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Post by Blur on Fri Nov 05, 2010 12:40 am

Hmm, good point. Would it be better to say that the wax resists kido up to a certain # to reflect its toughness?
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Post by Traca Carmesim on Fri Nov 05, 2010 12:45 am

That would probably be better, you could include that the tension can stun an opponent briefly and enable a brief counter attack if you still want to maintain the tension based damage aspect.
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Post by Blur on Fri Nov 05, 2010 12:56 am

Ok, revamped the wax.
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Post by Traca Carmesim on Fri Nov 05, 2010 1:00 am

Add a little bit more to your personality, like battle philosophy and how you carry yourself in combat and this should be fine once I have time to run down your history to make sure thats all in order.
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Post by Blur on Fri Nov 05, 2010 1:21 am

Ok, added some extra to show that.
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Post by Traca Carmesim on Fri Nov 05, 2010 1:55 pm

Should all be alright, approved.
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