Ranmaru [3rd Division Vice Captain]

Basic Information

Name: Ranmaru

Age: appeared age 20 actual age 110

Gender: male

Division: 3rd

Seat: Vice-Captain

Looks: wears a standard shinigami uniform with a pelt draped over his back he has messy black hair he never wears shoes and almost always bears a serious face and sometimes tends to don the mask of a hollow he had slain previously.He also wears his vice-captain badge on his arm where it normaly is placed he has dull green eyes and a claw mark going down his face from a long time ago when he was in the academy.

Personality: he is a very serious personality but can also be caring fun and protective of others. he is very rarely seen smiling around people he doesn't know or wouldn't care to know.He also has very little tolerance for the stronger praying on the weak witch conflicts with his zanpakutos whole persona witch is all about praying on the weak but at the same time he loves his zanpakuto because he loves the rain so when ever hes in a relativly good mood he may cause it to rain around the 3rd divisions building and u can always tell if hes the cause of the rain cause you may either feel his spritual pressure spike or you'll see it raining only around a certain area.

Stats
(Depending on your rank, please distribute the amount of stats that you receive within the four options)

Strength:20

Speed:20

Accuracy:20

Stamina:10

Zanpakuto Information

Zanpakuto Name: akumu

Zanpakuto Looks:

Zanpakuto Description: The zanpakuto has the ability to create water from the condensation in the air and can manipulate it with ease like making from a dome around the user for protection

Released Zanpakuto Description: When released the zanpakuto has the ability to make figures out of water such as creating a dragon from pure flowing water and also gives the user the power to heal minor wounds such as cuts but nothing to deep like a flesh wound but it can heal up to something such as a burn or a cut about the length of a pen.the zanpakuto can also make it rain and control the pressure of water like if some one was in a swimming pool the could increase the pressure in the water to almost completely crush them or drown them

Zanpakuto Release Phrase: drown them in pain akumu

Released Zanpakuto Looks:

Zanpakuto Spirit: Akumu uses his power to drown his opponets he is extremly sadistic and looks very disturbing he wear what seems to resemble a gas mask witch makes him look weird because every time he exhails water spurts from the mask almost as though he is drowning within his mask or that his lungs are filled with water.

Zanpakuto Realm: a city street at night that has constant rain


Bankai Information
(This applies to captains, and advanced lieutenants only)

Bankai Description: my zanpakuto's entire structure collapses except for the handle of the blade and insted of metal the blade becomes pure flowing water that moves in place taking the shape of a blade and moves fast enough that it can cut through basically any substance.

water also forms around my body and forms into a wolves head sitting on mine like a helmet and the claws sit on my hands and the blade is able to extend to a length going from its normal length to about ten feet.

It also allows me to make water collapse on itself so if someone is in say a swimming pool i can make the water implode depending on their level of strength it will either surverly injure or kill them.

Bankai Looks:

Alterations: a wolf pelt of constanly moving water forms on my body

Kido Information

Name: Hyapporankan

Type: (Bakudo

Number: 62

Element: (light

Incantation: unknown

Description: A rod formed of energy is thrown towards the target before it disintegrates into numerous short rods which are used to pin the target to the surroundings and render them immobile.



Name: Hiryugekizokushintenraiho

Type: Hadō

Number: 88

Element: lightning

Incantation: unknown

Description:Fires a gigantic electricity blast of spiritual energy resulting in an truly enormous explosion. Its full strength is however unknown since Aizen used Splitting Void before it could hit him.



Name: Kurohitsugi

Type: Hadō

Number: 90

Element: darkness/energy

Incantation: unknown

Description:Forms a box of black energy around a target, which is then pierced by dozens of energy "spears", lacerating the one inside from head to toe. Its appearance and function is reminiscent of a common magician's trick, as well as certain torture devices used during the Spanish Inquisition.


History and RP Sample

History:

Time Alive arc.Not much is know of Ranmaru's childhood seeing that he was made an orphan when he was 4 after both his parents were killed after that he grew older and became very quiet talking very little if at all when he was about 12 he became a very good fighter when roaming around from place to place finding nothing but trouble.when he hit about 15 he started becoming very violent until the day he meet his very first friend Drake who helped him open up more and become a bit nicer but the day of Ranmaru's 19th birthday Drake was killed so Ranmaru set out to find his friends killer and kill them with the sword Drake had given him Akumu.A year had passed and Ranmaru was consumed with the idea that he was going to find his friends killer and he did but he wasn't strong enough to to fight off all the people that were along with his friends killer and he died.



Time as a Soul Reaper arc. Ranmaru soon awoke in the Soul Society wielding the blade his friend had given him.he then became a soul reaper in a squad he was placed in and began slaying hollow after hollow but his first hollow was the worst because it had turned out to be the hollow of his dead friend so after he slew the hollow formaly known as his friend Drake. Ranmaru began wearing the mask of his dead friend and that's the same day he began having nightmares soon after his zanpakuto awakend.


Time in the Academy arc.Having lost his best friend and coming to terms with his own death delt a huge blow to Ranmaru so he set his mind on nothing but his training so he didn't have to remember what had happned even though it slowly eats at him day in and day out until he finally was accepted into a division where he reached the rank of Vice-captain and also reached the power level with his zanpakuto where he can now use bankai.While in the academy how ever he had no friends and almost everyone thought he was either really messed up in the head or kinda evil not to say that's what he wanted but he didn't care what they thought about him he wanted to see if anyone was as nice to him as his friend Drake was along time ago while they were both still alive but he realized that some people don't just walk up to each other and make friends so he decided that he was going to make some friends no matter what and show everyone he wasn't as mean or evil as they assumed.



RP Sample: A boy would approach an area with a couple trees around it. The boy would hold three senbon in his hand. He wished for a new technique to use against his opponents. This is where he would learn it. He looked at the trees and decided that this would be a great place to learn due to its fair amount of resources and space for this technique. The boy would throw two of the tree senbon at the ground, and then begin concentrating. He would begin to focus chakra into his senbon now, and decide which hand signs would fit this technique the best. He came upon 2, boar, then monkey. The boy would continue to concentrate then do the set of hand signs, still focusing chakra into his senbon. He opened his eyes and would flick his wrist gracefully, causing the senbon to spin in the air and end up in a tree, the chakra only giving it a larger amount of speed. The boy then decided that he could probably focus his chakra to a higher standard if he were to activate his Sharingan eyes, allowing him to notice some of the flow of chakra and amounts in his body and senbon.
The boy activated his Sharingan eyes and looked forward and began to concentrate his chakra again. The young boy named Dathe would pick up another senbon that was lying beside him and decide to throw it again, nothing happened this time, not even the chakra. He figured he hasn’t thought over the jutsu correctly. The boy went over to a tree, sat down and pulled out a scroll, and began to write. The boy would then look upon his own writing and come upon a conclusion. He went over back to where the last senbon lay and would pick it up, after doing so he would wait for him to have a full and complete concentration and throw the senbon, it would spin, and a light static would begin to build up around it and in the atmosphere, which led to a small bolt of lightning, more like what you get with a shock that tailed it until it would collide with the tree, and shatter. Dathe would approach the tree, figuring that the power in that throw wasn’t much, decided to try and pull out the senbon with his bare hand. He shocked himself and jolted backwards, trying over a root from the tree. Slightly confused, the boy would return to standing up and look upon the senbon that where in the tree. He would then remove his hoody for a moment, wrapping them around the senbon. He pulled back and the senbon fell from the tree, and a small jolt jumped from the senbons to the tree as they fell. The second they stabbed the ground the jolts would stop and the ground diffused the static electricity that was locked within the senbons and now I would be allowed to retrieve them from the ground.
Dathe would pick the senbon up and look at them to find if anything changed about them. The only thing he could notice was that one of them had a crack in them as if they were about to break and that was the last one. The boy would look around if it was just the tree that was the culprit in damaging the senbon, but though it was more than that, putting the idea that the jutsu was somehow flawed and would break the senbon when it was used, limiting the amount of uses Dathe can use. Dathe decided to see how this version would work well with other throwing weapons, so he held all three in his hand. He would focus chakra into the middle one, after completing the hand signs. He would focus for a moment, and then throw them all at the same time. The second the middle one would catch spin; it would also produce a small mid air tornado. The two senbon on each side would suddenly be thrown away and into the trees around it. The original controlled one would slam into the tree and shatter into the tree. That effect would cause maximum damage to an opponent of the more living type, like humans. The boy would then decide how many he could throw. He would walk over to the left side of the trees, grabbing the senbon over there, and caught an idea in his mind. What if he were to throw it and bounce it off of things to allow a higher chance of hitting something. He decided that his target was the other senbon, and he would need to bounce his current senbon off a tree over beside it. He knew how to do this, so he decided to try it.
The boy focused chakra into the senbon, while doing the hand signs this time, to save time. As accurate as he could, the seemingly dark clothed man would throw the senbon and bounce off a tree, and slam right into the back of the original senbon. The thrown senbon shattered suddenly, and the one in the tree would be hammered into the tree all the way, were it would take a great strength to retrieve. Dathe walked across the throwing area and pulled out another senbon, then would place it into the tree inside the hole made by the other senbon. The boy backed off of it, and would pull out one last senbon. The boy would do the hand signs while focusing chakra into the senbon and his hands, allowing the technique to work. He would flick his wrist, his hand going into a small spin. This would probably his most thought out throw of a senbon he had ever done. When he released the senbon, the throw was extremely fast, due to such, the spin on it was extremely fast. Dathe could see a huge lightning bolt rip from the static made in the air. Smaller lightning bolts were ripping around it though, due to the amazing static. When the senbon hit the tree, the tree shattered, his senbons destroyed. The accuracy of the shot was dead perfect, hitting the senbons, but sadly out of the original objective, he destroyed them. Dathe would then sigh at that fact of not getting his senbon, writing down some notes on the back of the scroll. He put the scroll in his pocket and would do another hand sign, flickering away from the area.

((this is from a different site))

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Longer personality, I want a more detailed description on your Zanpakotu abilities.

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You need a longer history, if you going to be a rogue like why are you a rogue. If you want a third seat put some info about time in academy maybe some more about your time as a soul reaper. doesn't have to be long long just a couple of sentences. I like the mask thing though


Okay Approved.... I dunno if a third spot is open.

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Approved fix stats though

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you only get 70

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A heads up before anyone decides to shoo the poor guy down. Not sure if Kou has mentioned this but Div 3 is being rebuilt as such after Ranmaru is approved the only spots left would be, 3rd seat and below.

kou already said the spot was open

Thats what he is saying Shishi.

Seperate the History into arcs, make i a lil longer. Same for personality and looks.

For your Bankai please seperate them into paragraphs, for ease of reading. Also, more kido is advisable.

For the ability to create a dome to protect, please put down specifics, ie. Kido level, number of attacks, etc.

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Longer on History. Also, the RP sample gotta be long if you're gonna have bankai. You can add more Kido if you want. Give more details on the shikai description. About how large his the minor wound that can heal.

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Hmm, I don't think there is a problem.

Approved.

However I need a second approval from the person who reviewed it first.

Edit: nevermind.

Update to Fourth

The zanpakuto has the ability to create water from the condensation in the air and can manipulate it with ease like making from a dome around the user for protection

and as for that power how much would you be able to block? and how long can you hold up that dome?

Also, Vice-Captains get 80 Stats, not 70.

his being moved to fourth seat