Kutsu Nisshako (WIP)

Name: Kutsu Nisshaku (agony eclipse)

Age: looks 34 is 1576 years old

Gender: Male

Division: EX-6th


Looks:
Red hear with black roots,
Scar over right eye and a Black runic tattoo which is the rune symbol for Lust on his chest over his heart

Personality :Kutsu is a quiet but kind soul who’s only goal in life is to kill the Arrancar. He has a nack for getting in to fights over right and wrong, and loves to debate over the meaning of things. He has a terrible sense of trust, which he has learned of thus he never trusts anyone.

Kutsu is a heavy drinker who loves his molson Canadian beer. Even through Kutsu doesn’t need money he holds a really simple job as a traveling Salesmen who sells everything from good luck charms to evil warding talismens.

In a fight Kutsu is more likely to take a hit to get a hit thanks to his Masochistic side and his sadistic side which he only shows to his enemies. Often Kutsu can be found cutting his own Arm, though it hurts he in joys the pain in a way he can’t understand, it makes him feel alive in a way combat nor love could ever.



Stats
95

Strength:30
shikai:40
Bankai:50

Speed:20

Accuracy:10

Stamina:35
Mask:45
bankai:50
Mask Information

Name: Yorokobi (pleasure)

Manifestation: :Identical to Kutsu but in all white no colour.
Also a new line of engraving forms on Ketueki-Getsu that says
“Pain in pleasure, pleasure in pain, all will wither and die.”

Unique Ability: The base power of Yorokobi is that Kutsu become unable to feel pain, and any damage taken during the 3 posts (my post)it lasts for is healed any injury instantly other then major organs like the heart, lungs, brain, and stomach. Also if a limb is cut off the the regeneration will only heal the stub.
only works once per hollofication. Is activated when the mask forms.


Jisatsu (suicide) {cants be used in the first three posts of mask}
This attack is a very lethal attack that requires Kutsu to be within 5 meters of his target.
When the technique is used kutsu’s mask Yorokobi turns black with white lines under the eyes,
once this happens neither Kutsu nor the opponent can move from they’re location,
but if kutsu cuts his arm the opponent will feel the pain,
same goes if the opponent cuts they’re own arm then kutsu will feel the pain.
After the technique is dropped the injuries sustained will hurt be it A cut on the arm to a stab through the chest.
2 post (mine then opponents)
can only be used once a topic.


Hollow Mask Appearance: a white black and red mask in the shape of a human Skull with horns. Under the eyes there are two red lines like native war face paint. The skulls teeth are shape and the canines are longer then any of the rest of the teeth.

Duration: Mask length 10 post unless Jisatsu is used then after the technique is dropped the mask disappears.


Zanpakuto Information

Zanpakuto Name: Ketueki-tsuki (blood moon)


Zanpakuto Looks: A basic Black bladed Katana with a long engraving along the blade in Latin that says
“Oh Demons who burn in the depths of hell I shall raise you and bless you on to heaven.”


Released Zanpakuto Description: Ketueki-tsuki shines then blood with a neurotoxin that makes it so that the opponents motor skills deplete (-4 off both speed and DEXTERITY per hit) runs down the blade and drips off. he has to either cut or stab them with the blade for the effect to work.

Blood mist
Kutsu fires some of the poison into the air by swinging the sword upwards.
the poison reacts with the air and changes in to a mist like cloud which then falls making it impossible to see past 3 feet ahead of you for the opponent and masks kutsu's reitsu over the whole area.

kutsu can still see fine.
lasts 5 posts 2 post recharge.

Blood wave
A wave like blade of blood is fired off the blade of the zan-pak-tou wit the same power as a swing of the blade but this blood is not poisonous.

Zanpakuto Release Phrase: “Bleed thy sinful blood Ketueki-tsuki”

Released Zanpakuto Looks:The swords look does not change other then a new line of engraving which says
“Black and white are only Shades and light and darkness only define, it’s you who chooses good and evil.”


Zanpakuto Spirit: An old man with horns, wearing a silk robe in black with silver as the out line.


Zanpakuto Realm: a giant chapel with an oculus in the roof which always has a blood red moon hovering just in the center of the oculus.



Not usable at the moment
Bankai Information
(This only applies to high level Vizard Only. Unless we decide to make an acception, you'll probably be asked to remove untill later.)

Bankai name:Tentai-Ketueki-Tsuki-Gishiki
(Celestial blood moon ritual)


Bankai Description: Forms a 100 meter radius red circle with multiple complex shapes and writings in the lines of the circle and the inner design.
Everything within the circles outer ring feels pain ten times more then normal, meaning that if kutsu slashed the opponents shoulder just slightly then the opponent would feel the pain of having they’re Arm cut clean off.
This effect hits Kutsu as well.
Lasts until the bankai is deactivated.

Tentai-Ketueki
For two posts Tentai-Ketueki-Tsuki-Gishiki grows to be 10 feet long and has the power to suck the reitsu out of the opponent like a sponge. But this only happens if A attack is blocked.
After ten blocks an opponent of Vice captain power level would have trouble using kedo.


Bankai Looks: The sword’s look again does not change other then the fact that a new line of verse is burned onto the blade which says
“I care thus I hurt, I love thus I despair, I know thus I fear.”

Alterations: None

History and RP sample

History:

Childhood:
Kutsu Was born in a small village in Japan in the year 434 AD. He was raised to be Buddhist and taught the way of the sword by a master of the kedo style, a master that Kutsu loved and adored. When kutsu was born there was a siege drowning the town in a deep wave of Agony and pain, thus Kutsu’s Father Nobuyuki Nisshaku Named him Kutsu as to make him a memory of the agony the village suffered.

Teen years:
By Kutsu’s 14th birthday He was a strong, powerful, skilled
Warrior of the Shinmei sword school and lived his life helping his father in the rice fields. At 15 kutsu’s father offered him his first drink of sake (white rice wine) Kutsu loved the taste and the effects that followed, that night Kutsu stumbled his why to the stable and fell in the mud and slept there the whole night.
The next morning was his 16th birthday as he walked to the Dogo that day something horrible happened, kutsu’s Master was killed by a group of 3 trained Bandits looking for his blood red sword From a land far to the west known as the Claymore a long cumbersomely heavy bladed that was nothing like the katana of Japan.
Kutsu entered the Dogo just as his master was stabbed through the stomach, Kutsu’s Rage over took him and the next thing he knew he was uppercutting the closest of the bandits with his kedo blade, not cutting the man but still killing him, Kutsu then stabbed the second with the wooden blade and ran the blade through the second and ran into the third killing both quickly.
After he held his Master in his arms as the old man died, he gave the Claymore to Kutsu telling him to learn this new blade and to master his own new style of the sword.

Adult years:
At the age of 25 Kutsu had mastered the Strange new blade and become one of the most skilled warriors in Japan. He wondered the land looking for battle and for those who need him.
When kutsu turned 29 He found a small village to rest in, the people were kind and the food was good so Kutsu decided to live in this village of Karakura, which one day would become a major place of spiritual importance. Soon after buying a house he married and began working fields again returning to a calm and peaceful life.

Death:
The Day of Kutsu’s 30th birthday A small band of bandits attack the village trying to take over, but Kutsu used his skills with the Claymore to kill the group easily. Returning to his work soon after.
That night A bandit kidnapped Asuna Nisshaku Kutsu’s wife of one year while Kutsu was out celebrating with the villagers over the victory with sake and more sake. The kidnapper took Asuna to the bandit leader Koushaku Yamamoto to be offered the chance to life a safe and untouched life if she killed Kutsu Nisshaku by poison. She returned from the bandit camp with a vile of blowfish poison.

That night when Kutsu returned he was greeted with a worm meal and a force full wife telling him to eat.

Time as a soul:
After his death Kutsu wondered the world in soul form untill he found Scotland in the year 564 to see the place and people who made what was his favourite weapon. Soon after he was found by a Shinigami and sent to the soul society.
Time in the soul society.
He woke up in a poor looking town surrounding a powerful and richer looking city. Making his name known as a fighter he quickly made him self known to the soul reapers of the school reaper academy, who came to him and recruited him.

Soul reaper academy:
Kutsu learned fast and began a life as a high level student only to find high marks in his reports and a sudden taste for Pain that slowly became more and more a part of his everyday life he began to cut him self each night in the same place just to feel the pain and feel the pleasure the pain brought him.

The day he got his Zan-pak-tou was the day he knew this obsession with pain would reach to much more then just himself but to his enemies as well. He was training one day and cut his sparing partner by accident and found much pleasure in the thought that he hurt his enemies.

Soon after exiting the soul reaper academy he learn to use his shikai and mastered the techniques with it quickly. the power
His shikai gave him let him cripple smaller opponents and if he wished to do so to a stronger opponent then he'd need to be more exact.

As a soul reaper:
As a fulltime soul reaper Kutsu went up the ranks fast and landed a vice captain position in the 11th in under a year, soon after he trained for months to achieve bankai as to defeat his Captain, when he did achieve Bankai he learned that an other power was still within him to be awakened.

Kutsu never did defeat his captain thus he changed to the 6th division and quickly defeated the captain without killing him, Kutsu was the first to make a captain submit in a Position match thanks to the pain amplifying power of his Bankai.

Kutsu then mastered the Art of Torture with his Bankai. He soon become known as “ the master of interrogation”.


Hollow mask awakens:
The day it happened Kutsu will never forget.
It was a warm summers day in the soul society when Kutsu was Training with his shikai when a voice resounded in his head
“What’s wrong don’t you like pleasure?”
In a old but echoing metallic voice that seemed to scare kutsu n a way that battle never did.
“ What never noticed me here I mean its been a while sense the last time you came to the realm of the old man but you should remember me I’ve been there every time you enter that place.”
Kutsu then closed his eyes and entered the realm of his Zon-pok-tou where there was another person. a white man wearing a white and black Kimono but the outer part of the kimono was white and the inner was Black unlike the one he was wearing.
“see I told you I was here.”
The man smiled evilly and then put his hand on the old mans shoulder and the old man turned in a white version of Ketueki-Tsuki, Kutsu looked at the man and then with a dumb shocked look on his face he asked
“Who Are you!?”

The man looked at him then smiled
“no one just the hollow who is going to take your body for a test ride.”

Back in Reality Kutsu begins to shake violently then a skull looking mask formed on half his face as he screamed in an agonizing Pleasure.

The exile:
Kutsu's body began to move on its own as the hollow side of Kutsu known as Yorokobi controled his actions. the hollow began to cut and slash anyone who got in his way as he looked for a way to the human world but suddenly the captain that kutsu could never beat appeared befor him and ordered him
" STOP! Kutsu what the hell is going on whats a hollow mask doing on your head and why are you killing people!?"

the hollow just smiled and said
"this body is mine now get away"
then the hollow lunged forward and cut the right arm of the 11th captain and watched as the effect of the poison on the blade began to effect. the captain Dropped his sword and fell to his knee's defeated now that his only arm was numb and not working, he had no way of using his sword or his kido.

the hollow smiled as he began to run again then everything whent black and the hollow heard kutsu shout
" GET THE HELL OUT OF MY BODY YOU DAMNED HOLLOW!"
A hand shot up and ripped the mask off in one pull and Kutsu was in the control of his body again.

that day he was exiled as a freak and a murderer and a halfbreed. he left with out even a goodbye to begin his new life in the human world and to return to the city of his death, Karakura town.

The real world beginning:
Kutsu fell from the night sky in the human world to the ground making a milde impact not killing him but knocking him out when he awake he was in a room with a person he did not know the only thing he did now was that the man taking care of him was a soul reaper like him, A vaizard.
The training:

The everyday life of Kutsu Nisshaku the vaizard:




RP Sample:Kutsu watched as a group of high school students walked by him in the human world as he stood behind a tree holing a small pairing knife to his wrist. He sighed happily as the knife cut a small way into his skin and he could feel the blood , his blood run to the tip of his finger and drip down to the ground.

Kutsu lend up against the tree and let out a hot breath as he began to relax again then he heard the sound of a hollow roaring in the distance and he smiled
“Yes more battle … maybe even an arrancar.”
then Kutsu pulled a soul pill out of hit pocket and popped it in his mouth.

Kutsu was now running in soul form now readying his Zonpoktou in his hand.
“OK this time I’ll only cut it once the last one had a really nasty power.”
he said as he thought back to the hollow he fought the other day with the power to turn its blood in to whips from any cut on its body. Kutsu shook off the memory of the time he spent bandaging up his gigai before entering it.

Kutsu could now see the Hollow, a simple low level dog type. Kutsu unsheathed his sword and ran headlong at the hollow who was about to attack a small child’s soul.
“ Bye, bye hollow”
the hollow turned its head just in time to have it cut off at the neck. Kutsu felt the surge of emotion both happy and excited from the kill and the pain the hollow must have felt, but then he quickly turned his attentions to the soul.

Kutsu faced the child and smiled as he want down on one knee and said kindly
“ I’m sending you to a safe place ok?”
Making the question sound like a promise Kutsu then softly tapped the child on the head giving it a soul burial.

“gee thanks mister for saving me from that monster will I see you again?” asked the child politely. Kutsu’s smile faded for a moment as the memories of being thrown out of the soul society as a freak or a monstrous half bread of shinigami and hollow, but then smiled again and calmly said
“Nope but there will be lots of other nice and kind people there waiting for you.”
A small tear ran down Kutsu’s face but the child never noticed.

Even if this is a WIP, Im commenting. Please use the bold like is shown in the template.

Template like Kou said and seriously

read the template because it's no longer cute or funny it shiKAI KAI!!!!!! it means release now spell it right. to top that off your sword should be named Ketsueki Tsuki. Getsu is a suffixed Moon Tsuki is a freestanding moon

Also you can take the Pride Envy and Gluttony stuff out of your shikai. Seriously how much of this do you intend on ripping off? 7 deadly sins and a picture from bleach, AVP and OMG are you seriously summoning 3 vc level beings? oh hell no. See this stopped being funny and started being stupid. Take the sword out, you can't fix this, just take it out.

... ok i'll try to edit in any way i can and i'll redesign my shiKAI... somthing about pain...

also i don't understand what your saying about the template boling... i used the template directly.

i'll fix the things like the shikai and i need to know now is there any other problems

copy the template code

it's pasted there for a reason. Once again i am forced to ask, Do you READ?!?

i did i don't understand the problem thats what i did the code at the bottom of the template page right?

also i added in my Bankai and edited my Shikai.

tossed in some of my history and i'll finish the app tomorrow.

I just manualy bolded everything. that good.?

First off, the template is nod just bolding. Theres size and everything in there. If you actually copied the code like you said, which you didnt because I wrote the code, you would have gotten all that stuff in there.

Secondly, grammar. Enough said.

Third. ALL your stats can just be put in the one section. I dont need to see them after every bonus you get.

Strength: xx
Shikai:xx
Bankai: xx

Like that for all of them.

Now, for the rest of the application.

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Mask. You can use the special ability once. Your suicide technique is completely defeated if you can use it on multiple opponents seperately, as that would require you being in full health every time. Its a suicide technique. Yoou cant use it on 2 people seperately, like you described.

Itsutus getsu dansu (five moon dance)
Forms five separate copies of Kutsu all with the same powers and abilities as kutsu.
2 post (my posts) 5 post recharge(my post)

Hell the eff no. You are NOT summoning 5 copies at your current power, because that would be 5 Vaizard with mask, shikai, and bankai copies. Hell no. Remove that completely. If you try and edit it to keep that technique, your application will be denied. No questions asked.

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Shikai.

I SWEAR you dont read.

zon-pok-tou

IT SAYS RIGHT ABOVE THAT, IN ALL THE STUFF ZANPAKTOU. Seriously.

Blood wave
A wave like blade of blood is fired off the blade of the zon-pok-tou wit the same power as a swing of the blade but this blood is not poisonous.

So basically this is the power of a normal sword attack. Thats all, correct?

Ketueki-tsuki shines then blood with a neurotoxin that makes it so that the opponents motor skills deplete by one half (speed and Accuracy are cut in half) runs down the blade and drips off. if the opponent is stronger then Kutsu (higher rank or stats) then he has to either cut a stab them with the blade for the effect to work.

First. It doesnt matter what. You will need to make physical contact no matter what their rank if the poison coats the blade. Thats so common sense Im tempted to deny you Vaizard in its entirely.

Second. There is no way in hell a Shikai is going to be allowed to cut speed and DEXTERITY (read the freaking announcements and updates) in half on the first hit. Not happening.

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Bankai Information
(This only applies to high level Vizard Only. Unless we decide to make an acception, you'll probably be asked to remove untill later.)

Just remove it

editing done is the not usable yet good for now?

denied, Locked and archived. You cannot fix this it's too stupid/foolish to be worked with