Aki Tear [Espada 1]

Basics

Name: Aki Tear

Age: looks 19 but actually 377 years old so fairly young for compared to other Espada

Gender: Male

Rank: Espada

Number: 1

Picture: Aki Like most other Arrancar, he possesses remnants of his former life as a Hollow in his appearance. His Hollow hole is located on his sternum where a heart would normally be (though initially for some reason, the hole was located on the base of his throat; a change that was seen in both the manga and anime). The remainder of his hollow mask lies on top of his head, forming a broken helmet. He is the seventh ranked Espada, signified by the tattoo on his lower back. His height is 6’0 model’s height, weight would be around 277 lbs of pure toned muscle not bulky to prevent reaction time decrease; skin is smoothing and holds no ache, scars or discoloration. Hair has a natural golden glow about it, natural light blue heights and reaches down to the bottom of his neck fine type hair and naturally straight and Body portions of flawless and perfectly symmetrical, length of limbs are even as well facial features of perfect mirror images of the two sizes. with long black hair going past his collar bone in a messy ebony style with the front of his bangs going across his face in a A shape style and the back around two inches longer then his back banes. Aki eyes are toned dark purple with the pupils shaped like a cats. His ears are also cat like due to his heritage. With out the normal attire with his arrcane outfit robs he wears a shirtless attire style with birth marks of runes of ancient magic’s on his arms, cape around his legs that lingers down towards his feet, his body is very muscular both even proportions from his upper torso to his lower body. He has a single black fury tail. He wears his sandals without socks.
(normal Attire)


(Clothed for normal formal duties)

Hollow Hole: Center of my rib cage, in the middle of my chest

Mask Fragment: Half the top of my head, like a helmet

Number Tattoo: Its located directly on my spine on the lower half of my back just slightly covered by by pants

Personality: Aki is a very outgoing, upbeat and cheer fully person as he looks on the brighter things in life rather then moping around with the details of sorrow. Though as innocent and carefree as he tends to express Aki is actually is a very intelligent calculating, figures out the possible outcomes before performing them so until he needs to take action he won’t allow himself to be reckless, he comes off cold during battle only thanks to his competitive nature. He is very emotional even if he tries not to express it, most of the time though his thoughts tend to be a little random when there is nothing that his he suppose to be focusing on. Also on a side note Aki tends to be rather flirty with anyone he likes them physical or personality wise. As for his impression of the people he meets there tends to be the one that breaks the ice and greets them first, coming off a little strong and in your face when it comes to meeting him the first time. But to those he dislikes there is an air of disgust that Aki sets off even if they don’t converse. If they do happen to have to butt heads Aki has the nasty habit of flinging insults their way just so he can have the reason to beat them down if they retaliate.

Weapon Information

Weapon Name: Beautifully Malice

Weapon Looks: http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs27/f/2008/150/f/6/Lion_Armor_Claw_Gauntlets_by_Azmal.jpg

Weapon Description: These gauntlets and graves are some of Aki more recently created weapons are highly sophisticated and versatile, they are incredibly light, dense and practically unbreakable, giving the wielder an efficient form of both defending and attacking. The final capability of the Gauntlets of Oblivion is that they can easily deflect low energy attacks based on high amounts of energy, such as bolts of lightning or balls of fire ( Low level up to level 35), the wearers being able to use the Armour as shields, the energy will bounce off of them as if a basketball off the ground. If the wearer was to hold their hand out in front of them and intercept a bolt of electricity, it would either stop dead in their palm and let them fling it aside or in the direction of their choice, or simply bounce off their palm. This effect will only work on abilities involving pure sources of energy, such as fire, thunder, light or molten attacks, attacks such as ice, earth or darkness attacks are unable to be deflected or blocked in such a manner.

Weapon Release Phrase: Chilling flames that engulf the entire world, pitch dark flower set into bloom

Released Weapon Description: The whip grow and attached to the gantlets has three special ability in its release form form, when it cuts flesh the time flowing from the internal changes are slowed even with kido arts that normal heal. Though as external harming forces such as slashes and cuts the effect has no effect, in fact the flow of time is revisited, seeded up, with this the power the wounds actually worsening with the passage of normal time, opening up the opportunity for infection or blood loss, bone or nerve damage is worse leading to crippling effects of the body. Against non living matter the damage slowly grows worse and can eventually lead to serious damage to the stature like a hole not patch up right away in a wall. Third power is that the length of the whip can extend with 13 meters with the help of energy based extensions between the blades of the whip.
Resurrecion

Name: ソブリン時間の(Sovereign of Time)

Represent: Dragon

Family:Time, Darkness and Nature

Looks: (body)
Guardian ()

Techniques
Name: Regeneration
State: Both
Description: A most notable trait is that fact that he has extremely high speed regeneration. Aki can quickly regenerate any part of his body except for his brain and Internal organs. However, this power also requires that he had sufficient spiritual energy. Cannot grow back any wounds or limbs during battle. In battle Aki is able to recover from initial force of blows to counter attack sooner then most though it still requires a large amount of energy.

Name: Garganta
State: Both
Description: This is how arrancar move to and from Hueco Mundo. Kaname Tosen and Kisuke Urahara have also demonstrated the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway.

Name: Bala
State: Both
(虚弾 (バラ), bara; Spanish for "Bullet," Japanese for "Hollow Bullet") Bala is an Arrancar alternative to Cero. The technique hardens the user's Spiritual Pressure and fires it like a bullet. Although it is weaker than a normal Cero, it moves about twenty times faster and can be fired at a much higher rate, but the damage is much the same. Stronger Arrancar can also fire a more powerful Bala, while retaining its twenty-fold speed.

Name: Hierro
State: Both
Description: This refers to the hardened skin of the Arrancar, which is a result of their compressed spiritual power. While their skin is strong enough to block even released Zanpakuto bare-handed, it is by no means impenetrable. Stronger Arrancar have proportionally stronger skin.

Name: Pesquisa
State: Both
Description: This is the arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami ability to sense Spiritual Pressure. It functions similar to a sonar. Using pesquisa requires most Espada to enter a meditative state. Aki does this by twitching his senses which are reiatsu sensitive.

Name: Sonido
State: Normal/Resurrecion
Description: A very quick movement performed by Arranacar that allows them to move at high speeds for brief periods of time.

Name: Cero
State: Both
(虚閃 (セロ), sero; Spanish for "Zero," Japanese for "Hollow Flash," "Doom Blast" in the Viz translation) are high-powered energy blasts that can be fired from various body parts, such as mouth, tongue, hand or fingers. Only Gillians, Adjuchas, Arrancar, and the Vizards have so far been shown to use Cero attacks, and it appears that stronger entities can use it more efficiently. Various Arrancar and Hollow characters display variants of the technique, such as the Espada-exclusive Gran Rey Cero, the Cero Oscuras that Ulquiorra Cifer can use only in his released form, as well as the Cero Sincrético performed by Pesche Guatische and Dondochakka Bilstin.

Name: Master Hand-to-Hand
State: Both
Description: He appears to be highly skilled in hand to hand combat

Name: Spiritual Specialized
Description: Aki is refined and known for his level of command to his spiritual powers and elemental powers rather then his physical endurance or attack. Very proficient mark's men and fighter with his powerfully and varying rang of techniques and skill with their usage with the proper timing. Adapted at also recognized certain sensations of other spiritual and energy based skills and effects that others used

Name: Gran Rey Cero
State: Both
Description: It is performed by mixing an Arrancar's own blood with the Cero. The result is a cero with a much greater attack power, size, speed, and force, as well as a change of color unique to the Espada. It is also several times more powerful than a normal Cero.

Name: Cero Oblivion.
State: Release
Description: Cero Oblivion is a purple Cero, used only by the top three members of the Arrancar Five in their released form. This cero far greater then Cero Oscurus in power. It covers any exposed light into pitch darkness. The Cero Oblivion's range is vast, and its attack power is great. The Cero Oblivion is far greater than a average Cero. It is stated that Cero Oblivion's blast range is much larger than Cero Oscuras, meaning it is able to damage more enemies. Aki is the most proficient Esapda using this Cero master his Astonishing powers eve able to using in his speeds but still require a large amount of power to perform its attack power.

Name: Fleeting Generations
Description: This powers brings to imagery that past sensations into the current time line. Any kind of image that is brought back is entangle to every single sense of the five sense expect feeling. The illusion that hi bring to life will look, smell, sound and taste just it if it were real. However since it is just a merge it cannot harm or physical do anything other then distract the foes off. Only meant to bring forth old images from time line’s like say own old self or like a beaten foe, only images that I know of, certainly if enough force was infected on me the illusion will fail. like a digital replay of what has passed

Technique's name: Mark of the rose

User of the Technique: Aki

Technique Learners: Only Aki can use this power

Creator/ Master: self taught

Skill Level Technique: Advance

Level of Technique Rank: Create different symbols of magic upon and surface that Aki can see with his perception of sight. For this level he can only create four of the five marks.

Description: : Aki creates as a four magical symbol of the flower of love any where he please, any surfaces even in the air or liquids. He can create them all separate whenever he chooses after casting the mana needed for this spell (So for example he can save the use of any of the marks when ever he chooses after its casted) Each rose mark will have different effect depending on their color and their size can vary between as small as a finger nail to as large as and wide as a small house in terms of 2D dimensions. The Espada can also generate any combo of the colors he wishes. The markers remain inactive and on the flied until something touches them or until aki wishes to active the effects of his own will. The marks last the whole rpg if not used and cannot be moved once created. The formation of the marks is a mere few milla seconds and he can choose it with no physical signs other then a slight tint of color in his eyes for the mark he is about to create.

There are Four colors for each rose marker that each have different magic effects. Each varying in power of the effects depending on the size, further non of the marks are able to sick to any surface they are created on (Ex f i were to place it on the person then they would nearly need to move away from the mark as it floats where i placed it, it doesn’t sick on them)

Red Rose- The red rose will summon to its activation a gusher of vines and thorns from its surface, ensnaring the closest living matter with the power of a human or greater near it in a deathly grip and coil. Squeeze the captive with its incredibly strength and painfully thorns and the clasp will not let go until the matter it has is reduced to sun atomic size. There is 5 meter range limit as the vines will continue to grow until it reaches it limit or captures something and with each passing post it does not acquire a target the mark will double the number of the tentacles projectiles to chase the target at high speeds.

Purple Rose- The purple rose has the special ability of teleporting anything in a flash step fashion that touches in rather non living or living that actives it within a half a mile circumference of the marker which Aki can choose once the rose is active. With a flash of light signalling its activation

Yellow Rose- The yellow rose will create a storm of spiritual petals that surround the activation targets in a dimension just one dress size or suit size the target. The power of the rose swirl cage is nearly inescapable from the inside as touching the invisible walls of the cage will cause a painfully mental feedback . From the outside the cage draws its power from its continents, any attacks placed on it from the outside and the cage will draw power from its insides and use that to defend itself by using the drained spiritual power to strengthen itself, matching the strength of the attack with the amounted need to be drained. If the target inside no longer has strength and the cage can break easily from the outside. If no attacks are placed in it the cage will break the next post. If no attacks are lunched from either side then the cage will break on the next post.

White Rose- the white rose will grant a mercifully blessing to anyone that lands on its aura during its activation, healing them by 30% stamina (meaning that wounds cannot be closed up).
Black Rose- The black rose is the strongest effect and most closely used in terms of Aki's battle style of pure damage. Once activity the mark will combustion into a large explosion of darkness that will not only expand a fourth level blast with a 30 feet radius of damage but will expand three more blast of third level of 15 feet radius at the end of the first explosion. With a period of seven seconds before the next black rose mark can be created again after the first one set’s off.

- as state the weakness of this power is that once the mark is created it cannot move or be recreate after be made once already and further Aki would need to re use the power to make all the marks but before he can he needs to use make all the marks first and once he re-cast this all pervious marks unused will vanish


History: When Aki was reborn into an Espada he took it upon himself to improve in a more readily style of battle rather then the simply basics. He was decent with the blade and hand-to-hand battle but he soon learned compared to the rest of the other Espada he was a mere amateur, his spiritual power as Aki learned was greater then he expected and he had a certain amount of control over it then it surprised even his superior’s. he decide to work off his strehgn and became good at something such as this to make him stand out on his own.

Technique's name: Curse of the Rose

User of the Technique: Aki

Technique Learners: Only Aki can use this

Creator/ Master: Self taught

Skill Level Technique: Advance

Level of Technique Rank: Aki calls forth a swarm of rose petals that engulfs the foes that is aimed with this. The storm of petals is sized various with the ones that it engulfs as it expands to be a little larger the people inside. The swarm acts like a whirl pool around those inside to damage them.

Description: when every the opponents every attempted to increase their stats on their own or other effects or rather their stats decrease by any effects for either, Aki summon large numbers of petals that will appear around the targets and swirl over them in a large column of terror that will continue to cage them in until all damage is done to them in one post, they are still able to escape it should they move enough before the cage is formed. The petals magically damages them depending decrease or increases of their stats though any means. So it may either damage them horribly or very lightly with rose type power. Effect occur limitless amount of times depending on the foe’s stats changes. The cage is the size various with the seize of the enemies of eve plus a few inches all around to allow the opponents to still move and perform actions. every 10 points change to their stats this attacks deals them an attack of thirty level kido (so if the up their stats by 20 they get 60 level damage from this), 5 points change they have a level 15 damage( 15, 30,35 etc), one point change would be a static level 3 (meaning if they went up by one then another one they would get the 3 level damage separately) while the whole numbers like 5 or 10 would get their assigned damage. If people have other varying ways of changing their stats by others numbers would you inform me of, haven’t been able to find how much a person can change

History: When Aki was reborn into an Espada he took it upon himself to improve in a more readily style of battle rather then the simply basics. He was decent with the blade and hand-to-hand battle but he soon learned compared to the rest of the other Espada he was a mere amateur, his spiritual power as Aki learned was greater then he expected and he had a certain amount of control over it then it surprised even his superior’s. he decide to work off his strehgn and became good at something such as this to make him stand out on his own.

This power of course is unquiet one on its own as the part of Aki's mind that contains this is beyond his powers once he wishes to active its effects, it strongly connected to an animals protective insict to survival as it takes anything threat towards the boys's life into considering when casing such a power. Aki didn't really intend for something so out of his control but even the most intelligent man have their locked up impulse unaware off beyond their control.

Technique's name: Black Garden

User of the Technique: Aki

Technique Learners: only Aki can use this power

Creator/ Master: Self taught

Skill Level Technique: Advance

Level of Technique Rank: Create a large cage of thick thorns and around Aki and every opponent/ally around him in order to prevent the runners and give Aki the advantage edge in battle as the cage act to strike anyone that fights him.

Description: Aki conjures a large felid of thorns and roses from the ground traveling from center of the world towards the surface to surround Aki and anything around her. The size of this self inflected prison is 360 yard in length 159 yards in width with a formation time if like 10 speed fields in a dome like fashion circumference. The cage is very thick and difficult to enter or escaped once it’s formed but is possible however any opening created will quickly repair itself. This power also gives Aki a home advantage of his own veil power, for example for every post Aki or his opponents take a rose servant the size of a 5’7 foot man forms behind the being that is taking the post in the cage (Including Aki and vertical line a meter from the expending being) also each time spiritual power is used (rather Techniques, Kido) another rose slave is summoned. These simple incarnations of evil do nothing but remain static to their position not moving or performing actions at all, however should they be attack they instantly blow up in a small explosion that sends five baseball sized thorns in different directions in a shrapnel like effect damaging them with moderated rose damage for those caught, foes or friends alike. The rose servants remain on the flied permanently unless killed, further any and all rose tokens summoned by the foes ever flower bloomed around the cage’s vines will open and fire numbers single line beams of darkness from every Conner of the cage, dealing dark damage of a moderate spell but will quickly add up with the many blooms around (five per time), the beams travel though objects towards the other side so it can hurt two or more foes with one beam if they lined up as such. The garden also has another nasty power, one per post of Aki’s foes five snake like thorns from all five dimensional direction (from above, left, right, bottom and horizontal center) will sneak their way towards the enemies and try to both whip lash them with small rose damage and if able to try to entrap in a painfully coil to hinder moment, though the vines themselves are moderately easy to break even if coiled, upon contact the vines emit a shock of darkness either if they whip lash or coil a foe. The garden last for as long as aki is on the flied or until he’s destroys it, with that wilful choice the garden wither’s away destroying every rose token and activating their harmful effects
History: When Aki was reborn into an Espada he took it upon himself to improve in a more readily style of battle rather then the simply basics. He was decent with the blade and hand-to-hand battle but he soon learned compared to the rest of the other Espada he was a mere amateur, his spiritual power as Aki learned was greater then he expected and he had a certain amount of control over it then it surprised even his superior’s. he decide to work off his strehgn and became good at something such as this to make him stand out on his own.

Technique's name: Suppressing Curse

Technique Learners: only Aki can use this

Creator/ Master: Self taught

Skill Level Technique: Advanced

Level of Technique Rank: Aki is able to created a basket ball size over the battle filed that he is currently in. The orb acts like a pocket dimensional rift of darkness that once created will produce a power vacuum like force into self with only spiritual energy based force being effected not matter.

Description: Aki creates a temporal rift in the fabric of time in the immediate area in the form of a large black sphere with a bluish and black tint, about a three meter in width, length and height. The rift remains motionless floating in the air where it was created, after appearing it starts to gather like a powerful vacuum any type of spiritual energy thrown (so basically only techs, kido level 55and below) or form of free moving energy ( Like a nearby fire) with anything in a 50 meter radius of the rift for a three post. The vacuum like gathering can only affect energy that are worth his own level of power, any other stronger forces worth more will not be affected by the rift and no solid objects are affected by the sucked in (like gun bullets or knifes). After the three post has past then the orb becomes larger and larger tell it makes creates dark sparks like dark energies around the sphere, meaning that it was reached its limit, it expels all the energy it gathered and throws it back at the opponents, the shots look like a chain gun shooting streams of energy out of all its barrels at the same time. If the orb is physically attack with a powerful assault then the rift is closed off and obliterates all the energy its stores into nothingness. The orb works by sending all the trapped energy forward in time to the point of where it was taken, sending the energy’s to attack whatever is in the area at that location.

History: When Aki was reborn into an Espada he took it upon himself to improve in a more readily style of battle rather then the simply basics. He was decent with the blade and hand-to-hand battle but he soon learned compared to the rest of the other Espada he was a mere amateur, his spiritual power as Aki learned was greater then he expected and he had a certain amount of control over it then it surprised even his superior’s. he decide to work off his strehgn and became good at something such as this to make him stand out on his own.

Name: Demon nails

Element: Time

Description: This creates thirty bolts of non-elemental energies that gathering in front and to the sides of Aki in the form of orbs. This orbs cause moderate damage and have a decent moment speed with a homing effect. However these shots only move when Aki wills it, they will either stay in place or follow his targets until mentally commanded, even during mid firing sequence he can control these shots without hindering his own moment or other attacks. He can even created and detonate any of the orbs into front of any location visible to his eyes.

History: When Aki was reborn into an Espada he took it upon himself to improve in a more readily style of battle rather then the simply basics. He was decent with the blade and hand-to-hand battle but he soon learned compared to the rest of the other Espada he was a mere amateur, his spiritual power as Aki learned was greater then he expected and he had a certain amount of control over it then it surprised even his superior’s. he decide to work off his strength and became good at something such as this to make him stand out on his own.

Name: Evil light

Element: Darkness

Description: Aki unleashes an upward gathering of darkness that swirls and generates damage as it dawns targets in and upward while at the same time damaging them continuous with moderate dark damage around his body. The reversed whirlpool of power travels a maximal height of five meters while moving anything in it around like a tornado as they get damaged and dragged up from the force of the tec. Once the tecis over the upward force is gone and the targets falls to the ground near Aki. The outward range of the attack is two and a half meters all around Aki as he is the eye of the swirl.

History: When Aki was reborn into an Espada he took it upon himself to improve in a more readily style of battle rather then the simply basics. He was decent with the blade and hand-to-hand battle but he soon learned compared to the rest of the other Espada he was a mere amateur, his spiritual power as Aki learned was greater then he expected and he had a certain amount of control over it then it surprised even his superior’s. he decide to work off his strength and became good at something such as this to make him stand out on his own.

Name: Darkening Impulse
State: Both
Description: Aki Creates seven large traveling impulses from where ever his body is touching. This seven separated shock impulses can only travel across surfaces but they can use any type of surface before damaging. Aki can determine when this shock pluses injures the person so his attack spell can travel along their bodies like snakes. The impulses travel at great speeds across the surfaces of anything, traveling much like a snakes. Upon detonating they cause heavy dark damage, until however they blow the snakes like pluses do not harm anything as they travel merely moving to their target with incredible homing powers.

Name of Character: Aki tear

Current Rank: Espada 2

Current Spritual Pressure: 316

Name Of Techn: Great Attractor

state: both

Tech Skill Level: master

Small Summary: During a single post Aki’s freeze’s particles reiatsu compresses it into a large sphere that appearances to glow a bright lavender and is larger then size of Aki’s own body’s frame (in terms of height not width as it is circumference where talking about so like 9 foot all around sphere) during this Aki cannot rotate his body from the position ( meaning that he can turn left or right or look back) he is forming the sphere ( which happens in a single post) however he can slightly hover away his position ( still not rotation) at average speed to slightly help with evading. He can only fire the orb in a straight line. The sphere of frozen time has the same properties as diamond (frozen time, harder then metal) so upon impact it hit with the same physical force as a wrecking ball (30 strength) traveling at a single speed of 20 speed stats. However this is only a one hit deal, energy based will catch the hit, after which its force is transfer then orb disappears and must be re-casted if reused again though if physical matter gets in the way then the orb will knock it back till it hits the chosen target. While using this Aki is protected in the front from physical attacks only (as I can’t rotate at all the other angles make me variable) if hit while the orb is forming the it shall break and aki feels an additional knock back effect from the shattering attack in 70 meters away. The attack deals physical harm.

Technique's name: Black rose flare

Technique Learners: only Aki can use this

Creator/ Master: Self taught

Skill Level Technique: Master

Level of Technique Rank: Aki fires from his mouth a large purple and black stream of darkness much like a fire breath in appearance with black petals embed in it.

Description: Aki’s second most used. A large breath of dark flames tinted pink with rose petals embed in it. Causes moderated dark damage and instead of being effect with physical defensive it bypasses that and becomes magical damage, so magic defensive is the new guard against it. This flame also has the effect to swirl around anything it hits rather the dragon fires it in shots or a stream, insuring that all sides of its target is damaged. Can be used as many times as Aki wants in the form of streams or large projectiles orbs. Ball sized does 3 meter impact once it hits something and explodes while the stream is 5 meters in width and both travels 13 meters away from my mouth

History: When Aki was reborn into an Espada he took it upon himself to improve in a more readily style of battle rather then the simply basics. He was decent with the blade and hand-to-hand battle but he soon learned compared to the rest of the other Espada he was a mere amateur, his spiritual power as Aki learned was greater then he expected and he had a certain amount of control over it then it surprised even his superior’s. he decide to work off his strehgn and became good at something such as this to make him stand out on his own.

Name: Biological clock

Element: Time

Description: This power can work only on Aki himself that allows him to control the flow of time on his own body though not as well as one might think. He can neither complete control his own time only alter it to a basic degree, slowing down wounds or hasten the effects of enemy spell on him to achieve their time span shorter (but all effects that he feels are still felt).

History: When Aki was reborn into an Espada he took it upon himself to improve in a more readily style of battle rather then the simply basics. He was decent with the blade and hand-to-hand battle but he soon learned compared to the rest of the other Espada he was a mere amateur, his spiritual power as Aki learned was greater then he expected and he had a certain amount of control over it then it surprised even his superior’s. he decide to work off his strehgn and became good at something such as this to make him stand out on his own.

Name: Maelstrom of damnation
State: Both
Description: Aki creates a gathering distortion of darkness in a single point in time where he wishes which after then erupts into a outward blast of darkness pushing away anything caught it its radius to a 100 meter distance away while delivering high levels of darkness damage and negative energy which reduce their defense by 30% for three posts. The blast sphere is 30 meters in circumference maximum then receding back into that single point after it fully expands Aki is able to alter the size if the case calls for it. Also targets outside the blast radius are drawn into it by the force of gravity within 100 meters of the actually damage range, quickly drawing them in to try and damage them with the blast after they could think they might be safe avoid the tec. But of course it is still escape only a high drawing force is applied.


Name: Clockwork obstacle
Description: With this power Aki is able to generated a flied of distortion around his body in a sphere like fashion where time itself around him is twisted. The air around him even is visible be altered with his powers. Objects either matter or energy outside Aki’s own body will be effected as such that they will regress back into a more primal sate, attacks with kido will have their effects and damage lowed by 30% and weapons attacks will be blunter and cause last damage by 25% further the distortion will also reduce the movement speed of flesh and attacks by 20% allowing Aki to move freely with his speed for evasion abilities. The barrier extends 10 meters away from Aki in all directions and can be held up for one post but however will must be recharge for 5 post before used again.

Technique's name: Earthbound Protection

User of the Technique: Aki

Technique Learners: Only Aki can use this power

Creator/ Master: Self taught

Skill Level Technique: Advance

Level of Technique Rank: Upon casting this darkness mist gathers around the caster then forms together in front for their body into a large crystal that is the twice the height and width of the one using it. The newly formed jewel is that of a bright violet shine that can light up room with the light it emits from it, shaped muck like a large diamond like stone that hovers over the ground by an inch as not to touch. After the stone is formed it will shatter into itself and send forth seven large pieces of itself flying at dagger like projectiles (Size of any common hunter’s knife) from seven different angles that are in front of the caster able to block attacks with the strength of a 30 level kido or below.
History: When Aki was reborn into an Espada he took it upon himself to improve in a more readily style of battle rather then the simply basics. He was decent with the blade and hand-to-hand battle but he soon learned compared to the rest of the other Espada he was a mere amateur, his spiritual power as Aki learned was greater then he expected and he had a certain amount of control over it then it surprised even his superior’s. he decide to work off his strehgn and became good at something such as this to make him stand out on his own.


Release techs

Name of Character: Aki

Current Rank: 2 Espada

Name Of Tech: Black rose gale

Tech Skill Level: Master

Small Summary: In his release form Aki generates a massive gale of spiritual force that encircles him like a giant hurricane filled with rose like petals of black color. It force pushes outward while spinning in a counter clock wise motion around Aki. The force of the wind is that of a strong wind storm so it can’t cause too much physical harm itself.
With the power for the darkness Aki summons gale force winds filled with his own dark powers and petals swirling with anti-matter. Such properties are called for and suppressed into the endless current for force the sweeps over the entire flied (50 meters away from the Espada all around it). The winds themselves are not all that to notice as its strength is that of a strong windy day but the anti-matter petals and wind are something since they all hold the ability to absorb all kinds of spiritual based sustains (kido, tecs and zanpaktou and mask effects) after they absorb their fill the petals vanish taking the spiritual particles they took and dissipating harmless into the nothing. (Basically this power allows this Espapda to wipe out all effects, dispel effects, attacks and dismiss released Zanpaktou’s and mask effects all within a 50 meters around it, negation effect)( of course this only happens in the post its used so the weakness of that the person can merely re-cast kido, unlash their swords again or use whatever is negated the one post aki uses this) though Aki himself is immune due to him being in the eye of the storm that stretches from the center of the storm to that top of gales. Though with the nature of this type of power Aki once a rpg and any amount of spiritual force greater than his (level 50 kido or lower) will not be effect by this full effect but weakened by the difference in amount of h cost to the opposing power for the remainder of the rpg until the force is re-cast, re-activated or re-summoned. etc

Name of Character: Aki

Current Rank: 2 Espada

Name Of Tech: Rose restriction

Tech Skill Level: Master

Small Summary: Using the five tentacles that Aki gains in his released form he uses them to lash out more violent then normal with their thrones larger and faster moving and lengthen increased to that 27 meters to whip or coil up his opponents. using his five main thorns like tentacles he injects them with a special poison that turns those limbs into a bright purple the glows intense with evil. That gives these tentacles increased speed, control and range of the tentacles by 27 meters as she hurls them at the target to try and entangle up his targets. The countless thorns themselves are meant break the skin open and it up to infect with the poison. Even a little scratch will send the poison though out their entire body though at a lessened level, should any of the targets get caught and coiled with the whip then a large douse of poison that will remain larger in their bodies. With only a small amount of venom the effects reduce the targets status by 1 for each douse (times the thorns hits) and reduce the movement of the body 3 and last one post. With a large douse of the venom with greatly reduce their stats by 10 points movement and reaction speed by 12 points (after which the large douse can’t be used to weaken them again) and cause the target sickness such as mild dizziness, fever, aching over the whole body and amnesia which last for 3 posts. The toxin in his tentacles last only two post before reverting to normal. Must wait five post after each use.

Technique's name: Scrounge

Technique Learners: only Aki can use this

Creator/ Master: Self taught

Skill Level Technique: Master

Level of Technique Rank: Aki creates large orbs of greenish yellow like liquid around him that float around him and he is able to control.

Description: Aki gathers in front of his gaze a large mutating orb of poison that hold many deadly chemical properties. Colored green and yellow from such bio chemicals while bubbling in the orb like form. Each post Aki is able to create two orbs that may either float there in front of him where he is able to move it in the air to use as a shield or fire them as attacks that wildly splashes at whatever it hits this attack damaged the targets bio matter with its harmful substance that gives the body a strong sense of an acidy property to the gel like power on them. While entering their body and lingering for a single post to damage then 1 point of their total stamina the post after for three post (A delayed poison effect) (weakness of this is that Aki only can make two orbs per post so unless he saves them he won’t have this attack usable

History: When Aki was reborn into an Espada he took it upon himself to improve in a more readily style of battle rather then the simply basics. He was decent with the blade and hand-to-hand battle but he soon learned compared to the rest of the other Espada he was a mere amateur, his spiritual power as Aki learned was greater then he expected and he had a certain amount of control over it then it surprised even his superior’s. he decide to work off his strehgn and became good at something such as this to make him stand out on his own.

Technique's name: Nightmare pain

Technique Learners: only Aki can use this

Creator/ Master: Self taught

Skill Level Technique: Master

Level of Technique Rank: Aki generates a large number of thorn like tentacles from the ground to trap his foes or attack them with countless whip lashes. The earth shake from where the large thorns will appear from then break from the ground a giant hole will appear and the thorns will whip out.

Description: During the whole process of which is Aki is damage he sends a copy of the combined sensation to the earth where the roots of his evil lay wither he rest on the ground or flys though the sky, once per three turns all damage inflected to Aki builds into massive thorns that build from the earth and helix around all targets and applies rose damage to them depending on the damage built up (for example number of attacks of severity before the damage counter restarts). Thorns ranged 13 meters up from where they pop up from the ground and five meters thick. Once the damage is applied the thorns rush back into the earth. A secondary other effects is that instead of damage the thorns can be used to shield Aki with matching damage to block or reduce however only one effects can occur per four posts, and damage built up only gathers from the three posts and once the ability is used the damage counter is restarted.

History: When Aki was reborn into an Espada he took it upon himself to improve in a more readily style of battle rather then the simply basics. He was decent with the blade and hand-to-hand battle but he soon learned compared to the rest of the other Espada he was a mere amateur, his spiritual power as Aki learned was greater then he expected and he had a certain amount of control over it then it surprised even his superior’s. he decide to work off his strehgn and became good at something such as this to make him stand out on his own.


Technique's name: Eternal Beauty

Technique Learners: only Aki can use this

Creator/ Master: Self taught

Skill Level Technique: Master

Level of Technique Rank: A massive storm of dark violet petals rain down over the entire filed with a intense glow to them.

Description: The final and most powerfully attack that Aki has in his first release. A final large scale attack that renders everything Aki power into immense magical damage as this attacks summons massive amounts of Aki’s power in the form of black petals that swirls around and creates shock waves that’s travel at hurricane forces outward from Aki (1 mile away from him in three waves forming from collective spiritual pressure that pours out of Aki's body and forms the petal much like Byakuyas) Each wave after reaching the max amount distance it travels back inward towards back Aki with half the pushing force to disrupt any forms of matter effect by such strong winds. The force caused by the wave is nothing compared to the effects of the petals as each time it touches something they explode when they touch any form of matter or energy each touch causing high levels of rose and dark damage per blast and with the number of petals swirling around the distance of this attack then its more than likely that at many of them will attacked. ( Aki is the only one not harmed by the storm of petals as a barrier is erected around his body to form a second skin, which replies his own signature of nature there by allowing him to evade the petals from detonating him if they touch his body)

History: When Aki was reborn into an Espada he took it upon himself to improve in a more readily style of battle rather then the simply basics. He was decent with the blade and hand-to-hand battle but he soon learned compared to the rest of the other Espada he was a mere amateur, his spiritual power as Aki learned was greater then he expected and he had a certain amount of control over it then it surprised even his superior’s. he decide to work off his strehgn and became good at something such as this to make him stand out on his own.

Name: Tempest Strike
Description: Aki is able to create multiply distortions of ripping apart the fabric of time, unlashing out a large amount of chaotic energies that have no elemental aliment. Its fired rapidly in arrow like formations that drive like a hectically all around him with no visible pattern within a mile radius of Aki. The number of kido like strikes is countless and do not all strike into the physical plane all at once, they all appear with different delay timings. Further the several rifts in time that are contently still open even after their energy is released that will redirect any shots that are near it back into the battle radius of the flied. This storm of damage last for three post till it subsides the must take a recharge time of 5 posts.

Name: Date of decay
Description: with this power Aki fires a single round of special typetec only useable in realise form, this special shot of purple resitui fires at high speeds at his target and if it hits quickly surrounds the objects that it impacts, surrounding it (like if it where to hit arm then only the arm would slowly rot not the whole body) and then rapidly ages its infected target into dust however that hit must be a direct hit, breaking the entire orb so any non direct hits will not be effect by the shot.

Name: Time compression
Description: With this power Aki has full control of his element of time, able to fast forward, slow, reverse or entirely stop the flow of time on a limited bases (Such as that if he were to stop time he could not effect damage as anything but him is frozen as to prevent god modding) Even his own powers are effect by the time manipulation so its only his own body and a few selected other powers of his time element remain immune to the this power.

Technique's name: Veil scent

Technique Learners: only Aki can use this

Creator/ Master: Self taught

Skill Level Technique: Master

Description: Veil scent- The natural pollen of this deadly flower beast is so wretched and alluring that the very smell of it causes the internal frame of the people around it to weaken as though they are being damage, so the longer they remain within a 13 meters of this dragon the longer they take damage, with the targets wanting to approached eve like a sex drug thanks to the alluring scent creating a stunning attraction beauty hallucination ( 3% of damage every one of their own posts, Aki is not effected)

History: When Aki was reborn into an Espada he took it upon himself to improve in a more readily style of battle rather then the simply basics. He was decent with the blade and hand-to-hand battle but he soon learned compared to the rest of the other Espada he was a mere amateur, his spiritual power as Aki learned was greater then he expected and he had a certain amount of control over it then it surprised even his superior’s. he decide to work off his strehgn and became good at something such as this to make him stand out on his own.

Name: Distortion’s gate

Element: Time

Description: Aki creates a large sphere around the a target one that attracts his trade mark non-elemental energies into the cage of a single foe. Constantly applying damaging that them should that remain in the same spot upon the incoming blasts. The high level damage comes in surrounding fashion, traveling all all corners making evasion difficult but not impossible. Aki cannot move as his focuses to maintain the conductor of the damaging ( which is the targeting sphere) she he be attacked he must break of the focus and to get out of the way or being harmed severity. Last as many posts until he stops focusing. consumes a large amount of reiatsu with each use

History: When Aki was reborn into an Espada he took it upon himself to improve in a more readily style of battle rather then the simply basics. He was decent with the blade and hand-to-hand battle but he soon learned compared to the rest of the other Espada he was a mere amateur, his spiritual power as Aki learned was greater then he expected and he had a certain amount of control over it then it surprised even his superior’s. he decide to work off his strehgn and became good at something such as this to make him stand out on his own.

Name: Eternal occurrence

Element: Time and darkness

Description: Lines of translucent dark purple and light blue darkness seep from the caster's pores encompassing the entirety of their form forming a sphere of corrugated rivulets taking their ever changing place in the tendril mass as an extension of their guarded extending from the caster three feet in diameter. During the first post the defensive ball of lines absorbs up to its own number in spells/techniques offensively aimed at the caster and in the case that the opposition's spells/techniques would exceed the number of Luminous then the effects/damage of the opposing force is decreased in percent value when the opposing forces are compared with one another. After an offensive spell/ability has been absorbed then the caster may send the remaining energy in the spell back upon the opposition in retaliation or keep the spell functioning for another post allowing for the lines to combine into larger tethers floating around the caster waiting to receive incoming fire, for each 10 number remaining there is a tether, and each tether may block an normal physical attack as well as the caster might though after the second post the spell departs completely. In the case that the spell turns offensive itself the liens also form into the five inches long tethers that accumulate for the defensive side's physical aspect and then stream towards the caster's opponent(s) by the caster's discretion; the tethers used for firing gain a deep azure glow as they are forming and leave behind a comet's tail of the same color denigrating in seconds after the tether passes at three speed the caster may run. Causing dark damage from the remaining small amount.

History: When Aki was reborn into an Espada he took it upon himself to improve in a more readily style of battle rather then the simply basics. He was decent with the blade and hand-to-hand battle but he soon learned compared to the rest of the other Espada he was a mere amateur, his spiritual power as Aki learned was greater then he expected and he had a certain amount of control over it then it surprised even his superior’s. he decide to work off his strehgn and became good at something such as this to make him stand out on his own.
powers and create seven of his own types of kido.


Strength: 25
Resurrection 35
Segunda 40

Speed: 50
Resurrection 55
Segunda 70

Dexterity: 60
Resurrection 60
Segunda 60

Stamina 30
Resurrection 35
Segunda 45

History:
Human > Hollow During his time as human living in this boy was a simply lad, average in most things and of course good in a few things as everyone was. However he was never considered a prodigy nor exceptional most of his teen life, school was aright as he spent most of his grade B’s aside from that normality was a general theme in his life as a human, his family was there and like common folk were caring and work involved much of the time so he saw them only in the evenings and aki was gratefully for it. The world at the time was drowned its own sorrow and despite, tecnogliy was faster and people were always in a rush to get things down, aki dislike how many people spent their time rushing though what little grains of sands humans had so most of the time he taught himself to look on the brighter things in life and soon he enjoyed every little blessing he got, especially the flower garden he greatly tended to as if it was his own children. His friends tended to be a little in awe how often he had the power to cheer up their own gloom but tend to forget that Aki had his own issues with work. It was not until the early years of adulthood of age 19. When he was discovered as a model and most of the rest of his human life he spent across sea’s working for major labels and working the cat walk. With the distance and the havoc trips from country to country it was hard to maintain ties with his old life. In no way did he change too much for personality wise, appearance wise some of his family called him an ego manic plastic doll that cared more for his looks. But of course that was his job to look good and from his old fashion family he soon parted ways with his everything from his old life and went on into the international standards of the fashion world from age 19 to 25 with lots of shows under his belt. He meet his end during a shot when a hollow broke in the studio and devoured the unaware. He Always had a unusual and power soul to him just from his neglected of training it though his awareness the boy’s spiritual poteinaol remained dormant. His soul twisted and sent to Hueco mundo the former aki died and was reborn into a hollow.

Hollow > Gillian: much time as a normal hollow were spent underneath the white sand as rest of them did, much to his dismay Aki still had something special that set him apart from the rest of his fellow kin though he was more then willing to pretend to be one of them until such a time as he would need to show himself as not mindless. That day came sooner then he first thought as another hollow that had also re-discovered itself as its human traits challenged the pack of menos which Aki’s followed, watching his clan eating and devoured, and left as the single remaining member Aki challenged and won against the other gillan, only to be so weakned in pain that in order to recover his wounds his power Aki had to eeat the corpies of his tribe, feasting on what reamiend before finally having enough power to escaped that dark underground and to the surface of the white sand where he kept on feasting and regain parts of his human life.

Gillian > Adjuchas Adjuchas > Vasto Lorde/Arrancar: The hollow remains of Aki wondered the endless desert devouring the remains of other hollow eating away at the defeated that either were dying before aki got there or the onset that found a superseding battle with the once easy going boy into a fairly strong beast. One day a large Ballston that were retrieving information on huceco mundo found the solo wondering hollow as kept tabs on its battle ability, they took interest in him as a test subject and though Aki managed to take more then half the death gods their captain proved far too strong and immobilized the hollow. Sent back to their base in Hueco mundo the shinigami performed tortuous experimental after e experimental on the hollow, actually intend to increase its power and physical traits. Eventually their pet became to strong even for them to contain and soon even the shinigami’s capital stationed at that post was devoured and rendered into death. Aki eat his fill and transformed forever into his human form, realizing his former beauty and finding new power he was discovered with that other Arrancer and brought to the center stage of the creators.
It took a while

Learning of this his started first at the side of the lower ranked espada as a fraccion but soon was faced with the true cruelty of the hollow race. They found him too soft for the most part especially with the nature bond affiant that he master which to most of the descriptive ones was a mere joke only to proven wrong as he made a claim for power to rid himself of the sounds of aversion by his co-workers. He finally drafting his subroutines and boss becoming the seventh ranked espada. Maintaining his model style and life changes his appearance is still as elegant and wondrous as it was as a human but not gifted with eternally youth even with the years passing like seconds to him.

Arrancar > Espada: eventually rising though the ranks of the Espada and now becoming number two Aki retrained much of his human mind, personalities and unique powers and the control that came with it. To this date the boy had never had the physical prowess of the rest of the Espada, even ones below the top ten. However what makes Aki slightly different from the rest of the common battle abilities of the hollows is that his variety of abilities and longer range powers make him the perfect back up and cover for almost any operation that calls for him. Much time has been spent on his spiritual powers in training and to this date his is known to be an organized responsible specialized. Now alone with his former Espada friends gone and him only tending to his own desires Aki has come to grips with a slowly harder view on the afterlife, shutting his kindness off to anyone that didn’t show him first

RP Sample: Aki’s attacks evade at the moment’s notice from the accursed battle abilities of the nobody of his target and his manoeuvres. Though thankfully his heartless and forte’s mages were welding down the army of naught well enough well of course losing casualties on their sides. The snipers shooting forth at the angel stars that turned there back too easily to the fast moving foes, few managed to raise their wings in defence but some did. Those that killed even a singled heartless was meet with a sword from several invisible before vanishing in white sparks, even they too however meet at some ends as the dancers and berserks would soon follow up in formation beating them in a puffy black smoke. The wizards casting many elemental magic’s through out the area at max, leo and the nobodies themselves, meeting deaths in the thousands as both they and many of their foes ended their lives. Hearts raising and vanishing into the darkness each time a heartless solider fell and by the looks of the Aki’s heartless was mowing down now in the thousands. The raging colossal canines that were be named the Behemoths stampeding through crushing those in their way, trying only to crush the enemy forces but of course with their size there are were some black wizards stepped on and flattered into a gooey mess with many of the dusks and creepers killed. The assisters and air borne managed to evade but some felt the surges of the hideous blots of darkness that emitted from their horns. The remain angel stars defending the black wizards with their unbreakable wings of white but then meeting with number one loner xemnas as he swung away his laser blades. Aki rushed over to his sights from the mists of chaos finding only for a moment that he was in the back of the lines sticking the helpless mages from the behind.

The coward Aki thought as he was about to charge in airborne and give a heavily dose of lead and shove it down his throat, his leg muscles tensed and taking the first step into that direction but the next words that caught his ear range of sounds made his actions freeze with sorrow…so much so that he dropped his weapons and looked in terror, the hand guns vanished and reappeared in their holster but still did Aki look on with swelled eyes that rain down as salty down his high cheek bones and dripped heavily down his chin. The La Vaeas fell to his knees on the battle ground’s dirty, expression only that of if he had just witness a death of dear friend, it was close enough as Rose just betrayed them…turning to Max and leo’s side and attacking riku over some ridicules notion of jet being under his control. Lenneth had no idea what to do at that moment, right then and there he wanted to cruel up feeble ball and wallow in his own pain for a long time just long enough to stick a knife though his human heart just to make the pain of this deception. He almost did as the musculature of his torso tensed and started to roll into itself with endless tears pouring like a river. How could she…why?....his entire world crumbling down in a mental break down as his best friend was attacking his husband. Hrist tried so hard to jump in and shield the kinder side from this pain but Aki resisted with every fiber of his sorrow. Even in the pit of sadness there was a inner drive that he knew his and Riku’s home must be kept safe from those that would bring it harm. He knew what he must do even though his heart in that heartless shell may never recover from this thorn, taking his ring and putting it close to his cheek rubbing in along his tender flesh so much as he longed to hold Riku close to him but stronger his will had to become just for now. Using their mutual power across worlds alike the La Vaeas muttered mentally to his seme this before making his last rest sort action. “ Riku….please…do what must be done… and no matter what…please if anything…be safe. Lenneth muttered as best he could trying to mask the amount of pain his heart ached for but it was the hardest thing to do “ Riku…don’t worry about me…I shall…kill off my heart… be the solider we need now…I shall kill anything that harms our home!” he shouted to gain what strength he could bulldozing this emotion at the worse time. Standing to his feet and freezing his body as to look mighty and whipping the water out from his sights.

The Spell weaver erupting in the darkness of his own power as slowly his closed his eyes to place a simply mask on top his flawless face, slowly inching to connect and seal both his beauty and heart into a empress void that merely shock the very foundations of the world from the mere strengthened force of his powers emitting forth from the body. The winds picking up and pushed outward from mystical forces gashing from within that dark shell. It claimed with time but soon meet focus unlike anything else the La Vaeas has ever shown before soon power terrforming into the elements of rose, spamming them all over the vicinity, large enough to encase all three armies in their tracks and every single fighter within that 360 yards long and 480 yards wide of where Aki stood in his newly robotic expression behind that masquerade. His thoughts slient’s to all even riku as he had no true thoughts any longer so long as he wore that item, now it was all about self preservation. Aki rushed into the fray of the main targets with his gun fire dancing along the airs in their blazing melt ready to pierce flesh and shatter the bones of anyone that got into their paths. Primarily the target of such Gatling was leo how seemed to be the most talkative right at this moment. Before taking into the air and thrusting downward the lion man with a brawny heel strike from such heights, granted Aki’s normal monstrous physical brut was that of a normal human man thanks to the gun’s side effect but still he could deliver the same pain of a seventh degree black bet while still shooting down ward at his target. Hitting him or the ground did not matter either way, the clear conception thing was he was going to hit something hard and rebound into a hand spring holding his muscular weight with one hand still firing off that single free hand gun at leo while his tentacle would stretch and whip lash the traitor max how was close by as Riku too came in.

But the merciless assault would not stop there, not that long ago that woman dare to battle with Riku and such was yet another target to the Heartless prince in a monsters like sate. No matter what attacks or kinds of reaction his target that he just attack made towards him he would defend his best and sore upward high into the limits of his rose cage and dived bomb towards the MCP and the water guardian with every available amounts of speed as he conjured up a new deadlier weapon with his hands after throwing the guns backward and catching them with his tentacles, javelin the spear of oblivion at the two of them his aim was to Perice the both of them through the chest so they could die happily together in each other arms. Course it would not stop there, still approaching both of them he plunged his fist at them with the limited strength he had, soon enough to meet them or pushing through his tentacles raising and firing off the guns at close range to their bodies while his bone like spear tail whipped underneath his legs and ascending at rose’s stomach to further slaughter her.

The cage's power now fully embracing the entire filed awaking now that its evil herbal power enclosed so many willing bugs, the steel hard rose vines that created the nearly inescapable clossiem of thorns would send snake like viper of his own thorny creation at every single fighter inside aside from Lenneth and lash each of them with hundreds of bites, lashes of each vine the countless thorns embedded on them. with Lenneth's moves done for the moment a rose servant large enough to be a man rose from the ground and now merely stands their to go off like a bomb should anything touch it much like a bomb, standing were Lenny stood before attacking leo.

Update Approved.

bumpage with weapons and stats changes

Maelstrom of damnation - limit the area affected to like 100 meters or summin. Also i am incleaned on approving this because at that strength of gravity it would effect you in a huge way too. gravity is multidirectional lol.

Name: Time compression remove - we have battle mods now to stop godmoding

spacal rift release = powerlevel that was absorbed

explain what magic and darkness damage is

Apart from that the rest seems to be cool.

edited maelstrom

tone down gale

And can i have time compression if i put more of a limit on it? like needs post cool down limited after usage? i also made it so all of my attacks are effect as well and that i cannot effect anything during the time control

magic damage is basically just like kido damage and darkness damage is the elemental damage just like a ice, fire, lightning etc from say zanpakotos

Ok ill allow it time compression but i will be watching you like a hawk. any misshaps or wrong usage is auto unapproval. you also need to describe what magic and darkness damages are in you stuff. lol

APPROVED RENJI!

Whoot thanks hun XD

I was informed by a member that your application was very 'iffy' and asked to look into it, I've run everything below by Kou before posting so that there is nothing I have posted that would be an allowance I am unaware of. Also, through this text wall I be mentioning various other applications and quoting stuff a lot. Quite a few are from my own application, but I want you to know ahead of time that this is not a pety "OMG, Aki has powerful techs that threaten my Zero! GRAH! SHRED HIS APP!" sort of deal, I was, like I said, informed by a member to look into this and I did.

Believe me or not, that's the truth of the matter, I have no problem with having other powerful characters on the site, but I do have a problem with OP. So without further delay, your own personal post tsunami, its too large to be a post wall, needed a new classification (its 4.5k words long to be exact, took me two days if you're at all curious. I'm devoted to my work.) Without any further delays, let's begin...

Aki wrote:
Represent: Dragon (Stats increases by 15 each)

The +15 Stat increase, which I'm going to assume is a horrible typo, will have to come down the standard +20 total for Release for Arrancar.

Zanpakuto:
You're going to need to update, because you don't even have your Zan information located on this application and your Res seems rather outdated for template standards.

Hierro:
Remove the Nnoitra reference, its not needed.

Sonido:
I can't find the quote presently, but I know that Kou has made statements regarding the existence of after-images. And this is a blatant copy, almost word for word in some cases, of Gemelos Sonido which your Sonido is indeed not:

BleachWiki wrote:
Gemelos Sonído (双児響転 (ヘメロスソニード), Hemerosusonīdo; Spanish for "Sound Twins", Japanese for "Sweeping Sound Ceremony"): Zommari's Sonído is so fast that it can leave a total of five tangible after-images of himself behind after he moves which he uses as diversions, substitutes or multi-directional attacks. These "speed-clones" generated by his intense Sonído are so realistic that they had even shown the ability to bleed after getting attacked.

and your Sonido:

Aki wrote:
Name: Sonido
State: Normal/Resurrecion
Description: A very quick movement performed by Arranacar that allows them to move at high speeds for brief periods of time. Aki is able to perform it longer then most people, walking or merely maintaining it like normal movement as his after image in the image of three trails close behind. Aki’'s Sonído is so fast that it can leave a total of five tangible after-images of himself behind after he moves which he uses as diversions, substitutes or multi-directional attacks. These "speed-clones" generated by his intense Sonído are so realistic that they had even shown the ability to bleed after getting attacked.

Now if you had just copied down the standard Sonido, it wouldn't matter because its an ability thats across the board, but Gemelos Sonido is for an individual and is thus not fit for you to copy and use for your own character.

Master of Hand to Hand:
Passive abilities would be better placed elsewhere outside of techniques, though Hierro is also passive and also a technique, I assume it would be better to just place this under an abilities section but we lack one at the present time...anyhow, just figured i'd bring it up, I don't know what to do with it...

Regeneration:
You just denied this on Jace's application, and if you look at the wording:

Aki wrote:
Name: Regeneration
State: Both
Description: A most notable trait is that fact that he has extremely high speed regeneration. Aki can quickly regenerate any part of his body except for his brain and Internal organs. However, this power also requires that he had sufficient spiritual energy.

Jace's App wrote:
Name: Regeneration
State: Both
Description: Schneizel's most notable trait is that fact that he has extremely high speed regeneration. Thanks to his fomer hollow self Schneizel has this ability. He can quickly regenerate any part of his body except for his brain and Internal organs. However, this power also requires that he had sufficient spiritual energy.

I'm not writing out Jace's character's name just to quote his app...anyhow, these both are effectively the same thing with only little wording differences and some minor explanation of the ability on Jace's part. The sole difference is the number, and thats not enough reason to excuse this being on your application.

Cero Doble/Cero Sincrético:
As I've posted on other applications, these are character specific abilities, and I don't want to see it replicated on everyones application (hence I left them out of mine) which is a fair enough reason to remove it since you yourself stated you don't like seeing multiple characters with similar abilities when you were commenting on Jace's regeneration ability. So be fair and remove them.

Cero Oblivion:
Your description of the attack seems to imply to me that you can use this ability with minimal energy being spent, please edit it to reflect the large amount of reiatsu needed to perform this technique, shouldn't take to long.

Fleeting Generations:
How does this ability work? How do you have access to another person's memories? Thats the main issue I see here, reiatsu is not able to 'drain' memories out of a person so you can use them for your techniques, so I don't see how you have access to your opponents memories. Also, this is remarkably similar to Aizen's Zanpakuto ability.

I hate to reference a Wiki for direct information, but if you would look at Aizen's Zanpakuto ability at the below link you'll see the similarities:
http://bleach.wikia.com/wiki/S%C5%8Dsuke_Aizen

Kaji-Kanto wrote:
[05:44:16] @ Kaji-Kanto : were not allowing illusions like aizens
[05:44:24] @ Kaji-Kanto : and it cannot be unbrekable

Your illusions are most definitely Aizen-like, and they do not present a chance to break out of them, or it isn't mentioned. So this technique is going to need heavy alterations, you need to explain how it functions, why, and then it has to be toned down quite a bit, and it needs to have an explained method of breaking it.

Mark of the Rose:
Alright, the big boy...first off, whats with the mention of 'mana' all the time? Please correct that.

Your marks can vary in size, fair enough, but the effect should logically ALSO vary in size. For example, if its the size of a cat, you cant make a building size fireball come out of it, it just plain wouldn't fit or work. If this isn't effect, then you run across some very unique cases which make the technique very OP.

Ex. You could place the mark on an opponents forehead and kill them with Black Rose.

Of course, that will need to be added to, you shouldn't be able to place the mark on an opponent, or on their clothing, sword, or just within a 1ft radius of them because then you abilities became virtually impossible to dodge in most cases.

I'm not touching the time you can use it, but if its the fast it needs to be visible at least, so you probably should just remove the really small sizes and make it from a more modest size and up. Now for the actual rose colors....

Red Rose: Well, when discussing my brother's application, Spades, you mentioned that reducing things to a sub-atomic level was OP. Unfourtunately, this was done in the ChatBox and I cannot quote the whole thing due to my inability to forsee a use for it, however, I can quote you on his app:

Aki wrote:

However, when another object comes in contact with the sword, that object is put under the black holes pressure too. This results in the conflicting object, no matter how large or powerful, to be reduced to a ball of matter. This can be reversed however, if someone has the gravity element and can reverse the pressure to bring it back to it’s original state.

So basically you have the power to reduce anything into nothing >.> yaa tone a lot that down wayy too OP

And you later went on to explain in the box that sub-atomic was effectively 'nothing' when he stated that it wasn't being crushed into 'nothing'. So you'll have to fix that on your application too, no sub-atomic level crushing.

As I've read it, it has a 5m range that doubles every post? Uh-uh, thats way too much range for something that grabs and crushes you like you were bubble wrap. If I misunderstand, then you'll have to forgive me and explain.

Purple Rose: So basically this needs a way to escape it, like a flash of light a few seconds before it goes off or something because otherwise you could be teleporting the populous of Soul Society onto your sword like a skewer. Its exaggerated, but you get my point, needs a chance to escape.

Yellow Rose: How long does it take for this happen? Can the target escape before activation of it? And as before, remove the 'magic' part, the Bleach universe doesn't have mana or magic. Your explanation is very crunchy on the flow, please make it more fluent if you can. As I understand it, your reiatsu from your attacks and the opponent's reiatsu from their attacks to make it strong. So if they don't attack it, and you don't attack it, does it die off or something?

The other explanation i'm seeing is a Jiroubo deal, and then it DEFINITELY needs a way to break out of it before the person inside is dead.

White Rose: Uh-uh, 50% healing? If you're regen was still the same, this would make you effectively unkillable. Needs some serious nerfing...and what is a third level cure spell? Also, remove the mana reference.

Black Rose: Might wanna check the grammar on this one, and again with the levels? What levels are you talking about, because I have no clue. Anyhow, 40ft explosion initially, fine, and then it explodes again for a total of a 55ft raidus, also fine, but whats the delay? How soon after explosion A from it going boom again into explosion B?

Curse of the Rose: This is really hard to read bro, please make this more fluent. And so you change any stat changes they have ACTIVE on them or you do this for any stat changes ACTIVATED in the petals? And you're going to need to describe how much damage is taken per number, probably by increments of 5. Also, you say this reverses the stat increase to a decrease, which I have a problem with. Not only do they take damage, but they lose their stat bonus and instead get a reduction, one or the other, otherwise this is totally OP.

Black Garden: This makes me think of a Yugioh character, and I'm thinking its based off of said character...anyhow, on topic! You're going to need a certain maximum size for this, because otherwise its just automatic that they get caught in the thing with you. I know you say 'three football fields' but please change this to actual numbers. And how fast does this happen?

For the servants, this is OP. Not only are they trapped in the cage, but everytime they try to fight you or escape, they make minions for you, and when you attack, you make even more minions. Even if they dont move, they go boom (oh and you slipped up with the use of 'rose token' in your tech, watch less Yugioh 5Ds...) Okay, first of all, how many minions are created, you never specified. Is it per technique, I think thats what you meant but you never stated it. And where are they created? This hasn't been specified either.

Oh, and most definitely the thing about the roses shooting lasers when another one is summoned? Yeah, that's major OP...Oh, and you mentioned Eve's name in your technique too, you're not doing a very good job of hiding its almost copy-pasted Yugioh influence bro...

Attacking from five directions with thorns, which could potentially detonate the little rose bombs the opponents reiatsu is making, and then them being almost unable to escape the cage? Seriously, no way, not unless you're stationary and this is tearing up your reiatsu like a kinder gardener with a Tonka truck tears up the front lawn...

And a 10% stat increase? Sorry, but if I get one use of the phrase 'Hell no' I'm using it here. Hell. No. 10% isn't even specified if its per stat or total and where the points go, but thats a huge amount and a huge no. I'm not even bringing into account the fact that you yourself have stated that their were to be no stat increases (on Jace's app, but I won't quote it this time) because you seem to have relented on that point.

Suppressing Curse: Woah, woah, woah, did you not tell me that having an ability to use a black hole like drawing force, even though it reduced my own Speed by 5 and I could open it with a cool down, was OP? And then I had to remove regaining energy it consumed and make it once per topic just to get it approved like it was? And this is effectively the same thing, but it lasts multiple posts, has no cool down, no negative side effects, and then it shoots the energy BACK at opponents? Nuh-uh, not fair at all bro, remove this or nerf it.

Here's a reminder so you don't think I'm pulling this stuff from thin air...

Aki wrote:

Aki wrote:

Similar to the multiple mouths on the White Hand form, Traca gains an additional mouth on his chest in the Dark Hand form. This mouth, though it can still be used as the focusing point of Cero, serves primarily as the container of a large Garganta within the body. This is not a standard Garganta, taking the form of a dense black sphere that attracts Kido and techniques to it with a powerful inward pulling. This effect is constantly present, creating a loss of 5 Speed due to its existance while it remains closed. When opened, however, the Speed reduction is negated and the sphere sucks in attacks and consumes them. Consumed attacks increase Traca's reaitsu in an equal amount as the attack consumed from the originator. Consumed attacks do not harm Traca with their initial or subsequent effects unless these effects would function on a Garganta.

This mouth cannot be opened more than once every three posts.

Now I’m having the issues with your demon mouth effect, the limit of just losing Five speed just seems to very minor to being able to absorb any kind of attack and any number and then powering yourself up with it equal to and having any harming effects to you negated, plus your speed is fine ones it opens meaning you can normally move anyways. Even with the waiting before you can use it again, using this at the right moment during a large number of attacks or one really big attack would be devastating and very powerfully to have. So ya take this out unless you have a idea on how to really really balance this out

Well I don't really intend to play the role of the noob and post here saying:
"I took out A, and reduced to B, is it okay now?"
Its a highly ineffective system, so you tell me what you want changed to get this approved and I'll see what I can do. The reiatsu drain can be removed, the cool down can be increased or just made once per topic. (Side Note: The -5 Speed drain is 1/3rd of the stat boost provided by a Release form, so its actually not so little of a drawback.)

Drain yes has to be removed and a just once per topic is fine[/quote]

Demon Nails: Who is Yggdrasil? You're name is Aki...

Evil Light: Its not a spell, its a technique, please fix that.

Great Attractor: This is very crunchy in flow, try smoothing it out so its less of a chore to read and comprehend because as it is I personally wouldn't understand the thing if I didnt spend five minutes reading and re-reading...I don't even fully understand it after that, so when its clarified I'll be able to post about it.

Black Rose Flare: Eve influence...anyhow, remove the whole 'magic' thing, like everything else that mentions it. Oh and you mention a dragon, your not Black Rose Dragon, so you might want to edit that part out. It states you can use it as many times as you want, well yeah, thats kind of implied in the nature of a technique, you can use it as you please within reason and reiatsu, so you don't need that there. Also, if the attack has multiple forms, it'll need multiple descriptions of the attack, because you mention a few and then don't specify.

Biological Clock: Could you provide some examples of how this works? You slow down your bodily functions to halt wounds? Is it just in one place or your whole body? If its in one place, that creates a few problems...for example, lets take a sheet of paper. In the middle of this paper, we freeze it (like really freeze, water freeze) and then we shake the paper. Well, the middle won't take that, so it breaks. The same with your body, if you slow down one part, its not going to react like the rest, and you'll end up hurting yourself rather severely if you tried to move anything connected to that part (and since the body is ALL connected, move at all and you have problems.) The concept is fine, but the way you implement it, or I understand it, is very dangerous and probably not what you wanted. The same thing happens if you speed up a part of your body.

Now if you sped up the whole thing, thats a whole new thing, are you intended to 'blink'? Or are you intending to stay in place and just speed up within a little 'bubble' or something? Details my friend, details...

As for slowing down or speeding up attacks, this speeds them up in the same area of space correct? Time is a very fragile thing, so I expect better explanations of abilities using it, or else your just begging for someone to abuse a loophole. If you speed it up, but not in its area of space, then you've effectively just sped up your own injury because the attack would just 'blink' out and then reappear where the time influence ends. Which could be useful in its own right, because it would just go right past you if you sped it up enough. What I think you meant is to speed it up and hold it in place, which isn't solely time, thats spacial manipulation as well, which means it would consume quite a bit of reiatsu, if it was possible at all. You'd have to make something immune to the effect of time to contain it, which is feasible in the Bleach universe, but not cheaply.

I only dabble in time related sciences, so correct me if I'm wrong but I think i got it.

Maelstrom of Damnation: Alright, now we're talking...gravity is much better for me...

Okay, first of all, a distortion of gravity is not the same thing as a time based effect. Time is Gravity's B****, gravity is the superior of the two there, gravity will bend time, as is displayed by a black hole, and you have time control, not gravity control. So this whole ability is conceptually flawed, but that could be fixed, so I'll keep going.

You say 'anything in its radius' well what IS its radius? You can't just tell us that and then specify, thats like saying theirs candy at the bottom of the pool, what kind of candy? Don't be cruel, what's the radius/candy? You blast them AWAY from this raidus 100 meters, well, is this 100 meters TOTAL from the center point or is it 100 meters from where they're located within the attacks radius? Also, once they leave the radius, wouldn't they slow down? So how FAR they are in the radius is pretty important and the distance would probably warrant a chart...it'd save you time to just say they're blown to the outside of the radius, but that's your call.

Now, this 'gravity curse', that makes no sense. Like I said, you don't control gravity, so thats not even possible, and second of all, what the hell is a gravity curse? More importantly, how does it lower your defenses? I don't get the logic here, it makes negative sense to me...

And whose Lenrist? Bro, you're name is Aki, if you're gonna use other people's abilities at LEAST edit out the name, I mean come on! That's just plain lazy, not cool...and all targets OUTSIDE the radius are drawn INTO the radius? With gravity, again, no gravity, and thats OP anyhow. So if they're not in range, you make them in range, a definite no-no. And then you say when they thought they might've escaped, well if we don't know the range radius even if we read the technique and meta-gamed we STILL couldn't get out of it in the first place so thats an impossibility >_<

Me checking this technique is longer than the technique...its quite humorous...no offense...

Clockwork Obstacle: Okay, this SOUNDS like gravity because gravity bends time, but I can't really prove that reiatsu couldn't imitate the same effect so this can fly...okay, now to the actually technique...

A more primal state is definitely the wrong word to use it, time has absolutely no direct effect on lowering a Kido. They aren't Pokemon, they don't evolve, this technique makes it sound like your devolving a kido which is impossible. Same with attacks, they aren't Mega level Digimon, you can't devolve them. You could rapidly age a weapon, theoretically, but that would be a different effect than a time sphere, you would have to speed up the oxidation process, and Zanpakuto haven't shown an ability to oxidize so I'm just going to assume they don't because they don't need sharpening or any of the other things metal weapons imply.

Axe these percents, they're unneeded confusion, just express everything in points of stats, that shouldn't be too difficult or too different, and it achieves the same effect without having to worry about how fast an attack is lowered by x%.

Earthbound Protection: Personally, I hate seeing 'block x number of attacks' especially in a proffessional application, and I think it would be much better to just describe the strength and thickness of the sphere, because then you have to worry about how powerful an attack is, and whats your base value here? Whats the base attack you're comparing it to because you say stronger attacks can break it without three, so whats the comparison you're using? And you say it lessens attacks, but like I said, you need a description of how thick or powerful it is to know how much it lessens.

Black Rose Gale: Ugh, more? Really, you have more techniques than I do...if theres no eye, then you'd be thrown around too, and I think you were trying to make yourself an exception but I can't interpret that last statement, its garbled English, please clarify.

100 meters is kinda ridiculously huge for a windstorm seeing as you don't even have the Wind element as one of your families, so I'm going to ask that you tone this down quite a bit to a more modest number. And it absorbs attacks? So you have a 100 meter defense that absorbs any spiritual attacks? I'm going to have to take an additional 'hell no' for this app...HELL. NO. I see how you tried to like nerf it with 77 and up Kido, but thats so not enough to make up for this, and you're not effected either so this is just plain OP.

And it recharges after 3 posts? No, no, no, no, no...axe that too, once per topic after you're done nerfing this thing like it was the WoW Paladin...

Rose Restriction:

A- You're not a she, once again, edit it to fit your character instead of the original user
B- Percents, axe them.
C- I'll look back over this when thats fixed and you make this more fluent because I can't understand a word of it as it is except a few things which I mentioned above.

Scrounge: More spell stuff? Remove and correct...and make it more fluent, you're capable of it, so don't write techniques where their descriptions look like you switched personalities half way through.

Nightmare Pain: You take your damage, once every three posts, and make it into an attack? Okay, well, this is going to need a better description, how much damage equals how many thorns and how powerful or whatever the aim of this technique is because you pretty much lost me. Once again, please make it flow so we can read it with some comprehension.

Eternal Beauty: Endless amounts of power? Even as a descriptive text thats unrealistic, so be more descriptive about the effects (and once again, this isn't magic...) And this is really hard for me to read, like every other tech, fix the grammar and structure...and you say you disrupt any energy and cut through any matter with waves of reiatsu? No, be realistic, describe what it disrupts, and what it cuts, oh and you mentioned Eve again...and you're not harmed by it? What makes you special, its reiatsu in a solid form, it can't differentiate from you and opponents, so that doesn't make any sense. Even if its yours, thats like saying your stick of dynamite won't hurt you if you stand right next to it, the dynamite is rather indifferent to you...

Tempest Strike: You rip apart time and make some sort of weapons out of it? That doesn't really make sense...time isn't an object, per se, so it can't be physically used for attacks, so this technique is just plain impossible.

Date of Decay: You say Kido and Bankai, you're not a Shinigami, you're an Espada. And invisible attacks are a no if they're that destructive, and once more, its not magic.

Time Compression: Don't you have a tech like this, Biological Clock? You don't need both of them honestly >_>

Veil Scent: You mention, she, Eve, dragon, and Aki as the origin of this technique, all in the same paragraph. Plus I just plain don't understand what you're trying to do here, so edit it for the correct origin and make it more direct about its effect. You mention hallucination, damage, and sex appeal and it doesn't make a spot of sense to me.

Distortion's Gate: Powerful technique, how much reiatsu does it take out of you every post to maintain?

Eternal Reoccurence: I can't understand, please make it more clear.

Segunda: We have a template for the Segunda now, so you'll need to upgrade to it, and as you're already aware we can't utilize Segunda at the present time so I'll save the Segunda information for a later date. The Segunda template is below:

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History: Dude, your RP Sample is longer than your history, definitely need to add some length or something.

Aki wrote:
Represent: Dragon (Stats increases by 15 each)

Sorry that was suppose to to be taken out during my last edited

Hierro:
Remove the Nnoitra reference, its not needed.

Done

Sondio alright gone

regen? really thought it matched well with being a plant so i thought that power would make sense considering i gave up strength most espada have

Oblivion will add

Fleeting Generations:
Only meant to bring forth old images from time line’s like say own old self or like a beaten foe, only images that I know of, certainly if enough force was infected on me the illusion will fail. like a digital replay of what has passed

Your marks can vary in size, fair enough, but the effect should logically ALSO vary in size. For example, if its the size of a cat, you cant make a building size fireball come out of it, it just plain wouldn't fit or work. If this isn't effect, then you run across some very unique cases which make the technique very OP.

I intend what you said, size already meant the level of effect hence why needed the size which i thought would be common knowledge and no i would not move it over directly one the person, since the mark is static and if i were to place it on the person then they would nearly need to move away from the mark as it floats where i placed it, it doesn’t sick on them

Red rose- the range doesn’t grow only the number of tentacles as read here

There is 5 meter range limit as the vines will continue to grow until it reaches it limit or captures something and with each passing post it does not acquire a target the mark will double the number of the tentacles projectiles to chase the target at high speeds.

so they would still be safe five meters away from the mark and once i re use the mark the old one vanishes since i can only make one of the same color at a time

Purple rose will have that flash

Yellow rose- in the same post like a few seconds after actives. And yes if nothing attacks it then it breaks in one posts

White rose-stamina not wounds meaning just the power to keep going while the gaping wound is leaking out blood. Three posts cooling limit and nufing down to 30 %

Black rose- happens in a post and takes around 7 seconds to remake the next one

Curse of roes- ok so you kinda misunderstood this effect, when they change stats say use a mask of shiki this auto actives around them to damage them, damage is based off how much they changed stats as compared to their normal one. And the decrease only means that say I hit them with a weakening stat effect this still damages them ONLY by the amount changed from their normal stats. has no reverse effects at all

Black garden- i assumed people would find it easier to compare the size of three football fields rather then me using numbers since it is large but i’ll add the numbers 360 yard in length 159 yards in width with a formation time if like 10 speed so if they flash step enough or just plan jet away they won't get caught. And since it is basically made up of strong thorns and vines it is still breakable, weakness to fire would burn it to the ground

-servants are per tec’s and they are created behind the person a meter away from both of us (I get servents behind me as well). As for their damage did you consider the fact that i’m also in the cage meaning that this harms me as well?

-and i really didn’t mind posting my inspiration considering everyone draws ideas from something plus yugioh is my favorite series

-why might i ask are the lasers have to be taken out? its like an environmental hazard for them to avoid like an obstetrical course only traveling at ten speed? it won't be any different say a swarm of attacks coming at them each post (hate to use you as an example but your the most closet thing i can think of) plus its five beams per post, not very much, does not deal much damage and its smaller ones like a thread sized

-Stats taken out, thought i took that out when i transferred this but ok

Suppressing Curse:

This effects me too hun meaning i can’t use energy attacks either which is the base of all of my tecs and if they physical attack it the black orb goes away along with no harm to them, hows a 2 post cool down? and if space is the issues then i'll make it a tear in the fabric of time, sending the energy gathered forward in time.

If the orb is physically attack with a powerful assault then the rift is closed off and obliterates all the energy its stores into nothingness

Great Attractor- I have to get this re-looked at again >.> i just made it like a 2 weeks ago on the tec request. Alright basically makes a orb of frozen time, making into a large dense physical ball that i f free. Thats it, blocks physical attacks like it would it i made a giant metal ball in front of me and i need to fire it, only can be fired from the front so i could be stuck up on while using this. so if it hits it would be like a giant metal ball smashing into someone, painfully impact

Black Rose Flare: like me firing fire balls instead of a stream, like any breath attack, that really in need of description? Doesn’t change the fact it does the same thing just either its a stream or projectiles. Ex I shot a water gun and hold the firing, fires a water stream, I jerk the trigger and fire off smaller shots of water

Biological Clock: slows down effects that stick with me and wounds and myself in the process which is implied there, only my body no other space around me

What I think you meant is to speed it up and hold it in place, which isn't solely time, thats spacial manipulation as well, which means it would consume quite a bit of reiatsu, if it was possible at all. You'd have to make something immune to the effect of time to contain it, which is feasible in the Bleach universe, but not cheaply.

And no i actually meant of everything to speed up, including the wound and lingering effects infected on me which i would still feel all the effects all just not during the rest of my posts. Say a toxic in my body last for three posts then i use this to hasten the effects so i feel it all right away and move on.

Maelstrom of Damnation- ya this is only meant to be a outward blast that i created from a point in the area with a pulling in effect, would you prefer if i used darkness instead? Since i’m not arguing the whole gravity bit since its not part of my character really. And honestly this is matter if the defense thing really have to make logical scientific sense to the point of completely realism? this is fantasy world so ability and super naturally ideals i thought was expect. But ok when i changed this to darkness it well weaken the spiritual level of someone by using the curse effect of negative energy opposed to their wave length so that would lower their defense for a brief time. If their energy is already negative like myself then it stat decrease won't effect them

Clockwork Obstacle: when i made this i did meant for it to speed up the life span of that attack, energy held out too long with no medium to travel or store itself does fade in power and no source, a fire goes out with nothing to fuel it, A battery over a course of time will run out even if not used. Then to slow their moment a not to reach me, since i don’t really know if people use speed to determine the speed of their attacks i’m not really sure how to really chose the number to which is slowed, thats why i use %, still an issues? i'll fix it if need be but i'll say like 9 points of speed of that attack i'm slowing good?

Earthbound Protection: 30 level kido

Black rose gale- Alright why do i have to only have something like this for once per rpg? when there are certain ability around with more power then 70 level kido that have neither a cool down post nor limits to a rpg. I will certainly tone down the level of the weakening effect, lower the range and up the cool down posts and as for me my body is not effect but my own attacks are meaning if a lunch an attack before hand it would get wiped out as well and since the storm last my entire post the foe gets to attack after the storm ends after i do. But Once per rpg for a power seems a little unfair to me when say a person can use a 90 black coffin kido at me, as many times as they want (considering their fair rpg and now the limits of energy taken to cast such a kido), along with any attack as such would be able to hit multiply targets if aimed correctly, with no such written restrictions and based off Rpg skill. Also you say absolute defense? What there to prevent them from rushing into the eye along side me, physical pounding me while i conjure the storm or just cast their kido right in my face where the petals don't reach?

rose Restrction will be edited

Nightmare Pain: basically like this, they fire 30 level kido at me and it hits, i hit them back with the same. If They do it three times more, i get hit and i use this, if it hits them then they get 90 (30 x 3) so basically i need to get hit and damaged to have a chance to return the favor

Eternal Beauty: and basing this off Bayukia's power as why he can touch the countless little blades that look like flowers without getting harmed, tiny shape pieces that were all around in as they engulfed his body, how was he not cut? if you really want then i'll put a shield up to counter act my power so it make sense why i don't get hurt, though i would think its not necessary and by endless i meant like its number is irreverent like your spiders were when did that

Tempest Strike: was referring to a made up theory of non-elemental energy created from tearing the fabric of time so i was going for a fantasy world in my on head but fine made it energy darkness based if that is so wrong

Time Compression: this effects an area of 50 meters around me (not effecting me) while clock only effects me (body). And before you say anything about effecting others my attacks are also effect meaning that i can't magical attack them if they are slowed or stopped cause my own power is being effect with this tec, if i haste my attacks then they are also hastened since i can't control the area of space just the flow of time in it, nothing i do effects what is under the time control hence i can’t really do anything against them while i'm controlling time (IE I stop time, run up to punch them? nope they can't feel anything cause their frozen) and no i can't just slow or stop time and rest, that would be Op and not the point of this, since holding the control takes effect i can't rest, Can i flee the scene with running or a portal? nope cause i need to concentrate so running won't help much before my control breaks and i can't really open up a gaggurta if time is stopped. Been though that tid bit before here.

Distortion’s gate: alright so i''m unsure that number type you want me to give, stamnia point, amount of restisu which is it? The amount would make me unable to move during the attack and would delay all my reactions after i stop using this for a while, like 5 posts after so i'm saying around the same amount as cero oblivion each post i use it

Eternal Recurrence: i make beams around me in a sphere, like a peeling orange the beams are like a flowing ribbons. first posts i take attacks in leading up to 70 kido, in the second posts if that attacks have not all added up to 70 i can use the remaining beams for an attack. cool down of 5 posts. another shield basically

Veil Scent: its like a sex drug with poison, you smell it you want more of it and it harms you like a addiction, strong enough will you can resist it plus its only is 13 meters around me like a flower scent, able to be blown away the pollen like a normal flower smell.

And whats wrong with my rpg sample better then my history? Is my history too short or something?

Note= i'll edit my posts once we confirm all the changes first, don't what to rewrite things over and over till it gets confirmed

ps: do i don't really posts massive blocks do i? >< and actually if you count you do have more tecs then i do

Aki wrote:
regen? really thought it matched well with being a plant so i thought that power would make sense considering i gave up strength most espada have

Not sure what you mean by the strength most Espada have, but as for a more powerful regen due to your plant affinity, if that were true, then myself with an insect affinity would have a regen even more powerful than that if you went based on the cockroach. Nothing short of annihilation will stop those things, I think they're the oldest living species, but there may be another beetle older than them, I'd have to double-check...but yeah, if you want a regen you'll have to scale it down because having the regenerative properties of a thing you're not doesn't make much sense when you think about it (Especially if you're not in Res) and it lends itself to problems.

Aki wrote:
Fleeting Generations:
Only meant to bring forth old images from time line’s like say own old self or like a beaten foe, only images that I know of, certainly if enough force was infected on me the illusion will fail. like a digital replay of what has passed

That's different, if you'll edit that information in it should be good to go unless something else arises that I'm not presently accounting for.

Aki wrote:

Your marks can vary in size, fair enough, but the effect should logically ALSO vary in size. For example, if its the size of a cat, you cant make a building size fireball come out of it, it just plain wouldn't fit or work. If this isn't effect, then you run across some very unique cases which make the technique very OP.

I intend what you said, size already meant the level of effect hence why needed the size which i thought would be common knowledge and no i would not move it over directly one the person, since the mark is static and if i were to place it on the person then they would nearly need to move away from the mark as it floats where i placed it, it doesn’t sick on them

Eh, you've got to account for everything when you type these things up, any failure to present details leads to misunderstandings and problems and the whole messy busy makes itself known before you have a heartbeat to think about it. Seen it happen loads of times...so if the size-effect ratio thing is editted in (or if it already has) then that should clarify any future trouble with it.

Aki wrote:
Curse of roes- ok so you kinda misunderstood this effect, when they change stats say use a mask of shiki this auto actives around them to damage them, damage is based off how much they changed stats as compared to their normal one. And the decrease only means that say I hit them with a weakening stat effect this still damages them ONLY by the amount changed from their normal stats. has no reverse effects at all

As the case is then you'll still need to present a standard of damage, or a chart/graph/etc., for how much damage is taken based on the increased stat. Like I believe I mentioned, how much damage is taken per increase negated? As for the reversals, please make that clear for future reference.

Aki wrote:
Black garden- i assumed people would find it easier to compare the size of three football fields rather then me using numbers since it is large but i’ll add the numbers 360 yard in length 159 yards in width with a formation time if like 10 speed so if they flash step enough or just plan jet away they won't get caught. And since it is basically made up of strong thorns and vines it is still breakable, weakness to fire would burn it to the ground

Well if you're familiar with Yugioh you know people like big numbers, so they shouldn't have a problem with that. I blame huge numbers for Yugiohs success, my 12/10 Leviathan on MTG just doesn't sound as fearsome as a 3000 Blue Eyes White Dragon, but I digress as I usually do...

Aki wrote:
-servants are per tec’s and they are created behind the person a meter away from both of us (I get servents behind me as well). As for their damage did you consider the fact that i’m also in the cage meaning that this harms me as well?

Well this really depends on the placement of the roses, which I believe I asked about (after re-reading I'm positive I did ask about the location) because the OPness of laser-shooting roses (which is really funny to think about...) depends on where they are created with this technique. I think it says they appear behind the user, but thats not super specific, because theres quite a few layouts you could do like that:

User = X
Roses = O

Fig.1.
OOO
X

Fig.2.
O
O
O
X

Fig.3.
O
O O
X

And with that in mind I could concieve a few ways to avoid the damage on the user, but its really dependant on the exact placement. It's as simple as typing in: 'Rose servants summoned from a (ring/horizontal line/vertical line/triangular shape) behind the reiatsu expending being.'

Aki wrote:
-and i really didn’t mind posting my inspiration considering everyone draws ideas from something plus yugioh is my favorite series

Well its not really inspiration if you pull a whole concept, but thats my opinion anyhow. Out of opinion, leaving the names and such of the original user is distracting and it draws away from focuses thought on the forum and whats going on their, so such things are more of an annoyance than anything else and there not very difficult to correct so I call em' when I see em'.

Aki wrote:
-why might i ask are the lasers have to be taken out? its like an environmental hazard for them to avoid like an obstetrical course only traveling at ten speed? it won't be any different say a swarm of attacks coming at them each post (hate to use you as an example but your the most closet thing i can think of) plus its five beams per post, not very much, does not deal much damage and its smaller ones like a thread sized

Well the damage was never specified, and the size isn't really too critical, hydro-lasers are small but they do quite a bit of damage with concentrated water. And when you mention cutting through other people that readily implies higher strength (it doesn't help when you compare damage to a 'medium level spell' either >_> ) So for me reading it, it looks more like mini-hydro canons that tear things up like a cat to a new couch.

Aki wrote:
This effects me too hun meaning i can’t use energy attacks either which is the base of all of my tecs and if they physical attack it the black orb goes away along with no harm to them, hows a 2 post cool down? and if space is the issues then i'll make it a tear in the fabric of time, sending the energy gathered forward in time.

As long as it make sense, i'm fine with the ability with the explanation given.

Great Attractor:
The concept of a 'sphere of time' is still impossible, though you could simply make it a sphere of reiatsu and achieve a similar effect to a solid wrecking ball.

Aki wrote:
Black Rose Flare: like me firing fire balls instead of a stream, like any breath attack, that really in need of description? Doesn’t change the fact it does the same thing just either its a stream or projectiles. Ex I shot a water gun and hold the firing, fires a water stream, I jerk the trigger and fire off smaller shots of water

But both effects have a different range, shape of damage effective radius, etc. that needs to be individually describe. A fireball does damage in a sphere, which has a radius of damage, but a stream has a length and width of damage, it has no radius, can you see the problem in not describing each?

Biological Clock:
If you speed up your body, through negative effects, then you still suffer these effects you just go through them. Now, if the effects have a period of time when they end, then you'd cancel them eventually, but the effects would still harm you before hand. If you were poisoned with something that, for example, caused you to implode and you fast-forwarded it, you'd still implode but you'd go past the implosion stage which in this case is nothing, you cease existing after implosion.

So the concept WORKS just not how you seem to think it does, time can't help you circumvent the effects of a lingering attack or DoT, you can just speed through it. At least as you describe it anyhow, you cant skip over effects. Naturally, all of the explanation will need to go in the tech once its settled.

As for my quote, that was reffering to you effected outside agents, like attacks, not yourself.

Maelstrom of Damnation:
In most cases scientific accuracy doesn't matter, you're right, but when you try to use things in a way that isn't scientifically logical (not possible, since reiatsu breaks that) then its problematic, especially with time, gravity, etc. Logic and science play their part, so its not too much to ask for time to remain what it is an not touch gravity. Changing it to a Dark elemental attack would be easier.

If you use Dark energy, then a reduction of defenses, if implemented in a reasonable amount, is acceptable.

Aki wrote:
Clockwork Obstacle: when i made this i did meant for it to speed up the life span of that attack, energy held out too long with no medium to travel or store itself does fade in power and no source, a fire goes out with nothing to fuel it, A battery over a course of time will run out even if not used. Then to slow their moment a not to reach me, since i don’t really know if people use speed to determine the speed of their attacks i’m not really sure how to really chose the number to which is slowed, thats why i use %, still an issues? i'll fix it if need be but i'll say like 9 points of speed of that attack i'm slowing good?

Then you're trying to achieve a Barragan like effect, which wasn't what I understood from the phrasing of the technique so do rephrase it to accurately describe what you mean. As for percent, those can stay, if I said to remove them you can leave them with the current understanding of the technique.

Aki wrote:
Black rose gale- Alright why do i have to only have something like this for once per rpg? when there are certain ability around with more power then 70 level kido that have neither a cool down post nor limits to a rpg. I will certainly tone down the level of the weakening effect, lower the range and up the cool down posts and as for me my body is not effect but my own attacks are meaning if a lunch an attack before hand it would get wiped out as well and since the storm last my entire post the foe gets to attack after the storm ends after i do. But Once per rpg for a power seems a little unfair to me when say a person can use a 90 black coffin kido at me, as many times as they want (considering their fair rpg and now the limits of energy taken to cast such a kido), along with any attack as such would be able to hit multiply targets if aimed correctly, with no such written restrictions and based off Rpg skill. Also you say absolute defense? What there to prevent them from rushing into the eye along side me, physical pounding me while i conjure the storm or just cast their kido right in my face where the petals don't reach?

The once for RPG is as the skill was at the time of posting, I intended to type out some words that apparently my fingers skipped over and if its corrected then it probably won't be neccesary. As far as the question in red, you're technique says you lack an eye:

Aki wrote:
There is no center or eye of weakness in this so does even a noise close to Aki in the center will feel the outward gusts.

So that's whats stopping them, the absence of an eye And like I mentioned, if you have no eye, then you have no way to avoid your own effects, which is probably a very large problem seeing as you'd be getting slapped silly by your own technique.

Nightmare Pain:
Still rather iffy, but if you clarify the explanation I won't complain about the tech.

Aki wrote:
Eternal Beauty: and basing this off Bayukia's power as why he can touch the countless little blades that look like flowers without getting harmed, tiny shape pieces that were all around in as they engulfed his body, how was he not cut? if you really want then i'll put a shield up to counter act my power so it make sense why i don't get hurt, though i would think its not necessary and by endless i meant like its number is irreverent like your spiders were when did that

Well, I'd have to say that no he doesn't, as i've watched the scene and read it and Byakuya has always been surrounded by his blades, and the only time I've seen them contact is underneath his feet, and he has sandals so I assume those protect him. But I don't have much interest in the Shinigami so I can't be sure. Regardless, thats a Bankai, this is a technique, and Byakuya's Bankai is OP anyhow.

As for endless, this is a different context, you're using to describe the power of a technique, which makes it sound very OP. And endless means infinite, when I describe quantities as not being relevant, that doesn't mean theres an infinite amount, the actual number just isn't important. Infinite is a pretty important quantity, catch the difference?

Time Compression:
Dude, you're getting paranoid or something, I just asked why needed two techs that do effectively the same thing, I didn't say anything else about it.

Distortion:
I'm just saying a note somewhere saying along the lines: "consumes a large amount of reiatsu with each use." would be highly appropriate, you only need to quantify if you feel the desire to do so, otherwise a note is fine.

Aki wrote:
And whats wrong with my rpg sample better then my history? Is my history too short or something?

Mhm, that's why I added the last bit when I typed my comment on it:

Traca Carmesim wrote:
History: Dude, your RP Sample is longer than your history, definitely need to add some length or something.

High ranking Espada look better with more information, I know its a pain, I hate history...but some defined arcs and a paragraph or so for each of the major ones seems appropriate.

Not sure what you mean by the strength most Espada have, but as for a more powerful regen due to your plant affinity, if that were true, then myself with an insect affinity would have a regen even more powerful than that if you went based on the cockroach. Nothing short of annihilation will stop those things, I think they're the oldest living species, but there may be another beetle older than them, I'd have to double-check...but yeah, if you want a regen you'll have to scale it down because having the regenerative properties of a thing you're not doesn't make much sense when you think about it (Especially if you're not in Res) and it lends itself to problems.

Ok hows I’m not able to regenerate during battles, just bounce back quicker after attacks(but they still effect me all the same) while still using a good amount of my power to do so

As the case is then you'll still need to present a standard of damage, or a chart/graph/etc., for how much damage is taken based on the increased stat. Like I believe I mentioned, how much damage is taken per increase negated? As for the reversals, please make that clear for future reference.

Alright how bout every 10 points change to their stats this attacks deals them an attack of thirty level kido (so if the up their stats by 20 they get 60 level damage from this), 5 points change they have a level 15 damage( 15, 30,35 etc), one point change would be a static level 3 (meaning if they went up by one then another one they would get the 3 level damage separately) while the whole numbers like 5 or 10 would get their assigned damage. If people have other varying ways of changing their stats by others numbers would you inform me of, haven’t been able to find how much a person can change

'Rose servants summoned from a (ring/horizontal line/vertical line/triangular shape) behind the reiatsu expending being.

'

Summoned a vertical line a meter from the expending being works

Great Attractor:
The concept of a 'sphere of time' is still impossible, though you could simply make it a sphere of reiatsu and achieve a similar effect to a solid wrecking ball.

Alright

But both effects have a different range, shape of damage effective radius, etc. that needs to be individually describe. A fireball does damage in a sphere, which has a radius of damage, but a stream has a length and width of damage, it has no radius, can you see the problem in not describing each?

Ball sized does 3 meter impact once it hits somethings and explodes while the stream is 5 meters in width and both travels 13 meters away from my mouth

Biological Clock:
If you speed up your body, through negative effects, then you still suffer these effects you just go through them. Now, if the effects have a period of time when they end, then you'd cancel them eventually, but the effects would still harm you before hand. If you were poisoned with something that, for example, caused you to implode and you fast-forwarded it, you'd still implode but you'd go past the implosion stage which in this case is nothing, you cease existing after implosion.

Yes that is what I intend to that to do so that part is settled

The once for RPG is as the skill was at the time of posting, I intended to type out some words that apparently my fingers skipped over and if its corrected then it probably won't be neccesary. As far as the question in red, you're technique says you lack an eye:
Aki wrote:
There is no center or eye of weakness in this so does even a noise close to Aki in the center will feel the outward gusts.


So that's whats stopping them, the absence of an eye And like I mentioned, if you have no eye, then you have no way to avoid your own effects, which is probably a very large problem seeing as you'd be getting slapped silly by your own technique.

Ok so would the appearance with an eye what else did you wanted changed about the gale

Well, I'd have to say that no he doesn't, as i've watched the scene and read it and Byakuya has always been surrounded by his blades, and the only time I've seen them contact is underneath his feet, and he has sandals so I assume those protect him. But I don't have much interest in the Shinigami so I can't be sure. Regardless, thats a Bankai, this is a technique, and Byakuya's Bankai is OP anyhow.

As for endless, this is a different context, you're using to describe the power of a technique, which makes it sound very OP. And endless means infinite, when I describe quantities as not being relevant, that doesn't mean theres an infinite amount, the actual number just isn't important. Infinite is a pretty important quantity, catch the difference?

Alright then shield around me to only protect me against my own damage will be erected, meaning that it would not shield me against anything but this attack and i'll edit the grammer

Time Compression:
Dude, you're getting paranoid or something, I just asked why needed two techs that do effectively the same thing, I didn't say anything else about it.

One effects me only, the other doesn’t and effects everything around me. Ie Some one coming at me and tries to slashes me, I use compression to reverse it so we have to replay that moment again but with both of us still remember what just happen we might changed what we just did, I can’t use clock cause then it only be effect me while the other person remains un changed. Next Ie I get poisoned that slows me down for three posts only before my system works it out and my speed goes back to normal. I use clock to speed to poison up two posts so I get my speed back to normal sooner, I can’t use compression cause its already in my body so that tec won’t work in it.

And fine I’ll do more history with frown

Everything suggested above is fine by me, I don't really think I need to respond to them all individually if I can do it all at once >_> just edit all the info in, fix what needs to be fixed, and then we'll run a check and everything should be good to go.

Alright i believe i got it all down (might have missed something tis massive work to go though all our editing posts as well)

and got another passive ability just to solidity my spiritual attacks specialized

*sighs* Update for Espada 1 position and fix the stats.

and updated for one

bump

Sorry, I'll flip through it after I get a test and an essay done...

Master of Hand to Hand has Canon references, remove those and it should be good, I don't really want to read all of that so i'll assume everything was changed, if it wasn't then i'm sure it'll come up later.

reference taken out

Approved.