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Post by Nate Menou Mon Dec 14, 2009 9:42 pm

Basic Information

Name: Nate Menou

Age: 639 (looks 23)

Gender: Male

Rank: Espada

Number: 4

Looks: Nate has snow white hair with his hole in between his stomach and chest which covers up with his shirt. His eyes as dull black that light up to their former color red when he gets excited. He wears black tennis shoes with white pants and a red t-shirt. He tends to wear a white cloak around himself to cover everything up and walk around trying not to be noticed, He stands 6'0 and weighs 180 pounds. He has his sword sheath on his right side, He has his number on his neck to where it is hidden in his cloak. His hollow mask is hidden on his right shoulder blade hidden away.

Personality: He tends to avoid things that he doesn't find interesting. He stands firmly believing he shouldn't kill unless it is self defense and tends to stay away from shinigami. When he gets excited he tends to forget his morals and will abandon all he stands for and will attack almost instantly. He has been told that when his red eyes appear it is like a different personality. After a fight he regains his composure and walks away if the opponent is alive or if they are dead he takes the body and hides it so no one knows of his presence. Recently he has begun to go insane in his thoughts when he gets exicted which can leave him thinking of the strangest things. In his thoughts insanity rules then once he manages to calm down he will go back to normal. During these thoughts he will remain emotionaless, as if nothing happens and one his eyes flicker from black to red then back to black he will have a small moment in his mind of insanity. Simple things interest him and he will want to find out as much as he can, and once he does he will ethier end the fight or leave because he will be bored easily. Nate has discorved a new side of him recently and when his eyes flash orange or his red eyes have a hint of orange it generally means he is A. Hungry B. Ready to fight C. Is losing his mind.

Resurrecion Information

Name: Fight for your life, Zengastu

Represent: Kangaroo

Family: Ice

Looks: Nate gains a bone tail that can support at least ten times his own weight. He gains a skull of a kangaroo on his head while he has his nails turn into claws. His leg power increases by five times allowing him to move quickly and deliver life threatening kicks. He gains a pouch that holds a pair of gloves made of bone with spikes on it. ~ What he gains from his ressurection.

The gloves are covered in ice that start to lower the opponent's body tempature by 20 degrees then with each hit the target will feel the effects. Example: if they were knocked down to thirty degrees they would start to feel numb. Each hit also feels like ice hitting them, With each hit thier body tempature will not go back to normal instantly considering the fact that he freezes the cells in each blow not allowing the blood to keep flowing freely making thier tempature rise up by five every two post. When they are hit thier skin will be come cold in the place they were hit, They will feel chills and once thier body part goes numb they won't be able to feel it. They could be stabbed and not know it, They will begin to turn pale in the place they were hit, they will begin to see their veins and they will began to become much slower and if they are hit in a body part like the arm six times it will just stop working and they will have to wait till their body tempature goes back up to thirty before they could move that arm. (i will say the body tempature each post once i do my ressurection so they know what it is.) ~ what happens when he fights.

Techniques

Name: Garganta
State: Both
Description: This is how arrancar move to and from Hueco Mundo. Kaname Tosen and Kisuke Urahara have also demonstrated the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway.

Name: Bala
State: Both
Description:Spanish for "Bullet," Japanese for "Hollow Bullet") Bala is an Arrancar alternative to Cero. The technique hardens the user's Spiritual Pressure and fires it like a bullet. Although it is weaker than a normal Cero, it moves about twenty times faster and can be fired at a much higher rate, but the damage is much the same. Stronger Arrancar can also fire a more powerful Bala, while retaining its twenty-fold speed.

Name: Hierro
State: Both
Description: This refers to the hardened skin of the Arrancar, which is a result of their compressed spiritual power. While their skin is strong enough to block even released Zanpakuto bare-handed, it is by no means impenetrable. Stronger Arrancar have proportionally stronger skin. Nnoitra Jiruga claimed his Hierro is toughest amongst the Espada; being of higher rank than Nnoitra, Ulquiorra's Hierro appears to be much tougher.

Name: Pesquisa
State: Both
Description: This is the arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami ability to sense Spiritual Pressure. It functions similar to a sonar. Using pesquisa requires most Espada to enter a meditative state. kon does this by twitching his senses which are reiatsu sensitive.

[Name: Sonido.
State: Normal/Resurrecion.
Description: A very quick movement performed by Arranacar that allows them to move at high speeds for brief periods of time.

Name: Cero
State: Both
Description: A unique white cero


Name: Kangaroo Smash.
State: Resurrecion
Description: Nate will use his tail to lean back then smash his fist into the head of his opponent with enough force to break one piece of steel in half.

Name: Kangaroo Barrage
State: Resurrecion
Description: Nate will begin to unleash a flurry of jabs at his target showing them in blows, If he lands all the hits he will have managed to lower their body tempature down to 30 degrees.

Name: Ice pouch.
State: resurrecion
Description: Nate's pouch will began to make ice that can burn on the touch if handled without tongs or thick gloves. His pouch is covered in bone allowing him not to freeze making it to where he can pick up the ice and throw it to he can smash it against his target burning them.

Name: Bone Protection
State: Ressurection
Description: Nate will start to be covered in bones making him have only a kangaroo skull and bone tail still on him that looks the same after this. He will have bones cover him like grimmjow he will be armored in it execpt it covers his face which the kangaroo skull will gain a mouth that will be cracked open to where he can see. His claws, pouch everything will be covered in bone. Once he is inside of it, it will heal his wounds up to minor stuff, a dislocated shoulder a broken bone but nothing ripped off, cuts, and other non fatal wounds. This is a last resort and is extremly tough to break open. It can withstand kido up to level 60 and it takes two post for it to fully cover the entire body. It can only be used twice, on the second time it can only protect up to 30.

Name: Ice wall.
State: Ressurection
Description: Nate will open his pouch up and ice wil shoot out of it and make a wall infront of him made of ice with the tempature of -30 degrees. This ice will burn at the touch and is hard to break but is break able.

Name: Bone subsitute
State: Ressurection
Description: Nate will have all his bones come off of him that he gains in ressurection that can take a heavy blow for him but it will boot him out of ressurection until the topic is over. It has to been activated two post before it is useable since nate is litterally tearing off his ressurection. The bones can take any blow because nate is shot downward when he uses this like an eject button leaving a cockpit it will remain there and take the whole blow. This can only used one time and no matter what the attack is the bones can be destoryed and after they are hit they just fall down to the earth just as ash or bones on the ground. He is breaking the bones on a moclure level which is painful but worth it when it saves his life, It then just hangs on there loosly when he finishes allowing him to eject from it.

Name: Gran Cero Ray
State: Both
Description: Gran Rey Cero is performed when an Arrancar draws blood from the Cero firing appendage with their Zanpakutō and mixing their blood with their original Cero. The result is a Cero with a much greater attack power, size, speed, and force, as well as a change of color. This Cero is also many times more powerful than a normal Cero, and is capable of disturbing the fabric of space. When fired, it spins like a razor upon release and compress and decompress, due to the sheer speed and raw power. Unlike most Ceros that mainly take the shape of a sphere created by user and released in a huge blast wave, the Gran Rey Cero, when fired, keeps its sphere form, even after being fired in a huge blast wave. It is a drastically potent Cero and Grimmjow claims that only Espada are allowed to use it. Gran Rey Cero's unique charging formation.This Cero is in fact so overwhelming that one of the only two rules the Espada have, according to Ulquiorra Cifer, is that that they must never use it underneath the dome of Las Noches as the sheer force of just using can cause Las Noches to be destroyed


Stats

Strength: 25

- Resurrection: 25

Speed: 20

- Resurrection: 35

Dexterity: 30

- Resurrection: 30

Stamina: 20

- Resurrection: 25

History and RP Sample

History: As a human nate wasn't happy, he was always alone in his life. His family had died out he lost his house and everything, He only had his job and then he lost that. He felt crazy he wanted to jump off a building and end it all, Then one day he was walking towards a gas station then it suddenly exploded as pieces went flying every where nate jumped back when it exploded as a piece pierced him though his stomach as he started to bleed to death. He awoke in an ambulance as they tried to save his life but he grabbed them and screamed for them to stop as he start to feel light headed. He laid back down as they continued to the hospital when they arrived nate was in the emergency room as he saw the whole operation as he saw one of the doctors drop the knife and stab him in the heart as he died. His eyes rolled back in his head then he saw the operating room as he looked around and saw his body. Anger surged through him as he looked his chest and saw a chain that was eating itself. He freaked out his screamed as it came closer and closer he saw it stop as a little remained he ran out through a wall and into the street.

He looked around as a hollow was staring at him it roared, then it charged him. Out of fear he ran as he felt so much hatred in himself as he noticed the chain eating himself it finally reached his chest as the hollow came to a stop and started to run. He felt his body transforming into that of a hollow's then he looked around as he felt a mask forming he screamed then roared as it covered his face. He was struggling then he stopped, the hollow took over him. He began to eat and kill as he felt his hunger become so great he was one of the strongest hollows. He started to eat hollows as they began to eat each other following his lead as he felt something happening. They were all becoming one as he felt his mind fight for control as he became stronger than the others and broke through. He felt so much hungrier as he started to eat the other hollows and fought then to fill himself. He saw thousands die as he only began to need to eat more. He felt a change his whole body change as he started to take the form of a kangaroo. He started to become smaller as he fled and made it to the top and stood on the desert feeling out his new body.

He started to eat many as he got a group to follow him as he started a war many groups fell before them as he became hungrier. He looked back as his comrades still eating as he lured one away and at them quickly. He repeated it till they all died, He felt himself fight with emotions as he decided on ignoring what he felt and keep eating. He began out running, fight, thinking all his prey as they screamed and began for mercy as he would eat them. He ate a million gillans as he began to feel something nearby, a human looked at him as it reached towards him. He began to back away as it grabbed at his mask, confused he tried to run as pain surged through him as he screamed while the mask was starting to rip off. He felt something change as the mask was almost completely off as the man pulled even harder, The pain was unbearable as it came off. The man watched him as he rose up from the ground he looked at him as he tossed him a cloak. He caught it as Nate put it on with his new body, he felt stronger as the man explained himself to nate telling him he was Sousuke Byakko the leader of the espada. He told him how he watched his progress and saw how powerful he became, He pointed at another person behind him and told them to fight to the death or else Nate would revert to a menos grande. He believed the lie and fought against the man and after the fight he was beaten and bruised, bloodied up yet he won against the man with the nine on his arm. Sousuke told him of everything as he listened he was offered the position of the ninth espada, Nate agreed as he put on fresh clothes and picked up his sword he dropped. Nate slowly began to adopt the personality he has now after being with sousuke for so long as the other espada seemed to mind their own business around him he still didn't attempt to talk with them. He soon was bumped up to espada number seven for reasons nate never understood. He felt his mental stablity breaking apart considering the fact how he recently began to think about how he could turn to a menos any moment. Soon he fears that he will turn into one, he is begining to think that he could be at the top he would be safe for ever and began to think about such things to himself. Now he hasn't told anyone but he slowly thinks about it. As it slowly tormented him his insanity began to slow down and not control him so much, His was moved up to espada four, With his new power he feels incredible. He feels so alive he has began to smile more often and show other emotions but only for a short while then they disappear.

RP Sample:
Nate walked the streets in silence as he listened to conversations. He felt his cloak move in the breeze as he looked around for something. He saw a dog run across the street then he saw a little girl run after it as they ran into the park. He felt the need to follow the girl so he began to follow her around and saw her nearly get hurt as he felt himself attempt to catch her which confused him he then ignored it as he leaned over and attempted to pet the dog as it shrank away. He stood back up and walked off into the middle of the street as he jumped up into the air and stood there looking around as he saw a few hollow go crazy across the city. He started to move away as he stared at the sky then spoke, Garganta. His voice was deep and emotionless. He saw the portal open as he stepped through it and stood in the espada home. He shook his head as he walked towards the stair case and started upwards. He felt a presence as he saw the top espada, Number Zero walk past him on his way to some other place. As he made it up the stair case he saw espada Number six go by and Five. He figured they were going to vist the human world somewhere. He started towards his dorms as espada number eight and nine were behind him heading to their dorms. He saw number ten and three walk out of their dorms and head off to some place unknown, He began to reach his destanation towards his room. As he opened his door he slowly walked in and shut the door behind him. He felt his mind pulse in pain as he gripepd it and gritted his teeth, He started towards his bed as he fell over onto the floor. He was in deep pain as he slowly drifted off to sleep as he clenched his eyes and gritted his teeth. All he saw after that was nothing only darkness surronded him. His mind drift away as he saw his number apear before him, then it turned to mist that surrounded him. He watched the mist as it closed in on him and began to hold him down as he slowly sufficated. He yelled and then his eyes opened as he saw his door open up.


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Post by Renjiro Haptism Mon Dec 14, 2009 9:59 pm

Espada are full arrancar is avilable if you want

all is ok apart from stats

arrancar stats are 70

then resurrection total stats add 10 stats to your normal stats

eg

normal
20
20
20
10

resurrection
25
25
20
10
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Post by Renjiro Haptism Mon Dec 14, 2009 10:07 pm

approved

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Post by Nate Menou Tue Dec 22, 2009 4:29 pm

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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu Tue Dec 22, 2009 5:39 pm

Actually, Ressurcion adds +20 stats, not +10. Vaizard ressurcion gives +
10, not normal Espada ressurcion
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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu Tue Dec 22, 2009 5:43 pm

Alright, define kick power level, and also if your Ressurcion increases your speed, then your speed stats would increase with ressurcion. Also, technically you cannot turn whatever you hit with those gloves to snow.

other then those, it looks fine.
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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu Tue Dec 22, 2009 5:51 pm

Approved.
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Post by Nate Menou Sun Dec 27, 2009 10:19 pm

Edited. Also can i get the little banner under my name that says espada seven? Thanks.
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Post by Traca Carmesim Sun Dec 27, 2009 10:59 pm

You drop them by 20 every hit, and they only 1 every two posts? So it would take 40 posts to return their body to normal temperature...try 5 per post, and that'll work out much better.

Also, most people aren't familiar with what happens with a bodily temperature drop, so please describe the effects that occur at each important degree intervals.
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Post by Nate Menou Mon Dec 28, 2009 12:56 am

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Post by Traca Carmesim Mon Dec 28, 2009 2:28 am

I meant like, degrees. Like how much damage is dealt when the opponents is reduced by 30 degrees, or 50, or 90, etc.
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Post by Nate Menou Mon Dec 28, 2009 2:41 am

i don't under stand. once they reach 30 they are numb to the core and downwards. -200 they are frozen. 50 they are cold.
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Post by Traca Carmesim Mon Dec 28, 2009 1:59 pm

Kangaroo Smash:
Excessively strong, tone it down.

Kangaroo Barrage:
0 degrees with an attack is gonna have to be a no.

Bone Protection:
How man times can you use this per thread? How long does it take? How tough are the bones, in comparison to other techs or Kido?

Re-Direct/Trap:
These seem to be blatantly inspired by my own application, but these techniques are only accessible because my Released form enables the use of more rapid Garganta. It would take you some time to open the portal up, they're very slow, and I don't think thats what you had in mind.

So Redirect wouldn't even function, because of the speed required, and you can't send people to another dimension and just leave them with no ability to escape it.

Bone Substitute:
How tough are the bones? How do you 'eject' from your bones?
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Post by Nate Menou Mon Dec 28, 2009 2:34 pm

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Post by Traca Carmesim Mon Dec 28, 2009 4:49 pm

Looks fine to me, approved.
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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu Mon Dec 28, 2009 5:39 pm

Locked and moved back.
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Post by Kaji-Kanto Mon Jan 11, 2010 10:00 pm

Moved to espada 4
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Post by Nate Menou Mon Jan 11, 2010 10:15 pm

Edited.
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Post by Kaji-Kanto Mon Jan 11, 2010 10:45 pm

Aight your good then re-approved
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