Shuurajou [4th Division 5th seat]

Basic Information

Name: shuurajou

Age: actual: 1755
appeared age: 17

Gender:male

Division: 4

Seat: 5th seat

Looks: shuura stands at 6'7" tall, and he normally has a guitar on his back. he wears an all black leathe trench coat over tight black jeans and shirt. he always has chains hanging off his coat and a gold snake bite lip rings. his eyes are pure white, and his hair is long and black. it runs over his guitar and halfway down his back.

Personality: shuura acts completely heartless. he enjoys watching people fight, and even more fighting and killing his enemies himself. he loves watchign other bleed out on the ground, and takes enjoyment out of suffering. hes like a parasite, feeding off misery and watching people come to realize they are going to die. he drags out each fight, taking it easy, but keeping it going to let them suffer. than torchers them before killing them.

other than the way he acts in fights he loves his music. most of the day he spends practicing. he used to be a big flirt. but because of rising issues he has taken control and has learned to flirt less. now he is relaxed and not as flirty anymore.

Stats

Strength: 10

Speed: 30

Accuracy: 5

Stamina: 10

Zanpakuto Information

Zanpakuto Name: les paul

Zanpakuto Looks:

Zanpakuto Description: can be played like a guitar, the strings never break. the sword goes from razor sharp, to dull whenever shuura tries to play it. and the music can be used as a weapon, as the force of the sound forms blasts of energy that strike the enemy

Released Zanpakuto Description: the harder shuura plays the more powerful and stronger the waves and blasts of energy. the blasts average strength is about the power as getting tackled, its enough to knock you off balance. another sword forms in the air and floats around shuura as he plays. along with that he can summon clones of himself with powerful katanas and other weapons. the weapons are randomized when summon. those that can be summon include maces, katanas, long and short swords, spears, and small guns. this process tires shurra out if used for an extended period of time. the closes have the ability of an average human, but have the knowledge to work togetehr ageanst a strong foe.

Zanpakuto Release Phrase: rise, deathbringer

Released Zanpakuto Looks:

(sword that forms)


Zanpakuto Spirit: the zanpaktous spirit is the god of guitars, steve vai and his triple neck guitar


Zanpakuto Realm: fire and lightning demension.


Bankai Information
(This applies to captains, and advanced lieutenants only)

Bankai Description: (what happens when you use your bankai, and what abilities go with it)

Bankai Looks: (what your Zanpakuto looks like in Bankai state.)

Alterations: (What changes on your looks when Bankai is used, may not apply)

Kido Information

Name: rise of the Damned

Type: Hadou-Destruction

Number: 60

Element: lightning

Incantation: pillers of death, rise gods!

Description: the 8 pillers of gods rises from the ground around a 20 meter radius around the enemy. the pillers are large and create a wall around the opponant. the walls become electrofied creating a electrical feild that cant be jumped out of. at the 8th stage the gates of hell open and devour the enemy. this is unavoidable.

guitarests and their abilities

Jimi Hendrix- when he begins to play the ground around inside the octagon becomes slightly electrified. making lightning from the walls strike the ground. if the lightning gets within vacinity of the enemy it jumps to them and starts breaking some of their nerves. this stage begins immediately when the kido is started. the lightning is not acurate. it jumps randomly in differant places so it can cause confusion to the enemy.


Jack White- stage 2 starts 5 posts after stage 1- of this kido starts turning the ground to quicksand slowly. slowing down the enemy which makes them capable of getting struck more often by the weak lightning. he plays slower music, that will turn any surface to quicksand

Jimmy Page- this stage starts 10 posts after stage 2- he begins playing as the quicksand is reaching about halfway. the center begins spinning slowly, making a semi whirlpool and making quicksand start from the middle. the lightning from the walls speed up slightly and becomes slightly weaker. making nerves get damaged slower and in smaller diameters. the nerve damage will numb them for about a minute with each strike.

B.B. King- starts 2 posts after stage 3- he sits on the edge of the piller and plays his soft lyrical music. as he plays spikes form out of the piller walls closing the enemy in another two feet. they are spaces only a couple inchs apart and are dull. they are spaced apart only a couple of inches and are two feet in. these spakes stay on the wall for the duration of the kido.

David Gilmour- starts 3 posts after stage 4- when he begins to play the spikes become razor sharp. they also grow sharp ridges around it that will rip through flesh if you grab it.

steve vai- begins 10 posts after stage 5 steve vai begins to play on the 6th piller and the lightning power boosts by about a factor of 5. this makes the lightning more wild and slower. it becomes less acurate, making it have a 5% chance of striking. one hit will be enough to shut down the nervous system in an arm of leg. the nerves will be shut down for a single post.

Synyster Gates-takes 10 posts to reach stage 7 after stage 6- as he plays the quicksand moves faster. causing them to sink faster and go towards the middle vortex faster. escaping now becomes harsher and extremely difficult. the spikes retract and become only six inches long in length. it begins to fog inside the pillers and becomes harder to see

stage 8- Shuurajou- takes 20 posts after stage 7- shuurajou appears on top of the pillar slowly. around him is his released zanpaktou. he plays slowly, as he does the fog becomes like a tornado with no effect on the wind. what feels like a sonic boom erupts from under the quicksand and forces the enemy into the air. slowly a red glow forms underneith the sand and opens up. the ground falls into the pit and a red glowing vortex can be seen. the opponant now floats in the very middle, spinning slowly with the tornado. a gaint red hand comes out of the vortex slowly, grabbing the top of the piller and pulling. his large head comes out and his mouth opens, coming up and devouring the enemy slowly. after this is finished he falls back into the hole, cloing after him. and the pillars vanish. the vortex to hell consumes the entire area of the ground inside the pillers.

the damaged caused to the enemy during the duration of this kido will base upon skills in dodging the lightning, staying away from the spikes, and not getting caught in the quicksand. the kido to complete all 8 stages will result in an unavoidable death. but this rarely leaves the first couple of stages.

** NOTE!!! stage 8 is unavoidable. the power increases to 100 at stage 8. THE DRAW BACK IS THAT IT TAKES 20 POSTS TO REACH THIS STAGE. process for the 8th stage will take 2 posts in itself to finigh

History and RP Sample

History: shuura lived a normal life, until he got beheaded when he was 13 for theft. he went to the soul society with such a high potential. he played the guitar constantly for a long time. becoming a master quickly. after about 100 years the soul reapers found him and noticed his high spiritual energy. so he entered the acadamy.

when he got his zanpaktou it was unusually differant when he held it. it changed, gained a differant shape, the shape of a guitar never seen before in the time. when he played it, it didnt even need an amp to be heard like it was plugged in. it handled like a regular sword and the strings never broke. in a few years he graduated and became a soul reaper.

he got assigned as the 5th seat of the 4th devision. although he didnt use medial ailities he was amoung the strongest members of the devision. he decided to increase his strength and eventually become captain. no matter what the cost.

RP sample: (a small sample from areal)
shuura walked down the beach calmly. his 6 tails glowed in the sun. and a pure black fox with 6 tails followed close by. shuura felt the presence of a jounin nearby, and he approached thechakra. by the smell shuura knew the main element was water. which meant he had the advantege if gotten into a fight.

he wore his black trench coat, with the mizukage emblem on its arm, and back. his long white hair soft as ever, and his eyes as black as the void. he wore leather gloves with the fingers removed, and tight black pants. on his back he had his tsurugi buster sword. each of its 6 parts in its individual holder. the foxs black fur glowed, and its eyes were white. hopping between the two, were bolts of black and white lightning. connecting their power. shuura could see the shinobi coming.

she had the appearence of a young girl. brown hair, pink top. she was learly not from kirigakure. he noticed her headband, with the sand emblem. "hmm a sand ninja. shes a bit out of place" shuura thought calmly. knowing a fight would be approaching. so he called out to her. "you there, sand scum. stand up and keep your hand at your sides" his voice mixed with half the voice of raijuu, and half of his own. but he planned to keep her in the dark about his bijuu

11th division VC is NOT open. We told you that. Secondly, I dont care if this is WIP or not. Personality needs to be longer, along with your entire Zanpaktou description. Thirdly. If you are going to have a guitar, you are going into the 4th division as the VC.

{bump}

Add a kido or two.

We still need History, At least two paragraphs

And a link to an old post will do for sample.

mini nukes.

IS IT ME OR DOES THIS NOT SIT RIGHT????

I think that needs to be deleted maybe grenades and not nukes... hahaha

{BUMP}

Approved.

Division: 5

Seat: 3erd seat

rose through the ranks and beacame 5th devisions captain.

Yeah, those don't go together.

Unapproved for multiple reasons.

A). Did not talk to me about this squad. 5th div captain is unavailable for reasons I deem that you dont need to know.

B). Your stats are wrong for a Captain.

C). As a Captain, you should have Bankai.

Also, as a captain of the 5th Squad. You'll need exceptionally many kidos that are right for it. 5th Squad Captain is also the Commander of the Kido Corps.

EDITED AND BUMP!!

the harder shuura plays the more powerful and stronger the waves and blasts of energy. another sword forms in the air and floats around shuura as he plays. along with that he can summon clones of himself with powerful katanas and other weapons. the weapons are randomized when summon. those that can be summoninclude maces, katanas, long and short swords, spears, and small guns. this process tires shurra out if used for an extended period of time.

Give us the idea of how strong those blast are

And strong are these clones compared to the your guy’s strength? How many can you summon and how long are you tired?

Since your only a 5th seat your only allowed to have kido number 40 and below so take all above 40 out, and not just change the number as in the actually skill itself

Jimi Hendrix- when he begins to play the ground around inside the octagon becomes slightly electrified. making lightning from the walls strike the ground. if the lightning gets within vacinity of the enemy it jumps to them and starts breaking some of their nerves

Nerve damage >.> not to mention nearly unavoidable with the lightning jumping right at them and what is this octagon you talk about?

Jack White- stage 2 of this kido starts turning the ground to quicksand slowly. slowing down the enemy which makes them capable of getting struck more often by the weak lightning. he plays slower music, that will turn any surface to quicksand

How large is this area?

Jimmy Page- he begins plays as the quicksand is reaching about halfway. the center begins spinning slowly, making a semi whirlpool and making quicksand start from the middle. the lightning from the walls speed up slightly andbecomes slightly weaker. making nerves get damaged slower and in smaller diameters,

Again with the never damage >.>

B.B. King- he sits on the edge of the piller and plays his soft lyrical music. as he plays spikes form out of the piller walls closing the enemy in another two feet. they are spaces only a couple inchs apart and are dull.

How strong,tall and thick are these pillars and how many do you call out? And this will require a post cool down to use

steve vai- steve vai begins to play on the 6th piller and the lightning power boosts by about a factor of 5. this makes the lightning more wild and slower. it becomes less acurate, making it have a 5% chance of striking. one hit will be enough to shut down the nervous system in an arm of leg.

You mean 5 times stronger >.> and how long would they be shut down the limbs?

stage 8- Shuurajou- shuurajou appears on top of the pillar slowly. around him is his released zanpaktou. he plays slowly, as he does the fog becomes like a tornado with no effect on the wind. what feels like a sonic boom erupts from under the quicksand and forces the enemy into the air. slowly a red glow forms underneith the sand and opens up. the ground falls into the pit and a red glowing vortex can be seen. the opponant now floats in the very middle, spinning slowly with the tornado. a gaint red hand comes out of the vortex slowly, grabbing the top of the piller and pulling. his large head comes out and his mouth opens, coming up and devouring the enemy slowly. after this is finished he falls back into the hole, cloing after him. and the pillars vanish.

** NOTE!!! stage 8 is unavoidable. the power increases to 100 at stage 8. THE DRAW BACK IS THAT IT TAKES 20 POSTS TO REACH THIS STAGE.

How large is the twisted? And how much damage would all this cause the targets caught in this long enough to feel the final stage?

Further take out the is unavoidable.” the power increases to 100 at stage 8”. As it does not matter how long it takes or what it was meant to do, putting anything like that is a godmod and auto hit

also how many posts does it take to reach each of the other stages? aside from the last one?

edited... and stage 8 is undodgeable because its the kidos ability. plus it takes so long to get there and because at least one person me, or the enemy, will be dead or have given up beforehand

Before Aki says it, your history gotta be seperated into arcs and much longer.

This is just an opinion, but I honestly doubt Fifth Seats should even get Shikai. There hasn't been a time when you've ever seen a Fifth Seat-level Shinigami release his Zanpakuto, but again; just an opinion/suggestion.

Also, I'm pretty sure an undodgeable move is against the rules, regardless of how slow it is.

Actually, Hanatarou Yamada of the Fourth Division is Seventh seat and he knows how to unleash his Shikai so I dont see a problem with Fifth seats having it.

Also, unreleased Zanpaktous cannot have any special abilities that are different from that of a regular sword and with an accuracy as low as yours, I'm pretty sure that you can't have anything anywhere near undodgable.