Vaizard raiden (Done)

Basic Information

Name: Raiden Ronin

Age: He appears to be 15, but he is really 300

Gender: Male

Division: Vaizard

Seat: Vaizard recruit

Looks:


His eyes are green, and they are said to be the most beautiful eyes in the soul society. His skin is fair. He usually wears some pants, and a t shirt with a black unzipped jacket. He wears a alteration of boots and shoes. He has black hair, but oddly when he activates shikai his hair becomes silver. His skin has no blimishes, and he is about 5'9.

Personality:
His personality is really random at times. He can be annoying at times. He always ask questions and sometimes doesn't know his place. He acts like a rebel infront of everyone accept the Captains. When any Captain is around, he acts very respectful. He knows his place at the time of a Captains presense. He is really never fond to fighting unless if someone weaker than him thinks he is stronger. He likes to get stronger and stronger. He loves to show off, and in front of a enemy can show no emotion. He usually shows a frown or serious state, and has this dead set look in his eyes. He never talks about his path, unless its a cute girl, or a worthy adversary.

Stats

Strength: 10
shikai: 12
Bankai:17
Mask: 18
Speed: 27
shikai:30
Bankai:30
Mask: 36
Dexterity: 13
Shikai:13
Bankai:18
Mask: 18
Stamina: 25
shikai: 30
Bankai:35
Mask: 39

Mask Information

Name: Yami

Manifestation:


With every yin there should be a yang. Well inside Raiden with a Yang comes more Yang. The Hollow's name is chaos and he is formally callaed the black magician. He has long black hair, and his skin is blue. He looks more humanoid than Exodia.

Unique Ability:
Division: This ability works when the the hollow mask is present. If Raiden gets cut in half or anything of that sort. The two halfs can simply divide into two whole new figures. Raiden can also divide at his own will if he wants. Dividing basically makes a entire new Raiden with the same abilities, but it does what the real Raiden wants it to do. Raiden can only divide three times in one post. The clones of himself can not divide. Every time Raiden divides his speed as well as the clone's multiplies by two, and his strength is divided by 2. To regain his split strength he has to remerge with the clone, but if he does his speed goes back to normal as well. After the mask goes away the clones will immediately return to Raiden without will. Dead clones can remerge with him. The stamina they all use is also deducted when being remerged.

Hollow Mask Appearance:


Duration: It can stay on for 9 post, and it takes 4 post for a recharge

Zanpakuto Information

Zanpakuto Name: Exodia

Zanpakuto Looks:



Zanpakuto Description:
Its just a normal unreleased sword

Released Zanpakuto Description:
the Zanpaktou has 5 chains at its handle. This chains get a different element. One chain can catch on fire, the other one can freeze others on contact. The third one can blow high winds, and the last one can cause semi earthquakes by hitting the ground with it. Also oine more sends a a electric current through it The chains can extend out at will.

Zanpakuto Release Phrase: Rip off your chains Exodia

Released Zanpakuto Looks:
It is colored as the spirit is. There are 5 chains on the handle, and its a long sword, and it gets longer, and a little bigger. It still looks like a average sword.

Zanpakuto Spirit:

This Zanpaktou is strange for it has changed over the years. As a subsitute shinigami Raiden held this sword. It changed since he weild it again. His zanpaktou also acts as another person. Sometimes trying to interfere with fights. Sometimes the spirit if in Bankai will try to put Raiden in his realm, and let him take control. Raiden has to show no weakness for Exodia to except him. Exodia is considered a divine creature, and was sealed in that Zanpaktou. He then became a Zanpaktou.
Zanpakuto Realm:

Inside this realm is a huge room. It is very dark, but there are lights at the top of room to see. There is a huge cell, and from it flows immense spiritual energy. There is a huge lock on the gate, and there are chains leading from the cell out of the cage towards the wall. They are huge. From the entrance you see big red eyes, and a synical grin.

Bankai Information

Bankai Description:
It is a shiny, beautiful blade. It could be used as a mirror. Raiden just holds his sword, and the chains break off of the handle and begin to incinerate. The dissapear before hitting the ground. Then from the ground 5 titans rise up. These titans are represented as each chain that fell off. Each titan has control of a element. One has control over the powers of wind, and is in the form of a tornado. One has control of ice, the creature is made out of ice. One has control over lightning. His body is shaped like a lightning beam, and it\'s arms and legs as well. One has control over earth substances. It is shaped like a boulder and looks like one. The last one controls fire. He is made out of a blue fire. The wind controling one can blow high winds, and suck up things in it's tornado form. The ice one can freeze things on contact or by shooting a ice beam at something. The lightning one can throw lightning bolts and send electric currents through things that conduct electricity. The earth controling one can cause semi earthquakes, and make small peices of earth rise up to wherever he commands. The fire one burns things on contact or by throwing fire balls or blowing fire. ((Fire weak against water. Ice weak against fire. Wind weak against fire. Earth weak against lightning. Lightning weak against wind.))

Bankai Looks: It looks like its shikai. Also gold armor that is light weight appears on him. It has a glossy color that appears to look like a mirror.



Alterations:

Ignore the man in the armor, Raiden only wears the armor. The armor is golden instead of this purple. This picture is not what the armor really looks like. It is just a picture that helps you imagine how it looks a little.




History:

Human

Raiden was born as a human. He lived happily with his mother, father, and sister. His family was somewhat abnormal. They had huge amounts of spiritual energy. One day his father’s body was found with no sign of death. His father died and went to the soul society. Later he became a Shinigami and a captain. One day a disturbance in the real world was detected. A Espada was detected. Raiden’s father was ordered to go stop the Espada. He quickly came to stop the unknown Espada. Raiden was just about to get eaten by the Espada. Then the captain came to the rescue to destroy the Espada. For some odd reason it wasn’t a Espada, but a Vizor who loss it self to its hollow form. He was going berserk, and his spiritual pressure was off the scale. Raiden was helpless. His father fought and finally defeated the berserk Vizor. Raiden’s father started to die as well. His final wish was for his family to be protected. So as his father evaporated slowly into spirit particles, he stabbed his sword into Raiden to make him a Shinigami.

Substitute Shinigami

Raiden was now a substitute shinigami and had no idea what that meant. He knew he had to protect his family from hollows and other threats. The main thing was he didn’t even know the name of his sword. So then he met up with a mysterious lady. This lady told him he should train. So she trained him. She taught him Kido and all there was to know about being a shinigami. After training for 3 months Raiden had became much stronger. He could control his spiritual energy and fight. So one day he fell asleep. He heard a voice, and he opened his eyes. He found him self in a prison cell with spirit energy flowing out of it. The voice was loud and scary. It mumbled something. Then the sleep was ended and he woke up. So a week later he fought a man. This man was a rouge shinigami. He called his swords name, and Raiden had a flashback, and tried to remember the monsters words. He couldn’t, Raiden fought the man, and he started to loose. When the man was about to kill Raiden. A power erupted from within. His soul was interrupted by another. It was his zanpaktou. The zanpaktou was angry. Raiden awoke and found himself at the prison cell. The voice told him h would fight for him, while Raiden remained there. The monster did not poof out, he just used Raiden’s body. He rushed at him and attack vigorously. Raiden’s eyes was a mysterious purple, and his spiritual energy had increased. Then Raiden took control again. Then the beast said still you refuse to say my name. You know it scream it out. Raiden lifted up his sword and screamed rip off your chains Exodia. Then the zanpaktou transformed and had a mysterious look to it. His eyes were still purple. Raiden threw a chain at the man. The man jumped, but not knowing there was more chains. Another chain came and wrap around the man, and then it electrocuted him. The man fell to the ground. When Raiden went to finish him off. A gate appeared, and some captains came out. They told him he would be taking over from now. Raiden then was informed by one of the captains about the soul society and his duties. The captain respected him, because of him being a captains son and his strong resemblance. Raiden was just 13 and probably was the youngest shinigami. A captain then destroyed his very powers in in a flash. That was their order. His teacher knocked him out of his body, and slashed his chain. Then the transformation of hollow began, and He resisted for long. Then he blacked out, and inside of him he saw a fight. There was a hollow and Exodia attacking each other. Exodia then grabbed the hollow. The hollow muttered some words, than Exodia muttered something. Then the hollow was squeezed. Raiden awoke, and found himself in shinigami form. Raiden predicted that the Hollow must\'ve been killed. He got up and thanked his teacher. Then the Raiden told his mom and his sister that he was going to the soul society to become a real shinigami. His mom and sister were happy for him. He entered a gate with the help of his teacher. He entered into the gate. Though he was adopted into a family later on, and his secret was sealed with them.

The Soul Society

Raiden entered the soul society, and found it to be a nice place for the most part. It looked much like the real world except everyone was souls. He smelled the spirit particles in the air. He came from the gate through the rukon district. When he walked a few everyone looked at him. He walked closer and closer until he came to a gate. It was huge and a huge thing was guarding it. The big guy did not allow him to pass. The big guy told him he had to fight to get in. He decided to fight the guy. He dodged every technique the guy used on him. Raiden easily knocked him out. Then he used his shikai to make a hole through the door. He went in, and entered. The ops surrounded him, and took him into custody. It wasn’t easy, it took all of them to use there shikai to do it. The captain commander talked to Raiden. Raiden explained he wanted to join the sereiti to better evolve his skills. He had to protect the ones he loved, and without proper environments that would be difficult. Central 46 then put him on trial. The asked where he got his powers from and if he got them legally. Then he was put to the test. A rouge shinigami was brought out. They said if the rouge shinigami was defeated, Raiden could join soul society, and become a full soul reaper able to come and go to the real world and soul society. The rouge shinigami was from the 8th squad and was 4th seat. He got ready as almost all of the soul society watched. He defeated the shinigami, and one the title the old one had claimed.

4th seat Squad 8

Raiden showed he was strong. Some argued on the immense power that came from him. Others argued that he should be a higher seat. Raiden didn’t care. He just chilled around, and did his job. At times he went back to the real world and protected the area. Other times he was there, and he was important in the military force. At some point he got sick of squad 8, they depended on him to much. So he went to 1st squad as a 5th seat. Eventually thought 1st squad had so many changes. He was tired of the head commandment specialties. He decided to go to 6th squad while keeping his seating.

Vaizard Arc
Raiden became a shinigami when his master cut his chain of fate. The tranformation into shinigami was difficult, cause right then he had to battle a inner hollow. He thought it to be gone since his Zanpaktou spirit devoured it, but that was not to clear. Raiden was pondering on this thought for a long time. One night while on a mission. A vaste lorde came out of the blue seeking to kill Raiden. Raiden was not feeling like it, but he did fight the creature. Raiden got his butt kicked. When he was about to die, something changed. He was no longer in control of his own body. He heard a strange, high pitched echoing. Then his body moved by it\'s self. The thing controlling Raiden killed the Vaste lorde. Then Raiden forced the half mask that appeared on his face to come off, and Raiden passed out.

Raiden woke up at a base. He was surrounded by people with swords. Their spiritual pressure was weird. It seemed like a hollow, but it also sounded like a shinigami. He quickly got up, and his wounds were treated. He passed back out. Inside of his mind, he was having a discussion with two people. The hollow and Exodia. Raiden was furious and was angry about the hollow still being around. Exodia explained that the hollow is part of exodia. Raiden was irate, and he finally woke up when he was about to go off on his spirit. He got up, and some people told him to come with him. He met the head vaizard right there, and he awaited for what would come next.



To be continued……………

RP Sample:
This is from another rpg

Spoiler:

When it clashes with another sword Exodia goes into the inner realm of the Zanpaktou, and copies its shikai ability until the Zanpaktou is unreleased. Also the Zanpaktou has 4 chains at its handle. This chains get a different element. One chain can catch on fire, the other one can freeze others on contact. The third one can blow high winds, and the last one can cause semi earthquakes by hitting the ground with it.

Doesnt matter if this is a WIP.

Either one or the other. You can alternate elements with attacks, and I will set a rule down for that.

OR.

You can copy the Shikai ability at 1/2 the original Zanpaktou's strength.

Also, 3rd seat 1st division is taken. I told you that in the CB. 13th div needs a third seat, as does 7th for the moemnt.

Yousei is 13th Division's Third Seat, isn't he?

true. 7th division it is for now.

Yousei will be advancing on to Lieutanent, since Kuroda is vaizard.(my senses)

He isnt a Vaizard yet, nor have we left, therefore Yousei is still third seat.

And 7th division has just been taken.

In the avaliable it said 1st squad's 3rd was open. So I am confused on the avaliability thing. Is it updated often.

No, that list is outdated. PM either Koujetsu or Sousuke if you want to know which positions are still open.

Find, as long as I can use bankai in some weird way.

If you're a VC, prepare to do a huge RP bit in order to gain it. Anything below is not going to be permitted; sorry, but that's how it is.

well, 3rd seats need to RP to get it, but thats also a change on the way

Umm can everyone stop talking on my charachter creation. Thanks if you were a admin or mod and gave me advice.

Is this finished or not?

No, I just started. I will erase the Wip and put done when I am done.

Since you're a Fifth Seat, you can only have Kidou ranking up to 40; please exclude all others above 40.

Okay edited

Before approved is Los Obscura Oración open, if yes I would want to change everything aound for that

Bankai Description: It is a shiny, beautiful blade. It could be used as a mirror. When it clashes with another sword Exodia goes into the inner realm of the Zanpaktou, and copies its shikai ability until the Zanpaktou is unreleased. Also it can copy the bankai of the zanpaktou it enters. Also when the bankai is released, a immense amount of spiritual energy explodes out of the sword like a ominous wind. It still can use its elemental shikai, accept there is only two chains instead of 5.

copies another powers especially their banki at full power is a little much so to make it that your copy ability only gets 2/3 of the power of the original also can you activity only one of them at a time? or can you use multiply bankai or shikai at the same time? or even swtich between them should you clash with more then one?

It can copy more than one, and fine I will change to shikai

make it so you can only use three copy abilities a once per rpg

Edit complete

Since you're a Fifth Seat, you can only have Kidou ranking up to 40; please exclude all others above 40.

you missed that piece of advise from dark hun and for the Los Obscura Oracion we need to wait on that from sou

Approved.

Alright, I shall allow you to apply for Vaizard, but as you edit in the needed information for which a Vaizard must have, I'd like for you to fix the original up a bit, as in maybe show me a better RP sample; that is what I'm looking at.