Mae Analease Rin Deveraux (Nick name Saku)(incomplete)

Basic Information

Name: Mae

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Looks: She appears as a young lady with blue hair that is long and has a under tone of black. She is 5'2 and is 100 pounds. She is wearing a white dress top and a white skirt bottom. Her skin is pale like blossom from a peach tree, but not death.She holds herself up right to protain your indepentance and grace. She doesnt have a strong apeal but that she lack' in confrentation she has to make up with her body. She is curvey but not over done atlease in her oppinion but its up to men weather they like it or not. She is one o quite noblity so she show in how she dresses but not in how she appear's in other people's head.

Personality: She is calm and collective because of her abilities she doesnt want any human's to get to close to her. She is loyal and respectful to all of her opponent because she would ask the same from them. She is out going because she doesnt like staying in one place because she feels like she is being watched. She pretend's to be blind to the current situation but is fully awear of whats going on. Her way of being ruded is by question question that may not help her in her will being. She doesnt interest herself in men cause she feel's she'll loose herself in the foolish thing the people of the world call love.

Stats
Substitute shinigami receive 60 points as though they were Rogue Shinigami

Strength:17

Speed:15

Accuracy:18

Stamina:20

Zanpakuto Information

Zanpakuto Name: Sono Tsuin Hisakata ( The twin Moons)

Zanpakuto Looks:


Zanpakuto Description: The Zanpakuto is a white rosed fan which is a symbol of purity. It has more to do with the balance of the world than a human. It is not for say the strongest Zanpakuto but hold's opratunities to its abilities.

Released Zanpakuto Description: (A description of your Zanpakuto's abilities are once its been released)

Zanpakuto Release Phrase: " A waken One eyed Dragon"

Released Zanpakuto Looks: (What your Zanpakuto looks like once released

Zanpakuto Spirit:

The is the women saku of the water she is a most mysterious and wildy woman.......

Zanpakuto Realm:
This is a black hole rainbow which is the sign for love ran choas

History and RP Sample

History: Rin as a child had belonged to a wealthy family who had so much power that they became entwined and captivated by it. she didnt ask for much since her family was to odd to try and talk to each they only cared for there money. She never cared for money that much because it made her parents hard to apporch. She spent most of her time studing music and the art of Malabre dancing. Rin play's the violin, viola, cello, bass, flute, piccolo,and alto saxophone. She was interrested in only the introments that carried the harmony. She is fond of dancing because before her mother married she was a islander on Tahiti and did cultural tahitizan dancing.

Rin's family had a rivial family for power of Tokoyo which was important to her great grandfather Csada Ital Motoshin Deveraux who rivial with the Deverlex who was the 2nd brand of the family tree. The Main branch Devernia was obtuse to the arguement between Deverlex(2nd branch) and Deveraux (3rd branch). So in the year to come she would compete with her causin to see which branch's new generation was better than another. Rin knew she'd have to practice for all the catagories in the competetion. She worked hard for the next to year and made her abilities surpass those of her mother's. A week before the competetion and the branch's had a picnic of a sort to meet all the new face in the other branch's. Rin met a young man by the name of Yoshin Lee Deverlex who was in love with her at first site. She wasnt completely related so the branch's sometime's marry to another branch. Rin took no interrest in him but politely put up with his flattery. He was odd in himself but was handsome but short sited in train of thought.

The day before the competetion the Deverlex declared war on the Devernia family leaving the Deveraux to pick a side. Rin's father became leader at the tim and was a bold, strong,and kind man who Rin looked up to. He decided that was best if their family stay'd out so their were no future problems for them in the family branch's. When Rin became 15 she met Yoshin for the last time do to his tact ways. Yoshin was convinced that Rin was not in love with him so he told his village elder that he had away to keep the 3rd branch from becoming stronger than them. He said if he was allowed to marry the daughter of the Deveraux leader they would no choice but to give in to the power of Deverlex because the future of the 3rd branch is pinning on Rin. So the Elders of Deverlex talk with my father with out my knowing of it. My father told me on that day I had some decision's to make and it was important for my future and that of the clan's.

That day was the most horrible thing she had ever seen , she had decided not to marry Yoshin and the Deverlex were informed of this making tem angry so they declared war on the Dveraux family knowing that they're military surpass that of anyones in the branch's. Rin's father called apon the main branch for help in the battle and they said they would. The day of the battle a note come to her father sayin that the Deverlex and Devernia had team'd up and were headed to the Deveraux Palace. Rin was taken by the surpraise of this action and was told to fee at once. She met an Man by the name of Nobunaga who capture Rin's eye and she knew that if she never met other met another man that this would be the one she spent her whole life with. She lived with him for the next two years as a guest or daughter thing of some sort but she never really left his site.



RP Sample: Hearing this news from Ranye made her delighted In seeing someone took interest in the medic core. She then place a pecies of paper on the table with basic knowledge of medic teatment ad proceggers. Two nurse's walked in the room with to tanks feeled with dead fish. The fish had died merely hours apart from different poison's. There for oour job was to find the cure for each poison and revive the fish. With this the nurses left the room and let us get to work on this. "We have alot to do In our three days of training so let's get to work okay.". She said as she grabbed a fish and studied its body for physicall damage from the poisonous chemical. She found the fishes eye's where blood shot so the chemical made the fish loss proteins and sugar levels. She needed to see i the fish was salt or fresh water. She scraped the gils for salt particles. The fish was indeed a salt water fish because the sugar levels where lower than normal fish in fesh water naturally so she had to add more sugar then the basic cure would need. She wrote this back on the note sheet they both had one sitting next to them. she walked over to the sink to put warm water in a bowl and sat down to scrim over her notes once more to reflect on what she should do next.[size=24][u]

For starters use japanese for zanpaktou name please? http://www.freedict.com/onldict/jap.html second take the unnecessary coloring out as this will keep you from approval. In the event you did not catch the memo Rogue shinigami are closed please pick a rank and division. last but not least your history would fit a fourth to third seat so there is what you should apply for

I would be the third seat of the thirs Division please?

need an rp sample

Rp sample : Hearing this news from Ranye made her delighted In seeing someone took interest in the medic core. She then place a pecies of paper on the table with basic knowledge of medic teatment ad proceggers. Two nurse's walked in the room with to tanks feeled with dead fish. The fish had died merely hours apart from different poison's. There for oour job was to find the cure for each poison and revive the fish. With this the nurses left the room and let us get to work on this. "We have alot to do In our three days of training so let's get to work okay.". She said as she grabbed a fish and studied its body for physicall damage from the poisonous chemical. She found the fishes eye's where blood shot so the chemical made the fish loss proteins and sugar levels. She needed to see i the fish was salt or fresh water. She scraped the gils for salt particles. The fish was indeed a salt water fish because the sugar levels where lower than normal fish in fesh water naturally so she had to add more sugar then the basic cure would need. She wrote this back on the note sheet they both had one sitting next to them. she walked over to the sink to put warm water in a bowl and sat down to scrim over her notes once more to reflect on what she should do next.

seriously Drey you know the drill edit your first post and put it in and put spoiler tags in your siggy before i go in and delete it

I dont know how to use spoilers what do you do for them?

Okay spoiler edited anything else?

More on looks (Unless you add a picture) and personality, please.

Is that good enough?

As per the new stat update system, Substitute Shinigami are not on the list. I will bring this up with Kaji, but you may be required to redo the application to a Shinigami Template. Given your RP sample, you would be best suited for a much lower rank than you may desire, so keep that in mind.

3rd or 4th seat is too high for this template?????