Schneizel Enneagram [Espada 4]

Basic Information

Name: Schneizel Enneagram

Age: 322 (Looks 21)

Gender: Male

Rank: Espada

Number: 4

Looks:

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Hollow Hole: Schneizel's Hollow Hole is placed at the joint connection of his hand and arm, therefore it rests slightly lower than the wrist.

Mask Fragment: Schneizel, being an Arrancar, has his Hollow mask fragment located upon his body. Schneizel, unlike most arrancar, has three seperate fragments. The first is upon the crown of his head. This portion is a small cresent shape that dips down to his brow. The two other pieces are placed upon his forearm, each extending from the arm outward. The second is against his flesh like a piece of armor, the final piece extends out a good few inches.

Number Tattoo: Schneizel's tatoo is placed in a most obseen spot on his body. Slightly above his waist the number four [4] is dark black. The bottom of this number dips into the line of his pants making it appear as two parallel lines coming from his pants waist band.

Personality: Schneizel should be best described as the quiet type. Schneizel never shows emotion unless the situation demands it. Under normal times and situations Schneizel will have the same bored expression pastered upon his face. Most of the time Schneizel wont speak alot. Not much of a talker Schneizel will stay to his own thoughts and dreams. On the rare occasion Schneizel engages into a long conversation, this is more than smalltalk, Schneizel will only do so because of something that intrests him greatly. Schneizel dosent like to be rushed. Most of the time Schneizel will take his time in doing things, so engrossed in his thoughts Schneizel wont do things at a faster rate than he needs to. During battle Schneizel regards his enemies with the same expression and attitude he gives his comrades: complete boredom and contempt. Battle is the only time Schneizel will do things at a higher speed rate. Schneizel enjoys a good battle, but a long carried on one bores him very easily and as such he will want to end it soon.

A bad trait in which he recived from his father is the long fuse of temper. It takes alot of things and happenings to make Schneizel angry. Annoyed, irritated, Schneizel will become but rarly will he become fully pissed off. On the occasion he is angry people should steer clear as his anger is built up from many previous times. Because of his building of anger, Schneizel will take most insults and put downs from anyone. He will simply shurg them off in the beginning, but once the anger is built up to much he will blow. And that's when people's ear drums are split. Schneizel regards people of lower rank with contempt and even people with higher rank. He dosent care of rank but more strength to back up the mere title. When it comes to killing Schneizel has no trouble in doing so. In his eyes killing is something that just happens and it is surly inevitable. In the case of love Schneizel has absoulte no care for it. Love is merely a feeling of over happniess that is no more than a lie.

Weapon Information

Weapon Name: Scipio

Weapon Looks:

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Weapon Description: Scipio is a traditional wakizashi sword. Short in length, reaching at most to sixty centimeters, Scipio is a typical looking zanpaktou. Scipio's blade is the normal width of most zanpaktou, in addition this once sided blade is extremely sharp. Being able to cut into most things with greater ease. The hilt of Scipio is a dark golden color, while the wraping around such is a deep red. Scipio is normaly stored on Schneizel's person in his sash on the frontern portion of his body. Or, sometimes, he carries it around for looks.

Resurrecion Release Phrase: Shed, Scipio.

Resurrecion Information

Name: Panoptes (Greek - the all-seeing)

Represent: Serpent

Family: Acid / Vision

Looks: Panoptes is a special type of Resurrecion that deals out a great deal of transformation. When the release phrase is spoken, Schneizel's blade will explode into a cloud of dark red mist. This mist will last only a hearbeat of a second before it disappears. Schneizel's looks are now changed greatly. The most dramatic change to be seen are the eyes. One Hundred blood red open eyes now sit on his body. All at different places, and spaced at odd intervals, these eyes are rather large. Each eye is blood red, with a single darker red pupil and has a think eyelid in which may cover it at will. The second most dramatic change is his skin. Schneizel is now covered in light green scales, each small and colored the same. These scales hold the same abilities as his normal skin, such as hierro and etc. Schneizel's hair is now extremely long, reaching his mid back.

Acid

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Techniques

Name: Bala
State: Both
Description: The technique hardens the user's spiritual pressure and fires it like a bullet from their fist. It is seriously weaker than a normal cero, it moves about twenty times faster and can be fired at a much higher rate, but the damage is much the same.

Name: Cero
State: Both
Description: High-powered energy blasts that can be fired from various body parts, such as mouth, tongue, hand or fingers. Only Menos, Arrancar, and the Vizards have so far been shown to use cero attacks, and it appears that stronger entities can use it more efficiently. Various arrancar and hollow characters display variants of the technique, such as the Espada-exclusive gran rey cero.

Name: Serpentine Cero/Bala
State: Both
Description: A custom Bala/Cero ability used by the 4th Espada Schneizel. Upon use, two large serpents made of Bala or Cero appear around the body of Schneizel. If the serpents are cero, they are much slower moving than the Bala. If they are cero, there color is green and their power is extremely strong. If the serpents are bala they are a deep red color and extremely slow, while lacking the physical power of cero. These free moving serpents can move away from Schneizel or keep around him as a guardian. They can be exploded at will or upon contact.

Name: Gran Rey Cero
State: Both
Description: It is performed by mixing an Arrancar's own blood with the Cero. The result is a cero with a much greater attack power, size, speed, and force, as well as a change of color unique to the Espada. It is also several times more powerful than a normal Cero. Note that due to Schneizel's blood having high amounts of his acid in it, the cero that is created with this ability now holds acidic qualities. If the cero should make contact, the force of the cero in combination with the acid would come to effect. This increases the chance of damage, for if the cero should miss, the aftermass of it would hold the acid and come into contact.

Name: Argus Bala
State: Resurrecion
Description: During his release, every eye on Schneizel's body is capable of using a bala. The size and power of the bala is limited to the amount of eyes that use it. If one eye uses it, it will be the same as a normal bala. If 20 use it, the size of each and power is dropped. If all one hundred eyes use a bala, the size and power of each is decreased greatly.

Name: Garganta
State: Both
Description: This is how arrancar move to and from Hueco Mundo. Kaname Tosen and Kisuke Urahara have also demonstrated the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway.

Name: Hierro
State: Both
Description: This refers to the hardened skin of the Arrancar, which is a result of their compressed spiritual power. While their skin is strong enough to block even released Zanpakuto bare-handed, it is by no means impenetrable. Stronger Arrancar have proportionally stronger skin.

Name: Pesquisa
State: Both
Description: This is the arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami ability to sense Spiritual Pressure. It functions similar to a sonar. Using pesquisa requires most Espada to enter a meditative state or use some others have a trigger unique to the user.

Name: Sonido
State: Both
Description: A very quick movement performed by Arranacar that allows them to move at high speeds for brief periods of time.

Name: Acidic Spit
State: Resurrecion
Description: While in his released form, Schneizel can dispel large amounts of green acid from his mouth. Fast and extremely acidic it will melt almost anything it touches.

Name: Body Extension
State: Resurrecion
Description: Upon using his resurrecion Schneizel can use this ability. By seperating the ligaments in his body and supplying them with reiatsu Schneizel can extend and move any of his body to great lengths. Arms, legs, neck, fingers, toes, all can be moved as such. Such movements can last for up to two posts before the limbs must return to their former shape/position. After use of this ability, two posts must pass before it may be used again.

Name: Acidic Tears
State: Resurrecion
Description: At any given moment, Schneizel can have any one of his eyes leak fluid. In truth, this liquid is acid tears. Each "tear" has the acidic quality of his spit. The tears fall from the eyes in a most odd fashion, compared to realy crying. The liquid will spread out and cover the body upon secretion. This ability is usefull for coating the user is the acid, ensuring that all who touch it will face it's burning wrath. The Acidic qualities of the tears are decreased compared to the normal acid. This is due to the small glands in the eyes and the amount created. All effects still apply, however they are slower and slightly less potent.

Name: Acidic Mist
State: Resurrecion
Description: Much like the use of Acidic Spit, Schneizel will build up a large amount of his acid liquid into his mouth cavity. Here, he will apply Pesquisa. Upon doing so, he will open his mouth and expell a large cloud of green mist into the air. The mist will extend from his mouth and surround his body by ten meters. Note that the more reiatsu used in this technique, the more mist will be produced. Ergo, a greater range. This mist has extreme acidic abilities, easily burning through most objects and people in a matter of moments. If breathed in the opponent is subject to their lungs and insides being eaten away by the acid. Naturally, this mist does not effect the user.

Name: Burning Blood
State: Both
Description: One of the abilities that Schneizel uses in both forms. Being an Acid user in person, Schneizel has incorperated the use of his immunity to acid in many ways. In conjunction with his blood, being the foremost. Schneizel's blood has high amounts of Acid in it. While it does not effect him, any object or person that comes in contact with his blood will find themselves being harmed greatly.

In light of this ability, Schneizel makes a regular habit to coat his blade with his own blood. This results in his blade being a extension of his acid powers.

Name: Layer Shedding
State: Resurrecion
Description: Upon use of this ability, Schneizel's entire scales will shed and peel from his body. When this occurs, the shed skin will retain it's shape and looks of the real Schneizel for one post. No movement can occur with the skin, however if Schneizel uses Sonido and exits the shed skin quickly he can confuse the opponent in believing that the skin is him. This ability may be used once, then three posts are required to use it another time.

Name: Vision Sacrifice
State: Resurrecion
Description: This ability can be used at any time during the release of Schneizel's resurrecion. At any time, Schneizel can close of of his eyes. For every eye closed, he gains a small amount of reiatsu. Once the eye is closed it cannot be opened or used indefinitely. The reiatsu gained back is equal to one-fourth of a point which can be applied to any stat of his choosing. The effects of the reiatsu gain (ergo, stat gain) do not last extremely long. Three posts is the length of time that the increase will stay into effect, and possibly four, if the user can supplement enough reiatsu before hand. This ability has a cooldown effect to it, once it is used, a minimum of two posts must pass in order to do so again.

Name: Detached Eyes
State: Both
Description: Schneizel, upon use of this ability, can detach any amount of eyes from his body. In doing so, he gains access to a series of useful abilities. The detached eye can now move freely without the guidance of the user. Floating in the air, moving etc. If the eye(s) were to find a person/object it could attach themselves upon on a that said object/person. If the eye touches a person it cannot be felt while doing so. However, the opponent can see the eye. When the eye(s) is on the opponent, Schneizel can see through it as it would his normal eyes. And, if need be, the user can activate the technique "Acidic Tears" in conjunction to this technique.

Name: Vision of the Planes
State: Both
Description:
1st Plane - Each and every eye on Schneizel's body is capable of this particular ability. When this ability is used, the eyes now have an enhanced vision. This enhanced vision has the ability to see through solid objects, and can use a degree of telescopic sight. Schneizel's eyes have a limit of distance however. A distance of viewing through this ability is roughly 100 meters, no more. When used not in Resurrecion, Schneizel's two eyes can use this ability.

2nd Plane - Unlike the first plane ability, the vision of this ability is not limited to a set amount of eyes. Every eye uses this ability. This abilty allows the vision of anothers reiatsu. Allowing the user to view the reiatsu of another being. This vision appears as a aura around the person. The more abundant and vivid the aura is determins the level of the reiatsu. Even if the someone is supressing their energy, this may see it. When used not in Resurrecion, Schneizel's two eyes can use this ability.

3rd Plane - Upon activation, all of Scheizel's eyes now have the combined abilities of the first and second plane. This ability consumes a great deal of reiatsu during use and it may only last a maximum of three posts. When used not in Resurrecion, Schneizel's two eyes can use this ability.

4th Plane - The strongest plane of vision out of all four. This ability is given to only one eye out of the hundred. The ability can be passed from eye to eye (from one on the hand perhaps, to one on the foot) however only one may use it's vision at a time. This eye is able to track fast-moving objects before finally giving some amount of predictive capabilities to the user. Reiatsu is consumed greatly while using this eye, and during such a time, the other 99 eyes are blind and cannot see. When used not in Resurrecion, one of Schneizel's eyes can use this ability.

Stats
(Depending on your rank, please distribute the amount of stats that you receive within the four options)

Strength: 10

Speed: 25 [+ 10 Resurrecion]

Dexterity: 30 [+ 5 Resurrecion]

Stamina: 15 [+ 5 Resurrecion]

History and RP Sample

History: Schneizel Enneagram was a child prodigy. At and early age he showed great signs of being a genisus. His overall intelligence was way beyond what it should have been. Born into a family that strived from excellence this only pushed him to be great. At the age ten Schneizel was graduating High School, top in class. (not to mention youngest) After this he enrolled into college. Schneizel spent years in college majoring for everything he wanted to do. Around the age of 16 Schneizel had three majors and four minors in many different parts of field. He certainly was a genisus; a brilliant mind if there ever was one. The Enneagram family lived in a large house, as his mother and father were both doctors, across the street from a local church. The church itself was huge beyond comparison out soring any house nearby. One cold fall evieing Schneizel was walking home from college. Because the campus was a the east part of town Schneizel had to walk infront on the Church and across the street to reach his house. This little journey was what proved to be fatal. For the Chruch, as monsterous as it was, was also very old. Made of anged weakend wood it wasnt safe. Thus the city ordered it to be fixed for the public's safty. This happened realitvely quick and the Chruch was about finished. Except for the bell tower, which had yet to be completed. On this paticular walk home Schneizel took his time. For he was in no rush and lazyly walked infront of the church. At that exact second the aged wood decided to break. And the bell tower broke sending the Large four hundred pound bell to falling to the ground. Schneizel was fortunet enough to not be hit by it. (as it missed him by a good few feet) But the sound when it hit was what got him. The tons and tons of vibrations caused by the bells ringing sound poured into Schneizel 's head like a sledgehammer. Thus breaking both of his eardrums and severaly harming his nervous system. Schneizel collapsed onto the ground; the pure shock of the tremendous pain was unlike anything he had everyfelt. As Schneizel layed there he felt the blood pour out of his ears. And, sadly, it wouldnt stop. On that cold fall evening Schneizel Enneagram died from blood loss.

Schneizel was now a spirit. Life as a spirit was extremely boring and very teidous. Schneizel spent most of his time wondering around the church that had taken his life from him. Of course he knew it wasnt the Church's fault that he had died, it was the toil of time the bell tower had taken. And Schneizel knew this, so he didn't haunt anyone or do anything that was evil or bad. He was just there. The time passed. Days turned into weeks and weeks turned into months. He just stayed in the bell tower in the building and watched the world of the living from afar. During his time as a spirit Schneizel didn't have many friends or people he could call friends. He of course saw and came to meet other spirits but they all disapperaed after a while never staying longer than a few days. Of those spirits, the majority of them seemed to "see the light" and eventually just disapperaed. Schneizel wondered what had happened to them so quickly, and why it didnt happen to him. Was he not allowed to pass on? Did he do somthing wrong? He didn't know, nor did he press it. Simply and surely he just let himself sink deeper into sadness and despair. Eventually the sadness of not being able to move on, nor of having friends hurt him. And it started to get worse and worse. Schneizel wasnt passing on as others and this mad him sad. The sadness increased more and more until he couldnt deal with it anymore. Soon he started to venture out past the church tower in which he had to live. And when he had, the things he saw disturbed him. The world was different than he remembers, people were odd and just way to indifferent for him. And then, without warning, it happened. On one of his trips into the town past his church he was attacked. A large black being unlike anything he had ever seen apperaed to him. It had a large mouth of white teeth and grinned at him with menace. And when it spoke to Schneizel , the speech was all about how tasty he looked. How wonderfully good tasting he would be. And then it attacked. Schneizel tried to fight it, but what could a spirit do? Nothing was the answer.

Three days was what it took. Three days of running and trying to fight the creature. And that's when it started to happen. Schneizel was changing. A large hole had apperaed on his hand. And to his horror he came to realize that it looked very much like the hole of the creature that was coming after him. And this was not the only change. His thoughts, his words his apperaned began to change. Over the next week Schneizel was becoming more and more like the creature that had chased him. And after a single week Schneizel , was now the creature. He was, as he came to realize, a Hollow. Being a hollow wasn't as bad as he had thought during the transformation process. It was actually very pleasing. He looked different, was stronger faster and much more powerfull. The only thing that was odd however, was the fact that he was hungry. All the time, hunger clawed at him like a nasty fit of seduction. This hunger could only be halted with the feeding of human souls. What he, Schneizel , once was. And so it happened, he ate and ate. Schneizel spent most of the time eating and chasing after human souls. But eventually he came to realize that eating human souls was not enough. It was never enough. And soon, his hunger called to him so strong that it was unbareable to have to deal with it. He ate coutless souls but that never was enough. And so, with this renew hunger Schneizel went to feed onto something else. And this food, was better. He started to eat his own kind. Other "hollows" as they dubbed themselves. They were much more filling than the normal human soul. And when he ate them, he found his power started to move up. So with this new food source, the hollow Schneizel started to feed more and more.

Being a Hollow who fed on nothing but other Hollows soon proved to be better than he could have expected. How he passed the time was eating. How he enjoyed himself, had fun? Eating other hollows. And with the eating, came power. The more he ate, the more he started to get more powerfull. As he ate other Hollow's the substance and being of those hollows started to merge into him. Ontop of eating them, he also ate a 'healthy' amount of human souls when he was bored. The eating continued and continued, soon Schneizel found he was getting larger and more powerfull. Soon he was quite a force to be reconed with. After a few years of eating, Schneizel found himself to be a menos. A stronger class of Hollow, one that was well beyond normal. Because of the hundreds of Hollows and souls within him from eating he was now at quite a powerfull leval of Menos. He was now classified with the leval of Adjuchas. The time passed as a Adjuchas, and it wasnt without it's sweets and pleasures. Schneizel was now so much stronger than anyone he was around. His skills and strength were on par with only few. He contiuned to eat of course, as his hunger would not cease and for the greatest time he continued as before. Eat, then eat some more. Then it happened. As sudden as his death was the new leval on him. One day, a mysterious person appeared infront of him. Unamed they were hollow from what he could tell. But they bore the markings and looks of a Shinigami. Confusion erupted within him. After speaking, and almost getting killed during a battle, with the person Schneizel decided he wanted to be like this person. And so, he was told how to do so. For one to become an Arrancar, as the man was called, one had to remove their mask. And so without waiting a second Schneizel did this. The pain was great, powerfull and enexpected. No longer was he a Hollow, yet a new odd form of it. His mask had been taken off and his power was now sealed within his own blade. So dubbed, a zanpaktou. The being, Hollow and man, who had shown him the way of becoming an Arrancar told him something. His power was needed, wanted, in other places. No longer would he have no meaning in life. And so, cursoity getting the better of him Schneizel went with the man. He soon found himself under the ranks of a powerfull soul reaper. Loyalty was great between him and this person and because of his skill, Schneizel was now called an Espada. Specifically, the fourth Espada.

RP Sample: Schneizel rolled his eyes and scoffed. The three people infront of him had their arms raised, and were thrusting out at him long steel blades. Each of the men, for all were male, looked nervous and scared. The one in the front wore an odd symbol on his attire. Each of the men in the group wore the same clothes and really, except for hair color and eyes, looked the same. The man infront spoke then, his voice quivered. "S-stand down! We are of the Soul Society and we-" he never got to finish his words however, for Schneizel moved. With the sound of static shocking the air Schneizel was now right infront of the man. He sighed and raised a hand. A pulsing red light formed in it in the blink of an eye. And with another roll of his eyes, Schneizel let fly the orb of red light. It struck the man infront of him and sent him flying backwards. His clothes disnagrated and he screamed then everything was silent. The remaining two men screamed in fright and lunged at Schneizel . Schneizel sighed again and quickly disposed of them the same way he had taken the first man. In a matter of minutes the three shinigami lay dead at his feet. Cocking an eyebrow in the other direction Schneizel raised a hand absentmindly and wiped a smudge of blood from his cheek. His red hair fluttered in the small breeze and his clothes moved aswell. With another look to the area Schneizel disappeared in a crack of static sound. His mission, was over.

This is done, feel free to review this at any time.

Name: Serpentine Cero/Bala
State: Both
Description: A custom Bala/Cero ability used by the 4th Espada Schneizel. Upon use, two large serpents made of Bala or Cero appear around the body of Schneizel. If the serpents are cero, they are much slower moving than the Bala. If they are cero, there color is green and their power is extremely strong. If the serpents are bala they are a deep red color and extremely slow, while lacking the physical power of cero. These free moving serpents can move away from Schneizel or keep around him as a guardian. They can be exploded at will or upon contact.

How many snakes can you make at one time?

Name: Body Extension
State: Resurrecion
Description: Upon using his resurrecion Schneizel can use this ability. By seperating the ligaments in his body and supplying them with reiatsu Schneizel can extend and move any of his body to great lengths. Arms, legs, neck, fingers, toes, all can be moved as such.

This will need a post count cool down after use and how long this effect will last

Name: Acidic Tears
State: Resurrecion
Description: At any given moment, Schneizel can have any one of his eyes leak fluid. In truth, this liquid is acid tears. Each "tear" has the acidic quality of his spit. The tears fall from the eyes in a most odd fashion, compared to realy crying. The liquid will spread out and cover the body upon secretion. This ability is usefull for coating the user is the acid, ensuring that all who touch it will face it's burning wrath.

How long will this last? Also considering that how strong of an acid you want that hurts hierro, swords and most skin off everything this may or may not pass unless you tone down the acid.

Name: Acidic Mist
State: Resurrecion
Description: Much like the use of Acidic Spit, Schneizel will build up a large amount of his acid liquid into his mouth cavity. Here, he will apply Pesquisa. Upon doing so, he will open his mouth and expell a large cloud of green mist into the air. This mist has extreme acidic abilities, easily burning through most objects and people in a matter of moments. If breathed in the opponent is subject to their lungs and insides being eaten away by the acid. Naturally, this mist does not effect the user.

How far of a range does this expand or travel once you expel?

Name: Layer Shedding
State: Resurrecion
Description: Upon use of this ability, Schneizel's entire scales will shed and peel from his body. When this occurs, the shed skin will retain it's shape and looks of the real Schneizel for one post. No movement can occur with the skin, however if Schneizel uses Sonido and exits the shed skin quickly he can confuse the opponent in believing that the skin is him.

Cool down posts needed

Name: Regeneration
State: Both
Description: Schneizel's most notable trait is that fact that he has extremely high speed regeneration. Thanks to his fomer hollow self Schneizel has this ability. He can quickly regenerate any part of his body except for his brain and Internal organs. However, this power also requires that he had sufficient spiritual energy.

Considering that most Espada didn’t have such a power i’m going to have to say no to this case as to prevent an further surplus of people allowed to use this, can’t all be fast healers

Name: Vision Sacrifice
State: Resurrecion
Description: This ability can be used at any time during the release of Schneizel's resurrecion. At any time, Schneizel can close of of his eyes. For every eye closed, he gains a small amount of reiatsu. Once the eye is closed it cannot be opened or used for the duration of the entire topic/battle. The reiatsu gained back is equal to one-fourth of a point which can be applied to any stat of his choosing.

Err no stats increase abilities

Name: Detached Eyes
State: Both
Description: Schneizel, upon use of this ability, can detach any amount of eyes from his body. In doing so, he gains access to a series of useful abilities. The detached eye can now move freely without the guidance of the user. Floating in the air, moving etc. If the eye(s) were to find a person/object it could attach themselves upon on a that said object/person. If the eye touches a person it cannot be felt while doing so. However, the opponent can see the eye. When the eye(s) is on the opponent, Schneizel can see through it as it would his normal eyes. And, if need be, the user can activate the technique "Acidic Tears" in conjunction to this

Ok i’m fine with everything but using acid on a point which auto hits a person if the eye touches them, considering they can’t feel it and its unlikely they will be able to see it with you guiding the eye. So there will have to be a warning of some kind, maybe a limit or the last part is a no go

3rd Plane - Upon activation, all of Scheizel's eyes now have the combined abilities of the first and second plane. This ability consumes a great deal of reiatsu during use. The longer the vision on the third plane, the more reiatsu is consumed. When used not in Resurrecion, Schneizel's two eyes can use this ability.

Limit this to a three post limitation duration

And the 4th plane better not be abused to the point of meta gamming

Aki wrote:How many snakes can you make at one time?

As I stated in the description, two snakes are formed. No more no less.

Aki wrote:This will need a post count cool down after use and how long this effect will last

Information has been added to the technique.

Aki wrote:How long will this last? Also considering that how strong of an acid you want that hurts hierro, swords and most skin off everything this may or may not pass unless you tone down the acid.

The Acid will remain on my skin until I wipe it off or such a time as someone does such an act. As for the Acid on this one, I shall tone it down slightly to meet your request. The Acid is now slightly less potent than before, the dissolving traits are now slower than the normal acid.

Aki wrote:How far of a range does this expand or travel once you expel?

The mist will travel from my mouth and surround my body 5-10 meters, depending on how much I produce. Note that if I add enough reiatsu the amount of acid I produce will increase the amount of mist as well.

Aki wrote:Cool down posts needed

Information added.

Aki wrote:Considering that most Espada didn’t have such a power i’m going to have to say no to this case as to prevent an further surplus of people allowed to use this, can’t all be fast healers

How many Espada currently have such a power? Due to the power and level of an Espada, I am certain that only those such ranked could hope to use a technique like such.

Aki wrote:Err no stats increase abilities

My opinion on such a response is this: You have allowed such techniques that weaken and decrease stats so what would be the problem of increasing them? While that might prove to be a problem in some instances, I would even move so that it is only for a period of time. As well as I loose the use of the eye forever upon its use. Which I find quite fair.

Aki wrote:Ok i’m fine with everything but using acid on a point which auto hits a person if the eye touches them, considering they can’t feel it and its unlikely they will be able to see it with you guiding the eye. So there will have to be a warning of some kind, maybe a limit or the last part is a no go

Due to the fact that you had me decrease the acidic qualities of the tears, these tears would only be slight in their number as well as weakened in their acidic prowess. As such, one would feel a slight stinging at the moment of crying and be able to damage the eye to halt the process.

Aki wrote:Limit this to a three post limitation duration

Information added.

How many Espada currently have such a power? Due to the power and level of an Espada, I am certain that only those such ranked could hope to use a technique like such.

Considering that there are around three plus even in the actually series the higher rank Espada didn’t have the power, my decision to take this out stands. Just get patch up when you get hurt, not too hard is it?

I would even move so that it is only for a period of time. As well as I loose the use of the eye forever upon its use. Which I find quite fair.

If you put a time limit on the number of points actually effect you then fine then add a post duration for you buffs

Aki wrote:Considering that there are around three plus even in the actually series the higher rank Espada didn’t have the power, my decision to take this out stands. Just get patch up when you get hurt, not too hard is it?

Ah, but of course. Removed. Can't blame a guy for trying, no?

Aki wrote:If you put a time limit on the number of points actually effect you then fine then add a post duration for you buffs

Information added accordingly.


- I do hope I didn't come across as rude during this review. I tend to get a little over excited during instances such as these. My thanks for taking the time to review my application. ^^

no problem so long as you understand that application always needed to be looked at fairly for the best of everyone, wouldn't be fair if we let one person have such advantages

and i would also let you know that despite your text in the acid part of your where it says death would be in seconds, In Reality to this supernaturally series it is unlikely that your full effects such as the instant death, melting of the skin in a matter of moments would really occur. Considering it is all where everything is supernaturally, like how many actually real people do you know could stand being completely frozen or engulfed in searing flames and live

Lol. Of course, of course.

I was merely refering to the instances that my acid would cause a rather speedy. Say, if one were to inhale it or have it enter their body and hit internal organs. I hope you understand what I am saying on this.

I do just want to make sure you know that fighting a person even with acid may be harder then you'd think. just so you know

Yeah, I understand that. That's why I choose it. I like a good challenge.

ok unless noted by another your approved. moved and locked

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