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Aoiharu Yuei [Advanced Human]

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Post by Aoiharu Sat Aug 01, 2009 6:50 pm

Basic Information

Name: (Your characters name) Aoi Yuei

Age: (Characters age)15

Gender: (Male or Female)Female

Grade: (If you're a student, please put your grade.) 9th

Looks: (What your character looks like.)*see avi*

Rank: (There are three ranks of human to choose from. Non special, which means just your normal everyday human. Special, having some kind of special ability, and Advanced Human, being the strongest of humans.) Advanced Human

Human Special Ability Information

Name: (The name of your Special Ability) can see dead souls

Description: (The description of your Special ability. Strengths, weaknesses etc)Special- The " Sight "
Strengths- Knownleadge/Smarts/Cleverness
Weakness- Phyiscal activity/ fighting

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Techniques Infomation

Name: (Name of your tech) Chi Fingers

Description: (What your tech is, and what it does) A spritual-like energy ingulfs her hands with a blue-sliver glow. When it comes into contact with something, it will cause the other item to have an extreme burn on it. Could cause it to catch on fire, too. This can only effect Sprits.(ex. If she dogdes an attack from on, and her hand brushes on the spirts "skin", it can cause intense burns. )

Stats
(Depending on your rank, please distribute the amount of stats that you receive within the four options)

Strength:
13

Speed: 15

Accuracy: 15

Stamina: 8

History and RP Sample

History: Born in a small town, Aoi Yuei was normal. Never got into too much trouble and always stayed on the right side of things. When she hit eight years of age, she met Akria. While Aoi was a happy-go-lucky kind of person, Akria was a more dark and senstive person. Together, the duo made themselves more attached than superglue on sandpaper. ( xD lol ) Growing up, Akria's life at home became more and more complicated. As a result, Akria started to talk to ''decesased spirts'' as she put it. To Aoi, it was just a cry for attention from people... Aoi wanted to help her firend mental health, but couldn't find a way to.

When they both were in the 7th grade, both Akria's mother and father were killed from a supposed break in. Akria and Aoi were at her home at the time. While upstairs her mother, Akira's father started yelling for help. Pushing them into the closet, the Mother of the home ran downstairs. Screams and yells echoed in Aoi's ears to this day. After all went quiet, they slowly came out of the room.

Arrving down stairs, their young eyes lay onto a scene of senseless, burtal, bloodly murder. Police let it go as a break in gone bad.

A year later, Aoi's best friend died herself. Akria killed herself on the top of the school building with a knife in her stomach. A note lay beside her body.. saying the spirts told her to do it.

Unfortunately for Aoi, this wasn't the end of a spritual like person. A week later, on her way to Akria's funeral, she saw her first spirt. Akira's spirt, consumed by an evil preasance, appared before her on the street. Scared to death, Sasoko ran away.

After that, Aoi could see spirts everywhere. Slowly, she started to learn about hollows, sprits, etc etc. On her own, she tries to stay away from fights between people, but if called for, she will fight.

RP Sample: (An example of how you RP) Standing on the corner of the street, Aoiharu's eyes were blurred by memories of Akira. Remembering her laughs and her sobs of a week before; it all seemed like a dream. But it wasn't. Now, Aoi stood, dressed in black, awaiting in the rain for her ride. Gripping her umbrella tighter, she bit her tears back as her shoulders shook lightly.

' Why... Akira-chan... why did you kill yourself..?' Blinking back tears, she looked up to the sky. Grey and black clouds lined the skies as she stood silently. Aoi sighed. It was a gloomly day. A day perfect for a funeral. Looking to her left, she blinked again.

Dropping her umbrella, Aoi's eyes widened as her mouth formed a gasp. Rain beated down on her lightly, wetting down her long-ish hair.

Next to a light pole, about fifty yards down, stood Akira.. but something wasn't right. Akria stood, in her school uniform. A sailor like shirt and a pelted skirt. Blood stained the usually white and navy blue shirt, a knife logded in her stomach. Akria slowly moved her head, looking towards Aoiharu.

Gasping, Aoi took a hesitant step towards Akria. " A-akria...?" Sasoko breathed out, " I-it can't be... Y-your..Your dead.. " Akria's mouth curved up into a wide, crazy grin.

Stepping back, Aoi gasped again; falling down, landing on the side walk.

" Whats wrong...? Aoiharu-chan?" Akria turned fully towards Aoi, eyes wide and mouth grinning. 'Thats not Akria-chans voice!' Aoiharu thought, as she scrambled to get up.

"G-get away!" Aoi yelled as she ran away from her seeming-ly demonic dead friend. Water splashed on her legs as she ran, breath short and fast.


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Post by Elroy Sun Aug 02, 2009 12:44 pm

I know your not done, but I don't think there is enough history, RP sample is around 400 words, etc.

Other then the fact that the History is short. Its pretty good Very Happy
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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu Sun Aug 02, 2009 12:57 pm

For advanced human... rp bout 400 words, yes.

History should be about the same.
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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu Sun Aug 02, 2009 3:53 pm

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