Kyouichi Utsume [Level 5 Quincy]

Name: Kyouichi Utsume
Age: 17
Gender: Male

Appearance:wears a black eyepatch for his left eye, but when its removed his eye begins abosorbing reishi for his bow and arrows, http://i-riya.deviantart.com/art/kaito-121815721

Personality: Very carefree, and loves a good fight, and has developed a primal instint for survival, mood changes depending on the time and day, can be easliy intrigued by the simplest of things, see soulreapers as intresting people, slowly but truly gives out his trust to people, and keeps most of his thoughts to himself, loves female company. exstremly random

Rank: 5

Armor/Glove Information
Name: primary weapon: Hariti (black sanrei glove)
secoundary weapon: Dridders Egde
http://images.cosplay.com/photos/21/2103765.jpg
Bow Manifestation: http://209.132.96.165/zbc/attachment.php?attachmentid=51645
Description: is capable of willfully changing its size and can fire multiple shots at once. He can also fire arrows one-handed and at rapid-speed. His bow is white, rather than blue.

Techniques
Name: Shatterd Skys
Description:when fired the reshi arrow comes out as crystalized reishi thats very fragile and can break easiliy if hit or on impact , but when it breaks it turns into mini crystalized glass shards of reshi and flies into or on the enemy

Name: Hirenkyaku:
Description: quincy flash step is a method in which Quincy use to travel quickly over short distances. It is basically the Quincy equivalent to the Shinigami's Shunpo, or the Arrancar's Sonído

Name: Ransōtengai
Description: this is a high level technique that allows the user to control their body parts using strings of spirit energy controlled by their brain, forming lines or strings out of countless spiritrons. By using this technique, the user can control their body as one would a puppet, allowing them to move freely despite paralysis, broken limbs, or any other force that would impede normal movement.

Name: Spiders Web
Decription: while using a combination of Ransotengai and Shattered Skies when fireed spirit strings are attached to the the Crystalized reshi and when they break, spirit threads of reishi attached to the broken crystalized reishi fall near or around the enemy as a net to lessen enemy movement

Name:Quincy final form
Description:by removing the sanrei glove it gives the user a tremendous amount of power, but at the price of their powers upon it's completion.

Stats

Strength:15
Speed:30
Accuracy:25
Stamina:20

History: As a child he was hated by most of his family members and belived to have no talent and had a strange run of good and bad luck. During his first time of training as a quincy, he didn't no what the word of "self control" was and accidently killed his mother when she was supervising his training , His father was greatly sadden about his wifes death and refused to train him any further and wanted him dead. The only person he ever trusted and cared for him was his sister, who used to always protect him, and continued to teach him the way of the quincy's and gave him his Sanrei Glove. When he was 8, his sister had died from a mysterious illness and was left allone with no one to take care for him or trust and felt vurnalable and weak, he had few friends, but they soon turned against him and became his enemies (to which he had to make up imaginary friends). While walking home from school with his oldest brother, he encountered his first hollow, which attacked them, during the battle Kyouich was severly wounded and nealr kill when his brother jumped in and took a deathblow that was meant for Kyouichi. Kyouichi stared at his brother in wonder why he would sacrifieced his life for him " Even though i hate you, your still part of my family" he said and instructed Kyouichi to shot through him to kill the hollow, telling Kyouichi to live on for the both of them , after he had killed the hollow and his brother he went to his sisters grave, wandering what he should do with his life now. When his father found out about how Kyouichi's brother sacrifices his life for Kyouichi to live, he was filled with great anger gathered the rest of the family and searched for Kyouichi at the cemetary and attempted to kill him, in which Kyouichi was severly betten to a pulp and was hit with a reshi arrow into his eye and into his back and began passed out from blood lost, his father thinking he was dead threw him in an open grave. When Kyouichi regained consuiouse trying to stop and pain and the bleeding while trying keep himself from blacking out and going into shock, he saw his fathers body lying on the ground and a tall figure towering over it, the person had a blood stained sword and a black kimono. It took Kyouichi a while to relized that the person was a soul reaper, Kyouichi remebering the old stories of what the soulreapers did to the old quincy's feared for his life. Kyouichi form his bow and aimed it at him " If im going to die might as well die trying" he thought to himself but knew that he wouldn't be able to fire even one shot. The Soul Reaper took a step toward him and pointed his sword at Kyouichi, Kyouichi could feel the lives that had perished at the end of the sword as his body began to shake uncontrollably. The Soul Reaper stared at Kyouichi for a moment as if thinking to himself, then it looked like he was struck with an idea " Do you want to live or die?" he said with a sadistic smile.

RP Sample: Kyouichi was thinking of his old days and his first encounter with a Soul Reaper and the life he had after that, " Those were pretty fun days" he thought to himself. He was walking around the city looking for some excitement in anymeans necessary, he was about go cause troble himself when he heard a scream "... Should i go and check it out or should i go be nosy" he thought while crossing his arms, Kyouichi heard another scream this time it sounded like a girl was in parole " ...lets go check it out" he added as as he quickly went into action. As he was nearing the screaming he scenced that there was a hollow near there and quicken his pace, as he finally got close to the screaming he saw a girl get picked up by a hollow,. Kyouichi's exspression seemed to gleamed with excitement as he quickly blew of the hollow's arm that held the girl Kyouichi quickly fired again and blew off it's legs , and began to further humiliate the hollow to the point to make wish it never exist in the first place, the girl ran away in fear as Kyouichi's exspessions became more darker and twisted with joy of torturing a hollow. After a while Kyouichi used Flash Step to get close in it's face and aimed at the hollows mask " Do you want to live or die?" he said in a cold raspy voice, the hollow open it's mouth as to say something but a Arrow went through its mouth to silence it, " For hollows, they only need to die" he said with a sadistic smile.

Long Sample and history.

is this better

I think he gave you props for doing a long story or rp over all nice work man

i'm gonna have to ask that this be put into the template for quincies it is near th bottom of the template post in a white box copy then paste that to your post then fill it out with this stuff

Basic Information

Name: Kyouichi Utsume

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Appearance: wears a black eyepatch for his left eye, but when its removed his eye begins abosorbing reishi for his bow and arrows, http://i-riya.deviantart.com/art/kaito-121815721

Personality: Very carefree, and loves a good fight, and has developed a primal instint for survival, mood changes depending on the time and day, can be easliy intrigued by the simplest of things, see soulreapers as intresting people, slowly but truly gives out his trust to people, and keeps most of his thoughts to himself, loves female company. exstremly random

Rank: 5

Armor/Glove Information

Name: primary weapon: Hariti (black sanrei glove)
secoundary weapon: Dridders Egde
http://images.cosplay.com/photos/21/2103765.jpg

Bow Manifestation: http://209.132.96.165/zbc/attachment.php?attachmentid=51645

Description: is capable of willfully changing its size and can fire multiple shots at once. He can also fire arrows one-handed and at rapid-speed. His bow is white, rather than blue.

Looks: ^^

Techniques

Name: Shatterd Skys
Description: when fired the reshi arrow comes out as crystalized reishi thats very fragile and can break easiliy if hit or on impact , but when it breaks it turns into mini crystalized glass shards of reshi and flies into or on the enemy

Name: Hirenkyaku
Description: quincy flash step is a method in which Quincy use to travel quickly over short distances. It is basically the Quincy equivalent to the Shinigami's Shunpo, or the Arrancar's Sonído.

b]Name:[/b] Ransōtengai
Description: this is a high level technique that allows the user to control their body parts using strings of spirit energy controlled by their brain, forming lines or strings out of countless spiritrons. By using this technique, the user can control their body as one would a puppet, allowing them to move freely despite paralysis, broken limbs, or any other force that would impede normal movement.

b]Name:[/b] Spiders Web
Description: while using a combination of Ransotengai and Shattered Skies when fired, spirit strings are attached to the the Crystalized reshi and when they break, spirit threads of reishi attached to the broken crystalized reishi fall near or around the enemy as a net to lessen enemy movement

Name: Quincy final form
Description: by removing the sanrei glove it gives the user a tremendous amount of power, but at the price of their powers upon it's completion.


Stats


Strength: 15

Speed: 30

Accuracy: 25

Stamina: 20

History and RP Sample

History: As a child he was hated by most of his family members and belived to have no talent and had a strange run of good and bad luck. During his first time of training as a quincy, he didn't no what the word of "self control" was and accidently killed his mother when she was supervising his training , His father was greatly sadden about his wifes death and refused to train him any further and wanted him dead. The only person he ever trusted and cared for him was his sister, who used to always protect him, and continued to teach him the way of the quincy's and gave him his Sanrei Glove. When he was 8, his sister had died from a mysterious illness and was left allone with no one to take care for him or trust and felt vurnalable and weak, he had few friends, but they soon turned against him and became his enemies (to which he had to make up imaginary friends). While walking home from school with his oldest brother, he encountered his first hollow, which attacked them, during the battle Kyouich was severly wounded and nealr kill when his brother jumped in and took a deathblow that was meant for Kyouichi. Kyouichi stared at his brother in wonder why he would sacrifieced his life for him " Even though i hate you, your still part of my family" he said and instructed Kyouichi to shot through him to kill the hollow, telling Kyouichi to live on for the both of them , after he had killed the hollow and his brother he went to his sisters grave, wandering what he should do with his life now. When his father found out about how Kyouichi's brother sacrifices his life for Kyouichi to live, he was filled with great anger gathered the rest of the family and searched for Kyouichi at the cemetary and attempted to kill him, in which Kyouichi was severly betten to a pulp and was hit with a reshi arrow into his eye and into his back and began passed out from blood lost, his father thinking he was dead threw him in an open grave. When Kyouichi regained consuiouse trying to stop and pain and the bleeding while trying keep himself from blacking out and going into shock, he saw his fathers body lying on the ground and a tall figure towering over it, the person had a blood stained sword and a black kimono. It took Kyouichi a while to relized that the person was a soul reaper, Kyouichi remebering the old stories of what the soulreapers did to the old quincy's feared for his life. Kyouichi form his bow and aimed it at him " If im going to die might as well die trying" he thought to himself but knew that he wouldn't be able to fire even one shot. The Soul Reaper took a step toward him and pointed his sword at Kyouichi, Kyouichi could feel the lives that had perished at the end of the sword as his body began to shake uncontrollably. The Soul Reaper stared at Kyouichi for a moment as if thinking to himself, then it looked like he was struck with an idea " Do you want to live or die?" he said with a sadistic smile.


RP Sample: Kyouichi was thinking of his old days and his first encounter with a Soul Reaper and the life he had after that, " Those were pretty fun days" he thought to himself. He was walking around the city looking for some excitement in anymeans necessary, he was about go cause troble himself when he heard a scream "... Should i go and check it out or should i go be nosy" he thought while crossing his arms, Kyouichi heard another scream this time it sounded like a girl was in parole " ...lets go check it out" he added as as he quickly went into action. As he was nearing the screaming he scenced that there was a hollow near there and quicken his pace, as he finally got close to the screaming he saw a girl get picked up by a hollow,. Kyouichi's exspression seemed to gleamed with excitement as he quickly blew of the hollow's arm that held the girl Kyouichi quickly fired again and blew off it's legs , and began to further humiliate the hollow to the point to make wish it never exist in the first place, the girl ran away in fear as Kyouichi's exspessions became more darker and twisted with joy of torturing a hollow. After a while Kyouichi used Flash Step to get close in it's face and aimed at the hollows mask " Do you want to live or die?" he said in a cold raspy voice, the hollow open it's mouth as to say something but a Arrow went through its mouth to silence it, " For hollows, they only need to die" he said with a sadistic smile.

well, is there anything else he needs, im helping him make his app and stuff so let me know as soon as possible so i can tell him and work on it

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Repost the application in a different thread, this way we can keep the clutter to a minimum.