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    Post by Taichou Fri Oct 15, 2010 7:41 pm

    Basic Information

    Name: Daisuke (waiting for four noble families)
    -Nickname: Phoenix Emperor
    Age: 693
    Gender: Male
    Division: 3rd Division
    Seat: Captain (waiting for permission)

    Looks: {WIP)

    Appeared Age: 16-17
    Hair Color: Black
    Eye Color: Clear White

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    {WIP}

    Alignment: Lawful Neutral

    Personality:

    The first aspect you notice about Daisuke is that he's silent, and calm in almost all kinds of situation. His interests only includes people who are not completely retards. Although, behind that calm mask is another him but a bit more short-tempered and hotheaded in various ways.

    Zanpakuto Information

    Zanpakuto Name: Fenikkusu [Phoenix]
    Zanpaktou Theme:
    -Flame themed-

    This zanpaktou is mostly based on flames and fire. With flames, he is able to burn surroundings to find hidden people, making it a complete manipulator of thieves & rogues who appear around.

    Unreleased Zanpaktou Appearance

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    Zanpakuto Release Phrase: "Himei, Fennikusu." ["Shriek, Phoenix"]

    Released Zanpakuto Looks:

    The released zanpaktou look will be equivalent to the unreleased form but a bit different feature of having a black strap on the hilt, with another red noticeable. The guard is completely black and the blade is crimson red resembling the color of blood. When, activating abilities, the blade will extinguish into flames itself, burning the top of the guard. The flames would be formed back together in the form of a blade when not using its abilities.

    During its release, the blade would have a glowing red aura around it - causing a huge shriek of a large eagle, almost hearable to anyone in a large diameter of 50 meters.

    Released Zanpaktou Abilities:

    The basic ability of this zanpaktou is the flame manipulation of the shikai. By manipulating fire, of course, it would mean that he can shoot out fireballs or flame waves from the zanpaktou in a form. One form of this manipulation will be machine-gun like barrage of fireballs shooting out in wide radius. Or, another one - would be a huge solid form of flame directing aiming for the enemy. The second ability would be an area effect. He is able to pinpoint a location can then cause an impaling fire to strike upward to the ground. When using its ability, the blade would keep shrieking.

    Zanpakuto Spirit:

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    The spirit takes a form of a burning pharoah - in the humanoid form of the flaming bird; Phoenix. His wings hang down from his arm and is able to fly at will. His head is almost unnoticeable due to the flame thats covering it, but the only thing you can see is the red eyes sticking out of the blames.

    His personality is quite laid-back and almost never listens to Daisuke. Being a former pharoah, he's awfully spoiled and only wants somebody to obey -him-. Sadly, Daisuke threatens him if he doesn't listens to him, having no choice but to obey his master.

    Zanpakuto Realm:

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    A beautiful place only filled with walkable waters and an illusion of a huge earth in the middle of it, completely composed with water. The spirit would be walking on the water with her companion, looking over the watery earth - always seen smiling.

    Kido:

    Cannon Hadou


    Spoiler:

    Custom Hadou


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    Cannon Bakudo


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    Custom Bakudo


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    Cannon Techniques


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    NPC - {WiP}
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    Post by Taichou Sat Oct 16, 2010 5:57 am

    Techniques Infomation


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    Post by Taichou Sat Oct 16, 2010 5:58 am

    History and RP Sample

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    Post by Taichou Sat Oct 16, 2010 12:56 pm

    Bump.

    This... is totally not my best work, as you can tell.. I have this feeling that there's something missing...
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    Post by FallenAngel Mon Oct 18, 2010 8:59 pm

    You can completely delete the bankai section. As for your unreleased zanpaktou appearance, it will be a katana of some kind. Your sword can then turn into the chakrams when it releases, if you wish.
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    Post by Taichou Tue Oct 19, 2010 10:44 am

    Alrighty, it's WiP too, so, feedback during edit is appreciated.
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    Post by FallenAngel Wed Oct 20, 2010 3:24 pm

    You could add more appearance, but it won't be mandatory.

    I would take off that last illusion ability. It doesn't go with lightning.

    Your kido have to stop at 59.

    And your Realm pic is broken.
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    Post by Taichou Wed Oct 20, 2010 4:20 pm

    Not really an illusion, it's like a flashing lightning. Razz
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    Post by FallenAngel Thu Oct 28, 2010 4:50 pm

    Your kido have to stop at 59.

    And your Realm pic is broken.
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    Post by Taichou Fri Oct 29, 2010 1:24 am

    I know! I'm keeping it on hold for now, I'll be working on it more soon.
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    Post by FallenAngel Fri Oct 29, 2010 1:48 pm

    Razz okie. I thought you forgot or something. Just bump when your done.
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    Post by Taichou Sat Dec 04, 2010 9:59 am

    FA! I've decided... something. Can you take me off of second division for now? (:

    Decided that I should fill up captain spots first... so I'm going for 3rd division captain with a whole different character.
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    Post by cjnovus Wed May 11, 2011 4:30 am

    His personality is quite laid-back and almost never listens to Daisuke. Being a former pharoah, he's awfully spoiled and only wants somebody to obey -him-. Sadly, Daisuke threatens him if he doesn't listens to him, having no choice but to obey his master.

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    Post by chenpangpang Tue May 31, 2011 2:59 am


    During its release, the blade would have a glowing red aura around it - causing a huge shriek of a large eagle, almost hearable to anyone in a large diameter of 50 meters.
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