Ribbon(Poem, *NEED/WOULD LIKE INPUT*)

Blinking lights upon your face
Run forever, rain will dry
Iron liquid lips I taste
A feeling that I could die
for
the rhythm joining hands will tie
a ribbon far beyond your tale
Trailing lights that just flew by
tracing on your face, exhale

Remembering our secret song
Sing forever, it's you I long
Beat forever, don't go out
It's hard to even know then doubt

As the ribbon stretches far
Far beyond, my hands can't reach
Wrapping around your waist, my star
Let it tie us tight...complete