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Yousei's new shikai techniques

Post by Yousei on Wed Jan 06, 2010 3:50 pm

Name of Character: Yousei Murakami

Current Rank: 7th Squad's Lieutenant

Current Spritual Pressure: 72?

Name Of Techn: Reisuitai (Soul Weakening) - Shikai Technique

Tech Skill Level: Expert

Small Summary: This technique mixes both Dimensional and Spirit type abilities of my Zanpakuto. Simply put it's a reishi protectile negatively charged. When it touches any living or spiritual being, it takes away some of their spiritual energy and so weakens them. Another special thing about this protectile is that it's transdimensional. It constantly changes dimensions it is traveling through, so it's nearly impossible to block it or anyhow else counter it, unless with another dimensional ability. And last thing is that due to it traveling transdimensionaly, it's incredibly fast and nearly impossible to dodge.
Characters with max Dexterity or high speed would be able to avoid the protectile by using shunpo, sonido, hirenkyaku or movement techniques like that.
The protectile can be countered with kido (or kido ranked attacks) 60th and above. (of caurse you need high speed to be able to see the attack)
Those with high strength can weaken stamina drain by half by blocking it with spiritual energy imbued weapon. (at least medium speed and dex)

Now:
It drains exactly 2 Stamina in Shikai and 3 in Bankai.
Can be used once a turn and uses same amount of stamina in Shikai, but only 2 Stamina in Bankai.


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Name of Character: Yousei Murakami

Current Rank: 7th Squad's Lieutenant

Current Spritual Pressure: 75?

Name Of Techn: Shinkirou (Mirage)

Tech Skill Level: Expert

Small Summary: This is dimensional ability that Yousei can use by calling Yozora's spirit out from his inner into the outside world, it's like partially releasing his Zanpakuto or in other words Zanpakuto materialization. This ability can also be used in Shikai and Bankai.
This ability allows Yousei's spiritual body itself become transdimensional for a moment. During that moment some lows of nature don't apply for his body. Meaning he can make sudden movement's that are against any laws of physics, or avoid being hit by a bullet by making it pass through him. This moment of being transdimensional is short, because Yousei can't survive in other dimensions more than that. Also, he doesn't fully go into other dimensions, as he's still partially here and there, which makes this technique unable to counter dimensional techniques, spiritual techniques, long-effect-time techniques and some of reiatsu based attacks, which also includes some of kido.

This has 1 post cool down and uses 3 stamina per each use. It can also be used 2 and 3 posts in a row max, but then it would need 3 (for 2 in row) and 5 (for 3 in row) posts cool down time.
Kido it can totally avoid is up to 50th and it can partially counter kido up 75th, but they would still effect. Kido from 76th to 100th cannot be countered.


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Re: Yousei's new shikai techniques

Post by Yousei on Sat Jan 16, 2010 2:52 pm

I believe mods and admins are busy, but could somebody check this when they have some time? Meaning - Bump
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Re: Yousei's new shikai techniques

Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:23 am

Each technique requires a minimum of 50 Spiritual pressure. Meaning youll only be able to create one technique at the moment.

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Re: Yousei's new shikai techniques

Post by Yousei on Sun Jan 17, 2010 3:37 am

Ok, I choose Soul Weakening for now.
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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Sun Jan 17, 2010 10:37 am

Put a cooldown in there. if your using a reiatsu draining technique, a cooldown will be required before you can use it again.

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Re: Yousei's new shikai techniques

Post by Yousei on Sun Jan 17, 2010 11:34 am

I believe cool down is that this can only be used once per post. It is already written, Unless you want it to be increased.

Also, if somebody misunderstood it, this technique doesn't give me opponent's spiritual energy. Simply put is damages my and opponent's reiatsu by same amount excluding bankai state, when damage to opponent is increased.
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Re: Yousei's new shikai techniques

Post by Kenji Akira on Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:42 pm

It constantly changes dimensions it is traveling through, so it's nearly impossible to block it or anyhow else counter it, unless with another dimensional ability. And last thing is that due to it traveling transdimensionaly, it's incredibly fast and nearly impossible to dodge.

Alright, that right there seems to be the borderline between OP and a bit much, especially since this is just a Shikai technique.
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Re: Yousei's new shikai techniques

Post by Yousei on Sun Jan 17, 2010 2:40 pm

Ok, basicly transdimensional movement is one important point of this technique. But if you look at it the other way, it looks like an auto hit.
Then, I guess, I need to put some weaknesses here:

Characters with max Dexterity or high speed would be able to avoid the protectile by using shunpo, sonido, hirenkyaku or movement techniques like that.
The protectile can be countered with kido (or kido ranked attacks) 60th and above. (of caurse you need high speed to be able to see the attack)
Those with high strength can weaken stamina drain by half by blocking it with spiritual energy imbued weapon. (at least medium speed and dex)
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Re: Yousei's new shikai techniques

Post by Kenji Akira on Mon Jan 18, 2010 5:07 pm

Alright, seems better. Approved unless said otherwise.
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Re: Yousei's new shikai techniques

Post by Yousei on Tue Jan 19, 2010 1:33 pm

So, this means the first one is OK.
I switched them both with two other techniques in my character app, because those didn't quite fit my Zanpakuto type. Anyway, once I think of a weakness for my first Shikai technique, you're welcome to approve it all there...
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