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Yaguri Issui - (3rd Espada)

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Post by Yaguri Issui Sat Sep 11, 2010 4:40 am

Basic Information

Name: Yaguri Issui

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Rank: Espada

Number: 3

Looks:
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Hollow Hole: Yaguri's Hollow Hole is located on his chest where the heart is located. However, due to the style of the clothing, it is hidden beneath the fabric.

Mask Fragment: Yaguri's mask rests upon his head. With a large horn that almost looks to be an ear, his animal is represented through this.

Number Tattoo: Yaguri's Number is located on his wrist.

Personality: Yaguri acts much as his appearance dictates. Against all forms of fighting, he will often try to find a path that sheds the least amount of blood. However, if he is forced to fight, defeat will be a swift outcome to any that underestimate him. In battle, Yaguri has been known to remain his quiet and saddened self but portrays fierce attacks that would make any fear him. Another notable quality of his is his memory.

Techniques:
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Weapon Information

Weapon Name: Inari

Weapon Looks: Looking much like a normal Katana, the hilt is composed of two Japanese Torii Gates. It is highly believed that Torii mark the transition from the sacred (the shrine) to the profane (the normal world). The sword's hilt is wrapped with a light blue cloth and hangs from the top of the hilt in a loose bow. The blade itself is sharp enough to slice through steel(not including strong weapons) and it's surface is smooth enough to reflect images like a mirror.

Weapon Description: Inari is capable of creating illusions that can be both casted on the target(s) or reality.

Resurrecion Release Phrase: "Sleep…"

Resurrecion Information

Name: Zenko - (Good Fox)

Represent: Kitsune - (White Fox)

Family: Illusions

Looks: Zenko unleashes with a burst of spiritual energy that falls around Yaguri as rain. Once in his Resurrecion form, the other half of his mask will form and will extend all the way down his back like a spine. The "spine" is also now connected to what looks to be a belt around his waist and continues down to a long and sharp tail that can be used for both offense and defense. His nails will also sharpen along with a few of his teeth.

Techniques:
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History and RP Sample

History: (your characters history, describe your life as a human, as a hollow, and your reincarnation into an arrancer/espada, please see the below for a brief guide on the evolution of a hollow-

Human > Hollow:

Born in a poor and dangerous village, famine was everywhere, along with the growing sickness of the people. Life itself was a curse for most of those that could withstand it, turning them strong and skillful. Yaguri had grown up cast aside from the lot of his people. With his family lost in dept., life was especially hard for him. When the sickness struck, those who had no money could not afford to go to the doctor and died shortly after being infected. Yaguri watched his younger sister die before him but soon fell ill to the same fate. Living life as a soul, it was not long before he grew different and hollow inside. With sorrow and anguish as his last feelings, he transformed into a hollow.

Hollow > Gillian: Even as a hollow, the sadness followed him where ever he went. As he preyed upon the soul of his sister, Yaguri weeped. What had he done? He had eaten the soul of his only family member and would live to feel a pain worse than death. Unable to control his thirst for their kind, the sky seemed to cry along side him. Deciding to save as many as he could, Yaguri began consuming other hollows. It was strange thing... eating those exactly like you. What exactly had he become? As he wailed in agony and remorse, it would always rain. He soon came to be known as the Weeping Hollow, for is would rain only in his presence.

As he ate other hollow, the consumed souls compound in his body, until they become a giant mess of spirits that slowly grew into a Menos Grande (Gillian). With regret and grief as his driving force, Yaguri soon took control and began to kill as many other Gillian as he could. Feeling as if this was his only way to pay for his sins, his power increased with every meal.

Gillian > Adjuchas: A Gillian who continues to eat will become an Adjucha, compacting itself in size and gaining an animal-like form that will later become its Release form. Adjucha resemble armored white animals and they continue to eat other menos, hollow, and adjucha, for if they do not eat they will revert to their Gillian form and lose control of the Gillian forever more, giving other spirits a chance to control.

Adjuchas > Vasto Lorde/Arrancar: In a remote part of the White Desert, it always seemed to rain. It was a small mountain that was constantly covered in a mist and the only life that seemed to reside there were those that entered. However, screeches and screams could be heard as their souls were eaten. The "Weeping Hollow" lived deep in this location and fed off of those that entered. As he fed, he slowly formed a humanoid body but retained a mask and hole. At this point, Yaguri was known as a Vasto Lorde. A mysterious man soon came to this place and offered Yaguri a way to pay for his sins. Gloomily agreeing to the mans request, Yaguri followed the Obscura Oracion member. Having his mask torn off he became an Arrancar. Having enough souls to fill an ocean, a Zanpakutou formed from their sorrow.

Arrancar > Espada: Now an Arrancar, the next thing to do was become an Espada. Yaguri challenged the 3rd Espada the next day in order to prove his strength. As the room filled up with a thick mist, nothing could be seen. However, the mist slowly dissipated a moment later to show Yaguri in the exact location that he had started. His enemy had been sliced into many pieces and blood soaked the floor. To add to the mystery, Yaguri's sword was clean and bare no traces of blood. He was now the 3rd Espada.

RP Sample:
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Yaguri Issui
Yaguri Issui

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Posts : 60
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Age : 33
Registration date : 2009-10-16

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Post by Traca Carmesim Sat Sep 11, 2010 10:44 pm

I am currently going over this application but due to time constraints I haven't been able to finish, so please be aware that it is being looked over and that the site just hasn't ignored the fact that you have an app up. Thank you for your patience.
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Traca Carmesim
Espada
Espada

Male
Posts : 326
+1 Total : 0
Age : 31
Location : United States; Indiana
Registration date : 2009-10-14

Character sheet
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Post by Traca Carmesim Thu Oct 07, 2010 10:30 am

Alrighty, lets get crackin', sorry for the rather large delay...

Age
Well your physical age could be 16 but being a sixteen year old Espada would be impossible. Spiritual beings are hundreds of years old, with some of the elders being thousands, a spirit that young would still be a base level Hollow.

Picture
Very nice, I like it a lot. Though you'll need to write out a physical description as well as having it.

Personality
Please add at least another paragraph to this section.

Regeneration


Name: Regeneration
State: Both
Description: A most notable trait is that fact that he has extremely high speed regeneration. Yaguri can quickly regenerate any part of his body except for his brain and internal organs. However, this power also requires that he had sufficient spiritual energy.

How long does this take to function?

Analgesia


Name: Analgesia
State: Both
Description: Yaguri's death aspect is known as "Pain".

The Espada do not have death aspects here.


With that in mind, some may find this trait of his as an oxymoron. Born from the "Pain" within the many souls of the Gillian, Yaguri himself is unable to feel anything at all. His body does not possess pain receptors or even the ability to create or feel emotion; it does not exist. Due to this, he often seems cold and heartless, thus the placement of his hollow hole.

Not being able to feel pain is quite a disadvantage in many situations, as well as not being able to feel emotion, please be aware of this. Also, you'll need a clause for Bankai or Resureccion induced emotional alterations, though you may severely lessen their effects, being immune to them would be unbalancing if the release relies on them.

Eidetic Memory


Name: Eidetic Memory
State: Both
Description: Yaguri possesses a unique ability to retain and recall all images, sounds, and objects in memory with extreme accuracy. Known as Photographic Memory, it is a useful trait for letting his superiors know about specific details that took place while on a mission.

A photographic memory doesn't really seem like a technique and they haven't even been proven to exist, but I suppose in a supernatural universe its permissible. Be careful with how you use this ability, if its found to be being abused to metagame or godmod or the like, as it can, then it will have to be removed from your techniques.


For his own personal gain, Yaguri will use this trait to accurately predict the movements of an enemy by use of muscle contraction.

Being able to remember things wouldn't help you in this district unless you were able to watch them perform the same attack or motion multiple times and register it in your mind like that. Plus this has a high potential for abuse, please remove it from your techniques, it'd be better suited as a Resureccion ability if anything and would need more details.


Name: Hoshi no Tama - (Star Ball)
State: Both
Description: This technique is an automatic ability that activates the moment an illusionary technique has been used by anyone other than Yaguri. The pupil of his eye will become thin and cat-like as the effects take place. Yaguri is able to copy and counter any illusionary abilities or techniques that he sees. Even if the technique is not used on him, Yaguri is able to see what is not really there and stop it. This takes the same amount of spiritual energy to counter the illusion as is needed to recreate it

Automatic activation is most definitely a no-go.


Name: Kogitsune-Maru - (Little Fox)
State: Both
Description: By looking at an individual, Yaguri is able to cast a tangible illusion that is even capable of dealing real damage to the effected. The illusion produces a single copy of Yaguri. Only the single person who is under the illusion is able to see the "clone" and capable of dealing and receiving damage. The "clone" will automatically disperse at the end of the target's next turn.

Tangible illusions is most definitely not going to be approvable.


Name: Kitsune-Bi - (Fox Fire)
State: Both
Description: With this technique, Yaguri is capable of placing an illusion upon a target(s) that will create inextinguishable black flames. The flames of this illusion are visible only by those who are affected as if they were real. This includes smell, sound and tangibility. Any damage done by this illusion is not real and incapable of killing. Those killed by this illusion have only fainted due to the mental trauma. While the flames are inextinguishable by water, simply getting out of Yaguri's line of sight will cause the flames to disperse. Getting to a “blind spot” or even hiding behind a rock can do this.

This is listed twice as both as standard and released technique.


Name: Kitsunetsuki - (Spirit Possession)
State: Both
Description: This technique is Yaguri's most effective and little known ability. With this technique, Yaguri’s reflection seems to have a mind of it’s own. Moving through all reflective surfaces, the reflection is able deal damage to his enemies by attacking the target’s own reflection. As such, Yaguri's reflection may attack an enemy from a different direction than the real Yaguri. The technique relies in this fact; Whatever Yaguri's reflection does to his target's reflection, happens to the real target. By coordinating their movements so that their own reflection blocks the attacks of Yaguri’s reflection, the target can fight and fend off Yaguri’s reflection. While Yaguri is able to harm the enemy through their reflection, harming Yaguri’s reflection does nothing, as the target would actually be swinging their sword at nothing. However, if the target is positioned so that they cast no reflection in a surface, the technique is useless.

This is way to overpowered, denied.


Weapon Description: Inari is capable of creating illusions that can be both casted on the target(s) or reality.

Way more details.

Your history needs to be substantially lengthened and is your RP Sample accurate? Do you expect to post around that level every post you make? If not, please edit it so that it is appropriate.
Traca Carmesim
Traca Carmesim
Espada
Espada

Male
Posts : 326
+1 Total : 0
Age : 31
Location : United States; Indiana
Registration date : 2009-10-14

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