Svan Sai [10th Espada]

Basic Information

Name: Svan Sai

Age: 425

Gender: Male

Rank: Espada

Number: X (10)

Looks:


Hollow Hole: Upper chest, base of neck.

Mask Fragment: What’s left of his mask is actually the bottom jaw of his mask, it remains in place around his neck like a necklace.

Number Tattoo: X (10)

Personality: Svan is normally a laid back man. His persona is usually calm. But even he has his moments when he craves bloodshed. Perhaps its a split personality, or maybe he's a psycho...only he really knows. But when he needs to fight he will et what he wants one way or another. He is also a very calculating figure, and looks to exploit his enemies weakness.

He is often openly insulting anyone who is inferior to him. Svan has an overly violent lust for battle, always seeking out the strongest opponent in a given area. He is confident in his abilities, believing himself to be equal, or even stronger than the first Espada. Though he shows little regard for his allies or anyone who would get in his way, Svan has some sense of honor as he would never attack someone who was injured or weaker than himself, useless they really deserved it.

Weapon Information

Weapon Name: Drago'

Weapon Looks: A Grey hilted zanpakuto with a dragon engraved on the side of the blade. The blade itself is jagged at the tip like fangs.

Weapon Description: If Svan claws at the blade of his zanpakuto a roaring soudn is released which attacks on a high frequency. This is done more or less as a distraction, and can kill the sense of hearing for a short period of time.

Resurrecion Release Phrase: adelante venida alma del dragón (come forth spirit of the dragon)

Resurrecion Information

Name: dragón

Represent: Dragon

Family: Fire

Looks:


Techniques

Name: Garganta
State: Both
Description: This is how arrancar move to and from Hueco Mundo. Kaname Tosen and Kisuke Urahara have also demonstrated the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway.

Name: Hierro
State: Both
Description: This refers to the hardened skin of the Arrancar, which is a result of their compressed spiritual power. While their skin is strong enough to block even released Zanpakuto bare-handed, it is by no means impenetrable. Stronger Arrancar have proportionally stronger skin.

Name: Pesquisa
State: Both
Description: This is the arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami ability to sense Spiritual Pressure. It functions similar to a sonar. Using pesquisa requires most Espada to enter a meditative state or use some others have a trigger unique to the user.

Name: Sonido
State: Both
Description: A very quick movement performed by Arranacar that allows them to move at high speeds for brief periods of time.

Name: Fira
State:Both
Description:Svan has the ability to conger and control fire. However the extent to which he can is completely up to his current strength level. He is able to mix and conduct, forcing the fire to at times take a solid hold. He also controls the temp of said fire. It can heat to about 600 degrees C. Likewise the fire can also be vaguely warm, and easy to handle. His manipulation of fire consist of anything from a fireball to massive pillars of flame. Or anything his mind can put a shape to making the probabilities endless.

The amount of fire Svan can produce on his own is limited to his own Reistue. In the even taht he does not have enough he can manipulate any near by source of fire. However doing this drains Svan considerably sp if it turns out that he can not end a fight with his own flame he will back out. Teh max range of his fire is 60 meters. Beyond that the flame fluries and withdraws, or fans out and thins until its no more.


Name: Fire Clone
State: Both
Description: After having physical contact with ones DNA (blood) Svan can create an incomplete copy of his opponents or himself. The clones are made of flame to the core giving them no real physical form unless Svan has time to put a lot of focus into it.

The clones Svan creates of others are not under his complete control, however over time given his own strength compared to the clones determines which ones follow his orders to the T.

The Clones themselves feed directly from Svans own spirit energy. This being said he must be able to sync with his clones so he doesnt wipe himself out. However when using the clones of others this is fairly difficult and usualy only alows Svan to use a single clone. (Svan Clones last for about six posts, the ones made from other beings will last for three posts because the sync needed wil honestly never be there.)

Stats
85

Strength: 25
Release: 30
Speed: 25
Release: 30
Dexterity: 15
Release: 20
Stamina: 20
Release: 25

History and RP Sample

History:

Human

Svan was born originaly up as Derek Howards to a middle class family in western new york. His life was fairly well nit. He grew up in a loving home with an older sister by a year and two loving parents. He graduated from High school and went straight into college following his sister string of success.

His life seemed to all come to an end suddenly when one day while he was walking with his sister to hte campus he was hit by a car. He died instanty from hte impact, but had managed to save his sister by pushing her out of the way.

Luckily Derek was never cast away to Hueco Mndo, he started to wonder the world of the living looking out for his sister. Feeling that he had no other choice, that it was his only purpose now. How ever this quickly turned into obsession as he started loosing himself. His chain had run out and he turned into a Hollow and devouered the soul of the very person he wanted to protect.

Hollow

As a hollow Derek was reborn and took the name Svan who wandered Hueco Mundo in his quest to cure a longing feeling. He feel into a frenzy of sorts and started to eat other hollows and grew stronger. He often killed what ever he could find while traveling in between the world of the living and Hueco Mundo.

This led to him becoming a Gillian, for some reason his concious was stronger than the other and he took control. Eating at everything that crossed his path. He couldnt stop, it was a hunger that he couldnt satisfy. Then one day he changed again, he took the form a a dragon like creature, roughly half the size of a school bus.

At first Svan restrained from using things like ceros and his own abilites when hunting other Hollows, but this soon changed as he started seeking stronger targets. He realized that what he was doing was foolish and decided to use what ever means necisary to get teh job done.

Eventually he moved on to other Adjuchas and found the more be more feeling. His power continued to grow wit heach meal. He eventually ate his two thousandth Hollow feelin stronger than ever and at his peek. The power of hte Vasto Lord was around the corner.

Arrancar

Shortly after, he met a group of arrancar who came into the possession of the breakdown sphere to turn him into an arrancar. Their leader quickly noted his potential, and raw power. But another pointed out that Svan was wild and at time hard to control. And for that he was locked away in the darkest depths of Los Noches to learn how to better control himself. This caused his already unstable personality to flux wildly still.

During some time later Svan was released. He cased a massive amounts of damage, and killed many where ever he went. However a few years later he found himself wanting to be more than simply an arrancar. He wanted the privilege of an Espada.

He was not given a number, but instead given the a letter instead. The tattoo X was placed on the back of his left hand. He is currently unnumbered but his strength is on par with even the highest class of Arrancar.

Later on he had finally gotten what he believed he deserved. What he believed to be his god given right, and was accepted as an espada. A ten was placed on the back of his neck, though being considered the lowest in terms of the espada he considered himself on the right path. Oddly enough he actually values his odd, and sometime s shakey relationships with the other espada. True he desires power moer than anything else, but before he can. He must first conqure himself, or rather his other self.

RP Sample: The original Espada were wiped out thousands of years ago but new espada began to rise 200 years ago. The new espada described themselves as being 'true' espada unlike the ones that came before them. The reason for calling themselves this is because they were not born through the powers of the hogyoku, but instead obtained the powers themselves. this resulted in another war which this time took place within Soul Society and the Gotei 13. Most of the espada were wiped out apart from a small few. The remaining Espada and there fraccion then set their targets on the real world. The reason for this is to cause Hueco Mundo and Soul Society to crash together by the uses of dimensional generators. They must be planted in the Real World to work, however, the Real World being the gap between where they seek the two worlds to clash. Once Soul Society is connected to Hueco Mundo, the Espada believe that they can storm and take over Soul Society by force. The Central 46 held a meeting with the Captain-Commander, they decided that the re-building of Soul Society after the arrancar invasion was their top priority so they chose 3 Captains too form a team and go after the remaining Espada in the real world. While every other shinigami were given orders to stay and help re-build S.S and the Gotei 13. Meaning that the team sent to the real world would not have any reinforcements from soul society at any point.

For Fira, thats going to need more details, what do you mean by control? And an ice cold fire is something I'll have to say no to because then you tread on the abilities that belong solely to the Ice element, like freezing.

Fire Clone is going to definitely need more explanation as well, you make clones of people with their DNA? That doesn't tie into your fire-based abilities, first of all, and secondly, why? how? for how long? etc. Full clones will be just outright denied.

1. The whole as cold as ice thing was just a bad example of his control over the fire's temp.

2. No their not complete clones, just fire shaped into figures. Until the requirements are met the clones do not possess the psuedo abilities that the originals do.

The clones abilities consume your own reiatsu, correct? Also, please note that you cannot use abilities that you do not know a character has, nor can you imitate Ress., Segunda, Bankai, or Kyuu using your clones. Make sure thats clear.

As for controlling fire, you're going to need to state how much fire you create so theres a limit on how much you can use when you manipulate it for things. I'll have to check on the heat as well, I'm not entirely sure how hot 3000C is...

Ok I'm clear on the clone thing, and as far as fire well I'll get that done soon. The limiting will be a bit difficult though, not to sure how to calculate an amount...

Its easiest to do an amount with a cube. Imagine you have a cube with each of its three dimensions measured out in feet so theres a limit to the reach of the flames. If you had a 2x2x2 cube, it only has a maximum reach of 8ft (assuming the formula is just multiplication, I haven't done Geometry in a year...) so that gives a limit for range. Of course, that 8ft flame wouldn't be very strong because you're stretching your flames to their maximum length.

ACK CANON REFERENCES!!!!!! NO ALLOWED!!!!!! XD

M'kay...well I've edited again, not sure If that helps though. And I hated Geometry..dont even get me started on the second semister either >_>

The canon references are still there in your history, also, add some more to your history while you're editting out the canon names (Aizen, Tossen, etc.)

Your clones CANNOT reach the level of a released opponent or bankai opponent so edit that out and what are you talking about 'sync'? You don't have an explanation of what your sync is, how its achieved, or how its maintained.

Also, 200 meters is too far. 110 meters is a football field, so you have an effective range of two footballs fields. That needs to be lessen quite a bit.

Sorry, I've been out for a couple of days...school/work is stating to catch up to me. Anyway I've edited the the clones and if lowered hte length to 60 meters...

*bump

Looks fine, approved.