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Post by Yousei Sun Oct 11, 2009 10:06 am

Basic Information

Name: Yousei Murakami

Age: 973, looks like 17

Gender: Male

Division: 8th

Seat: Vice-Captain

Looks:
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Personality: Calm. Mostly like Hitsugaya, but is much harder to anger. Kind and patient to others. Likes to admire nature, also spends much time there. Considered wise and helpful. Respects persons of higher rank, respects traditions, but might question or disobey them if he thinks they aren't right. He's not very expresive, may looks slow, but it doesn't mean he's really slow. Intelligent, forgiving, dreammy, might even be lazy. Dislikes bad emotions and niose. Empathical (has empathy).

Stats

95 Points for Vice-Captain:

Strength: 10

Speed: 45
Shikai 50

Dexterity: 50
Bankai 60

Stamina 45
Shikai 50
Bankai 55

Zanpakuto Information

Zanpakuto Name: Yozora (nightsky)

Zanpakuto Looks: Katana with silverish blade. Hilt grey and guard is shaped like two crescent moons connected by a moonstone.

Zanpakuto Description: Nothing special without being release, apart from the moonstone on the guard. Moonstone reacts to spiritual energy and shines brighter when its level is increasing.

Released Zanpakuto Description: After Zanpakuto is released to shikai form, it allows user to do certain techniques:

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Stat increase:
+5 Speed;
+5 Stamina.

Zanpakuto Release Phrase: "Terasu Okuchou Hatsu, Yozora!" (Shine on people's hearts, Nightsky!)

Released Zanpakuto Looks: Whole sword becomes black, hilt and guard too. Blade's color becomes a picture of nightsky (black, or dark blue, with many tiny stars shinning). Only thing that doesn't change is moonstone.

Zanpakuto Spirit:
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Zanpakuto Realm: It's a valley in the mountains. In the valley, there is a black as abyss lake and in the middle of it an isle. Lake is always in tense mist and has many huge lotus floating in it. In this valley there's always night and sky is dark, but bright at the same time because of insane number of stars marking it. In the isle is a little shrine which is residence of my Zanpakuto spirit.


Bankai Information

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History and RP Sample

History: Yousei was born into one of Seireitei's most noble families. It was quite fun, but formal and boring life at the same time. Later, when he was big enough to learn, Yousei started to train and follow the way of his mother, who was captain of 13 Divisions at that time. Nothing special happened apart from his hard training until he was 11. His mother died because of some sort of inner affairs in Seireitei. When she died, Yousei fell into deep depression and looked like he lost all of his potential because of it. Next year he started Shinigami academy, but didn't show great promise there: he lacked self-confidence and will to do things.

Yousei studied in the shinigami academy for about 20 years, showed quite an ability to Kidou as well as his intelligence allowed him to understand the very hardest and most complex theory, but he was still deeply depressed. Much of his time he spent thinking if it was worth becoming Shinigami and to fight for Soul Society, he was thinking it because his mother did so, she had the pride of being one of few strongest Shinigami, but she ended up killed... By those same Shinigami. Yousei's depression ended, when he finally managed to learn his Zanpakuto's name and call it out. Yousei's Zanpakuto was named Yozora, she opened his eyes and convinced him to move forward. With her help and his talents and intelligence, he easily graduated the academy and joined 13th Squad.

Yozora's abilities were very extraordinary and because of that Yousei had no problem of becoming seated officer. In fact he took the 10th seat of 13th Division in a week after joining, but he didn't rush and further, he never rushed anywhere. Just slow and steady, he trained, increased his power and abilities over few hundreds of years, and slowly got promoted. When he got up to 3rd seat, he had the reputation of best kido specialist in whole Division, apart from Captain. His Squadmates started to ask for kido lesson and after some time, Yousei ended up as Kido teacher for Division, because his Lieutenant didn't use kido much and his Captain was always too busy. Seeing as all those other under him struggle to get stronger, Yousei didn't sit and wait either. He spent few years for training with Yozora and finally achieved Bankai.

One day Yousei was promoted to Vice-Captain because of his action in scouting mission. A small group from their Division was sent to scout an area in Seireitei, where some hollows were spotted. Captain of Yousei's Division couldn't lead the operation because he was busy at that time and entrusted his Lieutenant and 3rd Seat to do the job. The scouting failed, as they ran into area full of Gilians. Half of shinigami were taken out next moment and Yousei had to use his Shikai to defend himself. After taking out few Gillians with his kido, he found a good spot and unleashed Falling Star. Most of hollows were destroyed in one shot, others were hunted down later. When those who survived got back to their Squad, Yousei was asked for a discussion with his Captain and got promoted to Lieutenant, also he was transferred to 7th Squad together with group of his Squadmates.

There was some major re-structuring of whole 13th Divisions. Few of them were disbanded, some were integrated into other Squads, just as Yousei was sent to 7th. At the beginning there were only 7th Divisions at all. Yousei spent few weeks in his new spot. But it wasn't enough time for him even to learn the names of all his new squadmates. Then a new 8th Division was founded and Yousei got transferred again, this time to 8th.

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Last edited by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:43 pm; edited 24 times in total (Reason for editing : Update)
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Post by Aoiharu Sun Oct 11, 2009 11:47 am

O-K!

A few things, You-chii.

  • Personality - Lets do abit more with it. Probably around 5-6 more sentances.
  • Your history looks good and your RP is awsome. ( just wanted to say d;)
  • eh. thats about it. i like these listy thingys xD


Anyways, i'll take another look once your done.

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Post by Yousei Sun Oct 11, 2009 12:02 pm

Added some more personality.
Added empathy, if you don't mind.
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Post by Kaji-Kanto Sun Oct 11, 2009 12:23 pm

Ahem, didn't want to bud in but i'd just like to point out something. The 6th division's vice captain has been taken. Just wanted to point that out since it is in approved characters.

Click if you didn't catch link in the other part of the post
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Post by Yousei Sun Oct 11, 2009 12:30 pm

I know that. That's why I write it as prefered position, but I don't mind if you place me into open spot. Like... if I'm correct 5th, 13th maybe more...
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Post by DewBunny Sun Oct 11, 2009 3:39 pm

Yousei i'm gonna leave this unapproved for now until Kou gets back because Calliecat hasn't posted in weeks

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Post by Yousei Mon Oct 12, 2009 12:45 pm

Alright, how much may I have to wait? Also, nobody answered my question about flash step ^
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Post by DewBunny Mon Oct 12, 2009 1:10 pm

hmm flash step is a normal ability so it's assumed

As for sixth vice it's taken still since callicat is on everyday almost v v' most divisions now need thirdseats

thirteenth needs a third seat badly

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Post by Yousei Mon Oct 12, 2009 1:35 pm

13th div 3rd seat? Is there no open vice-captain spot? What about 5th?
btw is Kure 13th div VC, because his profile says he's from 1st, but I know 1st VC is Kenji.
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Post by Yousei Tue Oct 13, 2009 9:59 am

Alright. 13th divison's 3rd seat. (I thought I'd make better.) Still, I need to adjust it ^ right?
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Post by DewBunny Tue Oct 13, 2009 11:36 am

just the stats really

third seat drops to 70

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Post by Yousei Tue Oct 13, 2009 11:53 am

Done
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Post by DewBunny Tue Oct 13, 2009 12:09 pm

Terasu Okuchou Hatsu is literally "shine on the peoples hearts"

and unless you want to add that this is approved

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Post by Yousei Tue Oct 13, 2009 12:49 pm

Thanks, but that'd make it quite long. I'll just put hikaru and that gonna do it.
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Post by DewBunny Tue Oct 13, 2009 12:56 pm

approved

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Post by Yousei Mon Dec 14, 2009 1:15 am

Updated. Yet, not fully. I'm going to add those kido that I requested before, in here. But I don't have time right now, so it'll be later.
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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu Mon Dec 14, 2009 1:21 am

Just put your entire kido list in the kido section, it jsut makes the application and reapproval process easier
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Post by Yousei Mon Dec 14, 2009 1:50 pm

Done.
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Post by Renjiro Haptism Mon Dec 14, 2009 2:20 pm

Yousei im not happy about your spirit grip shikai ability as its a shikai ability it needs to be hugely tonned down (give it a one post limit or something) apart from that i think its ok. just edit it and youll be set
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Post by Taichou Mon Dec 14, 2009 3:30 pm

Just to add, how can you target an area with the third technique of your shikai ability. How far can it go?

First of all, your history gotta be a little changed.
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Post by Yousei Tue Dec 15, 2009 9:30 am

Edited techniques. And about my history, Tai, do you mean those "13 Divisions"?
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Post by Taichou Tue Dec 15, 2009 9:50 am

In fact, yes I did. APPROVED.
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Post by Yousei Sat Jan 16, 2010 7:24 am

Updated.
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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:25 am

Your shikai cannot give points to Dexterity if it already is at 30. 30 is the maximum allowable level for Dexterity, due to its description.
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Post by Yousei Sun Jan 17, 2010 3:29 am

My bad, forgot that. Edited...
But I believe my bankai also increases, as it says accuracy, which is now dexterity. Do I have to edit that too?

And I see Fujimaru is going to become Captain of 7th. In that case, I asked Kaji to be switched with other Lieutenant spot. May I edit to Lieutenant of 8th?
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