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Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
Basic Information
Name: Wufei
Age: 200 (looks 18) (very young by arrancar standards)
Gender: Male
Rank: Arancar
Number: 12
Looks:
Personality: Wufei is a calm person, he never laughs or jokes, and rarely smiles. He isnt the type to taunt and is the most passive out of the Arrancar, he isnt a huge fan of fighting unless given no choice. He is very detached from everyone even his own fellow Arrancar (unless some way they win his trust). He is loyal to the 0 Espada the leader, so any holding this number he will open up to and follow orders to the letter. Any other rank than that he pays little heed. He doesn't believe in taking it easy on any opponent he fights, even if just training he doesn't hold back until the killing blow where he will stop. He has no fear of death nor any fear of failure, he long ago cut off these emotion, feeling that they held him back. He isn't cocky and never flaunts his power, if feels those who know him know his merit and therefore have nothing to prove. Insults mean nothing to him, so he generally pays them no heed. He has a very deep and rough voice that always make what he says sound as if he needs to clear his throat ( if you want a example youtube Keak da Sneak he is the perfect example). Due to this he speaks only when he has something to say.
-Personal Skill-
Uncanny fighting style- Wufei created his own fighting style during his life as a human which he carried with him as a Arrancar. This makes his movements more unpredictable and hard to adapt to.
Animal Instinct- Being alone all the time has helped Wufei hone his sense of hearing to super human levels even as a human. This makes him hard to sneak up on.
Light Foot- Wufei learned the ability to control his weight making him light on his feet, this skill allows him to run across many surfaces that would normal be impossible. As a Arrancar this skill is increased allowing him to walk on water even normal impossible surfaces like leaves and paper.
Weapon master- Wufei though his blade gauntlet was his weapon of choice, he is skilled in may different weapons. He not only uses his personal weapon, but a wide array of other weapons as well such as throwing knives and his second weapon of choice a chain and sickle.
Weapon Information
Weapon Name: Thanatos
Weapon Looks:
Released Weapon Description:
Special skills
-Darkness Walker- This ability allows Wufei to become one with the shadows themselves, with this skill he is able to move from shadow to shadow without being detected. Also he is able to hide himself within the shadow in a manner that keeps him from being sensed or seen for that matter. While during this process eh cant attack, this skill is used mostly for traveling quickly and spying on others. If for any reason he becomes emotional his spirit energy will instantly be revealed showing his location. In a fight he can only use it 5x, outside a fight there is no limit, should he be using this skill, however, and is caught for whatever reason, the number of times used before the fight ensued will be deducted from the 5 (that is assuming a fight happens, i am guessing someone being spied upon would be rather pissed ) He can remain in this state for 2 post if in a fight and 5 if he is nt is is just spying. He is able to hide/mask reiatsu after the use of this, but once used he doesn't have to keep pumping it with reiatsu to remain, so after the first post of being used he will be able to be sensed after that however he wont be able to be sensed.
-Shadow Paralysis- If Wufei is able to step on the shadow of anything he will be able to place them in a paralysis liek state, making them unable to move. Wufei cannot move his feet and he must has his entire foot on the shadow for this to work. If for any reason his foot lifts from the shadow even a little the skill is broken and the person can move. This gets tricky when he tries to attack while on the shadow, most times he does this when he has a long range skill like cero rather than swinging his blade. A [person with a strenght 10 point higher than that of Wufei will be unaffected, a person with 5 more or equal strength points than Wufei can move to limbs (legs or arms), any person strength lower than Wufei will have no chance of breaking free. (must be on ground for skill to work).
-Shadow Sense-This ability allows him to sense any who walk in the shadows, this makes him almost impossible to sneak up on at night. He needs only to focus and he can tell where the enemy or ally is, if they lurk in the shadow.
Weapon Release Phrase: "Cover The land In darkness, Thanatos"
Weapon Spirit:
Other Weapons
Chain and sickle- this weapon is kept on the side of his hip
Throwing knives- kept on the inside of his shirt
Resurrecion Information
Name: Tsuketsu
Represent: Raptor
Family: Shadow
Looks: The first noticable change is Wufei's face, his eyes turn yellow and have a vertical slit in it. His Teeth grow into fangs and his nails into razor sharp claws that are as hard as steel(7 in long). His skin on his arm, legs, and chest are scaled giving him more defense against physical attacks (weapon slashes , etc). His muscle power in his arms and legs all increase making his hits harder and his speed greater. He still in this form retains his abilities of Thanatos, making him still able to travel and hide in shadows all while hiding his presence.
Techniques
Name: When The Shadow Strikes
State: Both
Description: Wufei, using his high speed, moves arouns the enemy in a circular range (he will normally test the range of his opponents attack so he would be just outside the range). His movements are so swift that it appears that the enemy is surrounded by clones of wufei (though it is just a physical sight in actuality its just Wufei the afterimages are just a distracton to throw off the enemy). This attack sets up his next move Only Death Remain, this will be explained next. After the enemy post the follow up attack can be used meaning if the enemy can stop the technique it must be started over. an opponent with an equal or higher amount of Dexterity would be able to track Wufei.
Name: Only Death Remains
State: Both
Description: This tech can only be used after the tech When the shadow strikes. Wufei then follows up with this skill, He attacks from what he assumes is the enemies blind spot and strikes for any open vital spot. This skill might as well be considered a basic attack if the opponent is 5 points faster than wufei, if the speed is 5 below or even with his speed the tech can either be blocked or possible dodged. If the the enemies speed is 10 below Wufei then they can dodge the vital hit, and risk moderate damage. If below 10 points lower than Wufei the attack lands as planned, but never results in a instant kill unless the speed is 20 points below where the opponent will not have seen or noticed the incoming attack at all, therefore unless having a skill that could save them, results in thier death.
Name: Dragon Cero
State:Both
Description: this is a custom made cero that is smaller than a normal cero, the damage is doubled a normal cero in speed and power however. The cero is dark red and once fired takes the form of a dragon, thought the change means nothing its just for visual intimidation. It fires in a straight line and cannot be turned or anything like that. Wufei places his own shadow skill into the cero, causing more damage and faster movement.
Name: Shadow Javelin
State: Both
Description: a spear made of pure darkness combined with his own spiritual power. He uses his shadow skill to make a javelin shaped weapon appear, though it cant be used as a weapon to defend with, it can be used as a very deadly projectile. He can bring out two at a time one for each hand and launch then at the enemy, seeing that it has no weight it is light and very easy to throw, but the damage it causes if it strikes someone is determined where they are hit. Vital spots like neck, heart, and so on do high damage; while a attack to the arm would be moderate damage but cause the enemy to put more effort into using that arm (or leg i hope you get the idea).
Name: After Image
State: Both
Description: His high speed allow him to dodge moves and leave behind a image of himslef to throw off the enemy. Due to the nature of this attack, which takes little power to do Wufei uses it often (his favorite tecnique). It requires nothing more than for him to focus his energy, to do this. unless he focuses while doing he will not perform the skill. This skill is only available because of Wufei natural high speed. opponents with equal or higher Dexterity to Wufei's speed will not be confused by the after image whether it is shown or not.
Name: SteelClaws
State: resurrecion
Description: Nails harden to a material even hard than steel
Name: Cero Slash
State:Resurrecion
Description: Using a weaker version of cero on his claws Wufei is able to incease the damage done by his claws upon attacking. He using cero as a glove of spiritual energy, this in turn allows the cero to be present on the claws increasing damage.
Name: Regeneration
State: Both
Description: While most Espada and arrancar focused on power, Wufei focused on speed. Not just his movements but also he regeneration speed, His ability to regenerate is matched only by how fast he is. Simple cuts heal in seconds while severed limbs may take a few hours. Seeing that it would just be dumb to put in terms of non fighting i will just use a scale based off him being in a fight. If a full post is required Wufei is limited to only 1 attack per post while he is focusing his reiatsu to regenerate himself.
Small and medium Cuts- almost instant when the skill is used
Big ( deep)cuts - 1 post (not during battle)
severed limb (arm and leg) - 2 post (not during battle)
Name: Garganta
State: Both
Description: This is how arrancar move to and from Hueco Mundo. Kaname Tosen and Kisuke Urahara have also demonstrated the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway.
Name: Hierro
State: Both
Description: This refers to the hardened skin of the Arrancar, which is a result of their compressed spiritual power. While their skin is strong enough to block even released Zanpakuto bare-handed, it is by no means impenetrable. Stronger Arrancar have proportionally stronger skin. Nnoitra Jiruga claimed his Hierro is toughest amongst the Espada; being of higher rank than Nnoitra, Ulquiorra's Hierro appears to be much tougher.
Name: Pesquisa
State: Both
Description: This is the arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami ability to sense Spiritual Pressure. It functions similar to a sonar. Using pesquisa requires most Espada to enter a meditative state. kon does this by twitching his senses which are reiatsu sensitive.
[Name: Sonido.
State: Normal/Resurrecion.
Description: A very quick movement performed by Arranacar that allows them to move at high speeds for brief periods of time.
Stats
(Depending on your rank, please distribute the amount of stats that you receive within the four options)
Strength:10
Resurrecion:15
Speed:30
Resurrecion:40
Accuracy:20
Resurrecion:23
Stamina:10
Resurrecion:12
History and RP Sample
History:
RP Sample: (used my rp sample from another site *US* if it matters)
Name: Wufei
Age: 200 (looks 18) (very young by arrancar standards)
Gender: Male
Rank: Arancar
Number: 12
Looks:
- Spoiler:
Personality: Wufei is a calm person, he never laughs or jokes, and rarely smiles. He isnt the type to taunt and is the most passive out of the Arrancar, he isnt a huge fan of fighting unless given no choice. He is very detached from everyone even his own fellow Arrancar (unless some way they win his trust). He is loyal to the 0 Espada the leader, so any holding this number he will open up to and follow orders to the letter. Any other rank than that he pays little heed. He doesn't believe in taking it easy on any opponent he fights, even if just training he doesn't hold back until the killing blow where he will stop. He has no fear of death nor any fear of failure, he long ago cut off these emotion, feeling that they held him back. He isn't cocky and never flaunts his power, if feels those who know him know his merit and therefore have nothing to prove. Insults mean nothing to him, so he generally pays them no heed. He has a very deep and rough voice that always make what he says sound as if he needs to clear his throat ( if you want a example youtube Keak da Sneak he is the perfect example). Due to this he speaks only when he has something to say.
-Personal Skill-
Uncanny fighting style- Wufei created his own fighting style during his life as a human which he carried with him as a Arrancar. This makes his movements more unpredictable and hard to adapt to.
Animal Instinct- Being alone all the time has helped Wufei hone his sense of hearing to super human levels even as a human. This makes him hard to sneak up on.
Light Foot- Wufei learned the ability to control his weight making him light on his feet, this skill allows him to run across many surfaces that would normal be impossible. As a Arrancar this skill is increased allowing him to walk on water even normal impossible surfaces like leaves and paper.
Weapon master- Wufei though his blade gauntlet was his weapon of choice, he is skilled in may different weapons. He not only uses his personal weapon, but a wide array of other weapons as well such as throwing knives and his second weapon of choice a chain and sickle.
Weapon Information
Weapon Name: Thanatos
Weapon Looks:
- Spoiler:
Released Weapon Description:
- Spoiler:
Special skills
-Darkness Walker- This ability allows Wufei to become one with the shadows themselves, with this skill he is able to move from shadow to shadow without being detected. Also he is able to hide himself within the shadow in a manner that keeps him from being sensed or seen for that matter. While during this process eh cant attack, this skill is used mostly for traveling quickly and spying on others. If for any reason he becomes emotional his spirit energy will instantly be revealed showing his location. In a fight he can only use it 5x, outside a fight there is no limit, should he be using this skill, however, and is caught for whatever reason, the number of times used before the fight ensued will be deducted from the 5 (that is assuming a fight happens, i am guessing someone being spied upon would be rather pissed ) He can remain in this state for 2 post if in a fight and 5 if he is nt is is just spying. He is able to hide/mask reiatsu after the use of this, but once used he doesn't have to keep pumping it with reiatsu to remain, so after the first post of being used he will be able to be sensed after that however he wont be able to be sensed.
-Shadow Paralysis- If Wufei is able to step on the shadow of anything he will be able to place them in a paralysis liek state, making them unable to move. Wufei cannot move his feet and he must has his entire foot on the shadow for this to work. If for any reason his foot lifts from the shadow even a little the skill is broken and the person can move. This gets tricky when he tries to attack while on the shadow, most times he does this when he has a long range skill like cero rather than swinging his blade. A [person with a strenght 10 point higher than that of Wufei will be unaffected, a person with 5 more or equal strength points than Wufei can move to limbs (legs or arms), any person strength lower than Wufei will have no chance of breaking free. (must be on ground for skill to work).
-Shadow Sense-This ability allows him to sense any who walk in the shadows, this makes him almost impossible to sneak up on at night. He needs only to focus and he can tell where the enemy or ally is, if they lurk in the shadow.
Weapon Release Phrase: "Cover The land In darkness, Thanatos"
Weapon Spirit:
- Spoiler:
- Spoiler:
Other Weapons
Chain and sickle- this weapon is kept on the side of his hip
Throwing knives- kept on the inside of his shirt
Resurrecion Information
Name: Tsuketsu
Represent: Raptor
Family: Shadow
Looks: The first noticable change is Wufei's face, his eyes turn yellow and have a vertical slit in it. His Teeth grow into fangs and his nails into razor sharp claws that are as hard as steel(7 in long). His skin on his arm, legs, and chest are scaled giving him more defense against physical attacks (weapon slashes , etc). His muscle power in his arms and legs all increase making his hits harder and his speed greater. He still in this form retains his abilities of Thanatos, making him still able to travel and hide in shadows all while hiding his presence.
Techniques
Name: When The Shadow Strikes
State: Both
Description: Wufei, using his high speed, moves arouns the enemy in a circular range (he will normally test the range of his opponents attack so he would be just outside the range). His movements are so swift that it appears that the enemy is surrounded by clones of wufei (though it is just a physical sight in actuality its just Wufei the afterimages are just a distracton to throw off the enemy). This attack sets up his next move Only Death Remain, this will be explained next. After the enemy post the follow up attack can be used meaning if the enemy can stop the technique it must be started over. an opponent with an equal or higher amount of Dexterity would be able to track Wufei.
Name: Only Death Remains
State: Both
Description: This tech can only be used after the tech When the shadow strikes. Wufei then follows up with this skill, He attacks from what he assumes is the enemies blind spot and strikes for any open vital spot. This skill might as well be considered a basic attack if the opponent is 5 points faster than wufei, if the speed is 5 below or even with his speed the tech can either be blocked or possible dodged. If the the enemies speed is 10 below Wufei then they can dodge the vital hit, and risk moderate damage. If below 10 points lower than Wufei the attack lands as planned, but never results in a instant kill unless the speed is 20 points below where the opponent will not have seen or noticed the incoming attack at all, therefore unless having a skill that could save them, results in thier death.
Name: Dragon Cero
State:Both
Description: this is a custom made cero that is smaller than a normal cero, the damage is doubled a normal cero in speed and power however. The cero is dark red and once fired takes the form of a dragon, thought the change means nothing its just for visual intimidation. It fires in a straight line and cannot be turned or anything like that. Wufei places his own shadow skill into the cero, causing more damage and faster movement.
Name: Shadow Javelin
State: Both
Description: a spear made of pure darkness combined with his own spiritual power. He uses his shadow skill to make a javelin shaped weapon appear, though it cant be used as a weapon to defend with, it can be used as a very deadly projectile. He can bring out two at a time one for each hand and launch then at the enemy, seeing that it has no weight it is light and very easy to throw, but the damage it causes if it strikes someone is determined where they are hit. Vital spots like neck, heart, and so on do high damage; while a attack to the arm would be moderate damage but cause the enemy to put more effort into using that arm (or leg i hope you get the idea).
Name: After Image
State: Both
Description: His high speed allow him to dodge moves and leave behind a image of himslef to throw off the enemy. Due to the nature of this attack, which takes little power to do Wufei uses it often (his favorite tecnique). It requires nothing more than for him to focus his energy, to do this. unless he focuses while doing he will not perform the skill. This skill is only available because of Wufei natural high speed. opponents with equal or higher Dexterity to Wufei's speed will not be confused by the after image whether it is shown or not.
Name: SteelClaws
State: resurrecion
Description: Nails harden to a material even hard than steel
Name: Cero Slash
State:Resurrecion
Description: Using a weaker version of cero on his claws Wufei is able to incease the damage done by his claws upon attacking. He using cero as a glove of spiritual energy, this in turn allows the cero to be present on the claws increasing damage.
Name: Regeneration
State: Both
Description: While most Espada and arrancar focused on power, Wufei focused on speed. Not just his movements but also he regeneration speed, His ability to regenerate is matched only by how fast he is. Simple cuts heal in seconds while severed limbs may take a few hours. Seeing that it would just be dumb to put in terms of non fighting i will just use a scale based off him being in a fight. If a full post is required Wufei is limited to only 1 attack per post while he is focusing his reiatsu to regenerate himself.
Small and medium Cuts- almost instant when the skill is used
Big ( deep)cuts - 1 post (not during battle)
severed limb (arm and leg) - 2 post (not during battle)
Name: Garganta
State: Both
Description: This is how arrancar move to and from Hueco Mundo. Kaname Tosen and Kisuke Urahara have also demonstrated the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway.
Name: Hierro
State: Both
Description: This refers to the hardened skin of the Arrancar, which is a result of their compressed spiritual power. While their skin is strong enough to block even released Zanpakuto bare-handed, it is by no means impenetrable. Stronger Arrancar have proportionally stronger skin. Nnoitra Jiruga claimed his Hierro is toughest amongst the Espada; being of higher rank than Nnoitra, Ulquiorra's Hierro appears to be much tougher.
Name: Pesquisa
State: Both
Description: This is the arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami ability to sense Spiritual Pressure. It functions similar to a sonar. Using pesquisa requires most Espada to enter a meditative state. kon does this by twitching his senses which are reiatsu sensitive.
[Name: Sonido.
State: Normal/Resurrecion.
Description: A very quick movement performed by Arranacar that allows them to move at high speeds for brief periods of time.
Stats
(Depending on your rank, please distribute the amount of stats that you receive within the four options)
Strength:10
Resurrecion:15
Speed:30
Resurrecion:40
Accuracy:20
Resurrecion:23
Stamina:10
Resurrecion:12
History and RP Sample
History:
- Spoiler:
Human
Wufei was a feared man during his life as a human, at a young age he lost his parents to bandits. This scene of watching his parents turned him into a killing machine. He self taught himself how to defend himself, and from then on hunted bandits. He killed many evil men though this could never fill the void in his heart. He always felt alone and could never find any person who could stand to be around him. He was very young being only 18, and he only sadness and slowly he began to detest all he saw. He one day was hired for a job, it seems something was killing off the people in a small township. It was a simple matter, so he made his way there, little did he knew it was a trap. He arrived at the location and found he was face to face with a demon (he doesn't know what a hollow is so he assumes its a demon),"So my dinner has arrived i must thank thos town people." Wufei was confused,"What do you mean thanks to them i was set up?" he asked in a raspy voice. "Correct boy, the townspeople send me food and i wont killthem is the deal," he laughed now revealing his full body, it was as tall as the trees and from the looks of it just a large mouth with eyes. Wufei gripped his blade,"You will found that i am one dinner you have to fight eat," he said as he charged. The hollow easily dodged most his attacks though he did so with some effort,"Fast Food," he said in a chuckling tone. Wufei was dead tired after several hours of fighting, and his wounds were bleeding rather badly causing him to slip in and out of consciousness. It seems his life was over, he hated he couldn't make those people pay for this, he would give anything to bring them all death. "I hope you choke on my bones," he said as he blacked out.
Hollow
Wufei was in a world of darkness, perhaps hell he guessed. He could here voices but he could see no one at all. "He has hatred like no other i have seen before he would prove a strong hollow." one voice said. "The let use breath a new life into this one, let him cause some hell for the shinigami." NO sooner then he heared this he was able to see again. He looked around him, this was the same spot he was when he fought the demon. It seems he was still alive, but something was off. He checked his body and found he looked like the creature that killed him. Though he was not as big it was the same nature, big face and claws. He looked upon the town, maybe the gods above were giving him a chance to deliver his vengeance upon those people.
Wufei descended on the town like a cloud of death, he killed many with little care who saw him, he felt stronger the more he killed. Some stood against him but failed in thier attempt, this went on for a week to the point where the village was empty either from the killing or the people running away. He was now alone in the town, or so he thought. Another hollow had entered into the area," Well look at you, you have grown a bit since we last met," it said. Wufei recognized it immediately it was the hollow that killed him, it seems he was really being smiled upon."Indeed, you took my life and gave me this new one i should thank you," he said ina raspy voice. He was gonna kill this one and with this new body he was fast enough to do so. "Yes it seems however you ruined my business ..." he was cut off at the fast speed attack made by Wufei as he struck his his skull with his claws piercing it. He felt a strong sensation he was stronger now he could feel it. A dazzling light encompassed him as he disappeared.
Arrancar
Wufei awoke yet again, he looked around him and found a man in front of him."Am a dead again", he said again in his normal raspy voice. "That depends on what you consider living, technically yes you are dead but then again your not how you were. You have been reborn in a manner of speaking," the man answered. Wufei stood up and noticed his body was back to normal, he still had a hole in his chest and his mask covered his right eye only. His hair was no longer black either but white. "Another change will this continue," he asked. "No this is the final stage, Wufei." he answered. Wufei noticed his weapon on his hand was similar to what he used during his life, he glanced at the man,"You know me, how" he asked still checking his body. "I am your leader, its my job to know such things, it was my idea anyway we allow you into the Arrancar," he said. "i suppose i should thank you," he answered. "Indeed you were gonna be killed by the shinigami that were sent to exterminate you, your quite lucky," he replied. "I see, then seeing that i owe you for my new life, i will have to repay the debt," he replied. "I await the day you do though i doubt it will be soon," he was about to turn away then he stopped,"Oh yea i just remembered." He pointed at Wufei and a beam shot from his hand striking his forearm, it startled him but hurt very little. The number 12 appeared on his arm "Your the lowest member of the Arrancar #12, try not to make my decision to make you a arrancar reflect negatively on me. There were some who wanted to bring up other arrancar so you have enemies." Wufei cared little about the others but he would not let down one who had so much belief in him, his new life it seems would be a difficult one. It was fine by him the easy route is always the weakest route and he preferred a challenge.
RP Sample: (used my rp sample from another site *US* if it matters)
- Spoiler:
- The day was hot as normal, Ragnarok sat against a tree, the wind blowing his hair which irritated him. He puffed a bit of smoke in the air from the cigarette in his mouth. Everything pissed him off in some way or another so he was always angry. He moved his hair and turned so that the wind wouldnt blow his hair in his face again. The sun beamed down making him take off his black jacket and slung it over his shoulder. He had to get to the next village soon to revamp his food and water. It was a bit hard however being he was wanted as a missing ninja. He really didnt care however whats a few more to the list of dead people he already killed. He finished his cigarette and flicked it into a nearby woods. He was a bit tired and some rest would do him some good, but he had been on the run since his little fun trip into Suna. He had killed the follower he had trailing him, he winced a bit at the pain on his arm. That sneaky bastard caught him a bit off guard and got a good hit off him. He got more angry now and he wanted kill something, he stomped a nearby plant. That didnt make him feel any better at all and he cussed under his breath.
He arrived at the location a small little port town called, Sea Shore. " What a dumb ass name for a town", he yelled as he entered. He saw a lot of kids playing and people coming and going. Not wanting to be around these people anymore than he had to,he got himself some food and made his way out again. He didnt have a particular location to go to, but he couldnt resist the urge to keep going in this direction. He assumed that if his body really wanted to go that way there had to be something there of some significance. He put on his jacket as the wind picked up again, he would find a nice tree or something to sleep by and continue in the morning. The soon left its foot prints across the sky and the moon slowly made its way to cover them. He hoped he would be able to get a decent sleep, no telling what tomorrow had in store for him.
Last edited by Ragna on Mon Dec 28, 2009 1:49 am; edited 31 times in total
Ragna-
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
Espada 3 is taken. As the Squad Availability list IS updated, I do not see why this was created with this position in the first place.
Koujetsu Hanagayu-
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
i have looked at the list and i have seen no one with the Espada 3 who is approved. in any case i took espada 10 is that cool
Ragna-
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
If you are going have a limit at which things can be broken based off of stats, they need to be equal to, or less than your own.
Koujetsu Hanagayu-
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
ok i changed the wording and the nature of it a bit
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
bumped for approval
Ragna-
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
Shadow Paralysis- If blood is able to step on the shadow of anything he will be able to place them in a paralysis liek state, making them unable to move. Wufei cannot move his feet and he must has his entire foot on the shadow for this to work. If for any reason his foot lifts from the shadow even a little the skill is broken and the person can move. This gets tricky when he tries to attack while on the shadow, most times he does this when he has a long range skill like cero rather than swinging his blade.
Full on paralysis isnt gonna be allowed, and strength breaks are still needed. Otherwise you can just go and step on #0's shadow and cero him to death. Not happened.
Name: After Image
State: Both
Description: His high speed allow him to dodge moves and leave behind a image of himslef to throw off the enemy. This is skill is passive and happens after every time he dodges an attack of any kind. This doesnt affect his speed this is just a skill as a result of his high speed.
Sorry. Not happening. After image after every dodge? Nada.
Koujetsu Hanagayu-
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
ok i get the paralysis i can change that but the after image doesnt do anything but leave a figure of me behind. the after image is just a distraction to throw off the enemy i thought with my high speed it wouldn't be to ridiculous. its nothing more than a result of his speed, anyone who fights him after a period of time will pick up on this
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
Well, with the after image you have it occur after EVERY attack. Thats my problem with it.
Koujetsu Hanagayu-
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
no its just a distraction if i dodge a attack nothing more it doesnt mean i can dodge every single attack its just for show mostly
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
ok rather than try to argue my point i just reworded the tech, it is no longer passive and unless he actually activates it it wont work. it still has no power and is still just for show. i hope this is reasonable.
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
Espada:
Despite what you were told, the position of Espada 10 is presently being filled by a character whose application has been up before yours, so the position will be held until the app is finished. Please edit to an Arrancar.
Light Foot:
All spiritual creatures can already walk on air, so this ability is effectively worthless because if they can walk on air, they can walk on anything they please already.
Animal Instincts:
If all your senses are doubled, please note that makes you also doubly effected by sense-related attacks, and also half as able to resist attacks that rely on your senses to use them against you.
Shadow Stepping:
You say you can 'step into shadows', how long does this take? Do you just drop into them like a man would drop into a lake or do you 'phase' into them? And this ability says to me 'dodge any attack by going in a shadow' and that won't fly, it needs severe limits placed on it.
Darkness Walker:
Nope. Becoming one with shadows? Not gonna fly, see the above on Shadow Stepping. And not being able to be sensed within shadows is just an added reason to say no.
Shadow Paralysis:
I'd have to say that requires you and the opponent to be on the same level, because otherwise if they're in the air you could just step underneath them and hold them.
Shadow Sense:
For a passive ability, this is OP. If you're in a meditative position and don't make attacks during that post, then it would be much better and approval, as it is this is a no.
Release:
The Shadow Stepping, again.
When Shadow Strikes:
Please add in that an opponent with an equal or higher amount of Dexterity would be able to track you, because otherwise this is just auto-dodge attacks while running around in a circle.
Only Death Remains:
Reaction time is for the opponent to RP, so the numbers aren't needed, besides, Dexterity is for reaction time as I know it.
Dragon Cero:
Free x2 power and speed? Why? What makes this Cero more powerful? And all Cero travel in a straight line unless otherwise specified.
Shadow Javelin:
More details please.
After Image:
Please note that opponents with equal or higher Dexterity to your Speed would be able to negate this ability.
Cero Claws:
So you coat your claws with Cero energy? Thats not described in the technique, please put it such details if thats the case.
Shadow Cero:
A 3x faster Cero that could be combined with Shadow Stepping to effectively reduce the opponents ability to react to nothing? Sorry, denied.
Regeneration:
Bala:
Where did that information come from? I've never seen that description of Bala before and I fear it may be inaccurate depending on the source of information.
Despite what you were told, the position of Espada 10 is presently being filled by a character whose application has been up before yours, so the position will be held until the app is finished. Please edit to an Arrancar.
Light Foot:
All spiritual creatures can already walk on air, so this ability is effectively worthless because if they can walk on air, they can walk on anything they please already.
Animal Instincts:
If all your senses are doubled, please note that makes you also doubly effected by sense-related attacks, and also half as able to resist attacks that rely on your senses to use them against you.
Shadow Stepping:
You say you can 'step into shadows', how long does this take? Do you just drop into them like a man would drop into a lake or do you 'phase' into them? And this ability says to me 'dodge any attack by going in a shadow' and that won't fly, it needs severe limits placed on it.
Darkness Walker:
Nope. Becoming one with shadows? Not gonna fly, see the above on Shadow Stepping. And not being able to be sensed within shadows is just an added reason to say no.
Shadow Paralysis:
I'd have to say that requires you and the opponent to be on the same level, because otherwise if they're in the air you could just step underneath them and hold them.
Shadow Sense:
For a passive ability, this is OP. If you're in a meditative position and don't make attacks during that post, then it would be much better and approval, as it is this is a no.
Release:
The Shadow Stepping, again.
When Shadow Strikes:
Please add in that an opponent with an equal or higher amount of Dexterity would be able to track you, because otherwise this is just auto-dodge attacks while running around in a circle.
Only Death Remains:
Reaction time is for the opponent to RP, so the numbers aren't needed, besides, Dexterity is for reaction time as I know it.
Dragon Cero:
Free x2 power and speed? Why? What makes this Cero more powerful? And all Cero travel in a straight line unless otherwise specified.
Shadow Javelin:
More details please.
After Image:
Please note that opponents with equal or higher Dexterity to your Speed would be able to negate this ability.
Cero Claws:
So you coat your claws with Cero energy? Thats not described in the technique, please put it such details if thats the case.
Shadow Cero:
A 3x faster Cero that could be combined with Shadow Stepping to effectively reduce the opponents ability to react to nothing? Sorry, denied.
Regeneration:
Are you saying that you heal as fast as your character is? If so, you're going to need a chart for speed increments, how much is healed at what amount, etc.Ragna wrote:
His ability to regenerate is matched only by how fast he is.
Bala:
Where did that information come from? I've never seen that description of Bala before and I fear it may be inaccurate depending on the source of information.
Traca Carmesim- Espada
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
-changes made- i think thats everything you asked me to fix if i missed anything please tell me lol
Ragna-
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
Traca Carmesim wrote:Espada:
Despite what you were told, the position of Espada 10 is presently being filled by a character whose application has been up before yours, so the position will be held until the app is finished. Please edit to an Arrancar.
Kenji Akira-
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
i have a direct quote from the SO himself saying that i could get the espada #10 unless you guys can over rule his words, then that means i am incline to get the rank. now if he has changed his mind then ok but from what i know he hasn't because he hasn't told me . so even with my evidence am i still denied?
quote from the site owner
Koujetsu Hanagayu wrote:10 is fine yes, and Espada all have ressurcion. Segunda ressurcion is not allowed at this time, and should we allow it, itll be like the top 3 Espada or something.
But, as for your ressurcion, you would get +20 extra points to distribute to the 4 stats, but only during ressurcion. It is also unadvisable to put all of them into one category.
quote from the site owner
Ragna-
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
This has already been discussed with Kou, the Site Owner, and in the future it would be best if you didn't assume that such measures had not already been taken. We don't need to override his decision, because he's the one who brought up the fact we had 2 Decimo in the first place. Edit for an Arrancar, the stat points aren't any different, if anything its less work. Now, back to the task at hand....
Shadow Stepping/Darkness Walker:
That's still a no, by severe limits I mean either a post cool down, or a topic limit, or a time period that it takes to enter and exit thats exceptionally long, or a severe weakness like taking damage equal to the amount of shadow dispersed if you're within it. Otherwise, it's still OP.
Also, the 'no sensing' thing, you're using a technique, which consumes reiatsu, so why would somebody not be able to sense you while you're using it and in it? You're oozing reiatsu the whole time, and your emotional stat doesn't affect your reiatsu so that doesn't make any sense, besides, you could just say your character didn't change emotion.
Shadow Sense:
Meditative position or remove please.
Shadow Javelin:
More detail, again.
Shadow Cero:
I just denied this, remove it.
Regeneration:
Still haven't clarified, is it increased with your Speed or not?
Shadow Stepping/Darkness Walker:
That's still a no, by severe limits I mean either a post cool down, or a topic limit, or a time period that it takes to enter and exit thats exceptionally long, or a severe weakness like taking damage equal to the amount of shadow dispersed if you're within it. Otherwise, it's still OP.
Also, the 'no sensing' thing, you're using a technique, which consumes reiatsu, so why would somebody not be able to sense you while you're using it and in it? You're oozing reiatsu the whole time, and your emotional stat doesn't affect your reiatsu so that doesn't make any sense, besides, you could just say your character didn't change emotion.
Shadow Sense:
Meditative position or remove please.
Shadow Javelin:
More detail, again.
Shadow Cero:
I just denied this, remove it.
Regeneration:
Still haven't clarified, is it increased with your Speed or not?
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
i wouldn't have assumed that measures havent been taken if it was already stated that you had spoken to him. if you had told me that he already decided i wouldnt have made my statement. try not to take it to be offensive to any of you, any who ok i will change my rank no prob lol
shadow stepping-edited to say in a fight he can only use it 8x, outside a fight there is no limit, should he be using this skill, however, and is caught for whatever reason, the number of times used before the fight ensued will be deducted from the 8 (that is assuming a fight happens, i am guessing someone being spied upon would be rather pissed ). As i stated this is used as a spying tactic and if possible a ambush tactic, also when he uses it yes it takes reiatsu, but once used he doesn't have to keep pumping it with reiatsu to remain, so maybe after the first post of being used he will be able to be sensed after that however he wont be able to be sensed.
Shadow javelin- more detail added
Shadow cero - i would state a arguement about this but i feel it would only further waste time and i wanna rp lol so removed
Regeneration- my bad i meant to take out the matched by my speed part because i am not exactly sure like what the original regeneration speed was, if possible can you inform me or is there already a scale or something. i would rather not go through this process over this skill. i will try to come up with something and if it doesnt work i am sure you will tell me lol
i think this is all reasonable lol
shadow stepping-edited to say in a fight he can only use it 8x, outside a fight there is no limit, should he be using this skill, however, and is caught for whatever reason, the number of times used before the fight ensued will be deducted from the 8 (that is assuming a fight happens, i am guessing someone being spied upon would be rather pissed ). As i stated this is used as a spying tactic and if possible a ambush tactic, also when he uses it yes it takes reiatsu, but once used he doesn't have to keep pumping it with reiatsu to remain, so maybe after the first post of being used he will be able to be sensed after that however he wont be able to be sensed.
Shadow javelin- more detail added
Shadow cero - i would state a arguement about this but i feel it would only further waste time and i wanna rp lol so removed
Regeneration- my bad i meant to take out the matched by my speed part because i am not exactly sure like what the original regeneration speed was, if possible can you inform me or is there already a scale or something. i would rather not go through this process over this skill. i will try to come up with something and if it doesnt work i am sure you will tell me lol
i think this is all reasonable lol
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
arrancar 11 is taken look at the apps to see what is available
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
Concerning regeneration, most Arrancar do not regenerate, only those with unique abilities are able to do this and they are rarely able to do it outside of a Released form. Your regeneration is fine so long as deep wounds, and de-limbing cannot be healed in combat. Also, be aware this is only external regeneration, you wont be able to heal toxins, infestations, etc.
Reduce the Shadow Stepping to 5 and i'll approve it, 8 is longer than most battles if you do it once per post, you could last a whole battle like that and the point is that the technique needs a limit.
Reduce the Shadow Stepping to 5 and i'll approve it, 8 is longer than most battles if you do it once per post, you could last a whole battle like that and the point is that the technique needs a limit.
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
changes made to my number and all that other stuff lol
Ragna-
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
Traca Carmesim wrote:Concerning regeneration, most Arrancar do not regenerate, only those with unique abilities are able to do this and they are rarely able to do it outside of a Released form. Your regeneration is fine so long as deep wounds, and de-limbing cannot be healed in combat. Also, be aware this is only external regeneration, you wont be able to heal toxins, infestations, etc.
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
oh damn my bad i am kinda rushing a bit let me fix that real quick
-fixed- sorry bout that
-fixed- sorry bout that
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
All looks good to me, approved. Somebody else give it a run through and move it since I dont have the ability to move topics as of the present.
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
-Shadow Paralysis- If Wufei is able to step on the shadow of anything he will be able to place them in a paralysis liek state, making them unable to move. Wufei cannot move his feet and he must has his entire foot on the shadow for this to work. If for any reason his foot lifts from the shadow even a little the skill is broken and the person can move. This gets tricky when he tries to attack while on the shadow, most times he does this when he has a long range skill like cero rather than swinging his blade. A [person with a strenght 10 point higher than that of Wufei will be unaffected, a person with 5 more strength points than Wufei can move to limbs (legs or arms), any person strength equal or lower than Wufei will have no chance of breaking free. (must be on ground for skill to work).
I'm not really sure about this ability because it seems that if you just step on someone's shadow and they're equal to you, that would be an instant kill. Plus, the part where your feet lifts up doesn't really mean much considering the fact that you have two feet so you can just keep one on while lifting your other foot and so on.
Kenji Akira-
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Re: Wufei Arrancar 12 (AA *awaiting approval*)
lol man i cant catch a break, i weakened it down alot already my strength is low already so this is much advantage to me at all. Also it says foot meaning only foot has affect with this skill whichever one steps on the shadow first, has the control not both. i dont know how you can feel something is wrong with this.
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