Vaizard raiden (Done)

Ready to be reveiwed

Division: squad 7----- Vaizard

Seat: 4th seat---- Vaizard swordmen and kido specialist

Step 1. Replace them, dont just strike them out.

Step 2. You are a swordsman or a kido specialist. Two different things.

Step 3. Dexterity replaced Accuracy. Edit and read over those rules.

Step 4. Kido has been removed from the application. In order to regain kido, you put it under the kido application saying that is the Kido your character starts off with.

Step 5. Mask

Division: This ability works when the the hollow mask is present. If Raiden gets cut in half or anything of that sort. The two halfs can simply divide into two whole new figures. Raiden can also divide at his own will if he wants. Dividing basically makes a entire new Raiden with the same abilities, but it does what the real Raiden wants it to do. Raiden can only divide once in one post. The clones of himself can divide as well. When his mask goes away so does the multiples of him. The dividing process increases his speed by 5, but lowers his strength by 4.

No. You CANNOT split as many times as you want, while every clone remaining at full power. The clones CANNOT split.

If you divide, both will be at half power. If you split 3 times, everything is at 1/3 of the original power, totalling up TO full power..

Just losing 4 strength, but having a 5 speed increase is in no way, shape, or form a good enough draw back.

Shikai

As this hasnt been modified from the original application, nothing to comment.

Bankai

It is a shiny, beautiful blade. It could be used as a mirror. When it clashes with another sword Exodia goes into the inner realm of the Zanpaktou, and copies its shikai ability until the Zanpaktou is unreleased. Also it can copy 2/3 of the bankai of the zanpaktou it enters. Also when the bankai is released, a immense amount of spiritual energy explodes out of the sword like a ominous wind. It still can use its elemental shikai, accept there is only two chains instead of 5. The bankai can use more than one of each shikai and bankai. You can only use the copying ability 3 times a battle(RPG).

Alright. This will need to be changed. Your Zanpaktou is elemental based, even with the 5 chains we allowed. Therefore you CANNOT enter and copy someones bankai or Zanpaktou in the slightest. Copying is denied. Redo the Bankai.

Step 6.

The stats are wrong. When you add new stats, do the following.

Strength:35
Shikai: X Amount
Bankai: X Amount
Mask: X Amount

We dont need to see the fact that you can add. Just give us the total number during that stage for all of them. The above quote is merely an example.

Alright, from this, I'm beginning to doubt whether I should allow you to be a VAIZARD RECRUIT or not. ALL OTHER POSITIONS HAVE BEEN FILLED! That means you are NOT Vaizard Swordsman or Kidou Expert, neither one. Fix what has been mentioned by Koujetsu; that's all.

Age: He appears to be 16, but he is really 18

Last thing. You ATLEAST need to be 300+ years actual age to become a Vaizard, Any less and the application is denied. 18 years old, but looking 16? You wouldnt even be out of the Academy.

done

Change the pic & looks, they're already taken.

Edited

Alright, 9 Duration, 4 Cooldown.

Roll "Vaizard Deciding Thr"; you can find this underneath the reply box once you clicked Post Reply, titled as Fate Roll; that will decide whether you will live during the training session or not. This helps to keep it random and it's what really happens; some lose control to their hollow and are killed off. It's pretty obvious; "Yes", you live, "No", you're dead. I'll roll as an example.

The member 'xXLightxDarkXx' has done the following action : Fate roll

'Vaizard Deciding Thr' :

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The member 'Naim' has done the following action : Fate roll

'Vaizard Deciding Thr' :

So I die..that sucks

Can I get a redo. lol

No redo's and youll need to RP the death of your character, and then make a new one. Depending on what Dark thinks, you MAY (aka possibly, theres a chance, etc) be allowed to make a Vaizard from scratch, but MAYBE. Otherwise you will need to make another shinigami/hollow depending on your preference (if its shinigami just make it for the same rank and division of this one).

Do I have to make a new zanpaktou to, OR can I just keep this one. i have kind've grown attach to the zanpaktou.

Most likely a new one, but take that up with Kaji. I dont feel liek getting overruled.

A new one is preferred. Since your fate has been sealed, it is best you whip up a topic at the Vaizard Base and we'll start the topic.

Wait how do I die, if this charachter isn't even approved.

The character is approved for the death scene. As it mostly consists of a battle within your mindscape, the Mask need not be approved in the first place.

Shouldn't the system just kill the hollow off leaving the shinigami alive. That would make more sense and less of a hassle.

Every Vaizard has a possibility of losing to the inner shinigami, which would make them a hollow and cause them to be killed. You rolled a 'No', meaning the Hollow takes over your body when you try to beat it. Hence the death scene. The Hollow, which is your body, will be killed, and thus your character will die.

Just killing off the hollow would mean you WIN in your mindscape, and thus give you Vaizard powers. If you wanted your shinigami to stay alive, you shouldnt have applied for Vaizard.

Well I misread. But okay