though their weight appears to be unaltered (rather Traca has enough strength to neglect the change in size.) The increased size makes it much more difficult to dodge additional Zanjutsu and also increases the size of Chakram Cero used while this is active. This technique lasts until dismissed or until Traca releases into Resurrecion.

FallenAngel wrote:

Name: Defensive Star
State: Normal
Description: Traca rapidly raises one or both of his chakram to shield against an incoming attack, the ability to hold against certain strengths of attack is dependent on the current state of the chakram, though by default its the default defensive strength of the weapons.

- Please specify what you mean by current strengths, etc.

As in the natural properties of the Zanpakuto, it can't block things the Zanpakuto can't, its a simple logic thing. The technique just allows for the exception if the Zanpakuto has been altered by some other technique to be stronger than usual. Nothing to be read into there, its what it says.

FallenAngel wrote:

Advanced Garganta
Garganta created while in this form take less time, a few seconds, and can be made at varying sizes to allow for the movement of single entities, attacks, limbs, etc. through one Garganta and out the other. Garganta created in this fashion are white when they are designed to allow things in and black when they expel them. These Garganta have a one post cool down bettween uses, one use allowing an entrance and exit Garganta. Limbs or body parts that are attached to the user that enter and exit a Garganta are still attached to the technique user, the same applies to opponents. Damage dealt to a limb moved in such a fashion is felt in the rest of the body, but other effects such as poison are not transferred until the Garganta is closed and the limb returned.

Objects, attacks, techniques, etc. sent through one Garganta maintain all their physical properties including momentum, speed, attached effects, etc. when sent through an entrance to an exit. In addition, they continue to move in the same direction, thus through complex angles an attack could be aimed to hit a very precise location even through these Garganta.

- Up the cooldown to two posts. And you cant make a garganta inside someone.. or on them can you?

Cool down increased.

As far as making Garganta on or within someone, that hadn't even occurred to me so thats not my intention with the technique, I had an OOC note about 'think Portals' but figured it was inappropriate for the application. Regardless, a notes been added to put you at ease:


Advanced Garganta
Garganta created while in this form take less time, a few seconds, and can be made at varying sizes to allow for the movement of single entities, attacks, limbs, etc. through one Garganta and out the other. Garganta created in this fashion are white when they are designed to allow things in and black when they expel them. These Garganta have a one post cool down bettween uses, one use allowing an entrance and exit Garganta. Limbs or body parts that are attached to the user that enter and exit a Garganta are still attached to the technique user, the same applies to opponents. Damage dealt to a limb moved in such a fashion is felt in the rest of the body, but other effects such as poison are not transferred until the Garganta is closed and the limb returned.

Objects, attacks, techniques, etc. sent through one Garganta maintain all their physical properties including momentum, speed, attached effects, etc. when sent through an entrance to an exit. In addition, they continue to move in the same direction, thus through complex angles an attack could be aimed to hit a very precise location even through these Garganta. Garganta cannot be created so that they are in direct contact with any portion of a spiritual being, internal or external, upon creation.


FallenAngel wrote:

Name: Banishment
State: Normal
Description: A technique that causes a Garganta to open up near the target before swarming around the opponent like a serpent and consuming them, banishing them to an alternate dimension which contains only a white path in pure blackness. The technique can banish an opponent for any period of time, determined by Traca, outside of combat (in RP situations that are deemed social) when it used to punish insubordinates, or can last one post in combat. After the designated time, they are expelled in a Garganta in the same location they were 'consumed'.

- This is strictly for Out of Combat situations, and anyone's character that you are doing this to has to give permission. Correct?

Yes, it says 'out of combat', as far as permission, that wasn't my intention and I don't really think anybody is going to be keen on having their character sent into time out. I can edit the technique for strictly Hollow use so it only affects subordinates however, but permission is something I don't want to toy with.
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Re: Traca Carmesim [Espada Primero]

Post by :.Daydreamer.: on Thu Sep 09, 2010 12:55 am


  • Okay, it may just be me, but I feel you have way too many Cero. I understand you're shooting for Primera, but I feel you're going a smidgen overboard. I'd say four is your max.

  • It's been brought to my attention that Arrancar don't have these "Unique Abilities". They're only unique abilities come in the form of their release. Don't recall any of the Espada in the manga having such powers, anyhow.

  • I've been notified to inform you that your Dense Star technique is going to be watched very, very closely.

  • Invisible Cero is rather powerful, in my opinion. Overly so. So, mind editing that or removing it, please?


Also...I love Shaman King. Hao is nothing short of beastly.

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Post by Traca Carmesim on Thu Sep 09, 2010 6:56 am

:.Daydreamer.: wrote:
Okay, it may just be me, but I feel you have way too many Cero. I understand you're shooting for Primera, but I feel you're going a smidgen overboard. I'd say four is your max.

The below have been kept:

  • Cero
  • Star-Light Bolt [Gran Rey Cero]
  • Star Flash Cero
  • Chakram Cero


This eliminates the need for this:

:.Daydreamer.: wrote:
Invisible Cero is rather powerful, in my opinion. Overly so. So, mind editing that or removing it, please?

:.Daydreamer.: wrote:
It's been brought to my attention that Arrancar don't have these "Unique Abilities". They're only unique abilities come in the form of their release. Don't recall any of the Espada in the manga having such powers, anyhow.

Yes, Arrancar typically lose their physical abilities when they lose their masks, however their mental and spiritual traits remain in tact. Grand Fisher no longer had his lure or other powers but his raw power was kept. I would've listed them all as just Non-Canon abilities, but I felt that abilities of that sort required at least some backstory and explanation. A creature's ability to manipulate energy isn't something you can lose despite the processes you go through, as I said, I felt it needed more backing then just slapping it on there were it would just look like a free power-up with no reasoning.

:.Daydreamer.: wrote:
[*]I've been notified to inform you that your Dense Star technique is going to be watched very, very closely.

Thats fine, its up to the other party to describe what happens to their characters anyways so i'm sure they'll be nerfing it in their descriptions of its effects regardless, much to my amusement.

:.Daydreamer.: wrote:
Also...I love Shaman King. Hao is nothing short of beastly.

Mhm, only villian to win in the history of Manga as I know it. So small.
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Re: Traca Carmesim [Espada Primero]

Post by FallenAngel on Fri Oct 15, 2010 4:25 pm

While it is definitely a nice thought, and your character may have high control over his spiritual pressure, developing it into abilities of this magnitude alongside your already powerful Resurrecion is a bit Overpowered, even for a Primera.


Name: Accompanying Star
State: Release
Description: Traca holds out both hands and creates a sphere of white energy that spirals into existence before expanding to a size about the size of a human skull and then orbiting around Traca. The star is designed differently than any other orbital stars in Traca's techniques, able to mildly disrupt Kido by bending the reishi around both itself and Traca, enabling it to be the target of any Kido targeted at Traca. Once hit, however, the star fades away.

- Needs a number limit on which kido it affects. The highest would be around 89 to make it similar to a danku's ability.

Name: Star Cage
State: Release
Description: Traca causes numerous artificial stars to develop around an opponent, forming the points of a cube though this is a fine and rarely noticed detail. The stars exert a gravitational force that fills in the empty space between each star, boxing an opponent in. The strength of the stars gradually fades post by post, and things are similarly barred from entering as they are from exiting. After three posts the stars fade away.

- How hard is it to break this?

That should be about it @.@
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Re: Traca Carmesim [Espada Primero]

Post by Traca Carmesim on Fri Oct 15, 2010 5:52 pm

I'm rather interested in at least retaining Reiatsu Release (since this is an ability any powerful spiritual being has, just not defined) and Reiryoku Cloak is something also similar to other beings, albeit modified to emulate other pressures. If thats acceptable I would like to keep both of them and just list them as non-released custom techs.

I can edit Acompanying Star to direct 89 or lower kido.

Im not sure about Star Cage, would a number 90 kido on post 1, 85 on post 2, and 75 on post 3 be tolerable?
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Post by FallenAngel on Fri Oct 15, 2010 10:04 pm

Reiatsu release was never a problem. And the cloaking one will work too as long as captains can tell the difference.

The other two sound fine as well.
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Post by Traca Carmesim on Fri Oct 15, 2010 10:18 pm

Modified as requested.
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Post by FallenAngel on Fri Oct 15, 2010 11:06 pm

Approved Primera.
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