Konjia Hionru [Vizard WiP]

Basic Information

Name: Konjia Hionru

Age: 1014 - Looks 22

Gender: Male

Division: Rouge Vaizard

Seat: N/A

Looks:

Personality:

Stats

Strength: 20
-Mask: 20

Speed: 15
-Mask: 20

Accuracy: 30
-Mask: 40

Stamina: 15
-Mask: 20

Mask Information

Name: Ryuuka

Manifestation:

Unique Ability: Ryuuka gives Konjia the ability to freely manipulate the fire surrounding the blaze, which increases in density and darkens in color, becoming black fire. Black fire burns hotter than all the other fires, and can not be put out by convential methods, ie. water, sand, dirt. This fire can be manipulated up to 30 yards away. It can be manipulated much like Byakuya's Bankai.

Hollow Mask Appearance:

(Just a little note, the black stuff around the outside is the black fire aura)

Duration: 6 posts, 4 post cool down.

Zanpakuto Information

Zanpakuto Name: Dragon Wing

Zanpakuto Looks: Standard Katana

Zanpakuto Description: The Zanpaktou is a tall, sharp figure, sprouting from every direction it can. It's sheathe is custom made to fit, and it's element/elemental affinity is Fire. The bubbles on the top indicate how much power the fire has. When blue, it means there is none/minimal power, when red, there is a good amount of power, when black, it is at full power.

Released Zanpakuto Description: A column of fire erupts from the sword, swirling around the blade. Konjia can use the fire around the blade to send streams of fire up to 10 yards away. The fire will stay on the blade and causes major burns if struck during a melee attack.

Zanpakuto Release Phrase: "Burn thy enemies, Dragon's Wing."

Zanpaktou Spirit:

Released Zanpaktou Looks

Zanpakuto Realm:

Bankai Information

Bankai Description: Konjia's Zanpaktou disappears during Bankai in a larger burst of fire. A bubble of fire surrounds him, along with a thin sheet right alone his body. Streams of fire can be manipulated at will from the large bubble, and can extend to 20 yards. This is manipulated much like Byakuya's Bankai.

Bankai Looks: Konjia's Zanpaktou disappears during Bankai.

Alterations: A thin sheet of fire, almost cloth like, surrounds Konjia. This sheet of fire protects him for weak hollows, and kidos below level 15. It also provides a nasty burn to anyone who touches him while active.

Kido Information


Bakudo Kidou's

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Hadou Kidou's

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History and RP sample

History: Human Arc - Words: 1,059
Konjia Hionru, born on the 16/8/995, was a human with unparalleled senses. Of course, nobody noticed this but himself, and maybe the very few people that noticed him talking to himself. He was one of, if not, the first of many people to be born from normal people, but with an extra sense. He could see ghosts, ghosts of people that had died, but not passed on. He didn’t know what to do, until a monster attacked.

He had no idea of what the monster was. No clue. It was a huge monster with a mask that looked almost subnormal. Of course, he had no choice to do but run. And that was exactly what he did, for the first few seconds at least. A beautiful, black butterfly fluttered past his eyes, and within a blink, there was a person, who once again, looked different. He didn’t know what he was doing, there was a monster that was ready to kill him standing right in front of him, but he stood there in awe. Not once had he seen anything, or anyone, do something like that. The monster disappeared into a whole bunch of blood and guts, but no one seemed to notice it. Well... Then there were the people that looked around to see nothing but huge chunks out of buildings.

Just as the person, if that’s what it was, was about to jump away, he stopped it. “Um... Excuse me, but, how did you just do that?!” He looked, and as the thing looked back it him, struck by something, she replied scared. “You-You can see me? You’re not dead, right?” He looked to her, confused. “Do I LOOK dead to you?” He replied, still confused. She struggled to get him to release his wrist from her ankle, and then she went off.

Konjia walked home quietly, almost lost by what just happened. He was scared to death now, and all he wanted was to be like them. He was 16 at the time the first attack happened, and kept reflecting on what she said. The words ‘Your not dead, right?’ kept replaying in his head, and he had no idea what she meant by it. Then, there was a big rumble outside, and a crash. It sounded like a car crash, so he jumped up and went to go outside, but when he opened his door; his eyes went almost like they popped out of his eyes.

Half his house was gone. Actually, three quarters of it was gone. He fell backwards, and crawled back up to the door, and as he looked up, there was an enormous monster, again. Then, the person was back. No butterfly was able to be seen, but he saw it, and it saw him. It eyed him, and when it turned around, unsheathed an enormously large blade and sliced it, straight through its neck.

As the monster screamed and roared in pain, the ‘thing’ landed with a light tap on the floor. The monster dipped down and picked it up, throwing it against the wall. Konjia acted from instinct next, and took large, paced steps (after standing up) towards the whole. As he jumped hard, he landed on the monsters mask, climbing up on top of it. And with a punch in the neck, the monster felt as though it had been bitten by a flea, and Konjia felt like he’d just broken his hand. The monster reached over and grabbed him, launching him into the pillar next to the ‘thing’.

Konjia began drifting off. His eyes shut with a slight tap, and his soul came out. He looked toward his body, which lay there, inanimate, not even breathing. A little tear escaped, and he ran to the ‘thing’. Its eyes opened, and quickly, Konjia was pushed out of the way, and the thing jumped and screamed. "Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!"

And what happened next, Konjia barely got. The thing’s finger went bright, bright red, looked like red fire from magma, and then, the monster had disappeared. Konjia took the little assumption that it was dead, and the thing came over to him.

It spoke calmly to him, as he kept trying to push himself away. He was scared. His family was no where to be seen. He was dead. And the only thing near him that could speak was something that wielded a blade big enough to slice the Eiffel Tower.

“I won’t hurt you… Stay still, please. I am a Shinigami, from the world called the Soul Society. I am going to send you there, so you don’t get turned into one of them, or worse, eaten by one of them. Oh, and by the way, I am a girl.”

And with that, she unsheathed her blade again, this time holding the blunt edge and a small portion of the padding part. Konjia stared at the sign that said Transport in Japanese, and in a few moments, she stamped his forehead, and he was headed for the Soul Society.

He felt as though he could, and should, chuck up. The journey felt like a spiral of different colours. They started with blue, then red, followed by orange. After that was green, then a mixture of all primary, secondary and all other types of colours. It was like a giant rollercoaster, and it felt as though it went on for hours. All he could do was try and get used to the feeling of going around and around and around in circles, feeling like he was going nowhere and trying to find nothing in something.

He jumped when it felt like there we bumps, like it was a rocky road. It scared him slightly, he had no idea where he was going, and no idea if he was going to arrive there and be eaten by a monster, or if the Shinigami was a fake and sent him into a different place. She looked genuine. And as he looked, peered down a small passage way, he saw a white light. It got bigger as it came closer, and he jumped up quickly, and went into the light.

Arriving & Leaving – Shinigami Arc

Konjia landed flatly on the floor, but toppled over from pressure. His eyes went round and bug-eyed from what he saw. Lots and lots and lots of houses. People with blades kept going in and out of different portals, and people without blades were coming and going in and out of houses, which had numbers painted vividly on them. He sighed, and walked where there was a small line of people in from of a tall, tall building. It had a huge sign saying ‘Shinigami Recruitment’. He walked up to where everyone was, and asked what this was for. One of the people just replied flatly “This is to become a Shinigami Recruit. Eventually, you’ll be a seated officer and maybe a good rank in the future… if you’re lucky” He stood in line, and waited. It was a monstrous wait, but after a long period of time, he was at the front. Next, they called him in, and just from the look, he was in. He was handed a small Katana and Shinigami Clothes. He left for the training ground, where everyone else was going. Once he got there, he met Miniza Uriha, the ‘Captain of the 12th Division’ at that time. He, and all the others, looked upon him with awe. His was tall, brown hair, carried a huge, black blade and the sheath was, alas, incredibly big.

He went through the training quickly, before the captain pulled him out to talk. After a long talk, Konjia came out a seated officer of the twelfth division. He kept going up, through luck and through battling to get to Lieutenant, where he unlocked his Bankai. His blade, along the way, had grown. It started as a small Katana, and was, and still is, a Sharp, Maxed-Out-to-all-sides blade. It stood tall, and during Konjia’s first time unlocking his Bankai, he met his Zanpaktou’s Spirit. To his huge surprise, it was an incredibly large Dragon. And it could talk. Through that, the spirit guided him up to battling the captain in frenzy for the lead.

Although it was a masterly played battle by Konjia, he came though with a loss, and stayed at Lieutenant.

One day, there was a major Hollow attack, and Konjia went to go deal with it as always. He left, but the Hollow that was attacking the city was not alone, he really figured this out the hard way.

The first Hollow to come was a Menos Grande, then followed 2 others. He knew he needed backup, but the steps of the Menos Grande sent a shockwave that rippled through the ground, and came and attacked him, for he had the biggest Spiritual Power in the area where they were. He ran backwards, but it wasn’t good enough. With a big scoop, the Menos Grande came up, and ate him, turning him into a half-hollow. He was left with a mask, and kept his body of the soul reaper, but from the way he looked, he wasn’t going back to the soul society, for he would be killed. He ran, far away from the hollows, knowing someone was going to come to kill them, probably 3-4 Captains.

He knew that they’d find the Shinigami Robes he left behind, and assume he was dead, but for now, he kept running out to the desert. He knew he had to get this mask off, or he was toast.

He came across a little ruin area, and walked in, but heard little chatters of people. He walked cleanly in, and asked of them a favor, to get rid of this mask that has haunted his vision and brain for a while now.

They thought about it for about half an hour after telling him to wait outside, and don’t give up to the hollow. Then they signaled him to come in, and as soon as he stood up, he fell over with a large thud, but quickly got back up.

After coming inside, he waited for they’re decision. They told him that they were going to teach him, train him in some way, but he had to agree. Of course, he did, and then the leader jumped down, and used a little Kido to knock him clean out.

Vaizard Arc – Time skipped

Well, he’s a new Vaizard, so we’ll have to do this one day once we’re getting into it.

RP Sample: - Words -: 684 (I can post better, but that was one I always use. Found on Naruto RPG Reborn (narutor.forumotion.com))

Minoichi himself had no idea what was happening. It was an early day, he had just woken up. He saw fit to wear black today, it was unearthly color. Covering his depressing thoughts, they lifted to see clouds of gray. Rain. Blood. Blood was instantly filling his mind at this time, and he knew not of why. Maybe his brother Inaraka had cut his hand when making the homemade meals, he didn't know.

Minoichi was no perfect person, infact, more far from it than usual. Although death was hard to him, it was nothing that really inflicted on his body... Not did he know, though, that his girlfriend was sitting by a puddle, sobbing over the death of a family member. He never knew what she was doing there, and, to tell the truth, he didn't even know she was there. This day was just like a telepathic dream to him, and it felt like hell.

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3 Years Before.
Grief. Pain. Sorrow. Tranquility and Death.
This story of life to Minoichi is but a dream, and not a nightmare.
This story of how Minoichi's family died is a deathly story.

His mother lay there, dead on the floor. Tears streaming from his eyes like party blowers. In his apartment, he looked to his father. Saddened, he saw the tears on his face. This happened at 3AM in the morning, so his father ordered him back to bed immediately. He did as he was told, but only after an hour of sinful crying and disorderly death. He hugged his mother the final goodnight he could give her, then his father. He knew not that this was the last time he hugged his father also.

8AM in the morning, Minoichi woke up to blood leaking through the door. He shrieked, panicked, and then opened the door. His mother was gone, taken by the ambulance. His father laid there still. He whispered to himself. "Papa...?" He knew he was dead. The silence of the wind swayed at him. He screamed into the wind. "Papaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" He screamed and dropped on the floor, hugging him and wishing he was still there. He looked at his wrists, cut, neck, cut, forehead, bullet hole. He cried for 3 hours, until finally, he ran out of tears. His way of venting was crying, he then called the ambulance. They picked his father up and gave Minoichi a prognosis, "He committed suicide" He said as the 9 year old Minoichi dropped once again to the floor. He was a genin none-the-less, which meant he could stick up for himself. The Kage gave him no where to stay, and almost cried during the saying that Minoichi had 2 days to find a place to live, or else, he was kicked out of the village.

2 Days passed and no one wanted to adopt him into their house. Not family, their house, doesn't sound hard, right? He eventually got to the village gate, meeting nothing but his uncle, Saruno, and the wind. 6 Days later, he was living happily in the abandoned home his S Rank Uncle left in the top left corner of Konohagakure.
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Minoichi replayed those moments of shear displeasure. His wanderings set off to the temple of a god, puddle nearby. Kimiko sit there, driftly sobbing and crying over the loss of her mother. Minoichi walked up, sat down, and hugged her into his chest. "We'll... We'll be alright.. Kimiko" He began crying, sharing her pain with his and keeping his pain to himself, not to make her cry further.

The only thing that kept Minoichi going from committing suicide to see his mother and father, was this girl and Saruno. This girl, Kimiko, reminded him so much of his far off distant mother, and that was his depressing thought. It was clearly lifted as he smiled with tears. "Mother... You sent down my angel... My dear life is in this girl now... Kimiko is your way of saying... Your still there... Thank You... Mother" Swaying in the breeze, he kissed Kimiko on the forehead and hugged her tightly.
[[Post was too big, so posted this now. >.<]]

I've sent Sith 3 PM's, seeing as he's supposebly the 'only' one allowed to approve it.

So.. What do I do? He's not responding and acting like i'm ignored.

Ima approving. Sith has dropped the ball