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Post by Ragna Wed Dec 23, 2009 7:12 am

Basic Information

Name: Wufei
Age: 200 (looks 18) (very young by arrancar standards)
Gender: Male
Rank: Arancar
Number: 12
Looks:
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Personality: Wufei is a calm person, he never laughs or jokes, and rarely smiles. He isnt the type to taunt and is the most passive out of the Arrancar, he isnt a huge fan of fighting unless given no choice. He is very detached from everyone even his own fellow Arrancar (unless some way they win his trust). He is loyal to the 0 Espada the leader, so any holding this number he will open up to and follow orders to the letter. Any other rank than that he pays little heed. He doesn't believe in taking it easy on any opponent he fights, even if just training he doesn't hold back until the killing blow where he will stop. He has no fear of death nor any fear of failure, he long ago cut off these emotion, feeling that they held him back. He isn't cocky and never flaunts his power, if feels those who know him know his merit and therefore have nothing to prove. Insults mean nothing to him, so he generally pays them no heed. He has a very deep and rough voice that always make what he says sound as if he needs to clear his throat ( if you want a example youtube Keak da Sneak he is the perfect example). Due to this he speaks only when he has something to say.

-Personal Skill-
Uncanny fighting style- Wufei created his own fighting style during his life as a human which he carried with him as a Arrancar. This makes his movements more unpredictable and hard to adapt to.

Animal Instinct- Being alone all the time has helped Wufei hone his sense of hearing to super human levels even as a human. This makes him hard to sneak up on.

Light Foot- Wufei learned the ability to control his weight making him light on his feet, this skill allows him to run across many surfaces that would normal be impossible. As a Arrancar this skill is increased allowing him to walk on water even normal impossible surfaces like leaves and paper.

Weapon master- Wufei though his blade gauntlet was his weapon of choice, he is skilled in may different weapons. He not only uses his personal weapon, but a wide array of other weapons as well such as throwing knives and his second weapon of choice a chain and sickle.


Weapon Information

Weapon Name: Thanatos

Weapon Looks:
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Weapon Description: The weapon is named after the god of death, Thanatos ( Grim Reaper whatever). It grants Wufei the ability to step inside or phase into any shadow. Though if under direct attack he cannot use this skill, but if given room and a full post to complete he can use this to his advantage, either escaping or using this skill as a element of surprise against the enemy. Only the truly skill can detect him when he moves within the shadows. This is a passive skill that stays with the weapon even upon release and Resurrecion. Other than that this form of the weapon holds no special powers.
Released Weapon Description:
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The special abilities of the weapon are below.
Special skills

-Darkness Walker- This ability allows Wufei to become one with the shadows themselves, with this skill he is able to move from shadow to shadow without being detected. Also he is able to hide himself within the shadow in a manner that keeps him from being sensed or seen for that matter. While during this process eh cant attack, this skill is used mostly for traveling quickly and spying on others. If for any reason he becomes emotional his spirit energy will instantly be revealed showing his location. In a fight he can only use it 5x, outside a fight there is no limit, should he be using this skill, however, and is caught for whatever reason, the number of times used before the fight ensued will be deducted from the 5 (that is assuming a fight happens, i am guessing someone being spied upon would be rather pissed Razz) He can remain in this state for 2 post if in a fight and 5 if he is nt is is just spying. He is able to hide/mask reiatsu after the use of this, but once used he doesn't have to keep pumping it with reiatsu to remain, so after the first post of being used he will be able to be sensed after that however he wont be able to be sensed.

-Shadow Paralysis- If Wufei is able to step on the shadow of anything he will be able to place them in a paralysis liek state, making them unable to move. Wufei cannot move his feet and he must has his entire foot on the shadow for this to work. If for any reason his foot lifts from the shadow even a little the skill is broken and the person can move. This gets tricky when he tries to attack while on the shadow, most times he does this when he has a long range skill like cero rather than swinging his blade. A [person with a strenght 10 point higher than that of Wufei will be unaffected, a person with 5 more or equal strength points than Wufei can move to limbs (legs or arms), any person strength lower than Wufei will have no chance of breaking free. (must be on ground for skill to work).

-Shadow Sense-This ability allows him to sense any who walk in the shadows, this makes him almost impossible to sneak up on at night. He needs only to focus and he can tell where the enemy or ally is, if they lurk in the shadow.

Weapon Release Phrase: "Cover The land In darkness, Thanatos"
Weapon Spirit:
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Weapon Realm:
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Other Weapons
Chain and sickle- this weapon is kept on the side of his hip
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Throwing knives- kept on the inside of his shirt
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Resurrecion Information

Name: Tsuketsu
Represent: Raptor
Family: Shadow
Looks: The first noticable change is Wufei's face, his eyes turn yellow and have a vertical slit in it. His Teeth grow into fangs and his nails into razor sharp claws that are as hard as steel(7 in long). His skin on his arm, legs, and chest are scaled giving him more defense against physical attacks (weapon slashes , etc). His muscle power in his arms and legs all increase making his hits harder and his speed greater. He still in this form retains his abilities of Thanatos, making him still able to travel and hide in shadows all while hiding his presence.
Techniques

Name: When The Shadow Strikes
State: Both
Description: Wufei, using his high speed, moves arouns the enemy in a circular range (he will normally test the range of his opponents attack so he would be just outside the range). His movements are so swift that it appears that the enemy is surrounded by clones of wufei (though it is just a physical sight in actuality its just Wufei the afterimages are just a distracton to throw off the enemy). This attack sets up his next move Only Death Remain, this will be explained next. After the enemy post the follow up attack can be used meaning if the enemy can stop the technique it must be started over. an opponent with an equal or higher amount of Dexterity would be able to track Wufei.

Name: Only Death Remains
State: Both
Description: This tech can only be used after the tech When the shadow strikes. Wufei then follows up with this skill, He attacks from what he assumes is the enemies blind spot and strikes for any open vital spot. This skill might as well be considered a basic attack if the opponent is 5 points faster than wufei, if the speed is 5 below or even with his speed the tech can either be blocked or possible dodged. If the the enemies speed is 10 below Wufei then they can dodge the vital hit, and risk moderate damage. If below 10 points lower than Wufei the attack lands as planned, but never results in a instant kill unless the speed is 20 points below where the opponent will not have seen or noticed the incoming attack at all, therefore unless having a skill that could save them, results in thier death.

Name: Dragon Cero
State:Both
Description: this is a custom made cero that is smaller than a normal cero, the damage is doubled a normal cero in speed and power however. The cero is dark red and once fired takes the form of a dragon, thought the change means nothing its just for visual intimidation. It fires in a straight line and cannot be turned or anything like that. Wufei places his own shadow skill into the cero, causing more damage and faster movement.

Name: Shadow Javelin
State: Both
Description: a spear made of pure darkness combined with his own spiritual power. He uses his shadow skill to make a javelin shaped weapon appear, though it cant be used as a weapon to defend with, it can be used as a very deadly projectile. He can bring out two at a time one for each hand and launch then at the enemy, seeing that it has no weight it is light and very easy to throw, but the damage it causes if it strikes someone is determined where they are hit. Vital spots like neck, heart, and so on do high damage; while a attack to the arm would be moderate damage but cause the enemy to put more effort into using that arm (or leg i hope you get the idea).

Name: After Image
State: Both
Description: His high speed allow him to dodge moves and leave behind a image of himslef to throw off the enemy. Due to the nature of this attack, which takes little power to do Wufei uses it often (his favorite tecnique). It requires nothing more than for him to focus his energy, to do this. unless he focuses while doing he will not perform the skill. This skill is only available because of Wufei natural high speed. opponents with equal or higher Dexterity to Wufei's speed will not be confused by the after image whether it is shown or not.

Name: SteelClaws
State: resurrecion
Description: Nails harden to a material even hard than steel

Name: Cero Slash
State:Resurrecion
Description: Using a weaker version of cero on his claws Wufei is able to incease the damage done by his claws upon attacking. He using cero as a glove of spiritual energy, this in turn allows the cero to be present on the claws increasing damage.

Name: Regeneration
State: Both
Description: While most Espada and arrancar focused on power, Wufei focused on speed. Not just his movements but also he regeneration speed, His ability to regenerate is matched only by how fast he is. Simple cuts heal in seconds while severed limbs may take a few hours. Seeing that it would just be dumb to put in terms of non fighting i will just use a scale based off him being in a fight. If a full post is required Wufei is limited to only 1 attack per post while he is focusing his reiatsu to regenerate himself.

Small and medium Cuts- almost instant when the skill is used
Big ( deep)cuts - 1 post (not during battle)
severed limb (arm and leg) - 2 post (not during battle)

Name: Garganta
State: Both
Description: This is how arrancar move to and from Hueco Mundo. Kaname Tosen and Kisuke Urahara have also demonstrated the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway.

Name: Hierro
State: Both
Description: This refers to the hardened skin of the Arrancar, which is a result of their compressed spiritual power. While their skin is strong enough to block even released Zanpakuto bare-handed, it is by no means impenetrable. Stronger Arrancar have proportionally stronger skin. Nnoitra Jiruga claimed his Hierro is toughest amongst the Espada; being of higher rank than Nnoitra, Ulquiorra's Hierro appears to be much tougher.

Name: Pesquisa
State: Both
Description: This is the arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami ability to sense Spiritual Pressure. It functions similar to a sonar. Using pesquisa requires most Espada to enter a meditative state. kon does this by twitching his senses which are reiatsu sensitive.

[Name: Sonido.
State: Normal/Resurrecion.
Description: A very quick movement performed by Arranacar that allows them to move at high speeds for brief periods of time.

Stats
(Depending on your rank, please distribute the amount of stats that you receive within the four options)

Strength:
10
Resurrecion:15
Speed:30
Resurrecion:40
Accuracy:20
Resurrecion:23
Stamina:10
Resurrecion:12
History and RP Sample

History:
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RP Sample: (used my rp sample from another site *US* if it matters)
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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu Wed Dec 23, 2009 9:04 am

Espada 3 is taken. As the Squad Availability list IS updated, I do not see why this was created with this position in the first place.
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Post by Ragna Wed Dec 23, 2009 9:57 am

i have looked at the list and i have seen no one with the Espada 3 who is approved. in any case i took espada 10 is that cool
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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu Thu Dec 24, 2009 12:35 am

If you are going have a limit at which things can be broken based off of stats, they need to be equal to, or less than your own.
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Post by Ragna Thu Dec 24, 2009 12:43 am

ok i changed the wording and the nature of it a bit
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Post by Ragna Fri Dec 25, 2009 12:04 am

bumped for approval
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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu Fri Dec 25, 2009 12:41 am

Shadow Paralysis- If blood is able to step on the shadow of anything he will be able to place them in a paralysis liek state, making them unable to move. Wufei cannot move his feet and he must has his entire foot on the shadow for this to work. If for any reason his foot lifts from the shadow even a little the skill is broken and the person can move. This gets tricky when he tries to attack while on the shadow, most times he does this when he has a long range skill like cero rather than swinging his blade.

Full on paralysis isnt gonna be allowed, and strength breaks are still needed. Otherwise you can just go and step on #0's shadow and cero him to death. Not happened.

Name: After Image
State: Both
Description: His high speed allow him to dodge moves and leave behind a image of himslef to throw off the enemy. This is skill is passive and happens after every time he dodges an attack of any kind. This doesnt affect his speed this is just a skill as a result of his high speed.

Sorry. Not happening. After image after every dodge? Nada.
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Post by Ragna Fri Dec 25, 2009 1:01 am

ok i get the paralysis i can change that but the after image doesnt do anything but leave a figure of me behind. the after image is just a distraction to throw off the enemy i thought with my high speed it wouldn't be to ridiculous. its nothing more than a result of his speed, anyone who fights him after a period of time will pick up on this
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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu Fri Dec 25, 2009 1:09 am

Well, with the after image you have it occur after EVERY attack. Thats my problem with it.
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Post by Ragna Fri Dec 25, 2009 1:20 am

no its just a distraction if i dodge a attack nothing more it doesnt mean i can dodge every single attack its just for show mostly
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Post by Ragna Fri Dec 25, 2009 9:21 am

ok rather than try to argue my point i just reworded the tech, it is no longer passive and unless he actually activates it it wont work. it still has no power and is still just for show. i hope this is reasonable.
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Post by Traca Carmesim Sat Dec 26, 2009 11:33 pm

Espada:
Despite what you were told, the position of Espada 10 is presently being filled by a character whose application has been up before yours, so the position will be held until the app is finished. Please edit to an Arrancar.

Light Foot:
All spiritual creatures can already walk on air, so this ability is effectively worthless because if they can walk on air, they can walk on anything they please already.

Animal Instincts:
If all your senses are doubled, please note that makes you also doubly effected by sense-related attacks, and also half as able to resist attacks that rely on your senses to use them against you.

Shadow Stepping:
You say you can 'step into shadows', how long does this take? Do you just drop into them like a man would drop into a lake or do you 'phase' into them? And this ability says to me 'dodge any attack by going in a shadow' and that won't fly, it needs severe limits placed on it.

Darkness Walker:
Nope. Becoming one with shadows? Not gonna fly, see the above on Shadow Stepping. And not being able to be sensed within shadows is just an added reason to say no.

Shadow Paralysis:
I'd have to say that requires you and the opponent to be on the same level, because otherwise if they're in the air you could just step underneath them and hold them.

Shadow Sense:
For a passive ability, this is OP. If you're in a meditative position and don't make attacks during that post, then it would be much better and approval, as it is this is a no.

Release:
The Shadow Stepping, again.

When Shadow Strikes:
Please add in that an opponent with an equal or higher amount of Dexterity would be able to track you, because otherwise this is just auto-dodge attacks while running around in a circle.

Only Death Remains:
Reaction time is for the opponent to RP, so the numbers aren't needed, besides, Dexterity is for reaction time as I know it.

Dragon Cero:
Free x2 power and speed? Why? What makes this Cero more powerful? And all Cero travel in a straight line unless otherwise specified.

Shadow Javelin:
More details please.

After Image:
Please note that opponents with equal or higher Dexterity to your Speed would be able to negate this ability.

Cero Claws:
So you coat your claws with Cero energy? Thats not described in the technique, please put it such details if thats the case.

Shadow Cero:
A 3x faster Cero that could be combined with Shadow Stepping to effectively reduce the opponents ability to react to nothing? Sorry, denied.

Regeneration:
Ragna wrote:
His ability to regenerate is matched only by how fast he is.
Are you saying that you heal as fast as your character is? If so, you're going to need a chart for speed increments, how much is healed at what amount, etc.

Bala:
Where did that information come from? I've never seen that description of Bala before and I fear it may be inaccurate depending on the source of information.
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Post by Ragna Sun Dec 27, 2009 2:41 am

-changes made- i think thats everything you asked me to fix if i missed anything please tell me lol
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Post by Kenji Akira Sun Dec 27, 2009 4:58 am

Traca Carmesim wrote:Espada:
Despite what you were told, the position of Espada 10 is presently being filled by a character whose application has been up before yours, so the position will be held until the app is finished. Please edit to an Arrancar.
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Post by Ragna Sun Dec 27, 2009 5:44 am

i have a direct quote from the SO himself saying that i could get the espada #10 unless you guys can over rule his words, then that means i am incline to get the rank. now if he has changed his mind then ok but from what i know he hasn't because he hasn't told me . so even with my evidence am i still denied?


Koujetsu Hanagayu wrote:10 is fine yes, and Espada all have ressurcion. Segunda ressurcion is not allowed at this time, and should we allow it, itll be like the top 3 Espada or something.

But, as for your ressurcion, you would get +20 extra points to distribute to the 4 stats, but only during ressurcion. It is also unadvisable to put all of them into one category.

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Post by Traca Carmesim Sun Dec 27, 2009 9:11 am

This has already been discussed with Kou, the Site Owner, and in the future it would be best if you didn't assume that such measures had not already been taken. We don't need to override his decision, because he's the one who brought up the fact we had 2 Decimo in the first place. Edit for an Arrancar, the stat points aren't any different, if anything its less work. Now, back to the task at hand....

Shadow Stepping/Darkness Walker:
That's still a no, by severe limits I mean either a post cool down, or a topic limit, or a time period that it takes to enter and exit thats exceptionally long, or a severe weakness like taking damage equal to the amount of shadow dispersed if you're within it. Otherwise, it's still OP.

Also, the 'no sensing' thing, you're using a technique, which consumes reiatsu, so why would somebody not be able to sense you while you're using it and in it? You're oozing reiatsu the whole time, and your emotional stat doesn't affect your reiatsu so that doesn't make any sense, besides, you could just say your character didn't change emotion.

Shadow Sense:
Meditative position or remove please.

Shadow Javelin:
More detail, again.

Shadow Cero:
I just denied this, remove it.

Regeneration:
Still haven't clarified, is it increased with your Speed or not?
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Post by Ragna Sun Dec 27, 2009 2:48 pm

i wouldn't have assumed that measures havent been taken if it was already stated that you had spoken to him. if you had told me that he already decided i wouldnt have made my statement. try not to take it to be offensive to any of you, any who ok i will change my rank no prob lol

shadow stepping-edited to say in a fight he can only use it 8x, outside a fight there is no limit, should he be using this skill, however, and is caught for whatever reason, the number of times used before the fight ensued will be deducted from the 8 (that is assuming a fight happens, i am guessing someone being spied upon would be rather pissed Razz). As i stated this is used as a spying tactic and if possible a ambush tactic, also when he uses it yes it takes reiatsu, but once used he doesn't have to keep pumping it with reiatsu to remain, so maybe after the first post of being used he will be able to be sensed after that however he wont be able to be sensed.

Shadow javelin- more detail added

Shadow cero - i would state a arguement about this but i feel it would only further waste time and i wanna rp lol so removed

Regeneration- my bad i meant to take out the matched by my speed part because i am not exactly sure like what the original regeneration speed was, if possible can you inform me or is there already a scale or something. i would rather not go through this process over this skill. i will try to come up with something and if it doesnt work i am sure you will tell me lol

i think this is all reasonable lol
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Post by Renjiro Haptism Sun Dec 27, 2009 3:15 pm

arrancar 11 is taken look at the apps to see what is available
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Post by Traca Carmesim Sun Dec 27, 2009 3:27 pm

Concerning regeneration, most Arrancar do not regenerate, only those with unique abilities are able to do this and they are rarely able to do it outside of a Released form. Your regeneration is fine so long as deep wounds, and de-limbing cannot be healed in combat. Also, be aware this is only external regeneration, you wont be able to heal toxins, infestations, etc.

Reduce the Shadow Stepping to 5 and i'll approve it, 8 is longer than most battles if you do it once per post, you could last a whole battle like that and the point is that the technique needs a limit.
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Post by Ragna Sun Dec 27, 2009 3:49 pm

changes made to my number and all that other stuff lol
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Post by Traca Carmesim Sun Dec 27, 2009 4:07 pm

Traca Carmesim wrote:Concerning regeneration, most Arrancar do not regenerate, only those with unique abilities are able to do this and they are rarely able to do it outside of a Released form. Your regeneration is fine so long as deep wounds, and de-limbing cannot be healed in combat. Also, be aware this is only external regeneration, you wont be able to heal toxins, infestations, etc.
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Post by Ragna Sun Dec 27, 2009 4:17 pm

oh damn my bad i am kinda rushing a bit let me fix that real quick
-fixed- sorry bout that
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Post by Traca Carmesim Sun Dec 27, 2009 4:32 pm

All looks good to me, approved. Somebody else give it a run through and move it since I dont have the ability to move topics as of the present.
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Post by Kenji Akira Sun Dec 27, 2009 4:49 pm

-Shadow Paralysis- If Wufei is able to step on the shadow of anything he will be able to place them in a paralysis liek state, making them unable to move. Wufei cannot move his feet and he must has his entire foot on the shadow for this to work. If for any reason his foot lifts from the shadow even a little the skill is broken and the person can move. This gets tricky when he tries to attack while on the shadow, most times he does this when he has a long range skill like cero rather than swinging his blade. A [person with a strenght 10 point higher than that of Wufei will be unaffected, a person with 5 more strength points than Wufei can move to limbs (legs or arms), any person strength equal or lower than Wufei will have no chance of breaking free. (must be on ground for skill to work).

I'm not really sure about this ability because it seems that if you just step on someone's shadow and they're equal to you, that would be an instant kill. Plus, the part where your feet lifts up doesn't really mean much considering the fact that you have two feet so you can just keep one on while lifting your other foot and so on.
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Post by Ragna Sun Dec 27, 2009 4:57 pm

lol man i cant catch a break, i weakened it down alot already my strength is low already so this is much advantage to me at all. Also it says foot meaning only foot has affect with this skill whichever one steps on the shadow first, has the control not both. i dont know how you can feel something is wrong with this.
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